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    RIP Sly Sneak

    Hello everyone.

    Recent diss track I made to another YouTuber.

    You can find our previous back and forth's by looking up the #TBagVsSlySneak on YouTube.

    If you need feedback, let me know. I noticed the feedback requirement was lined out in the rules section, but I'm always happy to RTF.


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    Re: RIP Sly Sneak

    I liked the Kenny Powers intro and the video to go along with the track. As far as your presentation i felt the delivery lacked energy especially for a battle track man. Can this wasnt mixed or mastered either the vocals were low as well as the beat. The Content wasnt bad you had some personal stuff in there but overall it was just i had a hard time feeling it because of how it was presented.
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    Re: RIP Sly Sneak

    The Kenny Powers intro is from the original Joe Budden track



    I agree with Joe Boston, here: the mixing leaves much to be desired, but I like the flow and delivery. Your demeanor suits the track well, and you content is pretty good, too. How did this whole thing pop off? Overall, quality/mixing needs work, but otherwise I see the potential seeping through - keep it up!



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    Re: RIP Sly Sneak

    cool rez gets me high for like five seconds then i feel like shit









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    Re: RIP Sly Sneak

    The quality sounds muffled. The beat is dope. I think you could sound a little more aggressive. Your doubles sound off, and could be aligned better with your main vocals, as it makes your vocals difficult to understand.

    Punchlines are decent. Overall, good efforts.
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    Re: RIP Sly Sneak

    Quote Originally Posted by amzounslide View Post
    cool rez gets me high for like five seconds then i feel like shit
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    Haha, I agree with you @amzounslide
    Last edited by smithclarkson001; July 8th, 2019 at 12:08 PM

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