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    AJ The Menace Echelon's Avatar
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    Land of snakes

    Serene and pristine, a family of snakes swim and slither in green grass
    Pristine laugh, they drink water and eat grass; and follow a serene laugh
    They feast on fruits, and mice; they use the light and darkness as their life
    They love darkness and light; the pristine feel of genuine is their entice

    They eat green grass everyday, with each other they play
    They love the suns rays; and love and admire the sea waves
    Each day they love each other, feasting on fruit and mice
    They loved their life, they share darkness and light

    The green snakes, swim in water; and slither in green grass
    They share adornment for each other; and take serene baths
    The green grass grows nurture and care for the green snakes
    The water streams shares them thirst and nurture, as serene rain

    The snakes adore each other, slithering in green grass
    They swim in river streams, and have a serene laugh
    They feel a serene wrath, gray clouds pour thirsty rain
    They feel the wind's breeze, on the green terrain

    They love each other, each year they enjoy a summer
    The day has beautiful sun rays, and in the night they slumber
    They eat apples, oranges, and mice; their life is enticed
    The darkness of the sky fills their bright light

    The green snakes have endearment for each other
    They eat apples, and mice during the summer
    The snakes play everyday, in the light's rays
    They feast on oranges, and mice during a summer's day

    The green snakes adore and care for each other, during the summer
    They dream of the ocean, and the waves of wonder
    The snakes eat apples, and mice by a lavished lake
    The green grass is the place for a land of snakes

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    Re: Land of snakes

    Snakes have the prettiest eyes... I love this poem - when I first moved to CT from NY I saw a snake, froze so bad I couldn't even scream before I ran to get help - and by the time I did he was gone and in the house. Eventually my writing spot was in an all rock/boulder area where the copperheads all be and like you don't bother them they don't bother you. But it's crazy cause like they so small and kinda defenseless even YET everybody scared of them. They still freak me out though - that's why I said maybe one day I get one and get over that fear... do you have one? Like what was your motivation?
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