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    LLL Week Two: Clout (0-0) vs. SoIceyRichG (0-0) - CLOUT WINS

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    Re: LLL Week Two: Clout (0-0) vs. SoIceyRichG (0-0)

    @SoIceyRichG how many brother?
    3TC


    you look depressed as fuck in video mags, your fate is unfurled
    I knew cameras add 10 lbs, didn't know it could add the weight of the world

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    Re: LLL Week Two: Clout (0-0) vs. SoIceyRichG (0-0)

    "Sound stuff out guys" - Barcotic

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    Re: LLL Week Two: Clout (0-0) vs. SoIceyRichG (0-0)

    I'll hold it down for the RB/NCG's Shoutout to Blew by you/Bluebayou the Canadian Haiku & The Filthy Kill spree mod squaaad I love all you crazy bastards in this league!

    i'm 'liberal' at giving 'radical' asskicking's there'll be no upset win.
    Cus he'll be 'left leaning' so bad - Trump'll think he's out to get him.
    he's a headcase so reasoning & cognition - All the above's missing.
    & more of a 'useless pile of issues' than shitty magazine subscriptions.
    This piss poor charity case isn't what he says. Quit the imitating.
    If 'ICE' disputes any 'Savage' origins? its news on '21' vs immigration.
    head shots a mercy killing. So, ya knee caps? we'll be seein ya
    It'll make me get low w/ the iron like patients suffering from Anemia
    fuck ur home site, NC/RB'll Burden all, We bluebayou on the real.
    we Bash heads in leaving Aero's in corpses cus we Dominate the field.
    We got them Ill Nikka's known to be Knucklehead's in Squads.
    conquer us? ill 'Throw a wrench in ur plans so big' Allen knight'll be awed
    Seeking Power? U better generator run, Fuck ya rant u Bastard.
    Ya wife's a slut. I'll Boilermaker explode faster than a Nuke Plant disaster
    If text's a person made up of us as genes? u'd be out the scheme.
    Making ur existence more 'non-essential to the body' than beta-alanine.
    U go thru the motions but stuck for yrs cus Text's Evolving more.
    & get passed by dudes so much ur going in circles - that's a revolving door.

    Sincerely,
    Clout
    Last edited by Clout; March 12th, 2019 at 11:42 PM
    3TC


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    I knew cameras add 10 lbs, didn't know it could add the weight of the world

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    Re: LLL Week Two: Clout (0-0) vs. SoIceyRichG (0-0)

    just read mad verses from you and they funny to me
    Only thing more funny, somehow you 20 and 3
    Ya style weak. here’s a ‘quote’ he ain’t telling
    When they scream G “knocked Clout-out” sounding like we in a cave yelling
    Ya last loss you been ghost since August. Bitch I’m the hardest
    Why the fuck am I about to chase clout. I done had it for the longest, jack
    What I’m pullin out my bag, gonn’ make you run a bag,
    ride around on my lap gonn’ make you run a lap
    You ought to be used to losing now bitch, relax
    Authentic whipped you with a belt, Im bout to get da strap
    It is me + 4’in my foreign..
    run up on you while you wit ya whore and looking goofy at ya door like this shit is important..
    n we don’t even need keys. Make ya bitch, get to the sloring, before we. get to exploring,
    and we don’t care how many knobs that bitch twist I’m still kickin your door in....
    Or imma treat u like it’s Fortnite since you make me sick.
    knock you out wit a pick axe and then take ya bricks.
    If we got the same type ‘a guns imma take a clip
    ..make sure err body see it. Imma make you Twitch
    Last edited by SoIceyRichG; March 14th, 2019 at 08:35 AM

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    Re: LLL Week Two: Clout (0-0) vs. SoIceyRichG (0-0)

    i'm 'liberal' at giving 'radical' asskicking's there'll be no upset win.
    Cus he'll be 'left leaning' so bad - Trump'll think he's out to get him.

    Ok, pretty cool opener.


    he's a headcase so reasoning & cognition - All the above's missing.
    & more of a 'useless pile of issues' than shitty magazine subscriptions.

    Lol, I get the issues/magazine may not be the freshest concept… But I was 
just in a lobby that had 20342034023 of shitty magazine subscriptions…
this made me laugh.

    This piss poor charity case isn't what he says. Quit the imitating.
    If 'ICE' disputes any 'Savage' origins? its news on '21' vs immigration.
    Nice.

    head shots a mercy killing. So, ya knee caps? we'll be seein ya
    It'll make me get low w/ the iron like patients suffering from Anemia
    Nice.

    fuck ur home site, NC/RB'll Burden all, We bluebayou on the real.
    we Bash heads in leaving Aero's in corpses cus we Dominate the field.
    MM, okay.


    We got them Ill Nikka's known to be Knucklehead's in Squads.
    conquer us? ill 'Throw a wrench in ur plans so big' Allen knight'll be awed
    Okay. In general I am not the biggest fan of mentioning other members in bars, etc…
    But well executed.


    Seeking Power? U better generator run, Fuck ya rant u Bastard.
    Ya wife's a slut. I'll Boilermaker explode faster than a Nuke Plant disaster
    Lol, nice.

    If text's a person made up of us as genes? u'd be out the scheme.
    Making ur existence more 'non-essential to the body' than beta-alanine.
    I can see a lot of people might not mess with this… but this is actually
    I really high level bar. I fuck with it.


    U go thru the motions but stuck for yrs cus Text's Evolving more.
    & get passed by dudes so much ur going in circles - that's a revolving door.
    Mmm okay.


    just read mad verses from you and they funny to me
    Only thing more funny, somehow you 20 and 3
    No, not really a punch but a statement?

    Ya style weak. here’s a ‘quote’ he ain’t telling
    When they scream G “knocked Clout-out” sounding like we in a cave yelling
    ok.

    Ya last loss you been ghost since August. Bitch I’m the hardest
    Why the fuck am I about to chase clout. I done had it for the longest, jack
    I mean no. This doesn’t rhyme… and I guess I can use the rest to rhyme longest jack with run a bag… etc.

    What I’m pullin out my bag, gonn’ make you run a bag,
    ride around on my lap gonn’ make you run a lap
    No.

    You ought to be used to losing now bitch, relax
    Authentic whipped you with a belt, Im bout to get da strap
    Ok.

    It is me + 4’in my foreign..
    run up on you while you wit ya whore and looking goofy at ya door like this shit is important..
    What?

    n we don’t even need keys. Make ya bitch, get to the sloring, before we. get to exploring,
    and we don’t care how many knobs that bitch twist I’m still kickin your door in....
    Ok punch… but my dude, this isn’t a live battle… You can’t act out your set ups or rely on showmanship etc… You LITERALLY just wasted 4 lines to get to a knob twist/kick door punch.

    Or imma treat u like it’s Fortnite since you make me sick.
    knock you out wit a pick axe and then take ya bricks.
    No.

    If we got the same type ‘a guns imma take a clip
    ..make sure err body see it. Imma make you Twitch
    Ok.


    v/Clout. Ice you might want to read other drops this week and get an idea of how to structure your bars… This won’t work because you’re wasting a lot of lines to get to okay punches. I do see you can conceptualize a punch, just work on being more harsh, concise, and not wasting lines to set up that punch as if you were live.

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    Re: LLL Week Two: Clout (0-0) vs. SoIceyRichG (0-0)

    Quote Originally Posted by Clout View Post
    i'm 'liberal' at giving 'radical' asskicking's there'll be no upset win.
    Cus he'll be 'left leaning' so bad - Trump'll think he's out to get him.
    ok
    he's a headcase so reasoning & cognition - All the above's missing.
    & more of a 'useless pile of issues' than shitty magazine subscriptions.
    kind of played, jab tho
    This piss poor charity case isn't what he says. Quit the imitating.
    If 'ICE' disputes any 'Savage' origins? its news on '21' vs immigration.
    dece
    head shots a mercy killing. So, ya knee caps? we'll be seein ya
    It'll make me get low w/ the iron like patients suffering from Anemia
    coo
    fuck ur home site, NC/RB'll Burden all, We bluebayou on the real.
    we Bash heads in leaving Aero's in corpses cus we Dominate the field.
    hell no
    We got them Ill Nikka's known to be Knucklehead's in Squads.
    conquer us? ill 'Throw a wrench in ur plans so big' Allen knight'll be awed
    whack
    Seeking Power? U better generator run, Fuck ya rant u Bastard.
    Ya wife's a slut. I'll Boilermaker explode faster than a Nuke Plant disaster
    ehh, setup & lack of a good tie-in hurt this. dope wp tho. jab at most overall
    If text's a person made up of us as genes? u'd be out the scheme.
    Making ur existence more 'non-essential to the body' than beta-alanine.
    not feelin
    U go thru the motions but stuck for yrs cus Text's Evolving more.
    & get passed by dudes so much ur going in circles - that's a revolving door.
    i like it

    2 gd punches
    4 jabs
    3 misses
    vs

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    just read mad verses from you and they funny to me
    Only thing more funny, somehow you 20 and 3
    bland/no wit
    Ya style weak. here’s a ‘quote’ he ain’t telling
    When they scream G “knocked Clout-out” sounding like we in a cave yelling
    creative juices are running now, but this was whack
    Ya last loss you been ghost since August. Bitch I’m the hardest
    Why the fuck am I about to chase clout. I done had it for the longest, jack
    this was OK, minus the jack at the end tying in w ur next bar's end rhymes...
    What I’m pullin out my bag, gonn’ make you run a bag,
    ride around on my lap gonn’ make you run a lap
    bad
    You ought to be used to losing now bitch, relax
    Authentic whipped you with a belt, Im bout to get da strap
    played
    It is me + 4’in my foreign..
    run up on you while you wit ya whore and looking goofy at ya door like this shit is important..
    no
    n we don’t even need keys. Make ya bitch, get to the sloring, before we. get to exploring,
    and we don’t care how many knobs that bitch twist I’m still kickin your door in....
    dope concept. execution was lacking, but im calling this a jab nonetheless
    Or imma treat u like it’s Fortnite since you make me sick.
    knock you out wit a pick axe and then take ya bricks.
    decent
    If we got the same type ‘a guns imma take a clip
    ..make sure err body see it. Imma make you Twitch
    nah, too simple here

    3 jabs
    6 misses


    v/clout

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    Re: LLL Week Two: Clout (0-0) vs. SoIceyRichG (0-0) OPEN FOR VOTES

    Clout: good effort to bring in some unique bars. no 1 line stood out as a very hard hitting punch, partially because I don't know the references or any site beef. personals were there which is always a plus.

    soiceyrichG: flow was on point. good angles. some punches were indirect, self hype. had a good amount of filler. but i think your last 2 bars were the best of the battle. but in contrast I also think the previous 6 were the worst of the battle.

    I have mixed feelings on this battle because I think soiceyrich could tighten up the punchlines and remove some filler. if he does that it's a different battle entirely.

    based on being more direct and incorporating some personal shit I vote / Clout
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    Re: LLL Week Two: Clout (0-0) vs. SoIceyRichG (0-0) OPEN FOR VOTES

    i'm 'liberal' at giving 'radical' asskicking's there'll be no upset win.
    Cus he'll be 'left leaning' so bad - Trump'll think he's out to get him.
    Cool concept, not bad. Heads up right at the start of your verse I'm gonna do a lot of nit picking bc you have potential and you seem like the kinda guy who wants to keep doing this and get better and will take the ideas on board, and that's exactly what text needs and I'm trying to support that shit how I can sooo... for this bar, none of the quotation marks are necessary. Your wording is clear enough that the reader can pick up on the wordplay without them. Doing "this" in the middle of a "line" is just "distracting" and takes from the flow/swag of your verse. Use quotation marks very sparingly where you need to.
    he's a headcase so reasoning & cognition - All the above's missing.
    & more of a 'useless pile of issues' than shitty magazine subscriptions.
    Overall this one's a nope for me bc issues/magazines wp has been done a lotttt. Good job incorporating multis into a relevant set up though.
    This piss poor charity case isn't what he says. Quit the imitating.
    If 'ICE' disputes any 'Savage' origins? its news on '21' vs immigration.
    Solid nameplay/current event concept. It's not super clear why Ice the text battler would be 'disputing' his savage origins though... I'd maybe swap that for 'talking about' or 'claiming', even if it's a little less fluid for the other side of the wp - still works
    head shots a mercy killing. So, ya knee caps? we'll be seein ya
    It'll make me get low w/ the iron like patients suffering from Anemia
    "iron" wp is done, but the kneecapping/get low/anemia part is fresh to me. This is cool. Old wps can pass if you add something more to them and flip them well.
    fuck ur home site, NC/RB'll Burden all, We bluebayou on the real.
    we Bash heads in leaving Aero's in corpses cus we Dominate the field.
    My name mentioned positively = 10/10 bar. Nah but really this is kinda corny man. Not feeling.
    We got them Ill Nikka's known to be Knucklehead's in Squads.
    conquer us? ill 'Throw a wrench in ur plans so big' Allen knight'll be awed
    Set up still corny. The concept in the second line is cool but I don't know if enough people on RB are gonna know that AK is a mechanic... gotta consider that stuff
    Seeking Power? U better generator run, Fuck ya rant u Bastard.
    Ya wife's a slut. I'll Boilermaker explode faster than a Nuke Plant disaster
    You'll boil or make her? I might be missing it... idk what boil means in this context.
    If text's a person made up of us as genes? u'd be out the scheme.
    Making ur existence more 'non-essential to the body' than beta-alanine.
    LOL man you remind me of me a long time ago. I tried to make bars about calculus and trigonometry and they just didn't work... people don't know as much about your subject as you think they do. This is gonna be the same for you but with bio/chemistry. I don't know what beta alanine is and I'd guess most others wouldn't either.
    U go thru the motions but stuck for yrs cus Text's Evolving more.
    & get passed by dudes so much ur going in circles - that's a revolving door.
    Pretty good one to close, good job



    just read mad verses from you and they funny to me
    Only thing more funny, somehow you 20 and 3
    Guessing you're a live battler or at least just writing in that style... can see how this could be kinda cool as an opener if you were live, relying on some showmanship to deliver it, but in an online text battle it comes off pretty light
    Ya style weak. here’s a ‘quote’ he ain’t telling
    When they scream G “knocked Clout-out” sounding like we in a cave yelling
    lmao. Kinda corny but props for the creativity
    Ya last loss you been ghost since August. Bitch I’m the hardest
    Why the fuck am I about to chase clout. I done had it for the longest, jack
    "chase" is a bit of a stretch as an attack line. The flip being purely flexing is meh.
    What I’m pullin out my bag, gonn’ make you run a bag,
    ride around on my lap gonn’ make you run a lap
    I'm not familiar with 'run a bag' as slang for anything. Second line the wp is okay but its kinda corny
    You ought to be used to losing now bitch, relax
    Authentic whipped you with a belt, Im bout to get da strap
    Wordplay is too simple. Personal is alright
    It is me + 4’in my foreign..
    run up on you while you wit ya whore and looking goofy at ya door like this shit is important..
    +4in my foreign is kinda cool. The second line is a nope. Every line counts in a text battle, you can't let this just be an elaborate set up for the following bar.
    n we don’t even need keys. Make ya bitch, get to the sloring, before we. get to exploring,
    and we don’t care how many knobs that bitch twist I’m still kickin your door in....
    This woulda been really dope in a live battle where the extensive set up would fly. It's still good here but needed to be set up concisely in the one line preceding the punch line
    Or imma treat u like it’s Fortnite since you make me sick.
    knock you out wit a pick axe and then take ya bricks.
    heh, kinda cool
    If we got the same type ‘a guns imma take a clip
    ..make sure err body see it. Imma make you Twitch
    Not bad. I hope you stick around and text battle more. Plenty of potential in you too, just gotta get used to what works and what doesn't in this medium


    V/ Clout
    Last edited by Dominate; March 15th, 2019 at 04:58 AM

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    Re: LLL Week Two: Clout (0-0) vs. SoIceyRichG (0-0) OPEN FOR VOTES

    ]i'm 'liberal' at giving 'radical' asskicking's there'll be no upset win.
    Cus he'll be 'left leaning' so bad - Trump'll think he's out to get him.

    cool.. ive seen 'left wing' ish before but this was a solid take on the concept

    he's a headcase so reasoning & cognition - All the above's missing.
    & more of a 'useless pile of issues' than shitty magazine subscriptions.

    flip is dece... isssues/subscriptions is a very old idea tho

    This piss poor charity case isn't what he says. Quit the imitating.
    If 'ICE' disputes any 'Savage' origins? its news on '21' vs immigration.

    ehh the wording killed this.. couldve been dope, but disputing being a savage needed to be reowrked for the punch to land

    head shots a mercy killing. So, ya knee caps? we'll be seein ya
    It'll make me get low w/ the iron like patients suffering from Anemia
    cool gun bar, pretty fresh spin on 'iron'


    fuck ur home site, NC/RB'll Burden all, We bluebayou on the real.
    we Bash heads in leaving Aero's in corpses cus we Dominate the field.
    no no... dont do these kinda bars theyre lame


    We got them Ill Nikka's known to be Knucklehead's in Squads.
    conquer us? ill 'Throw a wrench in ur plans so big' Allen knight'll be awed
    lol, thought this was funny.. cool jab


    Seeking Power? U better generator run, Fuck ya rant u Bastard.
    Ya wife's a slut. I'll Boilermaker explode faster than a Nuke Plant disaster

    cool, couldve been cleaned up a lil, but the tie ins were cool and its a dece wp

    If text's a person made up of us as genes? u'd be out the scheme.
    Making ur existence more 'non-essential to the body' than beta-alanine.

    creative angle, but its soft imo


    U go thru the motions but stuck for yrs cus Text's Evolving more.
    & get passed by dudes so much ur going in circles - that's a revolving door.

    oay.. a bit antiquated bcuz it 'men' is subjective here... cool idea tho



    just read mad verses from you and they funny to me
    Only thing more funny, somehow you 20 and 3

    lol, nah easy and played angle but still lol

    Ya style weak. here’s a ‘quote’ he ain’t telling
    When they scream G “knocked Clout-out” sounding like we in a cave yelling

    nah

    Ya last loss you been ghost since August. Bitch I’m the hardest
    Why the fuck am I about to chase clout. I done had it for the longest, jack

    where did jack come from? anyways, nah

    What I’m pullin out my bag, gonn’ make you run a bag,
    ride around on my lap gonn’ make you run a lap


    ur out of the league

    You ought to be used to losing now bitch, relax
    Authentic whipped you with a belt, Im bout to get da strap

    played in 02'

    It is me + 4’in my foreign..
    run up on you while you wit ya whore and looking goofy at ya door like this shit is important..

    no

    n we don’t even need keys. Make ya bitch, get to the sloring, before we. get to exploring,
    and we don’t care how many knobs that bitch twist I’m still kickin your door in....

    cool wording, but no at the punch

    Or imma treat u like it’s Fortnite since you make me sick.
    knock you out wit a pick axe and then take ya bricks.

    lol, looked up... this is short n sweet

    If we got the same type ‘a guns imma take a clip
    ..make sure err body see it. Imma make you Twitch


    ehhh




    Clout won
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    Re: LLL Week Two: Clout (0-0) vs. SoIceyRichG (0-0)

    Quote Originally Posted by Clout View Post
    I'll hold it down for the RB/NCG's Shoutout to Blew by you/Bluebayou the Canadian Haiku & The Filthy Kill spree mod squaaad I love all you crazy bastards in this league!

    i'm 'liberal' at giving 'radical' asskicking's there'll be no upset win.
    Cus he'll be 'left leaning' so bad - Trump'll think he's out to get him.
    eh cool
    he's a headcase so reasoning & cognition - All the above's missing.
    & more of a 'useless pile of issues' than shitty magazine subscriptions.
    cool
    This piss poor charity case isn't what he says. Quit the imitating.
    If 'ICE' disputes any 'Savage' origins? its news on '21' vs immigration.
    This one I dont get
    head shots a mercy killing. So, ya knee caps? we'll be seein ya
    It'll make me get low w/ the iron like patients suffering from Anemia
    Niice
    fuck ur home site, NC/RB'll Burden all, We bluebayou on the real.
    we Bash heads in leaving Aero's in corpses cus we Dominate the field.
    Eh
    We got them Ill Nikka's known to be Knucklehead's in Squads.
    conquer us? ill 'Throw a wrench in ur plans so big' Allen knight'll be awed
    Not worth 2 bars
    Seeking Power? U better generator run, Fuck ya rant u Bastard.
    Ya wife's a slut. I'll Boilermaker explode faster than a Nuke Plant disaster
    Eh
    If text's a person made up of us as genes? u'd be out the scheme.
    Making ur existence more 'non-essential to the body' than beta-alanine.
    Nope. Way too smart for this site.
    U go thru the motions but stuck for yrs cus Text's Evolving more.
    & get passed by dudes so much ur going in circles - that's a revolving door.
    Nope

    Sincerely,
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    just read mad verses from you and they funny to me
    Only thing more funny, somehow you 20 and 3
    Nope
    Ya style weak. here’s a ‘quote’ he ain’t telling
    When they scream G “knocked Clout-out” sounding like we in a cave yelling
    Nope
    Ya last loss you been ghost since August. Bitch I’m the hardest
    Why the fuck am I about to chase clout. I done had it for the longest, jack
    Wut
    What I’m pullin out my bag, gonn’ make you run a bag,
    ride around on my lap gonn’ make you run a lap
    Nope
    You ought to be used to losing now bitch, relax
    Authentic whipped you with a belt, Im bout to get da strap
    Nope
    It is me + 4’in my foreign..
    run up on you while you wit ya whore and looking goofy at ya door like this shit is important..
    Nope
    n we don’t even need keys. Make ya bitch, get to the sloring, before we. get to exploring,
    and we don’t care how many knobs that bitch twist I’m still kickin your door in....
    This was dope
    Or imma treat u like it’s Fortnite since you make me sick.
    knock you out wit a pick axe and then take ya bricks.
    Nope
    If we got the same type ‘a guns imma take a clip
    ..make sure err body see it. Imma make you Twitch
    Nope
    Vote Clout Anemia v Knob were the two real big bars. But Clout was more consistent overall.

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    Re: LLL Week Two: Clout (0-0) vs. SoIceyRichG (0-0) OPEN FOR VOTES

    i'm 'liberal' at giving 'radical' asskicking's there'll be no upset win.
    Cus he'll be 'left leaning' so bad - Trump'll think he's out to get him.
    head shots a mercy killing. So, ya knee caps? we'll be seein ya
    It'll make me get low w/ the iron like patients suffering from Anemia

    Seeking Power? U better generator run, Fuck ya rant u Bastard.
    Ya wife's a slut. I'll Boilermaker explode faster than a Nuke Plant disaste
    If text's a person made up of us as genes? u'd be out the scheme.
    Making ur existence more 'non-essential to the body' than beta-alanine.
    U go thru the motions but stuck for yrs cus Text's Evolving more.
    & get passed by dudes so much ur going in circles - that's a revolving door.



    fuck ur home site, NC/RB'll Burden all, We bluebayou on the real.
    we Bash heads in leaving Aero's in corpses cus we Dominate the field
    Cool but nothing really attackin here



    Vs

    n we don’t even need keys. Make ya bitch, get to the sloring, before we. get to exploring,
    and we don’t care how many knobs that bitch twist I’m still kickin your door in....


    Icey you had some played simple bars..That kick the door in shit was heat tho. Clout had a cool verse.. Better wording more quotables his misses were better than Iceys. But the whole NC/RB thing wasnt needed.

    Vote=Clout

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    Re: LLL Week Two: Clout (0-0) vs. SoIceyRichG (0-0) OPEN FOR VOTES

    Clout...


    i'm 'liberal' at giving 'radical' asskicking's there'll be no upset win.
    Cus he'll be 'left leaning' so bad - Trump'll think he's out to get him.
    Iffy wording
    he's a headcase so reasoning & cognition - All the above's missing.
    & more of a 'useless pile of issues' than shitty magazine subscriptions.
    No
    This piss poor charity case isn't what he says. Quit the imitating.
    If 'ICE' disputes any 'Savage' origins? its news on '21' vs immigration.
    Nah
    head shots a mercy killing. So, ya knee caps? we'll be seein ya
    It'll make me get low w/ the iron like patients suffering from Anemia
    Wording had potential, execution was meh
    fuck ur home site, NC/RB'll Burden all, We bluebayou on the real.
    we Bash heads in leaving Aero's in corpses cus we Dominate the field.
    No
    We got them Ill Nikka's known to be Knucklehead's in Squads.
    conquer us? ill 'Throw a wrench in ur plans so big' Allen knight'll be awed
    No
    Seeking Power? U better generator run, Fuck ya rant u Bastard.
    Ya wife's a slut. I'll Boilermaker explode faster than a Nuke Plant disaster
    Eh
    If text's a person made up of us as genes? u'd be out the scheme.
    Making ur existence more 'non-essential to the body' than beta-alanine.
    Nah
    U go thru the motions but stuck for yrs cus Text's Evolving more.
    & get passed by dudes so much ur going in circles - that's a revolving door.
    Iffy wording


    SoIceyRichG


    just read mad verses from you and they funny to me
    Only thing more funny, somehow you 20 and 3
    Lol
    Ya style weak. here’s a ‘quote’ he ain’t telling
    When they scream G “knocked Clout-out” sounding like we in a cave yelling
    Weak
    Ya last loss you been ghost since August. Bitch I’m the hardest
    Why the fuck am I about to chase clout. I done had it for the longest, jack
    No
    What I’m pullin out my bag, gonn’ make you run a bag,
    ride around on my lap gonn’ make you run a lap
    No
    You ought to be used to losing now bitch, relax
    Authentic whipped you with a belt, Im bout to get da strap
    No
    It is me + 4’in my foreign..
    run up on you while you wit ya whore and looking goofy at ya door like this shit is important..
    Weak
    n we don’t even need keys. Make ya bitch, get to the sloring, before we. get to exploring,
    and we don’t care how many knobs that bitch twist I’m still kickin your door in....
    No
    Or imma treat u like it’s Fortnite since you make me sick.
    knock you out wit a pick axe and then take ya bricks.
    No
    If we got the same type ‘a guns imma take a clip
    ..make sure err body see it. Imma make you Twitch
    Tf?



    V/ Clout.




    Although Clout wasn't all that impressive, I didn't see much redeeming qualities in Icey's verse for it to be considered, aside from the opener. Both failed to execute any jabs I can think of, but Clout was more focused and wrote his verse with more battle elements... punches/flips... all that jazz.



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    Re: LLL Week Two: Clout (0-0) vs. SoIceyRichG (0-0) OPEN FOR VOTES

    Here we have a classic case of text battler vs rap battler. Unfortunately for SoIceyRichG, text battlers don't give recognition to true rap battle verses. If this was an actual live battle SoIceyRichG would have come off hard (assuming delivery would be based on how his verse was written) however that's not going to work in text. For this reason alone, there's no way Clout was going to lose this battle. Not much else needs to be said here except maybe to Clout - stop with the 'quote' emphasis it's gay. If you have to do that to get your concept across them you need to rewrite your bar. Other than that, decent verse and more than enough to win here

    v/ Clout

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    Re: LLL Week Two: Clout (0-0) vs. SoIceyRichG (0-0) OPEN FOR VOTES

    Clout wins.
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