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    LLL Week Two: Dominate (1-0) vs. The Real Spit (1-0) - DOM WINS

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    Re: LLL Week Two: Dominate (1-0) vs. The Real Spit (1-0)

    Check. G/luck

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    Re: LLL Week Two: Dominate (1-0) vs. The Real Spit (1-0)

    This should be fun. Check.

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    Re: LLL Week Two: Dominate (1-0) vs. The Real Spit (1-0)

    “u ready Dom?” “wut u doin man?” “are u sleeping?!”… Dammit Spit geez
    Why u champing at the bit so hard? There’s no way you’re doing that in the league
    Faggot, just breathe… You bout to get clipped for talking that shit fam
    You been HANGING for my words… & I ain’t playin games when I’m drawing the stick man
    Listen. You were never a factor here, - just an actor that’s trying a weak offense
    & as far as departure playing now... you’ll just get beaten, cry & then leave again
    The LLL was better without u. No-one was sad u were missing in action pal
    If ANY comp lamented ur absence it was “great job on kicking that faggot out”
    I could put up half the lines & still make it clear I’m gettin the win…
    Post-tenancy evictor - I’ll make sure this boarder ain’t at home here ever again
    You started a business that’s sure to fail, so better incorporate it & play safe
    I got a limited liability too – can’t tell u ya bars are good w/ a straight face
    As for ur album? Noone’ll buy the shit. That filler & nonsense ain’t flyin kid
    If u stayin in the booth w/ that waffle its cuz ur daughter’s gettin ogled outside of it
    Pussy… You’re frail & gaunt - don’t want it to evolve to brawlin
    Do the math dummy. You better not be countin on hands to solve a problem
    You fake as fuck talkin bout rifles and how you can handle a gun
    Claiming ‘pump & lever’ actions… but wifed the 1st girl that u managed to fuck
    & man she’s a slut… just can’t get enough when she’s nommin guys
    That haggle down enough semen to leave a whole digestive system compromised

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    Re: LLL Week Two: Dominate (1-0) vs. The Real Spit (1-0)

    ducked me all day fucking coward, try & hide the fact you fear me
    to expose a bitch, I gotta magnify pull it everyone will see it clearly
    I'm the King, so hit the highway. you getting booted this season
    idgaf if you pushing a coup, you'll be getting executed for treason.
    watch me fully commit/bully the kid, no way this little bitch'll take mine
    I could make this pussy submit if I battled Dom & 8 tricks at the same time
    hoe in this league I dictate who's who, it's a cinch I'll split your chin
    & you can tear into that roast, beast, but I'm still gettin grinchy w/ this win
    I know I ignored you the first week, but yo, don't be mad at me
    I never even gotta notification you were back, I don't subscribe to faggotry.
    you pollute the site with fake punches, bro I'll snap your spine to stop
    I can't believe the garbage you produce I mean it's literary time you drop
    Dom prolly gender fluid, man up & stop your quibbling or have a seizure
    you're just mad I got Cis priviledge aka I can smash your sibling at my leisure
    you started out depressed then got excited now you gon rage the outcome
    I'll strip you of your dignity whether you bipolar standing on stage without one
    cuz I don't friend wack losers, especially ones who look like dorks spitting
    ur not a pallet s'likely you're a fat square who gets busy w/ fork lifting
    I'm handing out ass whoopins to everybody, cuz I'm better than you'll ever be
    & even though we'll forget you in a week consider this distribute to your memory

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    Re: LLL Week Two: Dominate (1-0) vs. The Real Spit (1-0) - OPEN FOR VOTES

    Ok. big one lets get into it..

    DOM

    “u ready Dom?” “wut u doin man?” “are u sleeping?!”… Dammit Spit geez
    Why u champing at the bit so hard? There’s no way you’re doing that in the league
    Not bad, mighta needed a lil bit more, liked the swaggiess though
    Faggot, just breathe… You bout to get clipped for talking that shit fam
    You been HANGING for my words… & I ain’t playin games when I’m drawing the stick man
    Haha stick/hangman all been done, but its the fresh connection..ehh its ok
    Listen. You were never a factor here, - just an actor that’s trying a weak offense
    & as far as departure playing now... you’ll just get beaten, cry & then leave again
    Wow thats some slick wp in a way you dont expect it, thats dope
    The LLL was better without u. No-one was sad u were missing in action pal
    If ANY comp lamented ur absence it was “great job on kicking that faggot out”
    Again, great stuff
    I could put up half the lines & still make it clear I’m gettin the win…
    Post-tenancy evictor - I’ll make sure this boarder ain’t at home here ever again
    Ahh i dont get it, but it sounds like its good.
    You started a business that’s sure to fail, so better incorporate it & play safe
    I got a limited liability too – can’t tell u ya bars are good w/ a straight face
    HA HA. I like it
    As for ur album? Noone’ll buy the shit. That filler & nonsense ain’t flyin kid
    If u stayin in the booth w/ that waffle its cuz ur daughter’s gettin ogled outside of it
    Missing this one
    Pussy… You’re frail & gaunt - don’t want it to evolve to brawlin
    Do the math dummy. You better not be countin on hands to solve a problem
    AHH...HAHA. I love it
    You fake as fuck talkin bout rifles and how you can handle a gun
    Claiming ‘pump & lever’ actions… but wifed the 1st girl that u managed to fuck
    Lol. Thats good too.
    & man she’s a slut… just can’t get enough when she’s nommin guys
    That haggle down enough semen to leave a whole digestive system compromised
    Meh, Im not sure here tho, sounded good but.

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    SPIT
    ducked me all day fucking coward, try & hide the fact you fear me
    to expose a bitch, I gotta magnify pull it everyone will see it clearly
    Wow, love it
    I'm the King, so hit the highway. you getting booted this season
    idgaf if you pushing a coup, you'll be getting executed for treason.
    Ehh, I think Im getting this, dunno
    watch me fully commit/bully the kid, no way this little bitch'll take mine
    I could make this pussy submit if I battled Dom & 8 tricks at the same time
    HAHA great NP man
    hoe in this league I dictate who's who, it's a cinch I'll split your chin
    & you can tear into that roast, beast, but I'm still gettin grinchy w/ this win
    Meh, maybe Im missing something
    I know I ignored you the first week, but yo, don't be mad at me
    I never even gotta notification you were back, I don't subscribe to faggotry.
    Nice one
    you pollute the site with fake punches, bro I'll snap your spine to stop
    I can't believe the garbage you produce I mean it's literary time you drop
    Ha maybe a little forced but I dig it
    Dom prolly gender fluid, man up & stop your quibbling or have a seizure
    you're just mad I got Cis priviledge aka I can smash your sibling at my leisure
    Duno what cis/sis means
    You started out depressed then got excited now you gon rage the outcome
    I'll strip you of your dignity whether you bipolar standing on stage without one
    Im missing it
    cuz I don't friend wack losers, especially ones who look like dorks spitting
    ur not a pallet s'likely you're a fat square who gets busy w/ fork lifting
    Meh kinda easy
    I'm handing out ass whoopins to everybody, cuz I'm better than you'll ever be
    & even though we'll forget you in a week consider this distribute to your memory
    Light, needed deeper wp for the close.

    Both you dudes are killin it, mad read. V-DOM

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    Re: LLL Week Two: Dominate (1-0) vs. The Real Spit (1-0) - OPEN FOR VOTES

    Dom:

    “u ready Dom?” “wut u doin man?” “are u sleeping?!”… Dammit Spit geez
    Why u champing at the bit so hard? There’s no way you’re doing that in the league
    I mean, this is super smooth and all but the phrase is “chomping at the bit”. I mean,
    Credit for a well executed bar but the impact really dwindled for me.

    Faggot, just breathe… You bout to get clipped for talking that shit fam
    You been HANGING for my words… & I ain’t playin games when I’m drawing the stick man
    Dope.

    Listen. You were never a factor here, - just an actor that’s trying a weak offense
    & as far as departure playing now... you’ll just get beaten, cry & then leave again
    Personal (spit tends to dip post an L) Nice.

    The LLL was better without u. No-one was sad u were missing in action pal
    If ANY comp lamented ur absence it was “great job on kicking that faggot out”
    Lmao, nice.

    I could put up half the lines & still make it clear I’m gettin the win…
    Post-tenancy evictor - I’ll make sure this boarder ain’t at home here ever again
    Eh, just ok to me here.

    You started a business that’s sure to fail, so better incorporate it & play safe
    I got a limited liability too – can’t tell u ya bars are good w/ a straight face
    Haha, good.

    As for ur album? Noone’ll buy the shit. That filler & nonsense ain’t flyin kid
    If u stayin in the booth w/ that waffle its cuz ur daughter’s gettin ogled outside of it
    Eh, not feeling this one.

    Pussy… You’re frail & gaunt - don’t want it to evolve to brawlin
    Do the math dummy. You better not be countin on hands to solve a problem
    Haha, I fuck w this. Dope.

    You fake as fuck talkin bout rifles and how you can handle a gun
    Claiming ‘pump & lever’ actions… but wifed the 1st girl that u managed to fuck
    Lol, light but nice.

    & man she’s a slut… just can’t get enough when she’s nommin guys
    That haggle down enough semen to leave a whole digestive system compromised
    Eh, ok.

    Spit:

    ducked me all day fucking coward, try & hide the fact you fear me
    to expose a bitch, I gotta magnify pull it everyone will see it clearly
    Dope.

    I'm the King, so hit the highway. you getting booted this season
    idgaf if you pushing a coup, you'll be getting executed for treason.
    Nice.

    watch me fully commit/bully the kid, no way this little bitch'll take mine
    I could make this pussy submit if I battled Dom & 8 tricks at the same time
    Nice.

    hoe in this league I dictate who's who, it's a cinch I'll split your chin
    & you can tear into that roast, beast, but I'm still gettin grinchy w/ this win
    Ok.

    I know I ignored you the first week, but yo, don't be mad at me
    I never even gotta notification you were back, I don't subscribe to faggotry.
    nice.

    you pollute the site with fake punches, bro I'll snap your spine to stop
    I can't believe the garbage you produce I mean it's literary time you drop
    Nice.

    Dom prolly gender fluid, man up & stop your quibbling or have a seizure
    you're just mad I got Cis priviledge aka I can smash your sibling at my leisure
    Nice.

    you started out depressed then got excited now you gon rage the outcome
    I'll strip you of your dignity whether you bipolar standing on stage without one
    ok.

    cuz I don't friend wack losers, especially ones who look like dorks spitting
    ur not a pallet s'likely you're a fat square who gets busy w/ fork lifting
    Eh.

    I'm handing out ass whoopins to everybody, cuz I'm better than you'll ever be
    & even though we'll forget you in a week consider this distribute to your memory
    Ok.


    This might be the battle of the week… Literally really strong by both. Spit has a matter of fact sharpness to his bars… but for w/e reason some of them came out uncharacteristically loose ? Like not as pin point sharp… This literally comes out to which guys misses are less misses and for me… even in his misses Dom was slightly more sharp and vicious.

    v/Dom. Could go either way.

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    Re: LLL Week Two: Dominate (1-0) vs. The Real Spit (1-0) - OPEN FOR VOTES

    Dom
    “u ready Dom?” “wut u doin man?” “are u sleeping?!”… Dammit Spit geez
    Why u champing at the bit so hard? There’s no way you’re doing that in the league
    not bad, not dope. somewhere in the middle
    Faggot, just breathe… You bout to get clipped for talking that shit fam
    You been HANGING for my words… & I ain’t playin games when I’m drawing the stick man
    ffs, u prick. i have a stickman play tied w/ a personal currently sent to @Sharp Nine at nc. now ima have to replace it lol THANKS! this was ok, mine-to-be was better tho
    Listen. You were never a factor here, - just an actor that’s trying a weak offense
    & as far as departure playing now... you’ll just get beaten, cry & then leave again
    this goes hard
    The LLL was better without u. No-one was sad u were missing in action pal
    If ANY comp lamented ur absence it was “great job on kicking that faggot out”
    dope
    I could put up half the lines & still make it clear I’m gettin the win…
    Post-tenancy evictor - I’ll make sure this boarder ain’t at home here ever again
    good
    You started a business that’s sure to fail, so better incorporate it & play safe
    I got a limited liability too – can’t tell u ya bars are good w/ a straight face
    played but perfectly worded. jab
    As for ur album? Noone’ll buy the shit. That filler & nonsense ain’t flyin kid
    If u stayin in the booth w/ that waffle its cuz ur daughter’s gettin ogled outside of it
    not feelin this one
    Pussy… You’re frail & gaunt - don’t want it to evolve to brawlin
    Do the math dummy. You better not be countin on hands to solve a problem
    fire
    You fake as fuck talkin bout rifles and how you can handle a gun
    Claiming ‘pump & lever’ actions… but wifed the 1st girl that u managed to fuck
    good
    & man she’s a slut… just can’t get enough when she’s nommin guys
    That haggle down enough semen to leave a whole digestive system compromised
    this seemed like filler

    5 gd punches
    3 jabs
    2 misses


    vs

    Spit
    ducked me all day fucking coward, try & hide the fact you fear me
    to expose a bitch, I gotta magnify pull it everyone will see it clearly
    good
    I'm the King, so hit the highway. you getting booted this season
    idgaf if you pushing a coup, you'll be getting executed for treason.
    ok
    watch me fully commit/bully the kid, no way this little bitch'll take mine
    I could make this pussy submit if I battled Dom & 8 tricks at the same time
    played but worded perfectly & had a unique spin. jab
    hoe in this league I dictate who's who, it's a cinch I'll split your chin
    & you can tear into that roast, beast, but I'm still gettin grinchy w/ this win
    roast beast? was this a spelling error?? miss
    I know I ignored you the first week, but yo, don't be mad at me
    I never even gotta notification you were back, I don't subscribe to faggotry.
    decent
    you pollute the site with fake punches, bro I'll snap your spine to stop
    I can't believe the garbage you produce I mean it's literary time you drop
    dope
    Dom prolly gender fluid, man up & stop your quibbling or have a seizure
    you're just mad I got Cis priviledge aka I can smash your sibling at my leisure
    had to look this up. dece
    you started out depressed then got excited now you gon rage the outcome
    I'll strip you of your dignity whether you bipolar standing on stage without one
    coo
    cuz I don't friend wack losers, especially ones who look like dorks spitting
    ur not a pallet s'likely you're a fat square who gets busy w/ fork lifting
    2 played concepts awkwardly worded into one bar, not feelin it
    I'm handing out ass whoopins to everybody, cuz I'm better than you'll ever be
    & even though we'll forget you in a week consider this distribute to your memory
    i like it

    4 gd punches
    4 jabs
    2 misses


    my tallies make this seem a bit closer than it actually is, bc dom's best hit a little harder than spit's best & thats what it wouldve came down to if they were tied.. which they almost were
    regardless, dope battle
    v/dom
    Last edited by Barcotic; March 15th, 2019 at 02:58 PM

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    Re: LLL Week Two: Dominate (1-0) vs. The Real Spit (1-0) - OPEN FOR VOTES

    Quote Originally Posted by Dominate View Post
    “u ready Dom?” “wut u doin man?” “are u sleeping?!”… Dammit Spit geez
    Why u champing at the bit so hard? There’s no way you’re doing that in the league

    Tough, good flip he was impatient but i can't blame spit he's a master at his craft. These kind of bars i like well played.

    Faggot, just breathe… You bout to get clipped for talking that shit fam
    You been HANGING for my words… & I ain’t playin games when I’m drawing the stick man

    I seen a concept before like this but you brought it home to score decent enough. Relevancy with the gun bar vs non gun bar imaginary war going on with voting.

    Listen. You were never a factor here, - just an actor that’s trying a weak offense
    & as far as departure playing now... you’ll just get beaten, cry & then leave again

    The part your playing...nice. Again offense is one hell of a slant rhyming at best though Dingo Warrior. But fire line imo.

    The LLL was better without u. No-one was sad u were missing in action pal
    If ANY comp lamented ur absence it was “great job on kicking that faggot out”

    Complimented/Comp lamented wordplay ok not bad. It was like my Boil or Make her flip. This had a humorous jab to it.

    I could put up half the lines & still make it clear I’m gettin the win…
    Post-tenancy evictor - I’ll make sure this boarder ain’t at home here ever again

    Slick, good one here.

    You started a business that’s sure to fail, so better incorporate it & play safe
    I got a limited liability too – can’t tell u ya bars are good w/ a straight face

    went personal here, soft touch though

    As for ur album? Noone’ll buy the shit. That filler & nonsense ain’t flyin kid
    If u stayin in the booth w/ that waffle its cuz ur daughter’s gettin ogled outside of it

    Oh damn. Hello there, if you had made that personal work like this yeesh.

    Pussy… You’re frail & gaunt - don’t want it to evolve to brawlin
    Do the math dummy. You better not be countin on hands to solve a problem

    LOL, i still do this haha. I liked this one.

    You fake as fuck talkin bout rifles and how you can handle a gun
    Claiming ‘pump & lever’ actions… but wifed the 1st girl that u managed to fuck

    aight leave her/lever. This one is ok.

    & man she’s a slut… just can’t get enough when she’s nommin guys
    That haggle down enough semen to leave a whole digestive system compromised
    lol cool play on words.

    Quote Originally Posted by $pitacular1 View Post
    ducked me all day fucking coward, try & hide the fact you fear me
    to expose a bitch, I gotta magnify pull it everyone will see it clearly

    yes.. lets go! this is a battle yall.

    I'm the King, so hit the highway. you getting booted this season
    idgaf if you pushing a coup, you'll be getting executed for treason.

    Ok, not bad apply that pressure spit.

    watch me fully commit/bully the kid, no way this little bitch'll take mine
    I could make this pussy submit if I battled Dom & 8 tricks at the same time

    lol i liked this one cool.

    hoe in this league I dictate who's who, it's a cinch I'll split your chin
    & you can tear into that roast, beast, but I'm still gettin grinchy w/ this win

    Im not really getting this one, apologies. Grinch/roast beast. Its the roast beast thing making it hard to get where your going.

    I know I ignored you the first week, but yo, don't be mad at me
    I never even gotta notification you were back, I don't subscribe to faggotry.

    lol, yep i dig this one.

    you pollute the site with fake punches, bro I'll snap your spine to stop
    I can't believe the garbage you produce I mean it's literary time you drop

    alright

    Dom prolly gender fluid, man up & stop your quibbling or have a seizure
    you're just mad I got Cis priviledge aka I can smash your sibling at my leisure

    After researching this one was a nifty way to go about it, cool shot.

    you started out depressed then got excited now you gon rage the outcome
    I'll strip you of your dignity whether you bipolar standing on stage without one

    This one could've been worded a little better, Bipolar/standing on stage was cool. Just felt it could've been more impactful.

    cuz I don't friend wack losers, especially ones who look like dorks spitting
    ur not a pallet s'likely you're a fat square who gets busy w/ fork lifting

    lmao nice

    I'm handing out ass whoopins to everybody, cuz I'm better than you'll ever be
    & even though we'll forget you in a week consider this distribute to your memory
    Good close.


    Well i liked what i saw, Spit started off strong had that weird grinch bar but everything else was pretty tough to beat for any one. he was consistent he brought a strong pressure for Dom to match up with. I think dom snagged this one, he had wordplays that impressed me. Nice work he countered Spitz antsy behavior in the LLL chat well. I liked the humor he had. His shots carried more clout to me. Well done guys i got dom getting this one cleaner lands but did their thing with some bangers. I for one can't wait to see them face off again.

    v/ Dom
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    Re: LLL Week Two: Dominate (1-0) vs. The Real Spit (1-0) - OPEN FOR VOTES

    Good read. Dom was pretty consistent here
    Tbh the only bars i didnt care for was the pump &lever bar
    & that waffle bar too, everything else was mad consistent
    Do the math was LOTB

    Spit was cool too. I like how effortless his wording comes off.
    I like magnify,faggotry, time u drop was clever, bipolar & the closer were ok
    Didnt like the pallet or roast beast at all. You had some decent hits

    v/Dom...I think he had the harder hits between the two

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    Re: LLL Week Two: Dominate (1-0) vs. The Real Spit (1-0) - OPEN FOR VOTES

    “u ready Dom?” “wut u doin man?” “are u sleeping?!”… Dammit Spit geez
    Why u champing at the bit so hard? There’s no way you’re doing that in the league
    cool
    Faggot, just breathe… You bout to get clipped for talking that shit fam
    You been HANGING for my words… & I ain’t playin games when I’m drawing the stick man
    cool again
    Listen. You were never a factor here, - just an actor that’s trying a weak offense
    & as far as departure playing now... you’ll just get beaten, cry & then leave again
    lol solid
    The LLL was better without u. No-one was sad u were missing in action pal
    If ANY comp lamented ur absence it was “great job on kicking that faggot out”
    niceee
    I could put up half the lines & still make it clear I’m gettin the win…
    Post-tenancy evictor - I’ll make sure this boarder ain’t at home here ever again
    at first i thought it was forced but it's rly not.. cool wp
    You started a business that’s sure to fail, so better incorporate it & play safe
    I got a limited liability too – can’t tell u ya bars are good w/ a straight face
    lmfao sick
    As for ur album? Noone’ll buy the shit. That filler & nonsense ain’t flyin kid
    If u stayin in the booth w/ that waffle its cuz ur daughter’s gettin ogled outside of it
    i will be honest, i don't understand it
    Pussy… You’re frail & gaunt - don’t want it to evolve to brawlin
    Do the math dummy. You better not be countin on hands to solve a problem
    godDAMN that was fucking fire
    You fake as fuck talkin bout rifles and how you can handle a gun
    Claiming ‘pump & lever’ actions… but wifed the 1st girl that u managed to fuck
    lmaooooooo
    & man she’s a slut… just can’t get enough when she’s nommin guys
    That haggle down enough semen to leave a whole digestive system compromised
    the connection doesn't work well for me, could have been cool but idk

    ..

    ducked me all day fucking coward, try & hide the fact you fear me
    to expose a bitch, I gotta magnify pull it everyone will see it clearly
    pretty dope
    I'm the King, so hit the highway. you getting booted this season
    idgaf if you pushing a coup, you'll be getting executed for treason.
    cool
    watch me fully commit/bully the kid, no way this little bitch'll take mine
    I could make this pussy submit if I battled Dom & 8 tricks at the same time
    meh the connection is weak to me
    hoe in this league I dictate who's who, it's a cinch I'll split your chin
    & you can tear into that roast, beast, but I'm still gettin grinchy w/ this win
    do not understand unfortuantely
    I know I ignored you the first week, but yo, don't be mad at me
    I never even gotta notification you were back, I don't subscribe to faggotry.
    lolz light but i liked it
    you pollute the site with fake punches, bro I'll snap your spine to stop
    I can't believe the garbage you produce I mean it's literary time you drop
    ight
    Dom prolly gender fluid, man up & stop your quibbling or have a seizure
    you're just mad I got Cis priviledge aka I can smash your sibling at my leisure
    haha cool
    you started out depressed then got excited now you gon rage the outcome
    I'll strip you of your dignity whether you bipolar standing on stage without one
    cool again
    cuz I don't friend wack losers, especially ones who look like dorks spitting
    ur not a pallet s'likely you're a fat square who gets busy w/ fork lifting
    meh
    I'm handing out ass whoopins to everybody, cuz I'm better than you'll ever be
    & even though we'll forget you in a week consider this distribute to your memory
    cool wp

    ..

    dope verses from both, both had a bar i didn't rly understand so i doubt it impacted much on my vote but dom just simply had less misses. doms verse was pretty much absurdly dope all the way through. cool battle but i just have dom winning with just a few less misses.

    v/ dom

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    Re: LLL Week Two: Dominate (1-0) vs. The Real Spit (1-0) - OPEN FOR VOTES

    “u ready Dom?” “wut u doin man?” “are u sleeping?!”… Dammit Spit geez
    Why u champing at the bit so hard? There’s no way you’re doing that in the league
    ehhh... i like the angle, but i cant say im a fan of the chomp/champ' play.. might be an accent thing, its okay
    Faggot, just breathe… You bout to get clipped for talking that shit fam
    You been HANGING for my words… & I ain’t playin games when I’m drawing the stick man
    nice flip... love the hanging for my words play since spit posted multiple times where u at.. great angle, this hit
    Listen. You were never a factor here, - just an actor that’s trying a weak offense
    & as far as departure playing now... you’ll just get beaten, cry & then leave again
    lol, so ive donee this wp before... but the angle here is fire, execution solid
    The LLL was better without u. No-one was sad u were missing in action pal
    If ANY comp lamented ur absence it was “great job on kicking that faggot out”
    fire wp... this is fresh, creative and hits
    I could put up half the lines & still make it clear I’m gettin the win…
    Post-tenancy evictor - I’ll make sure this boarder ain’t at home here ever again
    okay, so phonetically this isnt forced.. that said, THIS is a very IHH wordplay that i dig but is just solid imo.. ive become a bit disinterested in the chop 3 words togetehr wp's.. that said, i cant fault the creativity and the punch is cool
    You started a business that’s sure to fail, so better incorporate it & play safe
    I got a limited liability too – can’t tell u ya bars are good w/ a straight face
    fire... lie ability has been done b4, but the flip is next level and again the punch just hits
    As for ur album? Noone’ll buy the shit. That filler & nonsense ain’t flyin kid
    If u stayin in the booth w/ that waffle its cuz ur daughter’s gettin ogled outside of it
    hahaha, i think this bangs... spit has disputed the personal, so half marks.. but again the "personal" punch is strong and this was done very well
    Pussy… You’re frail & gaunt - don’t want it to evolve to brawlin
    Do the math dummy. You better not be countin on hands to solve a problem
    flames... great concept
    You fake as fuck talkin bout rifles and how you can handle a gun
    Claiming ‘pump & lever’ actions… but wifed the 1st girl that u managed to fuck
    haha, cool fresh take
    & man she’s a slut… just can’t get enough when she’s nommin guys
    That haggle down enough semen to leave a whole digestive system compromised
    hag'll, nice... good chick dig, this was enjoyable

    ..

    ducked me all day fucking coward, try & hide the fact you fear me
    to expose a bitch, I gotta magnify pull it everyone will see it clearly
    niice, cool wp, worked well for an opener
    I'm the King, so hit the highway. you getting booted this season
    idgaf if you pushing a coup, you'll be getting executed for treason.
    pretty dece concept
    watch me fully commit/bully the kid, no way this little bitch'll take mine
    I could make this pussy submit if I battled Dom & 8 tricks at the same time
    lo, this wp has been done, but this was a funny flip and take on it
    hoe in this league I dictate who's who, it's a cinch I'll split your chin
    & you can tear into that roast, beast, but I'm still gettin grinchy w/ this win
    ehh, i lke that u tried to use you being the roast this week and flip it, just dont think this is that great a punch
    I know I ignored you the first week, but yo, don't be mad at me
    I never even gotta notification you were back, I don't subscribe to faggotry.
    okay, dece not a banger
    you pollute the site with fake punches, bro I'll snap your spine to stop
    I can't believe the garbage you produce I mean it's literary time you drop
    lol cool.. at first i was like ehh, but ary for erry/every works great in slang and this has swag.. nice
    Dom prolly gender fluid, man up & stop your quibbling or have a seizure
    you're just mad I got Cis priviledge aka I can smash your sibling at my leisure
    interesting concept.. pretty solid
    you started out depressed then got excited now you gon rage the outcome
    I'll strip you of your dignity whether you bipolar standing on stage without one
    stand on stage wouldve been more natural/flowing.. maybe im worng, anyways cool misdirection wp, enjoyable
    cuz I don't friend wack losers, especially ones who look like dorks spitting
    ur not a pallet s'likely you're a fat square who gets busy w/ fork lifting
    so ive seen many diff takes on pallet wps.. actually thought the tie ins were pretty cool here, but it still has a played vibe
    I'm handing out ass whoopins to everybody, cuz I'm better than you'll ever be
    & even though we'll forget you in a week consider this distribute to your memory
    lol cool.. good closer


    Really enjoyed this battle... conceptually, this was so dope to me.. some wp's that have been done before on both sides, but the spins were all enjoyable... a lot of fresh ideas, punches were strong, this was great

    On the whole, i really feel like Spit is going to have a great season and have a shot at taking this whole thing... but this week, Dom had maybe one miss and his concepts were worded to HIT.. spit would beat most verses for sure, and he put forth a great effort but when Dom is on there's maybe no one that can touch him conceptually and i think he just did the damn thing this week.. maybee, 1 miss with a few flips? Props to both in a big way, but i think Dom was slightly more consistent and had the best "highs" of the battle... great battle

    Vote - Dominate
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    u ready Dom?” “wut u doin man?” “are u sleeping?!”… Dammit Spit geez
    Why u champing at the bit so hard? There’s no way you’re doing that in the league
    I'm not familiar w/ champing bit as a saying...I liked the setup/angle here but followup didn't hit to me.

    Faggot, just breathe… You bout to get clipped for talking that shit fam
    You been HANGING for my words… & I ain’t playin games when I’m drawing the stick man
    I had a concept like this awhile back, it may have been done but what set it apart was the personal angle. Good bar

    Listen. You were never a factor here, - just an actor that’s trying a weak offense
    & as far as departure playing now... you’ll just get beaten, cry & then leave again
    I've seen a Departs Fall w/p way back but this was different...like previously good personal approach/angles

    The LLL was better without u. No-one was sad u were missing in action pal
    If ANY comp lamented ur absence it was “great job on kicking that faggot out”
    I thought this was dope....the kick faggot out part sold the wordplay to me in the execution

    I could put up half the lines & still make it clear I’m gettin the win…
    Post-tenancy evictor - I’ll make sure this boarder ain’t at home here ever again
    Creative here...a little odd on why u'd post ten but setup helped this wp

    You started a business that’s sure to fail, so better incorporate it & play safe
    I got a limited liability too – can’t tell u ya bars are good w/ a straight face
    eh ok wordplay as standalone...but the wording/execution/tie made this punch hit nicely

    As for ur album? Noone’ll buy the shit. That filler & nonsense ain’t flyin kid
    If u stayin in the booth w/ that waffle its cuz ur daughter’s gettin ogled outside of it
    Good personal

    Pussy… You’re frail & gaunt - don’t want it to evolve to brawlin
    Do the math dummy. You better not be countin on hands to solve a problem
    I've seen a variation in a URL battle "you can't count on your hands, I'm a problem etc..'' That being said it was alright

    You fake as fuck talkin bout rifles and how you can handle a gun
    Claiming ‘pump & lever’ actions… but wifed the 1st girl that u managed to fuck
    Cool lol, very solid verse

    & man she’s a slut… just can’t get enough when she’s nommin guys
    That haggle down enough semen to leave a whole digestive system compromised
    Light but not bad actually....haggle down/system compromised was cool which i think ppl are overlooking

    VS

    ducked me all day fucking coward, try & hide the fact you fear me
    to expose a bitch, I gotta magnify pull it everyone will see it clearly
    Cool wp...a little accentuated but not bad

    I'm the King, so hit the highway. you getting booted this season
    idgaf if you pushing a coup, you'll be getting executed for treason.
    Alright concept, ok

    watch me fully commit/bully the kid, no way this little bitch'll take mine
    I could make this pussy submit if I battled Dom & 8 tricks at the same time
    Great spin on older nameplay....i thought it worked & was executed well

    hoe in this league I dictate who's who, it's a cinch I'll split your chin
    & you can tear into that roast, beast, but I'm still gettin grinchy w/ this win
    Didn't like this...roast is fine as a counter angle but thought I coulda scrapped this

    I know I ignored you the first week, but yo, don't be mad at me
    I never even gotta notification you were back, I don't subscribe to faggotry.
    Alright, decent

    you pollute the site with fake punches, bro I'll snap your spine to stop
    I can't believe the garbage you produce I mean it's literary time you drop
    Dont work smoothly both ways, wry was ok slang but I think it's cool

    Dom prolly gender fluid, man up & stop your quibbling or have a seizure
    you're just mad I got Cis priviledge aka I can smash your sibling at my leisure
    seen this concept on NC. Not bad here wording helped

    you started out depressed then got excited now you gon rage the outcome
    I'll strip you of your dignity whether you bipolar standing on stage without one
    Same as above. ok misdirection wp bipolar was creative

    cuz I don't friend wack losers, especially ones who look like dorks spitting
    ur not a pallet s'likely you're a fat square who gets busy w/ fork lifting
    pallets alone is played but the tie ins were good to me....fuckit this hit to me - i dug it

    I'm handing out ass whoopins to everybody, cuz I'm better than you'll ever be
    & even though we'll forget you in a week consider this distribute to your memory
    Good closer - solid

    VOTE DOM
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    Re: LLL Week Two: Dominate (1-0) vs. The Real Spit (1-0) - OPEN FOR VOTES

    Dominate
    “u ready Dom?” “wut u doin man?” “are u sleeping?!”… Dammit Spit geez
    Why u champing at the bit so hard? There’s no way you’re doing that in the league
    ...Horses chomp at the bit but its ehh...
    Faggot, just breathe… You bout to get clipped for talking that shit fam
    You been HANGING for my words… & I ain’t playin games when I’m drawing the stick man
    ...best gun bar I seen in a while....
    Listen. You were never a factor here, - just an actor that’s trying a weak offense
    & as far as departure playing now... you’ll just get beaten, cry & then leave again
    ...............The part you're/departure was fire. Flip was nice........
    The LLL was better without u. No-one was sad u were missing in action pal
    If ANY comp lamented ur absence it was “great job on kicking that faggot out”
    ...this is stupid fire wp......
    I could put up half the lines & still make it clear I’m gettin the win…
    Post-tenancy evictor - I’ll make sure this boarder ain’t at home here ever again
    ......again slick wp.....
    You started a business that’s sure to fail, so better incorporate it & play safe
    I got a limited liability too – can’t tell u ya bars are good w/ a straight face
    Dece.........
    As for ur album? Noone’ll buy the shit. That filler & nonsense ain’t flyin kid
    If u stayin in the booth w/ that waffle its cuz ur daughter’s gettin ogled outside of it
    .....what, wasted a line here coulda been an album punch.........
    Pussy… You’re frail & gaunt - don’t want it to evolve to brawlin
    Do the math dummy. You better not be countin on hands to solve a problem
    ......fire......
    You fake as fuck talkin bout rifles and how you can handle a gun
    Claiming ‘pump & lever’ actions… but wifed the 1st girl that u managed to fuck
    ......coulda done more with it........
    & man she’s a slut… just can’t get enough when she’s nommin guys
    That haggle down enough semen to leave a whole digestive system compromised
    .....this sound just like an aero bar. Wp n flip was dope.....

    Fire verse
    Miss. 2 bars


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    Spit
    ducked me all day fucking coward, try & hide the fact you fear me
    to expose a bitch, I gotta magnify pull it everyone will see it clearly
    ...mag n if i/magnify. Flip dope. Opened good.....
    I'm the King, so hit the highway. you getting booted this season
    idgaf if you pushing a coup, you'll be getting executed for treason.
    ..aite........
    watch me fully commit/bully the kid, no way this little bitch'll take mine
    I could make this pussy submit if I battled Dom & 8 tricks at the same time
    ....never seen his name spelled out with words idk if its played. Here it aint.....
    hoe in this league I dictate who's who, it's a cinch I'll split your chin
    & you can tear into that roast, beast, but I'm still gettin grinchy w/ this win
    ......what's roast beast. This was a wasted bar for ur pic being up to roast....
    I know I ignored you the first week, but yo, don't be mad at me
    I never even gotta notification you were back, I don't subscribe to faggotry.
    ......u wouldnt get a notification hes back other than that this is aite......
    you pollute the site with fake punches, bro I'll snap your spine to stop
    I can't believe the garbage you produce I mean it's literary time you drop
    ...fire.....
    Dom prolly gender fluid, man up & stop your quibbling or have a seizure
    you're just mad I got Cis priviledge aka I can smash your sibling at my leisure
    .....this is aite......
    you started out depressed then got excited now you gon rage the outcome
    I'll strip you of your dignity whether you bipolar standing on stage without one
    ....strait......
    cuz I don't friend wack losers, especially ones who look like dorks spitting
    ur not a pallet s'likely you're a fat square who gets busy w/ fork lifting
    .....seen ak and joog do pallet but they didnt tye it in with another word........
    I'm handing out ass whoopins to everybody, cuz I'm better than you'll ever be
    & even though we'll forget you in a week consider this distribute to your memory
    ......for a closer woulda been fire as 'consider distribute' to ur memory.....




    Spit verse was fire af but dom a lil better

    Good battle

    V. Dom
    Now I am become death; destroyer of worlds.

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    Re: LLL Week Two: Dominate (1-0) vs. The Real Spit (1-0) - OPEN FOR VOTES

    9-0 Dom wins

    Great battle. Closing so others get him up.
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