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    LLL Week One: Ronin vs. Josh S - JOSH S. WINS BY DQ.

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    verses due: Thursday 11:59PST
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    Re: LLL Week One: Ronin vs. Josh S

    12.
    Now I am become death; destroyer of worlds.

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    Re: LLL Week One: Ronin vs. Josh S

    Check in
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    $9.99 for an unbiased vote
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    Re: LLL Week One: Ronin vs. Josh S

    @Josh S. Down to drop tonight?

    Verse sent
    Last edited by A. Diction; March 4th, 2019 at 09:01 PM
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    Re: LLL Week One: Ronin vs. Josh S

    Ez $


    Vs Josh S

    He Steve Harvey, his family fueding n not just a bit...
    Only time his mom use his full name is to say Joshua bitch.
    Ur wack af, Jesus Christ! Ur writing gimme nausea...
    Every verse we read is more boring than the Book of Joshua.
    But folks gotta vote, atleast he can make bars rhyme...
    If we're 'seeing ur sentences' that shit is like doing hard time.
    Boy u wack, hate having to read the shit u write...
    What's the S stand for, Superman? Cuz txt is ur kryptonite.
    Thought u were an alias, then saw the cypher. U cant write at all...
    So this is basically a bye week, shout out to blue bayou for giving me the night off.
    Read ur last verse, it was Incredible 2! Jk, shit was past wack...
    I'm staring at baby crap when I could be spending my time better with a lil jack jack.
    Now I am become death; destroyer of worlds.

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    Re: LLL Week One: Ronin vs. Josh S

    you can find him..

    posing with the muscles, walking out the gym, body frozen with the duffle..
    I'll stop anything from seeping out his mouth & the weapon chosen isn't muffled,
    I just grab the can and start to flex seal like Phill Swift broke into the scuffle!

    BUT WAIT, THERES MORE!

    Quote Originally Posted by Ronin View Post
    Are u ready? Tell em to Suck It n the bitch'll cave...
    Their Pose was ripped off...Yall look like the unsuccessful shawn Michaels n HHH
    this fags looking for that live action but I'd rather cramp his vision..
    No genie in a lamp with riches, He just hopes that Blue will cave & grant his wishes
    scratch a hit list.. I'm the king in the land and that is fair Ro..
    Cause this match is gift wrapped in a bow if I decide to air Ro!
    $100 says he blows it - gambling is something I can't suddenly quit
    What if I told you Ronin sucks dick for blood money & I bet you 'double he licks'?
    fugly bitch, y'all see what this fags worth?
    as much as a crap, turd, who hates everything that has curves..
    thats why Ronin fell off so hard that he started believing in flat earth!
    A samurai who loses his master is supposed to commit Seppuku,
    a blade through the belly shoulda been the end of you..
    now I hear Ronins looking for a dime, yo..? / Daimyo
    must be strictly for better revenue..!



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    Re: LLL Week One: Ronin vs. Josh S

    Ronin:
    Nothing.

    Vs

    J.S:
    Arrow- i liked the multies. Concept was meh, overall this bar was decent
    Closer was ok.

    Vote Josh.

    Ronin- absolutely trash. Sign out.
    Josh- you gotta stay away from those 3 line bars. They generally get no love, as they are longwinded. You had some decent ideas tho.
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    Re: LLL Week One: Ronin vs. Josh S - Open for Votes

    Ronin

    He Steve Harvey, his family fueding n not just a bit...
    Only time his mom use his full name is to say Joshua bitch.
    though the nameplay was basic but overall the humor factor was cool

    Ur wack af, Jesus Christ! Ur writing gimme nausea...
    Every verse we read is more boring than the Book of Joshua.
    ok give it a slight jab with the np i felt u couldve done something more creative with the book of joshua play

    But folks gotta vote, atleast he can make bars rhyme...
    If we're 'seeing ur sentences' that shit is like doing hard time.
    old flip but it connected

    Josh

    scratch a hit list.. I'm the king in the land and that is fair Ro..
    Cause this match is gift wrapped in a bow if I decide to air Ro!
    basically only quotable bar here for me liked the wordplay fair ro/Pharoah/air ro/arrow some will say little forced but it worked.

    V/Ronin felt even though he light hits he was more consistent his few bars connected more
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    Re: LLL Week One: Ronin vs. Josh S - Open for Votes

    Ruling made, no DQ as they're just long lines. Ppl used to write with a long 3 line style all the time in this league and others (i.e. Hens), I don't see it as a big deal.

    1-1 Upping for votes.

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    Re: LLL Week One: Ronin vs. Josh S - Open for Votes

    Quote Originally Posted by Ronin View Post
    Ez $


    Vs Josh S

    He Steve Harvey, his family fueding n not just a bit...
    Only time his mom use his full name is to say Joshua bitch.

    Why are you purposely not trying? But then get angry when a vote goes against you? Ur no slouch cmon now.

    Ur wack af, Jesus Christ! Ur writing gimme nausea...
    Every verse we read is more boring than the Book of Joshua.

    Extremely light, flowed really well.

    But folks gotta vote, atleast he can make bars rhyme...
    If we're 'seeing ur sentences' that shit is like doing hard time.

    I actually like this concept but again ur more than half assing your punches. Its sad to see you not care tbh.

    Boy u wack, hate having to read the shit u write...
    What's the S stand for, Superman? Cuz txt is ur kryptonite.

    Absolutely not.

    Thought u were an alias, then saw the cypher. U cant write at all...
    So this is basically a bye week, shout out to blue bayou for giving me the night off.

    No
    Read ur last verse, it was Incredible 2! Jk, shit was past wack...
    I'm staring at baby crap when I could be spending my time better with a lil jack jack.
    Corny

    Quote Originally Posted by Josh S. View Post
    you can find him..

    posing with the muscles, walking out the gym, body frozen with the duffle..
    I'll stop anything from seeping out his mouth & the weapon chosen isn't muffled,
    I just grab the can and start to flex seal like Phill Swift broke into the scuffle!

    This is ok, alot of filler. I understand your era allowed the 3 line scheme. Its not really a thing here anymore. It did flow well, it just hurts the punch b/c of all the filler.

    BUT WAIT, THERES MORE!



    this fags looking for that live action but I'd rather cramp his vision..
    No genie in a lamp with riches, He just hopes that Blue will cave & grant his wishes

    Blue jenie from aladin i get it, still light.

    scratch a hit list.. I'm the king in the land and that is fair Ro..
    Cause this match is gift wrapped in a bow if I decide to air Ro!

    Light

    $100 says he blows it - gambling is something I can't suddenly quit
    What if I told you Ronin sucks dick for blood money & I bet you 'double he licks'?

    Nope

    fugly bitch, y'all see what this fags worth?
    as much as a crap, turd, who hates everything that has curves..
    thats why Ronin fell off so hard that he started believing in flat earth!

    Light

    A samurai who loses his master is supposed to commit Seppuku,
    a blade through the belly shoulda been the end of you..
    now I hear Ronins looking for a dime, yo..? / Daimyo
    must be strictly for better revenue..!

    Nah


    Honestly Ronin you really need to stop half assing its costing you a reputation. It makes the haters have more ammo to say why your not in the upper echelon. Maybe you do have the ability i have seen nice stuff from you. But this and ur Body snatcher battle really really hinder how people see you. Its one thing to be a arrogant individual if you have top tier writing ability. U can say what you want about the person but you can't deny the skill/Accomplishments. All you have accomplished is ppl seeing you as a has-been. I know this has gotta bug you knowing how proud of a person you are. So please stop throwing away your namesake and actually drop 100% all the time regardless if its a vet, or rookie or a rusty vet. Prove everyone wrong dont prove them right.

    v/ Josh S. he simply had better attempts. Ronin lost this of his own accord.
    Last edited by Clout; March 6th, 2019 at 08:10 PM
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    Re: LLL Week One: Ronin vs. Josh S - Open for Votes

    Ronin is DQ'd for a blatant sway in the chat thread.

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