LLL Week Two: King (1-0) vs. Josh S. (1-0) - KING WINS

[Blue Bayou]

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verses due: Thursday 11:59PST
Minimum Lines = 12 Lines
Maximum Lines = 20 Lines



Extension: Up to opponent IF verse completed & posted/sent. Otherwise at the Moderators discretion.

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[Sting3r]

Check

[King]

Yessir

[Sting3r]

sent 12 to blue

@King confirmed

[Sting3r]

I'll grant extension as long as he needs

[King]

I'll grant extension as long as he needs

word i'm gonna need til tomorrow.

[King]

Enjoy the moment Josh, battlin the champ w/o earning a spot
U like a celebs kid, gettin schooled by the best whether u deserve it or not
1-0 by DQ, Josh praying for that streak stayin intact
Shits ironic, for this battle to swing ur way I'd have to go sway in the chat
3-line style, the avy...lollll all I can do is laugh at this clown
I'm the future, ur a text time capsule that needs to go back in the ground
n I'm abusing ur girl, got her tied up doing the nastiest shit
Sound like tyrone from chappelle show, feenin for the crack of my whip
Too scared to fight, all that tough guy shit I'm stoppin it now
Coz anytime he talks about gettin in the ring u know it's just joshin around
Just keying bullshit coz he's soft. Cant deny this kids trash
Hardest thing about Josh is finding motivation to write about his bitch ass

[Blue Bayou]

Josh S.'s verse




slash last seasons champ - I'm next in line, don't care if it's known
my only goal is to choke out this king till theres no more air to the thrown
nobody predicting i'd take the crown, but the underdog sure got solutions
ending this by slicing off arms & legs.. I don't mind four gone conclusions
big fish ina small pond, text is how he's claiming this gigantic clout,
soon as he yells "I'm King of the world", his lifes taking the titanic route
no 1 sees how bad he is inside the ring? I'm Pai Mei, - tryn' blink
he'll be living proof in the land of the blind the man with 1 eye is King
who he beat to champ? a plethora of the same matches & morons to
now i get y u say he's eating. All he had to do was cut the cordon bleu
boi you boring AF, and any one hyping you up are fucking fools..
15 years - no LP or killer mic presents?! shit it's time you run the jewels

12.

[Blas]

Enjoy the moment Josh, battlin the champ w/o earning a spot
U like a celebs kid, gettin schooled by the best whether u deserve it or not
would a celebs kid be instantly know for being schooled by the best? just seems weakish but i see the personalish attempt
1-0 by DQ, Josh praying for that streak stayin intact
Shits ironic, for this battle to swing ur way I'd have to go sway in the chat
simple but aight
3-line style, the avy...lollll all I can do is laugh at this clown
I'm the future, ur a text time capsule that needs to go back in the ground
i liked this
n I'm abusing ur girl, got her tied up doing the nastiest shit
Sound like tyrone from chappelle show, feenin for the crack of my whip
lmfao, aight
Too scared to fight, all that tough guy shit I'm stoppin it now
Coz anytime he talks about gettin in the ring u know it's just joshin around
it's kinda forced but it still works so it's not bad
Just keying bullshit coz he's soft. Cant deny this kids trash
Hardest thing about Josh is finding motivation to write about his bitch ass
this is just too lazy & u know it lolz

..

slash last seasons champ - I'm next in line, don't care if it's known
my only goal is to choke out this king till theres no more air to the thrown
thought it was a double meta but thrown doesn't work the second way so i guess it's just super str8 forward or it's forced, either way the concept is cool and i liked it
nobody predicting i'd take the crown, but the underdog sure got solutions
ending this by slicing off arms & legs.. I don't mind four gone conclusions
yep, it's dope
big fish ina small pond, text is how he's claiming this gigantic clout,
soon as he yells "I'm King of the world", his lifes taking the titanic route
did not enjoy
no 1 sees how bad he is inside the ring? I'm Pai Mei, - tryn' blink
he'll be living proof in the land of the blind the man with 1 eye is King
heh, cool
who he beat to champ? a plethora of the same matches & morons to
now i get y u say he's eating. All he had to do was cut the cordon bleu
fking dope
boi you boring AF, and any one hyping you up are fucking fools..
15 years - no LP or killer mic presents?! shit it's time you run the jewels
it's ok, had to look up run the jewels lolz

..

this battle was actually rather close to me and it was also an enjoyable read, whether it's true or not king kinda gave off the vibe he wasn't putting much effort into his verse and a few bars he had felt like that but for the most part his verse was rather consistent with simple stuff that wasn't bad, no huge hits or misses. josh on the other hand had the biggest hits and easily had LOTB w/ fore gone, cordon bleu being a close second. battle was close but i have josh for having the bigger hits and the better concepts/connections imo. cool stuff from both though.

v/ Josh

[Celph Taut]

King

Enjoy the moment Josh, battlin the champ w/o earning a spot
U like a celebs kid, gettin schooled by the best whether u deserve it or not
Nice
1-0 by DQ, Josh praying for that streak stayin intact
Shits ironic, for this battle to swing ur way I'd have to go sway in the chat
Eh
3-line style, the avy...lollll all I can do is laugh at this clown
I'm the future, ur a text time capsule that needs to go back in the ground
Nah
n I'm abusing ur girl, got her tied up doing the nastiest shit
Sound like tyrone from chappelle show, feenin for the crack of my whip
Eh
Too scared to fight, all that tough guy shit I'm stoppin it now
Coz anytime he talks about gettin in the ring u know it's just joshin around
Lol
Just keying bullshit coz he's soft. Cant deny this kids trash
Hardest thing about Josh is finding motivation to write about his bitch ass
Not bad


Josh

slash last seasons champ - I'm next in line, don't care if it's known
my only goal is to choke out this king till theres no more air to the thrown
Nah
nobody predicting i'd take the crown, but the underdog sure got solutions
ending this by slicing off arms & legs.. I don't mind four gone conclusions
Dope
big fish ina small pond, text is how he's claiming this gigantic clout,
soon as he yells "I'm King of the world", his lifes taking the titanic route
Coo
no 1 sees how bad he is inside the ring? I'm Pai Mei, - tryn' blink
he'll be living proof in the land of the blind the man with 1 eye is King
Coo
who he beat to champ? a plethora of the same matches & morons to
now i get y u say he's eating. All he had to do was cut the cordon bleu
Dope
boi you boring AF, and any one hyping you up are fucking fools..
15 years - no LP or killer mic presents?! shit it's time you run the jewels
Nah


Good battle. I got Josh with the haymakers. King came with a good opener but there wasn't consistency in his jabs. I also never get why people are still doing the "I fucked your girl", or "gun" type bars... imo unless it's done incredibly well it just takes away from an opportunity that you could actually be dissing your opponent on something more credible or personal - especially since every battle on here is that exact kind of bar. Josh came correct. Well done personals and punches. His verse started off good and got better as I read on, although the wording of the closer could have been better. Probably one of the more evenly matched battles I've seen this week.


v/ Josh

[Ryno]

This was cool battle. King had the opener, sway in the chat, & joshin around.
I wasn’t feeling everything else. Not ur typical harshness this verse but it was
Still ok as a whole. Josh had four gone conclusion (lotb), cordon bleu was nice
too. 1st read I gave it to Josh because his 2 quotes were bangers but I’m gonna
give it to King for having 1 more quote even if his weren’t as strong as Joshs
I believe he edged him. Really close battle. Props to Reflex for stepping up this
week.

V/King

[hello there]

Enjoy the moment Josh, battlin the champ w/o earning a spot
U like a celebs kid, gettin schooled by the best whether u deserve it or not
Eh Current but eh
1-0 by DQ, Josh praying for that streak stayin intact
Shits ironic, for this battle to swing ur way I'd have to go sway in the chat
I mean
3-line style, the avy...lollll all I can do is laugh at this clown
I'm the future, ur a text time capsule that needs to go back in the ground
Yo where are your punches king.
n I'm abusing ur girl, got her tied up doing the nastiest shit
Sound like tyrone from chappelle show, feenin for the crack of my whip
the CRACK of your whip? and there's no...
Too scared to fight, all that tough guy shit I'm stoppin it now
Coz anytime he talks about gettin in the ring u know it's just joshin around
ehhhh ok
Just keying bullshit coz he's soft. Cant deny this kids trash
Hardest thing about Josh is finding motivation to write about his bitch ass
...

This honestly felt like a fucking throwaway verse. The fact that people are gonna love the Tyrone punch sickens me.

Josh S.'s verse




slash last seasons champ - I'm next in line, don't care if it's known
my only goal is to choke out this king till theres no more air to the thrown
If throne was spelled halfway decent and made me think you werent talking about throwing it this would be cool
nobody predicting i'd take the crown, but the underdog sure got solutions
ending this by slicing off arms & legs.. I don't mind four gone conclusions
Nope
big fish ina small pond, text is how he's claiming this gigantic clout,
soon as he yells "I'm King of the world", his lifes taking the titanic route
Nope
no 1 sees how bad he is inside the ring? I'm Pai Mei, - tryn' blink
he'll be living proof in the land of the blind the man with 1 eye is King
Nope
who he beat to champ? a plethora of the same matches & morons to
now i get y u say he's eating. All he had to do was cut the cordon bleu
This is clever
boi you boring AF, and any one hyping you up are fucking fools..
15 years - no LP or killer mic presents?! shit it's time you run the jewels
Nope

12.

VOTE: Josh 0% chance I predicted this, going into it. But I'm pretty sure King phoned it the fuck in.

[Skurj.]

Enjoy the moment Josh, battlin the champ w/o earning a spot
U like a celebs kid, gettin schooled by the best whether u deserve it or not
1-0 by DQ, Josh praying for that streak stayin intact
Shits ironic, for this battle to swing ur way I'd have to go sway in the chat
Too scared to fight, all that tough guy shit I'm stoppin it now
Coz anytime he talks about gettin in the ring u know it's just joshin around

vs

nobody predicting i'd take the crown, but the underdog sure got solutions
ending this by slicing off arms & legs.. I don't mind four gone conclusions
who he beat to champ? a plethora of the same matches & morons to
now i get y u say he's eating. All he had to do was cut the cordon bleu

I thought Josh's concepts were nice.. just not executed harsh like the ones I quoted. King had some clever concepts Opener, Sway in chat and Josh around was nice but the Cordon Bleu was LOTB. King wins with more quotables

Vote=King

[Blue Bayou]

Enjoy the moment Josh, battlin the champ w/o earning a spot
U like a celebs kid, gettin schooled by the best whether u deserve it or not
lol dope current event punch.. wording & swag here was great
1-0 by DQ, Josh praying for that streak stayin intact
Shits ironic, for this battle to swing ur way I'd have to go sway in the chat
funny site & swag punch.. this was cool
3-line style, the avy...lollll all I can do is laugh at this clown
I'm the future, ur a text time capsule that needs to go back in the ground
ehh, nah
n I'm abusing ur girl, got her tied up doing the nastiest shit
Sound like tyrone from chappelle show, feenin for the crack of my whip
lol woah throawback.. maybe just watched an ep? anyways funny dece punch here
Too scared to fight, all that tough guy shit I'm stoppin it now
Coz anytime he talks about gettin in the ring u know it's just joshin around
dece np, wording was good
Just keying bullshit coz he's soft. Cant deny this kids trash
Hardest thing about Josh is finding motivation to write about his bitch ass
ehh okay, pretty simple & i overlook the swag in this bcuz this idea has been done before

..

slash last seasons champ - I'm next in line, don't care if it's known
my only goal is to choke out this king till theres no more air to the thrown
ehhh, air/heir is very played , especially as a King angle.. nah
nobody predicting i'd take the crown, but the underdog sure got solutions
ending this by slicing off arms & legs.. I don't mind four gone conclusions
lol solid, enjoyed this concept
big fish ina small pond, text is how he's claiming this gigantic clout,
soon as he yells "I'm King of the world", his lifes taking the titanic route
nah.. miss imo
no 1 sees how bad he is inside the ring? I'm Pai Mei, - tryn' blink
he'll be living proof in the land of the blind the man with 1 eye is King
fire.. grimy af, pei mei in the setup.. this was an enjoyable np
who he beat to champ? a plethora of the same matches & morons to
now i get y u say he's eating. All he had to do was cut the cordon bleu
ehh, i prob see this diff then most because ive had some many of these plays done on me... even with the personal the "u say hes eating" angle this went is too similar to the ones ive been hit with
boi you boring AF, and any one hyping you up are fucking fools..
15 years - no LP or killer mic presents?! shit it's time you run the jewels
okay / pretty decent close.. concept was cool


Overall good read & a pretty tough battle to vote on.. King went the with the more direct & swag approach opposed to Josh who prob had the better and more creative concepts as a whole... Overall i edge this to King, altho one eyed king to me was lotb, king was more consistent i really didnt liek Josh's opener or the Titanic play... tough call i really can see this going either way depending on preference... props to both

Vote - King

[King]

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