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    Playoffs Rnd 2:MV Vs Bomb Bard - OPEN 4 VOTES



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    Re: Playoffs Rnd 2:MV Vs Bomb Bard

    ikr lol check

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    Re: Playoffs Rnd 2:MV Vs Bomb Bard

    @mv let’s get our bars in tonight

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    Re: Playoffs Rnd 2:MV Vs Bomb Bard

    Cash on ya head imma find out whatsonnet n collect wtf im ode w/ ya life in omission
    or bribe me...
    idc how poesy, Bard better pay up or theyll find his body in minor D composition

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    Re: Playoffs Rnd 2:MV Vs Bomb Bard

    See..
    U cud roll up w/a Scorpion blade & get hit w/a long gat
    Let it swing.. Ermac hits’ll put U down for thinkin u cud engage in Kombat

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    Re: Playoffs Rnd 2:MV Vs Bomb Bard - OPEN 4 VOTES

    MV your bar was just very all over the place and tbh I have no idea what the punch even is + you have way too many typos to let slide because it actually did mess up your bar. Spree the ermac concept had potential and you did it ok here but you didn’t fully capitalize on the punch, it was still enough for the win though for sure.


    Vote spree

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    Re: Playoffs Rnd 2:MV Vs Bomb Bard - OPEN 4 VOTES

    Vote bomb.

    MV- your bard/writer angle was good. Not a completely original concept on him, but much more fleshed out than others ive seen. Problem here, is too fleshed out. Too much going on, made it kinda longwinded.
    Bomb- you had a good angle too. Or mac shots. Meh that works for me. Plus your tighter wording really helped u here
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    Re: Playoffs Rnd 2:MV Vs Bomb Bard - OPEN 4 VOTES

    MV - Well im all for tie-ins to bring more aspect to a bar, and I like the angle you took in general, I have to agree it was a bit scatterbrained and all over the place... whatsonnet was cool it he set-up, but the punch didn't need to be so choppy and longwinded, it could've been cleaned up... Maybe I'm mistake,n but I don't care how poesy / poor is he he better pay up? if so ehhh
    Lastly, d composition has been done and wouldn't that be more of a musical or maestro reference then a writers?

    Cool idea on the Bard lay with some creative stuff going on, but overall the execution was lacking and a reach in parts imo


    BB - Altho there's been a million mortal kombat bars, this was a cool wp that I haven't seen done before.. your wording was pretty crisp here, and I like the angle you took in making this an attack line... overall pretty dope fresh wp and punch


    I have Bomb Bard winning... props to both
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    Re: Playoffs Rnd 2:MV Vs Bomb Bard

    Quote Originally Posted by MV View Post
    Cash on ya head imma find out whatsonnet n collect wtf im ode w/ ya life in omission
    or bribe me...
    idc how poesy, Bard better pay up or theyll find his body in minor D composition
    A lot going on, makes the end result kind of eh

    Quote Originally Posted by Kill Spree View Post
    See..
    U cud roll up w/a Scorpion blade & get hit w/a long gat
    Let it swing.. Ermac hits’ll put U down for thinkin u cud engage in Kombat
    Kind of a reach but it was the lesser of the 2 evils.

    V. Spree

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    Re: Playoffs Rnd 2:MV Vs Bomb Bard - OPEN 4 VOTES

    MV - Decent attempt at a good wordplay. However, it flustered here; could've been better is all. Better wording, better composition..lol..maybe next time..

    Bard - Very nice wordplay, good work on this one. Had nice essentials, and good punchline to it. Good work, man. Nice, one.

    V/ Bard

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    Re: Playoffs Rnd 2:MV Vs Bomb Bard - OPEN 4 VOTES

    Wasn't a fan of either but if I haaad to chose one it would be spree

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    Re: Playoffs Rnd 2:MV Vs Bomb Bard - OPEN 4 VOTES

    Bomb wins

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