LLL Week One: Dominate vs. Meters - Open For Feed

[Blue Bayou]

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verses due: Thursday 11:59PST
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@Dominate @Meters @Meters

[Dominate]

Check. 12 good with you Meters?

[Dominate]

Meters aka Miles


“Got to mid-tier then bounced” – that’s the accolades this fag has got
Just ransomware n’stalled cuz it’s obv he couldn’t hack the comp
I read his shit & it’s garbage, so seeing the rankings I’m NOT surprised
They got Mete in the middle... and even that much props was a compromise
Shoulda known his days were over. I’ll aim the toaster & remind a chump
Meters gettin checked! - the machine’ll show ‘em his time is done
Weapon up, I'm lining scrubs. Even his better stuff was never tough
& I got a 9mm to centimeter since he never quiiiiite could measure up
“Lemme try this thing again guys”… nahhhh homie fuck that rattle
I really don’t care for Miles tone – he’s gettin stomped in a comeback battle
Took advantage of his girls kindness. If they fuckin she just be faking smiles
He can baaaarely give her an inch - she really don’t wanna be taking Miles

[Blue Bayou]

Dominate wins by NS.

Open for Feed.

[Orc]

Opener was a demonstration on how to do wordplay properly. Fluid and works both ways. Milestone was clever. Other nameplays were ok.

[Greedy]

Opener- fire. I think I've seen the ransomware wp done but this had some added oomph to it.
Compromise- i liked it
Meter machine- fire
Centimeter- good but very predictable
Miles tone- good. Coulda been executed a lil harsher imo
Closer- not feeling this

So this was a dope verse. Most of my criticisms were nitpicks.

[Clout]

Meters aka Miles


“Got to mid-tier then bounced” – that’s the accolades this fag has got
Just ransomware n’stalled cuz it’s obv he couldn’t hack the comp

Haha dope

I read his shit & it’s garbage, so seeing the rankings I’m NOT surprised
They got Mete in the middle... and even that much props was a compromise

Vel spilao, herra!!

Shoulda known his days were over. I’ll aim the toaster & remind a chump
Meters gettin checked! - the machine’ll show ‘em his time is done

Nice i liked this one.

Weapon up, I'm lining scrubs. Even his better stuff was never tough
& I got a 9mm to centimeter since he never quiiiiite could measure up

haha
“Lemme try this thing again guys”… nahhhh homie fuck that rattle
I really don’t care for Miles tone – he’s gettin stomped in a comeback battle

milestone i liked this one

Took advantage of his girls kindness. If they fuckin she just be faking smiles
He can baaaarely give her an inch - she really don’t wanna be taking Miles

Ladies and gentlemen This is a classy showing from a wordplay wiz aka Bluebayou's Austrailian Half brother twice removed. Thank you so very much for dropping this gem here. I'm so sorry you got no showed.

[Barcotic]

"Got to mid-tier then bounced” – that’s the accolades this fag has got
Just ransomware n’stalled cuz it’s obv he couldn’t hack the comp
slick
I read his shit & it’s garbage, so seeing the rankings I’m NOT surprised
They got Mete in the middle... and even that much props was a compromise
ok
Shoulda known his days were over. I’ll aim the toaster & remind a chump
Meters gettin checked! - the machine’ll show ‘em his time is done
coo
Weapon up, I'm lining scrubs. Even his better stuff was never tough
& I got a 9mm to centimeter since he never quiiiiite could measure up
played, but done better. jab
“Lemme try this thing again guys”… nahhhh homie fuck that rattle
I really don’t care for Miles tone – he’s gettin stomped in a comeback battle
nice
Took advantage of his girls kindness. If they fuckin she just be faking smiles
He can baaaarely give her an inch - she really don’t wanna be taking Miles
nah

3 gd punches
2 jabs
1 miss

cool verse
i wana battle u

[Exalted.]

Meters aka Miles


“Got to mid-tier then bounced” – that’s the accolades this fag has got
Just ransomware n’stalled cuz it’s obv he couldn’t hack the comp
Off the rip I recognized ran some where been used but the installed & hack comp tie-ins made it dope. Well done.
I read his shit & it’s garbage, so seeing the rankings I’m NOT surprised
They got Mete in the middle... and even that much props was a compromise
Ok. Solid np
Shoulda known his days were over. I’ll aim the toaster & remind a chump
Meters gettin checked! - the machine’ll show ‘em his time is done
Worded well - solid line no complaints in how this was put together
Weapon up, I'm lining scrubs. Even his better stuff was never tough
& I got a 9mm to centimeter since he never quiiiiite could measure up
Ok again, I liked the angle here
“Lemme try this thing again guys”… nahhhh homie fuck that rattle
I really don’t care for Miles tone – he’s gettin stomped in a comeback battle
Solid. Once again nothing too risky, wording is fine here
Took advantage of his girls kindness. If they fuckin she just be faking smiles
He can baaaarely give her an inch - she really don’t wanna be taking Miles
Light in comparison

[Dominate]

Thanks for the feedback fellas. Much appreciated.
@Barcotic sign into the league my dude