LLL Week Two: Exalted (1-0) vs. GrimmReaperZ (1-0) - EXALTED WINS

[Blue Bayou]

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[Exalted.]

minimum

[GrimmReaperZ]

Cool with me

[Blue Bayou]

@Exhalted , Grimm sent 12.

[Clout]

@Exalted. Grimm sent 12 to Blew by you.

[Exalted.]

You in disgusting shape. Dawg eatin at them buffets blows up the waist
Down food so fast 'Belts put to Test.' & u earned a 10th dan in how to stuff a face
My punches rate a 10/10. This TKO they'll announce it when your down 
If Reap Access it beforehand? Auto-Default cuz i'd leave Impounded on the ground
For pay catch him w/ friends. No doubt my shots be clippin some limbs
Give em 4 in his circle. Best belieeeve i'll 'Turn to the Thing for a Benjamin, Grimm'
He just ugly as fuck fam. Camera sights show the man is a fright
Y'all see a Grim Lens & think - 'Who watered & fed the little faggot after midnight?'
This broke bum CANT support a family. Living wage is even a stretch
Ronin making up rules for a DQ - Yoo it's a lie to say he could 'Feed from a Check'
Fuck intros/words.. I let guns do the talking while ya shootin blanks fag
Fill in this square w/ lead. that's my 'Hello w/ a 'Stick to ya Chest' like a Nametag

[Blue Bayou]

GrimmReaperZ Verse:


Exalted aka Heise

His bitch freak mouth is liiit. she knows how to turn out some men
I mean, 15 minutes they'll pay for 'head experience' like Being John Malkovich

Trash like that explains why…



There's clear levels between us and a low level grunt can never be a veterans peer
We aint movie buffs, only 15 mins we watching’s the countdown to your irrelevance here
Entrapment clearly!!..how Bayou used me for his dirty work & disguised it in them brackets greasy!
Why else would he toss me a Dillinger muzzled…then blue print a set up for a Heise this easy
The Cal vintage & rusty, so me using this old xscape route wasn’t meant for calamity chuckles
On the serious tip, that 40 might be old…tiny & ugly, but it helped birth my whole family hustle
them pairing us up, and me NOT signing completely out the league took more than some refrain
Our shit differs in comparison ….and Exlax what it takes for us to ever have runs the same
I made this quick & simple, yet still spiced it up to leave ‘em stretchered & folded neatly
Aint even gotta go H.A.M,.. iono ‘bout ya’ll, but I like my exalted….peppered & over easy



…and this stuffed carcass on my wall wont be the last, it’s a couple more due for dis mantel
Bet they'll believe in headhunters, when I have ample come after ex and make YOU an EXAMPLE

[JEM.]

Ex:

You in disgusting shape. Dawg eatin at them buffets blows up the waist
Down food so fast 'Belts put to Test.' & u earned a 10th dan in how to stuff a face
Lol, smooth, good.

My punches rate a 10/10. This TKO they'll announce it when your down 
If Reap Access it beforehand? Auto-Default cuz i'd leave Impounded on the ground
Eh, ok… thing is I was fucking with you but thought it wasn’t vicious enough.

For pay catch him w/ friends. No doubt my shots be clippin some limbs
Give em 4 in his circle. Best belieeeve i'll 'Turn to the Thing for a Benjamin, Grimm'
Nice.

He just ugly as fuck fam. Camera sights show the man is a fright
Y'all see a Grim Lens & think - 'Who watered & fed the little faggot after midnight?'
Eh.

This broke bum CANT support a family. Living wage is even a stretch
Ronin making up rules for a DQ - Yoo it's a lie to say he could 'Feed from a Check'
I get it, cool play in but not super impactful.

Fuck intros/words.. I let guns do the talking while ya shootin blanks fag
Fill in this square w/ lead. that's my 'Hello w/ a 'Stick to ya Chest' like a Nametag
Nice.

Grimm:



Originally Posted by Exalted.

His bitch freak mouth is liiit. she knows how to turn out some men
I mean, 15 minutes they'll pay for 'head experience' like Being John Malkovich
Trash like that explains why…



There's clear levels between us and a low level grunt can never be a veterans peer
We aint movie buffs, only 15 mins we watching’s the countdown to your irrelevance here
Eh.

Entrapment clearly!!..how Bayou used me for his dirty work & disguised it in them brackets greasy!
Why else would he toss me a Dillinger muzzled…then blue print a set up for a Heise this easy
Haha, cool.

The Cal vintage & rusty, so me using this old xscape route wasn’t meant for calamity chuckles
On the serious tip, that 40 might be old…tiny & ugly, but it helped birth my whole family hustle
I think this was a nice bar… but not sure overall impact towards your opponent

them pairing us up, and me NOT signing completely out the league took more than some refrain
Our shit differs in comparison ….and Exlax what it takes for us to ever have runs the same
ok.

I made this quick & simple, yet still spiced it up to leave ‘em stretchered & folded neatly
Aint even gotta go H.A.M,.. iono ‘bout ya’ll, but I like my exalted….peppered & over easy
Bro, I thought this was a big stretch to make EX // Eggs and again, not sure the damage done to your opponent here.


…and this stuffed carcass on my wall wont be the last, it’s a couple more due for dis mantel
Bet they'll believe in headhunters, when I have ample come after ex and make YOU an EXAMPLE
Ok.


v/Ex… honestly, Grimm had pretty good concepts/bars but in terms of ATTACKING bars and landing, ex has him. Good read guys.

[Plot]

Exalted
You in disgusting shape. Dawg eatin at them buffets blows up the waist
Down food so fast 'Belts put to Test.' & u earned a 10th dan in how to stuff a face
Ha, just a ha though
My punches rate a 10/10. This TKO they'll announce it when your down
If Reap Access it beforehand? Auto-Default cuz i'd leave Impounded on the ground
Hmm I got no idea here
For pay catch him w/ friends. No doubt my shots be clippin some limbs
Give em 4 in his circle. Best belieeeve i'll 'Turn to the Thing for a Benjamin, Grimm'
What? I see all the stuff but I dont understand
He just ugly as fuck fam. Camera sights show the man is a fright
Y'all see a Grim Lens & think - 'Who watered & fed the little faggot after midnight?'
IDK Gremlins ref. no real hit though
This broke bum CANT support a family. Living wage is even a stretch
Ronin making up rules for a DQ - Yoo it's a lie to say he could 'Feed from a Check'\
Is this translated from another language?
Fuck intros/words.. I let guns do the talking while ya shootin blanks fag
Fill in this square w/ lead. that's my 'Hello w/ a 'Stick to ya Chest' like a Nametag
Pretty bleh really

Grimm
There's clear levels between us and a low level grunt can never be a veterans peer
We aint movie buffs, only 15 mins we watching’s the countdown to your irrelevance here
...this isnt hard or rap
Entrapment clearly!!..how Bayou used me for his dirty work & disguised it in them brackets greasy!
Why else would he toss me a Dillinger muzzled…then blue print a set up for a Heise this easy
Kinda ok for the jist...
The Cal vintage & rusty, so me using this old xscape route wasn’t meant for calamity chuckles
On the serious tip, that 40 might be old…tiny & ugly, but it helped birth my whole family hustle
Thanks for the life story
Our shit differs in comparison ….and Exlax what it takes for us to ever have runs the same
I made this quick & simple, yet still spiced it up to leave ‘em stretchered & folded neatly
Aint even gotta go H.A.M,.. iono ‘bout ya’ll, but I like my exalted….peppered & over easy
This is very weak for a text battle
…and this stuffed carcass on my wall wont be the last, it’s a couple more due for dis mantel
Bet they'll believe in headhunters, when I have ample come after ex and make YOU an EXAMPLE
Please learn the craft, you got no idea what your doing

V-Ex

[Clout]

You in disgusting shape. Dawg eatin at them buffets blows up the waist
Down food so fast 'Belts put to Test.' & u earned a 10th dan in how to stuff a face

not bad, went for a more humorous attack.

My punches rate a 10/10. This TKO they'll announce it when your down 
If Reap Access it beforehand? Auto-Default cuz i'd leave Impounded on the ground

Repossesed/auto loan faulted ok. I think ur setup needed to be worded better for this. The punch was ok, I think if you worded better the punch would've been more impactful to me.

For pay catch him w/ friends. No doubt my shots be clippin some limbs
Give em 4 in his circle. Best belieeeve i'll 'Turn to the Thing for a Benjamin, Grimm'

Dope,

He just ugly as fuck fam. Camera sights show the man is a fright
Y'all see a Grim Lens & think - 'Who watered & fed the little faggot after midnight?'

Not feeling this one.

This broke bum CANT support a family. Living wage is even a stretch
Ronin making up rules for a DQ - Yoo it's a lie to say he could 'Feed from a Check'

lool i liked this one.

Fuck intros/words.. I let guns do the talking while ya shootin blanks fag
Fill in this square w/ lead. that's my 'Hello w/ a 'Stick to ya Chest' like a Nametag

fire.

GrimmReaperZ Verse:


Exalted aka Heise





Trash like that explains why…



There's clear levels between us and a low level grunt can never be a veterans peer
We aint movie buffs, only 15 mins we watching’s the countdown to your irrelevance here

Yeah i see what some of the voters say. Were you aiming for the "15 minutes of fame" kind of play here? This was a bit off kilter for me.

Entrapment clearly!!..how Bayou used me for his dirty work & disguised it in them brackets greasy!
Why else would he toss me a Dillinger muzzled…then blue print a set up for a Heise this easy

I liked this one cool,

The Cal vintage & rusty, so me using this old xscape route wasn’t meant for calamity chuckles
On the serious tip, that 40 might be old…tiny & ugly, but it helped birth my whole family hustle

I dont like this one.

them pairing us up, and me NOT signing completely out the league took more than some refrain
Our shit differs in comparison ….and Exlax what it takes for us to ever have runs the same

I get the play just don't like the punch's wording here. Good idea but execution on the play is all.

I made this quick & simple, yet still spiced it up to leave ‘em stretchered & folded neatly
Aint even gotta go H.A.M,.. iono ‘bout ya’ll, but I like my exalted….peppered & over easy

Played concept but worded nicely on the end part on the punch. Could've made it harsher tho.

…and this stuffed carcass on my wall wont be the last, it’s a couple more due for dis mantel
Bet they'll believe in headhunters, when I have ample come after ex and make YOU an EXAMPLE

This ain't it Chief.

Grim you need to work on wording your punches to hit harsher. You have awesome concepts but your way of making them into bars is whats hurting you. Ex just had the cleaner wording that made his punches hit harder than yours.

v/ EX

[Ryno]

i like the way exalted/inf uses his tie ins. it kind of carries the bar smoothly.
Like that fantastic 4 bar which was nice. Ronnin bar was LOL. Nametag was creative
i fks w/ it. Grimm had a few bars i fk'd w/ Heise bar was the best, ex lax was cool,
peppered over easy was light, kind of border line. the fantastic 4 bar was lotb though
so...

v/Exalted in a close one

[Echelon]

Exalted -

You in disgusting shape. Dawg eatin at them buffets blows up the waist
Down food so fast 'Belts put to Test.' & u earned a 10th dan in how to stuff a face

This was okay I guess..could be better in ways..


My punches rate a 10/10. This TKO they'll announce it when your down
If Reap Access it beforehand? Auto-Default cuz i'd leave Impounded on the ground

Lol..this was okay..

For pay catch him w/ friends. No doubt my shots be clippin some limbs
Give em 4 in his circle. Best belieeeve i'll 'Turn to the Thing for a Benjamin, Grimm'

Lmao..this was nice..

He just ugly as fuck fam. Camera sights show the man is a fright
Y'all see a Grim Lens & think - 'Who watered & fed the little faggot after midnight?'

This was niice..

This broke bum CANT support a family. Living wage is even a stretch
Ronin making up rules for a DQ - Yoo it's a lie to say he could 'Feed from a Check'

This was okay..

Fuck intros/words.. I let guns do the talking while ya shootin blanks fag
Fill in this square w/ lead. that's my 'Hello w/ a 'Stick to ya Chest' like a Nametag

This was cool..

GrimmreaperZ -

There's clear levels between us and a low level grunt can never be a veterans peer
We aint movie buffs, only 15 mins we watching’s the countdown to your irrelevance here

This was okay..cool..

Entrapment clearly!!..how Bayou used me for his dirty work & disguised it in them brackets greasy!
Why else would he toss me a Dillinger muzzled…then blue print a set up for a Heise this easy

This could be better in ways..

The Cal vintage & rusty, so me using this old xscape route wasn’t meant for calamity chuckles
On the serious tip, that 40 might be old…tiny & ugly, but it helped birth my whole family hustle

This was okay..needs work in ways..

them pairing us up, and me NOT signing completely out the league took more than some refrain
Our shit differs in comparison ….and Exlax what it takes for us to ever have runs the same

Lol..this was cool..




I made this quick & simple, yet still spiced it up to leave ‘em stretchered & folded neatly
Aint even gotta go H.A.M,.. iono ‘bout ya’ll, but I like my exalted….peppered & over easy

This was cool..




…and this stuffed carcass on my wall wont be the last, it’s a couple more due for dis mantel
Bet they'll believe in headhunters, when I have ample come after ex and make YOU an EXAMPLE

This was cool..your best bar..

Cool battle..but I have exalted winning with more connecting punches..

V/ Exalted

[hello there]

You in disgusting shape. Dawg eatin at them buffets blows up the waist
Down food so fast 'Belts put to Test.' & u earned a 10th dan in how to stuff a face
lol
My punches rate a 10/10. This TKO they'll announce it when your down 
If Reap Access it beforehand? Auto-Default cuz i'd leave Impounded on the ground
eh
For pay catch him w/ friends. No doubt my shots be clippin some limbs
Give em 4 in his circle. Best belieeeve i'll 'Turn to the Thing for a Benjamin, Grimm'
this is cool
He just ugly as fuck fam. Camera sights show the man is a fright
Y'all see a Grim Lens & think - 'Who watered & fed the little faggot after midnight?'
eh
This broke bum CANT support a family. Living wage is even a stretch
Ronin making up rules for a DQ - Yoo it's a lie to say he could 'Feed from a Check'
nope
Fuck intros/words.. I let guns do the talking while ya shootin blanks fag
Fill in this square w/ lead. that's my 'Hello w/ a 'Stick to ya Chest' like a Nametag
Dont think you needed hello here. Cool

GrimmReaperZ Verse:


Exalted aka Heise





Trash like that explains why…



There's clear levels between us and a low level grunt can never be a veterans peer
We aint movie buffs, only 15 mins we watching’s the countdown to your irrelevance here
nope
Entrapment clearly!!..how Bayou used me for his dirty work & disguised it in them brackets greasy!
Why else would he toss me a Dillinger muzzled…then blue print a set up for a Heise this easy
ehhhhhhh
The Cal vintage & rusty, so me using this old xscape route wasn’t meant for calamity chuckles
On the serious tip, that 40 might be old…tiny & ugly, but it helped birth my whole family hustle
nope
them pairing us up, and me NOT signing completely out the league took more than some refrain
Our shit differs in comparison ….and Exlax what it takes for us to ever have runs the same
ehhhh
I made this quick & simple, yet still spiced it up to leave ‘em stretchered & folded neatly
Aint even gotta go H.A.M,.. iono ‘bout ya’ll, but I like my exalted….peppered & over easy

Eggs salted is a stretch


…and this stuffed carcass on my wall wont be the last, it’s a couple more due for dis mantel
Bet they'll believe in headhunters, when I have ample come after ex and make YOU an EXAMPLE

Nope

Vote Exalted super clever verse. Grimm was cool but most of the stuff was played or stretched.

[Skurj.]

You in disgusting shape. Dawg eatin at them buffets blows up the waist
Down food so fast 'Belts put to Test.' & u earned a 10th dan in how to stuff a face
My punches rate a 10/10. This TKO they'll announce it when your down
If Reap Access it beforehand? Auto-Default cuz i'd leave Impounded on the ground
For pay catch him w/ friends. No doubt my shots be clippin some limbs
Give em 4 in his circle. Best belieeeve i'll 'Turn to the Thing for a Benjamin, Grimm'
He just ugly as fuck fam. Camera sights show the man is a fright
Y'all see a Grim Lens & think - 'Who watered & fed the little faggot after midnight?'
Fuck intros/words.. I let guns do the talking while ya shootin blanks fag
Fill in this square w/ lead. that's my 'Hello w/ a 'Stick to ya Chest' like a Nametag
^^Light tho


VS

Entrapment clearly!!..how Bayou used me for his dirty work & disguised it in them brackets greasy!
Why else would he toss me a Dillinger muzzled…then blue print a set up for a Heise this easy
I made this quick & simple, yet still spiced it up to leave ‘em stretchered & folded neatly
Aint even gotta go H.A.M,.. iono ‘bout ya’ll, but I like my exalted….peppered & over easy

Grimm some of your bars were cool but didnt really diss ex. felt you needed to attack him more. Ex had some nice bars here. Some cool clever concepts executed well

Vote=Exalted

[Blue Bayou]

You in disgusting shape. Dawg eatin at them buffets blows up the waist
Down food so fast 'Belts put to Test.' & u earned a 10th dan in how to stuff a face

lol, im not really a fan of fat bars unless its proven the person is fat ( i dunno Grimm).. like this conceptually

My punches rate a 10/10. This TKO they'll announce it when your down 
If Reap Access it beforehand? Auto-Default cuz i'd leave Impounded on the ground

cool, not the smoothest but it can work and i wouldnt call it forced.. conceptually its creative too

For pay catch him w/ friends. No doubt my shots be clippin some limbs
Give em 4 in his circle. Best belieeeve i'll 'Turn to the Thing for a Benjamin, Grimm'

fire, dope np

He just ugly as fuck fam. Camera sights show the man is a fright
Y'all see a Grim Lens & think - 'Who watered & fed the little faggot after midnight?'

grem/grim im not a fan of... funny angle but nah

This broke bum CANT support a family. Living wage is even a stretch
Ronin making up rules for a DQ - Yoo it's a lie to say he could 'Feed from a Check'

dope... well worded & executed.. really like the way you did this site punch in regards to the fam diss


Fuck intros/words.. I let guns do the talking while ya shootin blanks fag
Fill in this square w/ lead. that's my 'Hello w/ a 'Stick to ya Chest' like a Nametag

pretty nice meta.. good close


vs.




His bitch freak mouth is liiit. she knows how to turn out some men
I mean, 15 minutes they'll pay for 'head experience' like Being John Malkovich
Trash like that explains why…



There's clear levels between us and a low level grunt can never be a veterans peer
We aint movie buffs, only 15 mins we watching’s the countdown to your irrelevance here

ehh, needed something more

Entrapment clearly!!..how Bayou used me for his dirty work & disguised it in them brackets greasy!
Why else would he toss me a Dillinger muzzled…then blue print a set up for a Heise this easy

okay okay pretty solid, like te setup

The Cal vintage & rusty, so me using this old xscape route wasn’t meant for calamity chuckles
On the serious tip, that 40 might be old…tiny & ugly, but it helped birth my whole family hustle

ehh, light

them pairing us up, and me NOT signing completely out the league took more than some refrain
Our shit differs in comparison ….and Exlax what it takes for us to ever have runs the same

not bad for an ex-lacks concept, kindve liked the flip tbh

I made this quick & simple, yet still spiced it up to leave ‘em stretchered & folded neatly
Aint even gotta go H.A.M,.. iono ‘bout ya’ll, but I like my exalted….peppered & over easy

ex alted / egg salted.... nah, conceptually okay but cant over look the reach


…and this stuffed carcass on my wall wont be the last, it’s a couple more due for dis mantel
Bet they'll believe in headhunters, when I have ample come after ex and make YOU an EXAMPLE

lol i dont usually love letter arrange punches but i thought this was quite creative and worded well as an attack line.. cool close




Overall good read... both had some nice bangers... but grimm had a coupe clear misses & Ex was more consistent... Ive got exhalted taking the W, props to both


Vote - Exalted