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    SPOTLIGHT: Barcotic vs Unfukwitable - OPEN FOR VOTES


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    Re: SPOTLIGHT: Barcotic vs Unfukwitable

    yeah
    due w semis/next wk's batts ?

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    Re: SPOTLIGHT: Barcotic vs Unfukwitable

    Quote Originally Posted by Barcotic View Post
    yeah
    due w semis/next wk's batts ?
    we can key it up now or then it's w/e
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    Re: SPOTLIGHT: Barcotic vs Unfukwitable

    Quote Originally Posted by Greedy View Post
    Ugh. Do we really need another Bar Comic battle? Especially against someone that can beat him?
    @Kill Spree get your wet-vac ready, chats about to be soaked w tears
    Quote Originally Posted by Barcotic View Post
    idt i ever lost a regular battle against dude but

    if yall already cant keep ur flap shut, forget it
    u right, u dont need another barc battle nor do u deserve one
    rant on halfname flips
    Quote Originally Posted by Barcotic View Post
    nah
    it should be about both

    u shouldnt have to reach that hard to be creative

    there are limits to tearing names apart for nps lol

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    u can use m (the proper shortform for mv) in soooo many ways. like tons
    so theres no need to address dude by the backside of his name LOL
    100.

    5th? or the blade?, U got options but being victim remains,
    & me being Ferrule be ya last time meddlin between gettin erased.
    Seen'em display hate for 'half name flips' on a new post;
    Only right I engrave "RIP Cotic" upside down on his tombstone.
    No Pic battles. this Bar guy got the Popeye the Sailor typa swagga;
    U thinkin Un-sinkable w/ a face made for 'Maritime' disasters.
    He got dumb excuses for losin rounds, my endurance keep the beasts shook
    I do 'long toe to toes' u think u can't fight cus of Greeks foot.
    No Hoes, U got ya 'paper stickin out for kisses', they do u dirty,
    She takes $ while u eat the Niggly Wiggly shit hangin out of her Hershey.
    Were u drinkin reading them Greedy jokes, This nigga 'pouts' proud;
    had Brews on his head Ready to Quit he just needed a Street fighter countdown.
    Self-absorb Barcissistic w/o Leagues what is he gon do?,
    1st time see'n the wrd "Meme" he thought it was bout him.. & u need 1-2.
    to Knight,King, & Old timers'stuck w/ Barc...his weak lifes taken;
    He on the ground w/ his eye's rollin back like he channeling the Three eyed raven.
    & for the Bitchin u better Nominate my battles frm here forth & on....
    & If you're scared 'Toonami' Next episode u have is w/ a talking T.O.M
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    Re: SPOTLIGHT: Barcotic vs Unfukwitable

    stfu

    all the hate is worthless, for yrs i been murkin the dope/elite
    i cud give Un a vent full.. but thats what his verses are known to be
    the chat'll show hes lame, showing rattled n afraid traits
    id say Un's caved.. and ima be leaving this battle in the same state
    look cunts, u shudve seen the msgs this crook once used to send
    thought smbdy in the hall-owed-tips to him, now ill put 1 thru his head
    he a gangster irl? LUDICROUS! ill come thru n shoot his cliq...
    make sure anyone layin Lois Lane for bein accociated w a super bitch
    he used to be str8 af but now hes buckled n very elastic
    i got 'Un dirt. acres' of it n hes gona need a cpl to carry the casket
    all ur lines are replicas. ya i said it, its a fatal mistake
    u didnt just adopt an old style...
    u kidnapped it, broke both legs & fed it a potato a day
    w/ skills declining u finna get KILLED for trying w bar
    ironically u'll go from run of the mill to buying the farm
    u dont let the cans off. this mans not a thug
    im aimin at an 'eye vs Un' aka the whole bands on his mug
    tryna be ak w sports bars all kosher but u wack fam
    ur not as Ra's Al, but u were a poser off the bat man

    feel free to edit ur 18 lolll
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    Re: SPOTLIGHT: Barcotic vs Unfukwitable

    5th? or the blade?, U got options but being victim remains,
    & me being Ferrule be ya last time meddlin between gettin erased.
    not feelin
    Seen'em display hate for 'half name flips' on a new post;
    Only right I engrave "RIP Cotic" upside down on his tombstone.
    nooo
    No Pic battles. this Bar guy got the Popeye the Sailor typa swagga;
    U thinkin Un-sinkable w/ a face made for 'Maritime' disasters.
    nah
    He got dumb excuses for losin rounds, my endurance keep the beasts shook
    I do 'long toe to toes' u think u can't fight cus of Greeks foot.
    i mean it’s decent I suppose
    No Hoes, U got ya 'paper stickin out for kisses', they do u dirty,
    She takes $ while u eat the Niggly Wiggly shit hangin out of her Hershey.
    man no are you trolling us?
    Were u drinkin reading them Greedy jokes, This nigga 'pouts' proud;
    had Brews on his head Ready to Quit he just needed a Street fighter countdown.
    pretty cool here, worded a bit weird though
    Self-absorb Barcissistic w/o Leagues what is he gon do?,
    1st time see'n the wrd "Meme" he thought it was bout him.. & u need 1-2.
    nah
    to Knight,King, & Old timers'stuck w/ Barc...his weak lifes taken;
    He on the ground w/ his eye's rollin back like he channeling the Three eyed raven.
    alright, would’ve been much better if you tied it in directly with GoT
    & for the Bitchin u better Nominate my battles frm here forth & on....
    & If you're scared 'Toonami' Next episode u have is w/ a talking T.O.M
    no

    Vs


    all the hate is worthless, for yrs i been murkin the dope/elite
    i cud give Un a vent full.. but thats what his verses are known to be
    you’re gonna vent to him? Lol I get the uneventful part but this is corny af
    the chat'll show hes lame, showing rattled n afraid traits
    id say Un's caved.. and ima be leaving this battle in the same state
    alright
    look cunts, u shudve seen the msgs this crook once used to send
    thought smbdy in the hall-owed-tips to him, now ill put 1 thru his head
    your word choice is so weird like you use terms that literally nobody says. Somebody in the “hall” owed him tips! Lmao foh
    he a gangster irl? LUDICROUS! ill come thru n shoot his cliq...
    make sure anyone layin Lois Lane for bein accociated w a super bitch
    super bad
    he used to be str8 af but now hes buckled n very elastic
    i got 'Un dirt. acres' of it n hes gona need a cpl to carry the casket
    no
    all ur lines are replicas. ya i said it, its a fatal mistake
    u didnt just adopt an old style...
    u kidnapped it, broke both legs & fed it a potato a day
    the fuck?
    w/ skills declining u finna get KILLED for trying w bar
    ironically u'll go from run of the mill to buying the farm
    this was nice I liked it
    u dont let the cans off. this mans not a thug
    im aimin at an 'eye vs Un' aka the whole bands on his mug
    decent here
    tryna be ak w sports bars all kosher but u wack fam
    ur not as Ra's Al, but u were a poser off the bat man
    no


    Im sorry but this battle fuckin sucked. Next time you guys wanna hype this shit up to be the greatest thing ever, please drop accordingly. Unfuk had a lot of clear misses and irdk whether he’s trolling or not tbh. Barc had a lot of weird and corny stuff but also had a few good lines and decent ones. It’s like y’all were battling for who can drop the worst verse.


    Vote Barcotic

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    Not even trying to be harsh guys but I thought it would be more fulfilling especially with barc dropping 2 days late

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    Re: SPOTLIGHT: Barcotic vs Unfukwitable

    Unfukwitable -

    5th? or the blade?, U got options but being victim remains,
    & me being Ferrule be ya last time meddlin between gettin erased.

    This was marginal, could've been a bit better; but was good for what it was.

    Seen'em display hate for 'half name flips' on a new post;
    Only right I engrave "RIP Cotic" upside down on his tombstone.

    Pretty dope flip, nice one.

    No Pic battles. this Bar guy got the Popeye the Sailor typa swagga;
    U thinkin Un-sinkable w/ a face made for 'Maritime' disasters.

    lmao, decent one here.

    He got dumb excuses for losin rounds, my endurance keep the beasts shook
    I do 'long toe to toes' u think u can't fight cus of Greeks foot.

    Lol, this was okay.

    No Hoes, U got ya 'paper stickin out for kisses', they do u dirty,
    She takes $ while u eat the Niggly Wiggly shit hangin out of her Hershey.

    Lol, what in the world. decent I suppose.

    Were u drinkin reading them Greedy jokes, This nigga 'pouts' proud;
    had Brews on his head Ready to Quit he just needed a Street fighter countdown.

    lmao, this was very nice. good work..

    Self-absorb Barcissistic w/o Leagues what is he gon do?,
    1st time see'n the wrd "Meme" he thought it was bout him.. & u need 1-2.

    LOL, nice one.

    to Knight,King, & Old timers'stuck w/ Barc...his weak lifes taken;
    He on the ground w/ his eye's rollin back like he channeling the Three eyed raven.

    lmao, niice one.

    & for the Bitchin u better Nominate my battles frm here forth & on....
    & If you're scared 'Toonami' Next episode u have is w/ a talking T.O.M

    lool, nice..

    Barcoctic -

    all the hate is worthless, for yrs i been murkin the dope/elite
    i cud give Un a vent full.. but thats what his verses are known to be

    lol, could've been a bit better. but alright..

    the chat'll show hes lame, showing rattled n afraid traits
    id say Un's caved.. and ima be leaving this battle in the same state

    decent work here..

    look cunts, u shudve seen the msgs this crook once used to send
    thought smbdy in the hall-owed-tips to him, now ill put 1 thru his head

    pretty decent, nice one here..

    he a gangster irl? LUDICROUS! ill come thru n shoot his cliq...
    make sure anyone layin Lois Lane for bein accociated w a super bitch

    this was okay I suppose, niice.

    he used to be str8 af but now hes buckled n very elastic
    i got 'Un dirt. acres' of it n hes gona need a cpl to carry the casket

    LOL, niice one here..

    all ur lines are replicas. ya i said it, its a fatal mistake
    u didnt just adopt an old style...
    u kidnapped it, broke both legs & fed it a potato a day

    what in the world..this was okay..

    w/ skills declining u finna get KILLED for trying w bar
    ironically u'll go from run of the mill to buying the farm

    lool..niice one..

    u dont let the cans off. this mans not a thug
    im aimin at an 'eye vs Un' aka the whole bands on his mug

    lmao..niice one..

    tryna be ak w sports bars all kosher but u wack fam
    ur not as Ra's Al, but u were a poser off the bat man

    okay..niice one..

    feel free to edit ur 18 lolll


    overall - very close battle, difficult to call a winner here. are ties aloud? because that's what I give this..lool..

    V/ tie

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    Re: SPOTLIGHT: Barcotic vs Unfukwitable

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    Re: SPOTLIGHT: Barcotic vs Unfukwitable

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    Re: SPOTLIGHT: Barcotic vs Unfukwitable - OPEN FOR VOTES

    Well I broke this battle down then my phone died. Not a big fan of all the un partial nameplays but some were clever like undertakers, I like wp like that n used to use it till ppl starting hating cuz of the pause but this is txt, nerds. Un had memes, ferrule, brews and toonami. Bar had low is slain, hallowed tips, unscathed, raw as al woulda been better with a diff flip, undertakers cuz fuck the rest I like that kinda txt, creative but still partial np

    Overall bar was more consistent throughout imo


    V. Bar
    Now I am become death; destroyer of worlds.

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    Re: SPOTLIGHT: Barcotic vs Unfukwitable - OPEN FOR VOTES

    5th? or the blade?, U got options but being victim remains,
    & me being Ferrule be ya last time meddlin between gettin erased.
    Self-absorb Barcissistic w/o Leagues what is he gon do?,
    1st time see'n the wrd "Meme" he thought it was bout him.. & u need 1-2.

    Vs

    all the hate is worthless, for yrs i been murkin the dope/elite
    i cud give Un a vent full.. but thats what his verses are known to be
    all ur lines are replicas. ya i said it, its a fatal mistake
    u didnt just adopt an old style...
    u kidnapped it, broke both legs & fed it a potato a day
    w/ skills declining u finna get KILLED for trying w bar
    ironically u'll go from run of the mill to buying the farm

    Even though I only quoted three from Bar he was more consistent by far, just didn't care for most of it. Un you had some good concepts but the execution was lacking. You could have made this much closer using the same concepts of you wrote them better. Bar cleaned up here

    v/Barcotic

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    Re: SPOTLIGHT: Barcotic vs Unfukwitable - OPEN FOR VOTES

    5th? or the blade?, U got options but being victim remains,
    & me being Ferrule be ya last time meddlin between gettin erased.
    No Hoes, U got ya 'paper stickin out for kisses', they do u dirty,
    She takes $ while u eat the Niggly Wiggly shit hangin out of her Hershey.
    Self-absorb Barcissistic w/o Leagues what is he gon do?,
    1st time see'n the wrd "Meme" he thought it was bout him.. & u need 1-2.
    to Knight,King, & Old timers'stuck w/ Barc...his weak lifes taken;
    He on the ground w/ his eye's rollin back like he channeling the Three eyed raven.



    VERSUS


    all the hate is worthless, for yrs i been murkin the dope/elite
    i cud give Un a vent full.. but thats what his verses are known to be
    he a gangster irl? LUDICROUS! ill come thru n shoot his cliq...
    make sure anyone layin Lois Lane for bein accociated w a super bitch
    he used to be str8 af but now hes buckled n very elastic
    i got 'Un dirt. acres' of it n hes gona need a cpl to carry the casket
    w/ skills declining u finna get KILLED for trying w bar
    ironically u'll go from run of the mill to buying the farm




    So yea, this was an interesting battle by two clear and concise veterans who are both clearly masterful in their craft. That being said this battle shouldve been closed verry many months ago, and I think one reason it wasn't was due to the length of the read. luckily it was two names I'd wanted to read otherwise i dont think i couldve made it through. anyway all in all, you both delivered a well contrived battle here with ^^these quotables and it simply came down to enjoyability in the reading of it. Equal mainly throughout I only vote this way because it was more interesting to me to have seen more concepts in multiple areas rather than the constant nameflips(although I think intentional). Bar for Bar it's even imho but

    V/ Unfukwitable for a more entertaining drop
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    Re: SPOTLIGHT: Barcotic vs Unfukwitable - OPEN FOR VOTES

    5th? or the blade?, U got options but being victim remains,
    & me being Ferrule be ya last time meddlin between gettin erased.
    Mediocre, multi's not quite connecting.

    Seen'em display hate for 'half name flips' on a new post;
    Only right I engrave "RIP Cotic" upside down on his tombstone.
    Mediocre, rhymes not quite connnecting.

    No Pic battles. this Bar guy got the Popeye the Sailor typa swagga;
    U thinkin Un-sinkable w/ a face made for 'Maritime' disasters.
    Favorite line, flows well and I like the content.

    He got dumb excuses for losin rounds, my endurance keep the beasts shook
    I do 'long toe to toes' u think u can't fight cus of Greeks foot.
    Rhyme on point, mediocre metaphor that flows well.

    No Hoes, U got ya 'paper stickin out for kisses', they do u dirty,
    She takes $ while u eat the Niggly Wiggly shit hangin out of her Hershey.
    Half-decent punch, a little winded.

    Were u drinkin reading them Greedy jokes, This nigga 'pouts' proud;
    had Brews on his head Ready to Quit he just needed a Street fighter countdown.
    Mediocre and winded.

    Self-absorb Barcissistic w/o Leagues what is he gon do?,
    1st time see'n the wrd "Meme" he thought it was bout him.. & u need 1-2.
    I see what you tried to do, but don't feel like it connected.

    to Knight,King, & Old timers'stuck w/ Barc...his weak lifes taken;
    He on the ground w/ his eye's rollin back like he channeling the Three eyed raven.
    I'm feeling this mid evil bar, and rhyme scheme works.

    & for the Bitchin u better Nominate my battles frm here forth & on....
    & If you're scared 'Toonami' Next episode u have is w/ a talking T.O.M
    And a mediocre finish.

    -VS-

    all the hate is worthless, for yrs i been murkin the dope/elite
    i cud give Un a vent full.. but thats what his verses are known to be
    Mediocre, flows better.

    the chat'll show hes lame, showing rattled n afraid traits
    id say Un's caved.. and ima be leaving this battle in the same state
    Mediocre, but flow and rhyme a bit tighter.

    look cunts, u shudve seen the msgs this crook once used to send
    thought smbdy in the hall-owed-tips to him, now ill put 1 thru his head
    I see the reference but weak punch and poor rhyme scheme.

    he a gangster irl? LUDICROUS! ill come thru n shoot his cliq...
    make sure anyone layin Lois Lane for bein accociated w a super bitch
    Favorite line. Decent multi rhyme and metaphor.

    he used to be str8 af but now hes buckled n very elastic
    i got 'Un dirt. acres' of it n hes gona need a cpl to carry the casket
    Decent bar, rhymes connect.

    all ur lines are replicas. ya i said it, its a fatal mistake
    u didnt just adopt an old style...
    The set up, let's see the punch.

    u kidnapped it, broke both legs & fed it a potato a day
    w/ skills declining u finna get KILLED for trying w bar
    The punch connects. You kidnapped that style and held it ransom feeding it a potato a day! Dope.

    ironically u'll go from run of the mill to buying the farm
    u dont let the cans off. this mans not a thug
    im aimin at an 'eye vs Un' aka the whole bands on his mug
    Decent, at least it flows and a bit of rhyming.

    tryna be ak w sports bars all kosher but u wack fam
    ur not as Ra's Al, but u were a poser off the bat man
    Mediocre finish. Rhyme is there. Metaphor but not strong.

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    Not 100% what happen with the # of bars. Regardless this is how I see it. Barcotic had the better flow and rhyme scheme. Barcotic overall had the better punchlines, metaphors, and multiples. Overall Barcotic won this battle in my opinion.

    Vote: Barcotic

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