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    PLAYOFFS ROUND 1: (2) King 9-3 vs (7) Plaz 4-3 King Wins

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    Re: PLAYOFFS ROUND 1: (2) King 9-3 vs (7) Plaz 4-3

    14?
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    Re: PLAYOFFS ROUND 1: (2) King 9-3 vs (7) Plaz 4-3

    sounds good, check!

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    Re: PLAYOFFS ROUND 1: (2) King 9-3 vs (7) Plaz 4-3

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    Re: PLAYOFFS ROUND 1: (2) King 9-3 vs (7) Plaz 4-3

    indeed!

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    Re: PLAYOFFS ROUND 1: (2) King 9-3 vs (7) Plaz 4-3 EXT

    Maaan I bet u go out n ignore women, dont even try to kick game
    Bitch no one that ends their bars with a POW ever ends their night with a bang
    He aint worth a fight, I'd rather pull the heat n gun em down
    I can punch like Goro, but these sidearms will lift u off the fuckin ground
    n Ur girl told me ur lame in bed. That ur dick game is truly weak
    If Plaz hits, she complains about the outcome more than Barc on a losing streak
    I'm an all time great, ur a scrub. we aint the same kinda guy
    Tryina succeed King? nah Plaz isn't heir-worthy, so that shit just aint gonna fly
    Ur bitch moans while she blows me, just sucks in delight
    Wherever, whenever. Ironic she can't down quietly but never puts up a fight
    I'm the goat, put this joke aside. This should be no surprise
    Play games with me n this shit'll be so one sided they'll think ur controller died
    This a landslide. U can sway or cheat but theres no defeatin me
    U couldn't avoid a KO if u changed ur name to NC n let Pilgrim vote repeatedly
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    Cool Re: PLAYOFFS ROUND 1: (2) King 9-3 vs (7) Plaz 4-3 EXT

    you can get killed for nothing, i ain't here for the feels and huggin
    let the doc 'tug at your heart strings', just to check if you Feelin Somthin
    save ur last breath, and begin a new chapter to take your last steps
    coz you've 'reached a turning point' - right into my knife, after making that left
    kings played and unoriginal, resembling a thief-in-store type..
    you been 'ripping off more moves' than the development team in fortnight
    stay acting like a diva even tho you bring the shittiest-weakest of quotes
    best thing you dropped was the mag, and still we saw a bitch in each of ur posts
    honestly ur the biggest dork ever, so quit claiming you dump metal
    i was expecting a fight on my hands, and you only came here to thumb wrestle
    u aint grinding efficiently, ur probly better off pushin some weight
    coz you've never did a 'job well done', that didn't involve cooking a steak
    seems odd and scary as hell cuz you keep talkin of carrying shells
    nigga pls, if you 'going postal' - it's landing ur dream job of carrying mail

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    Re: PLAYOFFS ROUND 1: (2) King 9-3 vs (7) Plaz 4-3 OPEN FOR VOTES

    Maaan I bet u go out n ignore women, dont even try to kick game
    Bitch no one that ends their bars with a POW ever ends their night with a bang
    He aint worth a fight, I'd rather pull the heat n gun em down
    I can punch like Goro, but these sidearms will lift u off the fuckin ground
    I'm the goat, put this joke aside. This should be no surprise
    Play games with me n this shit'll be so one sided they'll think ur controller died
    This a landslide. U can sway or cheat but theres no defeatin me
    U couldn't avoid a KO if u changed ur name to NC n let Pilgrim vote repeatedly

    vs

    save ur last breath, and begin a new chapter to take your last steps
    coz you've 'reached a turning point' - right into my knife, after making that left
    kings played and unoriginal, resembling a thief-in-store type..
    you been 'ripping off more moves' than the development team in fortnight
    stay acting like a diva even tho you bring the shittiest-weakest of quotes
    best thing you dropped was the mag, and still we saw a bitch in each of ur posts

    Good read I felt one came with slightly better material, Plaz had a solid verse but towards the end I felt his creativity fizzled down and his bars aint have the same impact as the verse towards the end. Fortnight bar was tough, Think ya controller dies was a solid hit props to both. v/King
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    Re: PLAYOFFS ROUND 1: (2) King 9-3 vs (7) Plaz 4-3 OPEN FOR VOTES

    Maaan I bet u go out n ignore women, dont even try to kick game
    Bitch no one that ends their bars with a POW ever ends their night with a bang
    idgi tbh, PM me?
    He aint worth a fight, I'd rather pull the heat n gun em down
    I can punch like Goro, but these sidearms will lift u off the fuckin ground
    dope
    n Ur girl told me ur lame in bed. That ur dick game is truly weak
    If Plaz hits, she complains about the outcome more than Barc on a losing streak
    lol the concept is a bit played but I liked the flip
    I'm an all time great, ur a scrub. we aint the same kinda guy
    Tryina succeed King? nah Plaz isn't heir-worthy, so that shit just aint gonna fly
    very wordy here, wasn’t feelin
    Ur bitch moans while she blows me, just sucks in delight
    Wherever, whenever. Ironic she can't down quietly but never puts up a fight
    nah
    I'm the goat, put this joke aside. This should be no surprise
    Play games with me n this shit'll be so one sided they'll think ur controller died
    ok
    This a landslide. U can sway or cheat but theres no defeatin me
    U couldn't avoid a KO if u changed ur name to NC n let Pilgrim vote repeatedly
    i <3 NCs & you should too! Cool bar

    2 nice
    2 ok
    3 misses


    Vs


    you can get killed for nothing, i ain't here for the feels and huggin
    let the doc 'tug at your heart strings', just to check if you Feelin Somthin
    im not seeing it
    save ur last breath, and begin a new chapter to take your last steps
    coz you've 'reached a turning point' - right into my knife, after making that left
    nah
    kings played and unoriginal, resembling a thief-in-store type..
    you been 'ripping off more moves' than the development team in fortnight
    this is cool
    stay acting like a diva even tho you bring the shittiest-weakest of quotes
    best thing you dropped was the mag, and still we saw a bitch in each of ur posts
    alright I liked this
    honestly ur the biggest dork ever, so quit claiming you dump metal
    i was expecting a fight on my hands, and you only came here to thumb wrestle
    lol ok
    u aint grinding efficiently, ur probly better off pushin some weight
    coz you've never did a 'job well done', that didn't involve cooking a steak
    NO lol horrible bar
    seems odd and scary as hell cuz you keep talkin of carrying shells
    nigga pls, if you 'going postal' - it's landing ur dream job of carrying mail
    alright

    1 nice
    3 ok
    3 misses


    Hmm super close battle here, both came pretty good and idk who Plaz is but he’s definitely not some random new guy, I like your style man. You both were just about tied in quotes, and I have you both with the same number of misses. But king had 1 more nice bar than Plaz, allowing him to edge the battle.


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    Re: PLAYOFFS ROUND 1: (2) King 9-3 vs (7) Plaz 4-3 EXT

    Quote Originally Posted by King View Post
    Maaan I bet u go out n ignore women, dont even try to kick game
    Bitch no one that ends their bars with a POW ever ends their night with a bang
    -funny
    He aint worth a fight, I'd rather pull the heat n gun em down
    I can punch like Goro, but these sidearms will lift u off the fuckin ground
    -oh shit
    n Ur girl told me ur lame in bed. That ur dick game is truly weak
    If Plaz hits, she complains about the outcome more than Barc on a losing streak
    -eh
    I'm an all time great, ur a scrub. we aint the same kinda guy
    Tryina succeed King? nah Plaz isn't heir-worthy, so that shit just aint gonna fly
    -not feeling this
    Ur bitch moans while she blows me, just sucks in delight
    Wherever, whenever. Ironic she can't down quietly but never puts up a fight
    -hahaha
    I'm the goat, put this joke aside. This should be no surprise
    Play games with me n this shit'll be so one sided they'll think ur controller died
    -yes indeed
    This a landslide. U can sway or cheat but theres no defeatin me
    U couldn't avoid a KO if u changed ur name to NC n let Pilgrim vote repeatedly
    -nah
    Quote Originally Posted by Plaz View Post
    you can get killed for nothing, i ain't here for the feels and huggin
    let the doc 'tug at your heart strings', just to check if you Feelin Somthin
    -eh alr
    save ur last breath, and begin a new chapter to take your last steps
    coz you've 'reached a turning point' - right into my knife, after making that left
    -ok
    kings played and unoriginal, resembling a thief-in-store type..
    you been 'ripping off more moves' than the development team in fortnight
    -over my head
    stay acting like a diva even tho you bring the shittiest-weakest of quotes
    best thing you dropped was the mag, and still we saw a bitch in each of ur posts
    -no sir
    honestly ur the biggest dork ever, so quit claiming you dump metal
    i was expecting a fight on my hands, and you only came here to thumb wrestle
    -i like this
    u aint grinding efficiently, ur probly better off pushin some weight
    coz you've never did a 'job well done', that didn't involve cooking a steak
    -no sir
    seems odd and scary as hell cuz you keep talkin of carrying shells
    nigga pls, if you 'going postal' - it's landing ur dream job of carrying mail
    -nah man
    v. King...plaz ended pretty bad. 2 back to back old concepts w/ stale flips. King did just enough here as a whole. Harder punches

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    Re: PLAYOFFS ROUND 1: (2) King 9-3 vs (7) Plaz 4-3 EXT

    Thank to both for writing reasonable verses. This has been a long ass week with this few battles lol.

    Quote Originally Posted by King View Post
    Maaan I bet u go out n ignore women, dont even try to kick game
    Bitch no one that ends their bars with a POW ever ends their night with a bang
    Yoooooooo. When I got through the first half of the setup, I was like "I bet you go out and ignore women" is the best set up I've ever seen. But the payoff was also really solid. This is not a traditional punch but it's right up my alley.
    He aint worth a fight, I'd rather pull the heat n gun em down
    I can punch like Goro, but these sidearms will lift u off the fuckin ground
    Solid. Good concept, well worded.
    n Ur girl told me ur lame in bed. That ur dick game is truly weak
    If Plaz hits, she complains about the outcome more than Barc on a losing streak
    Yeah, he is a faggot.
    I'm an all time great, ur a scrub. we aint the same kinda guy
    Tryina succeed King? nah Plaz isn't heir-worthy, so that shit just aint gonna fly
    Fuck. I laughed out loud.
    Ur bitch moans while she blows me, just sucks in delight
    Wherever, whenever. Ironic she can't down quietly but never puts up a fight
    I don't love this. But I thought you were gonna do a Shakira bar up until the last few words. So I feel you dropped the ball.
    I'm the goat, put this joke aside. This should be no surprise
    Play games with me n this shit'll be so one sided they'll think ur controller died
    Nah
    This a landslide. U can sway or cheat but theres no defeatin me
    U couldn't avoid a KO if u changed ur name to NC n let Pilgrim vote repeatedly
    Fuck you. This is good.
    Loved - 3
    Liked - 2

    This is my favorite verse of the week, so far. And I've read everything up until Plaz.

    We gotta talk man. This is the kind of verse I want to write.


    Quote Originally Posted by Plaz View Post
    you can get killed for nothing, i ain't here for the feels and huggin
    let the doc 'tug at your heart strings', just to check if you Feelin Somthin
    This is cool. I liked the multis and the set up. I honestly wasn't really wowed by the punch.
    save ur last breath, and begin a new chapter to take your last steps
    coz you've 'reached a turning point' - right into my knife, after making that left
    Same as above. I just don't feel like this is a punch. Left has nothing surprising or interesting to it. I feel like you need to set up one direction then have the punch turn down another for it to be clever or interesting. And as Bash likes to say, it has to feel like it would insult someone if you said it to their face
    kings played and unoriginal, resembling a thief-in-store type..
    you been 'ripping off more moves' than the development team in fortnight
    Ok. This is cool.
    stay acting like a diva even tho you bring the shittiest-weakest of quotes
    best thing you dropped was the mag, and still we saw a bitch in each of ur posts
    Yeah this is cool. This is my fave bar of yours so far.
    honestly ur the biggest dork ever, so quit claiming you dump metal
    i was expecting a fight on my hands, and you only came here to thumb wrestle
    This is cute too.
    u aint grinding efficiently, ur probly better off pushin some weight
    coz you've never did a 'job well done', that didn't involve cooking a steak
    This is cute.
    seems odd and scary as hell cuz you keep talkin of carrying shells
    nigga pls, if you 'going postal' - it's landing ur dream job of carrying mail
    This doesn't rhyme for me. Even if I give it to you, I don't love it.
    Loved - 0
    Liked - 4

    Vote: King. Plaz writes some really clean stuff. And I obviously like his writing, cuz I vote for him pretty regularly. But King had an awesome verse with more punches, and Plaz didn't really go for the throat on anything, IMO.

    Fun to read. Good luck to both.

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    Re: PLAYOFFS ROUND 1: (2) King 9-3 vs (7) Plaz 4-3 OPEN FOR VOTES

    Maaan I bet u go out n ignore women, dont even try to kick game
    Bitch no one that ends their bars with a POW ever ends their night with a bang
    ^nice
    He aint worth a fight, I'd rather pull the heat n gun em down
    I can punch like Goro, but these sidearms will lift u off the fuckin ground
    ^goro/arms wps are played
    n Ur girl told me ur lame in bed. That ur dick game is truly weak
    If Plaz hits, she complains about the outcome more than Barc on a losing streak
    ^nah
    I'm an all time great, ur a scrub. we aint the same kinda guy
    Tryina succeed King? nah Plaz isn't heir-worthy, so that shit just aint gonna fly
    ^ok
    Ur bitch moans while she blows me, just sucks in delight
    Wherever, whenever. Ironic she can't down quietly but never puts up a fight
    ^lol
    I'm the goat, put this joke aside. This should be no surprise
    Play games with me n this shit'll be so one sided they'll think ur controller died
    ^decent
    This a landslide. U can sway or cheat but theres no defeatin me
    U couldn't avoid a KO if u changed ur name to NC n let Pilgrim vote repeatedly
    ^no


    Vs.


    you can get killed for nothing, i ain't here for the feels and huggin
    let the doc 'tug at your heart strings', just to check if you Feelin Somthin
    ^nah played miss
    save ur last breath, and begin a new chapter to take your last steps
    coz you've 'reached a turning point' - right into my knife, after making that left
    ^ok
    kings played and unoriginal, resembling a thief-in-store type..
    you been 'ripping off more moves' than the development team in fortnight
    ^decent
    stay acting like a diva even tho you bring the shittiest-weakest of quotes
    best thing you dropped was the mag, and still we saw a bitch in each of ur posts
    ^ok
    honestly ur the biggest dork ever, so quit claiming you dump metal
    i was expecting a fight on my hands, and you only came here to thumb wrestle
    ^lol fire
    u aint grinding efficiently, ur probly better off pushin some weight
    coz you've never did a 'job well done', that didn't involve cooking a steak
    ^nah
    seems odd and scary as hell cuz you keep talkin of carrying shells
    nigga pls, if you 'going postal' - it's landing ur dream job of carrying mail
    ^filler




    Got both with 3 misses. Had about the same amount of personals. so my vote was decided by lotb..


    V/plaz

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    Re: PLAYOFFS ROUND 1: (2) King 9-3 vs (7) Plaz 4-3 OPEN FOR VOTES

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    Re: PLAYOFFS ROUND 1: (2) King 9-3 vs (7) Plaz 4-3 OPEN FOR VOTES

    King -

    Maaan I bet u go out n ignore women, dont even try to kick game
    Bitch no one that ends their bars with a POW ever ends their night with a bang

    This was okay in a way..could've been better..but it was decent..

    He aint worth a fight, I'd rather pull the heat n gun em down
    I can punch like Goro, but these sidearms will lift u off the fuckin ground

    LOL, niice one..could've been better..but good..

    n Ur girl told me ur lame in bed. That ur dick game is truly weak
    If Plaz hits, she complains about the outcome more than Barc on a losing streak

    You're best bar so far..niice..

    I'm an all time great, ur a scrub. we aint the same kinda guy
    Tryina succeed King? nah Plaz isn't heir-worthy, so that shit just aint gonna fly

    Pretty sweet bar..niice..

    Ur bitch moans while she blows me, just sucks in delight
    Wherever, whenever. Ironic she can't down quietly but never puts up a fight

    Not feeling this one..it was okay..decent..

    I'm the goat, put this joke aside. This should be no surprise
    Play games with me n this shit'll be so one sided they'll think ur controller died

    Not feeling this one..it was okay..

    This a landslide. U can sway or cheat but theres no defeatin me
    U couldn't avoid a KO if u changed ur name to NC n let Pilgrim vote repeatedly

    Not feeling this one..it was okay..

    Plaz -

    you can get killed for nothing, i ain't here for the feels and huggin
    let the doc 'tug at your heart strings', just to check if you Feelin Somthin

    This was okay..decent..could've been better..

    save ur last breath, and begin a new chapter to take your last steps
    coz you've 'reached a turning point' - right into my knife, after making that left

    Pretty decent.. good work here..

    kings played and unoriginal, resembling a thief-in-store type..
    you been 'ripping off more moves' than the development team in fortnight

    Wasn't feeling this one..could've been better..

    stay acting like a diva even tho you bring the shittiest-weakest of quotes
    best thing you dropped was the mag, and still we saw a bitch in each of ur posts

    This was okay..could've been better..

    honestly ur the biggest dork ever, so quit claiming you dump metal
    i was expecting a fight on my hands, and you only came here to thumb wrestle

    Could be better..but decent..

    u aint grinding efficiently, ur probly better off pushin some weight
    coz you've never did a 'job well done', that didn't involve cooking a steak

    Not feeling this one..could've been decent..

    seems odd and scary as hell cuz you keep talkin of carrying shells
    nigga pls, if you 'going postal' - it's landing ur dream job of carrying mail

    This was okay..decent at best..

    overall - decent battle..but i have to say king wins for more better hits..good battle guys..

    V/ King

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