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    PLAYOFFS ROUND 1: (1) Blue Bayou (9-3) vs (8) Hello There (4-5) Blue Wins

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    Re: PLAYOFFS ROUND 1: (1) Blue Bayou (9-3) vs (8) Hello There (4-5)

    Check. You set line limit, you fucking nerd.

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    Re: PLAYOFFS ROUND 1: (1) Blue Bayou (9-3) vs (8) Hello There (4-5)

    Lol.... Max

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    Re: PLAYOFFS ROUND 1: (1) Blue Bayou (9-3) vs (8) Hello There (4-5)

    Quote Originally Posted by Blue Bayou View Post
    Lol.... Max

    Gluck
    You animal. 20 it is.
    Last edited by hello there; December 24th, 2018 at 10:49 PM

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    Re: PLAYOFFS ROUND 1: (1) Blue Bayou (9-3) vs (8) Hello There (4-5)

    Quote Originally Posted by hello there View Post
    You animal. 20 it is.
    Sounds good... Like I said I should be able to post Thursday
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    Re: PLAYOFFS ROUND 1: (1) Blue Bayou (9-3) vs (8) Hello There (4-5)

    It's the playoffs you fuck faces... no more joke bars.






    Have you dripping blood, shit, tongue ripped, till you tap & ball up..
    Sounds abstract. But the splatter looks like a Jackson Pollock..
    My whole team fucks when we drug your Queen. And I'm not lyin'..
    We 'all slap' like rape noises once your bitch stops cryin'..
    My cats harvest for black markets. Slit ya with the knife..
    Keep runnin' -- you'll be ice bathed with stitches in your side..
    My crew loaded in that Lotus. And it Lyft when the gat squeeze..
    I press a button and your night end in a new backseat..
    That's 5 star service. It's clear I care eagerly:
    For the money, I'll rent a spare room just to air B&B.. (Blue Bayou)
    And you know I'll sign the contract... Cuz if there's still doubt..
    I'll dump you like old folks with no money willed out..
    This the way we start: My animals maim the patriarch..
    While I track your kid and hit her school harder than baby shark..
    I go Hemingway with my FMJs: Write drama for half your team..
    But when I Red Blue the Jacket, he catch the whole magazine..
    You fought for this battle in league chat. See, that's bad for your health..
    You assign us and pressure builds till blue caps himself..
    Your wife better shutter mouth. She flash or you'll find her dead..
    Put your daughter in a choke hold -- ain't a beach photo with two palms behind her head..

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    Re: PLAYOFFS ROUND 1: (1) Blue Bayou (9-3) vs (8) Hello There (4-5)

    Hello There via PM
    Yo dude. I send this PM knowing full well you can post it in "trash talk," collect a bunch of karma points and make me look like an idiot.

    Still think it's worth it.

    I've been trying to refine my punchlines since I got back to writing, five weeks ago. I feel like I've been making progress. But I'm still just edging a couple of votes per battle.

    You're bad as fuck at this.

    Can you take a bar or two of my last battle and show me how you would tighten that up? Or walk me through how you build one or two of your bars?

    If not, it's no worry.

    But I figured this would be a good way to download some of the thought process I'm missing out on.

    lololololololol...


    i’m a god to you, but don’t Address me like some nervous tard..
    stop w/ that Discourse & for $1000 i’ll run one to teach u how to word a bar
    yaaa i read a bunch of ur battles, i had doubts there’s fly stuff..
    & the Key-Takeaway was ur girl shouldn’t do that when ur about to drive drunk
    a loser w/ no friends, i dunno why this minion boasts..
    so Unpopular Greedy will use his 4 years of high school for his next opinion post
    snap his neck in submission, Hell’s no goon that can punk blue..
    Anaconda Choke’ll have em Completely Unresponsive soon as i Subdued
    why do u write this crap man?! i’ll hit you w/ a right & back hand..
    load the MG & have the ‘machine seperate ya head from ur body’ like a Cat Scan
    my girls a hard 9! a 10 even cuz she's cute in the face..
    meanwhile ur ‘Bazemore in the 3 Range’ then Kent shootin a trey
    i'ma baller gettin yardage runnin quick from a pitch..
    every play i pick-up Big Chunks, like what i blew when i saw pics of ur bitch
    shooters locked on his spine, best believe this boy will bleed..
    three dots following Hello & no… Karaokee hasn’t joined the league
    we both got roles in the game, & u'll never be as clever a guy..
    realize Departure always gunna play is that of the wack newb that’s never as Fly
    what i talk is legit - ur seasons over you should stop & just quit..
    i beat King for the title....you beat yourself up when he dropped you for Jit
    Last edited by Blue Bayou; December 28th, 2018 at 11:35 AM Reason: took out a word
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    Re: PLAYOFFS ROUND 1: (1) Blue Bayou (9-3) vs (8) Hello There (4-5) OPEN FOR VOTES

    Have you dripping blood, shit, tongue ripped, till you tap & ball up..
    Sounds abstract. But the splatter looks like a Jackson Pollock..
    i had to look this up, it’s not good
    My whole team fucks when we drug your Queen. And I'm not lyin'..
    We 'all slap' like rape noises once your bitch stops cryin'..
    nah
    My cats harvest for black markets. Slit ya with the knife..
    Keep runnin' -- you'll be ice bathed with stitches in your side..
    had potential but wasn’t done right
    My crew loaded in that Lotus. And it Lyft when the gat squeeze..
    I press a button and your night end in a new backseat..
    lol nah
    That's 5 star service. It's clear I care eagerly:
    For the money, I'll rent a spare room just to air B&B.. (Blue Bayou)
    the air bnb concept by itself had potential but when you do these kinds of bars you have to be exact. His names Blue Bayou (thank you for the reminder in your bar - don’t ever do that btw). His name is Blue Bayou, not Blue & Bayou
    And you know I'll sign the contract... Cuz if there's still doubt..
    I'll dump you like old folks with no money willed out..
    nah
    This the way we start: My animals maim the patriarch..
    While I track your kid and hit her school harder than baby shark..
    alright, better
    I go Hemingway with my FMJs: Write drama for half your team..
    But when I Red Blue the Jacket, he catch the whole magazine..
    you read him the bullet...? Nah
    You fought for this battle in league chat. See, that's bad for your health..
    You assign us and pressure builds till blue caps himself..
    nah
    Your wife better shutter mouth. She flash or you'll find her dead..
    Put your daughter in a choke hold -- ain't a beach photo with two palms behind her head..
    theyd be behind your neck if you’re choking her but it’s ok. This bar was good either way, I liked it - props

    Vs


    i’m a god to you, but don’t Address me like some nervous tard..
    stop w/ that Discourse & for $1000 i’ll run one to teach u how to word a bar
    ok
    yaaa i read a bunch of ur battles, i had doubts there’s fly stuff..
    & the Key-Takeaway was ur girl shouldn’t do that when ur about to drive drunk
    lol damn I liked this
    a loser w/ no friends, i dunno why this minion boasts..
    so Unpopular Greedy will use his 4 years of high school for his next opinion post
    idk I’m probably missing the inside joke, a Miss for me
    snap his neck in submission, Hell’s no goon that can punk blue..
    Anaconda Choke’ll have em Completely Unresponsive soon as i Subdued
    fuck no
    why do u write this crap man?! i’ll hit you w/ a right & back hand..
    load the MG & have the ‘machine seperate ya head from ur body’ like a Cat Scan
    this is cool
    my girls a hard 9! a 10 even cuz she's cute in the face..
    meanwhile ur ‘Bazemore in the 3 Range’ then Kent shootin a trey
    wording iffy in the second line but overall nice fresh wp, cool bar
    i'ma baller gettin yardage runnin quick from a pitch..
    every play i pick-up Big Chunks, like what i blew when i saw pics of ur bitch
    nah weird
    shooters locked on his spine, best believe this boy will bleed..
    three dots following Hello & no… Karaokee hasn’t joined the league
    oooo nice one here, I hope people get this
    we both got roles in the game, & u'll never be as clever a guy..
    realize Departure always gunna play is that of the wack newb that’s never as Fly
    not feelin
    what i talk is legit - ur seasons over you should stop & just quit..
    i beat King for the title....you beat yourself up when he dropped you for Jit
    good personal, solid closer


    H.t - you had 2 ok lines here, but a lot of your stuff felt unfinished and rushed - most of your lines just weren’t connecting.


    Blue & Bayou - pretty cool verse here, I like that you mixed it up with different types of bars in this one - not allllll wordplay and that’s good. You had some cool wordplay bars in here too though, and some I just wasn’t feeling. Anyways props on the verse.


    Vote - Blue & Bayou

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    Re: PLAYOFFS ROUND 1: (1) Blue Bayou (9-3) vs (8) Hello There (4-5) OPEN FOR VOTES

    Have you dripping blood, shit, tongue ripped, till you tap & ball up..
    Sounds abstract. But the splatter looks like a Jackson Pollock..

    Worded smoothly..although not too hard-hitting..could be better..

    My whole team fucks when we drug your Queen. And I'm not lyin'..
    We 'all slap' like rape noises once your bitch stops cryin'..

    Not bad..but needs to be better in a battle of this calibre..

    My cats harvest for black markets. Slit ya with the knife..
    Keep runnin' -- you'll be ice bathed with stitches in your side..

    Lol, your best bar right now..cool bar..

    My crew loaded in that Lotus. And it Lyft when the gat squeeze..
    I press a button and your night end in a new backseat..

    Not..but could be better in ways..

    That's 5 star service. It's clear I care eagerly:
    For the money, I'll rent a spare room just to air B&B.. (Blue Bayou)

    Could be better..lol..

    And you know I'll sign the contract... Cuz if there's still doubt..
    I'll dump you like old folks with no money willed out..

    What in the world..lol..okay..

    This the way we start: My animals maim the patriarch..
    While I track your kid and hit her school harder than baby shark.

    lmao..good..
    .
    I go Hemingway with my FMJs: Write drama for half your team..
    But when I Red Blue the Jacket, he catch the whole magazine..

    lool..okay..

    You fought for this battle in league chat. See, that's bad for your health..
    You assign us and pressure builds till blue caps himself..

    could be better..but okay..

    Your wife better shutter mouth. She flash or you'll find her dead..
    Put your daughter in a choke hold -- ain't a beach photo with two palms behind her head..

    niice on here..not bad..

    Blue Bayou -

    i’m a god to you, but don’t Address me like some nervous tard..
    stop w/ that Discourse & for $1000 i’ll run one to teach u how to word a bar

    Not bad..decent one..

    yaaa i read a bunch of ur battles, i had doubts there’s fly stuff..
    & the Key-Takeaway was ur girl shouldn’t do that when ur about to drive drunk

    Not too bad here..although was decent..

    a loser w/ no friends, i dunno why this minion boasts..
    so Unpopular Greedy will use his 4 years of high school for his next opinion post

    funny..decent..

    snap his neck in submission, Hell’s no goon that can punk blue..
    Anaconda Choke’ll have em Completely Unresponsive soon as I Subdued

    could be better..but okay..

    why do u write this crap man?! i’ll hit you w/ a right & back hand..
    load the MG & have the ‘machine seperate ya head from ur body’ like a Cat Scan

    good one..niice..

    my girls a hard 9! a 10 even cuz she's cute in the face..
    meanwhile ur ‘Bazemore in the 3 Range’ then Kent shootin a trey

    not bad..but decent..

    i'ma baller gettin yardage runnin quick from a pitch..
    every play i pick-up Big Chunks, like what i blew when i saw pics of ur bitch

    Lool..okay I guess..

    shooters locked on his spine, best believe this boy will bleed..
    three dots following Hello & no… Karaokee hasn’t joined the league

    not feeling this one as much..but okay..

    we both got roles in the game, & u'll never be as clever a guy..
    realize Departure always gunna play is that of the wack newb that’s never as Fly

    Lool..okay..

    what i talk is legit - ur seasons over you should stop & just quit..
    i beat King for the title....you beat yourself up when he dropped you for Jit

    not feeling this one as much..okay..I goess..

    overall -

    decent verses you guys..good battle..I'm going with the guy I thought was more consistent and that's blue bayou..

    v/ blue bayou..

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    Re: PLAYOFFS ROUND 1: (1) Blue Bayou (9-3) vs (8) Hello There (4-5) OPEN FOR VOTES

    My cats harvest for black markets. Slit ya with the knife..
    Keep runnin' -- you'll be ice bathed with stitches in your side..
    That's 5 star service. It's clear I care eagerly:
    For the money, I'll rent a spare room just to air B&B..
    (My air bnb bar was better lol)
    This the way we start: My animals maim the patriarch..
    While I track your kid and hit her school harder than baby shark..

    vs

    i’m a god to you, but don’t Address me like some nervous tard..
    stop w/ that Discourse & for $1000 i’ll run one to teach u how to word a bar
    yaaa i read a bunch of ur battles, i had doubts there’s fly stuff..
    & the Key-Takeaway was ur girl shouldn’t do that when ur about to drive drunk
    snap his neck in submission, Hell’s no goon that can punk blue..
    Anaconda Choke’ll have em Completely Unresponsive soon as i Subdued
    my girls a hard 9! a 10 even cuz she's cute in the face..
    meanwhile ur ‘Bazemore in the 3 Range’ then Kent shootin a trey

    shooters locked on his spine, best believe this boy will bleed..
    three dots following Hello & no… Karaokee hasn’t joined the league
    what i talk is legit - ur seasons over you should stop & just quit..
    i beat King for the title....you beat yourself up when he dropped you for Jit


    Felt one hello had some okay stuff but I think if he works on it alil more he can come up with better ways to word his punches n create his ideas this battle onesided to me the Bazemore & Subduded bar was flames props to both tho. v/Blue
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    Re: PLAYOFFS ROUND 1: (1) Blue Bayou (9-3) vs (8) Hello There (4-5)

    Quote Originally Posted by hello there View Post
    It's the playoffs you fuck faces... no more joke bars.






    Have you dripping blood, shit, tongue ripped, till you tap & ball up..
    Sounds abstract. But the splatter looks like a Jackson Pollock..
    -obscure but decent
    My whole team fucks when we drug your Queen. And I'm not lyin'..
    We 'all slap' like rape noises once your bitch stops cryin'..
    -nah
    My cats harvest for black markets. Slit ya with the knife..
    Keep runnin' -- you'll be ice bathed with stitches in your side..
    -eh
    My crew loaded in that Lotus. And it Lyft when the gat squeeze..
    I press a button and your night end in a new backseat..
    -yes indeed
    That's 5 star service. It's clear I care eagerly:
    For the money, I'll rent a spare room just to air B&B.. (Blue Bayou)
    -nah
    And you know I'll sign the contract... Cuz if there's still doubt..
    I'll dump you like old folks with no money willed out..
    -no sir
    This the way we start: My animals maim the patriarch..
    While I track your kid and hit her school harder than baby shark..
    -lol ok
    I go Hemingway with my FMJs: Write drama for half your team..
    But when I Red Blue the Jacket, he catch the whole magazine..
    -no sir
    You fought for this battle in league chat. See, that's bad for your health..
    You assign us and pressure builds till blue caps himself..
    -nope
    Your wife better shutter mouth. She flash or you'll find her dead..
    Put your daughter in a choke hold -- ain't a beach photo with two palms behind her head..
    -eh ok
    Quote Originally Posted by Blue Bayou View Post
    Hello There via PM



    lololololololol...


    i’m a god to you, but don’t Address me like some nervous tard..
    stop w/ that Discourse & for $1000 i’ll run one to teach u how to word a bar
    -lol alr
    yaaa i read a bunch of ur battles, i had doubts there’s fly stuff..
    & the Key-Takeaway was ur girl shouldn’t do that when ur about to drive drunk
    -nice
    a loser w/ no friends, i dunno why this minion boasts..
    so Unpopular Greedy will use his 4 years of high school for his next opinion post
    -eh
    snap his neck in submission, Hell’s no goon that can punk blue..
    Anaconda Choke’ll have em Completely Unresponsive soon as i Subdued
    -nasty
    why do u write this crap man?! i’ll hit you w/ a right & back hand..
    load the MG & have the ‘machine seperate ya head from ur body’ like a Cat Scan
    -stop the match
    my girls a hard 9! a 10 even cuz she's cute in the face..
    meanwhile ur ‘Bazemore in the 3 Range’ then Kent shootin a trey
    -i probably wrote this
    i'ma baller gettin yardage runnin quick from a pitch..
    every play i pick-up Big Chunks, like what i blew when i saw pics of ur bitch
    -eh
    shooters locked on his spine, best believe this boy will bleed..
    three dots following Hello & no… Karaokee hasn’t joined the league
    -yes indeed
    we both got roles in the game, & u'll never be as clever a guy..
    realize Departure always gunna play is that of the wack newb that’s never as Fly
    -ok
    what i talk is legit - ur seasons over you should stop & just quit..
    i beat King for the title....you beat yourself up when he dropped you for Jit
    -harsh
    v. blue bayou...HT was outclassed here but this was probably his best drop. Just not enough here consistency wise to compete w/ blue.

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    Re: PLAYOFFS ROUND 1: (1) Blue Bayou (9-3) vs (8) Hello There (4-5)

    Have you dripping blood, shit, tongue ripped, till you tap & ball up..
    Sounds abstract. But the splatter looks like a Jackson Pollock..
    Your wife better shutter mouth. She flash or you'll find her dead..
    Put your daughter in a choke hold -- ain't a beach photo with two palms behind her head..


    vs



    yaaa i read a bunch of ur battles, i had doubts there’s fly stuff..
    & the Key-Takeaway was ur girl shouldn’t do that when ur about to drive drunk
    a loser w/ no friends, i dunno why this minion boasts..
    so Unpopular Greedy will use his 4 years of high school for his next opinion post
    hy do u write this crap man?! i’ll hit you w/ a right & back hand..
    load the MG & have the ‘machine seperate ya head from ur body’ like a Cat Scan
    my girls a hard 9! a 10 even cuz she's cute in the face..
    meanwhile ur ‘Bazemore in the 3 Range’ then Kent shootin a trey
    shooters locked on his spine, best believe this boy will bleed..
    three dots following Hello & no… Karaokee hasn’t joined the league


    cool battle. hello there improved a ton from his first battles. good shit dude. blue was consistent as usual and took this comfortable tho.

    vote Blue
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    Re: PLAYOFFS ROUND 1: (1) Blue Bayou (9-3) vs (8) Hello There (4-5) OPEN FOR VOTES

    Have you dripping blood, shit, tongue ripped, till you tap & ball up..
    Sounds abstract. But the splatter looks like a Jackson Pollock..
    My crew loaded in that Lotus. And it Lyft when the gat squeeze..
    I press a button and your night end in a new backseat..
    That's 5 star service. It's clear I care eagerly:
    For the money, I'll rent a spare room just to air B&B.. (Blue Bayou)
    I go Hemingway with my FMJs: Write drama for half your team..
    But when I Red Blue the Jacket, he catch the whole magazine..


    Vs.


    i’m a god to you, but don’t Address me like some nervous tard..
    stop w/ that Discourse & for $1000 i’ll run one to teach u how to word a bar
    yaaa i read a bunch of ur battles, i had doubts there’s fly stuff..
    & the Key-Takeaway was ur girl shouldn’t do that when ur about to drive drunk
    snap his neck in submission, Hell’s no goon that can punk blue..
    Anaconda Choke’ll have em Completely Unresponsive soon as i Subdued
    why do u write this crap man?! i’ll hit you w/ a right & back hand..
    load the MG & have the ‘machine seperate ya head from ur body’ like a Cat Scan
    my girls a hard 9! a 10 even cuz she's cute in the face..
    meanwhile ur ‘Bazemore in the 3 Range’ then Kent shootin a trey
    i'ma baller gettin yardage runnin quick from a pitch..
    every play i pick-up Big Chunks, like what i blew when i saw pics of ur bitch
    shooters locked on his spine, best believe this boy will bleed..
    three dots following Hello & no… Karaokee hasn’t joined the league
    what i talk is legit - ur seasons over you should stop & just quit..
    i beat King for the title....you beat yourself up when he dropped you for Jit



    V/blue

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