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@Joe Boston @Sinning
Going 12
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Going 12!
When it comes to microphones? I slay ploy dummys! I'm making a mockery of you guys! Ain't boy funny!
I'll grab the tech, taste noise, dunnys! The 'magazine will make you strip' have you dogs looking like playboy bunnys!
I strike like thunder, but you guys don't roll with flare! I'm a wizard with a magic wand that'll send your souls to air!
My soul is rare, and like soccer my goal will snare! Ya'll dummys, ya'll couldn't have 'a bright future' if I hit you with a solar flare!
In duels of penmanship? My sword will take lives! I'm scorching with flames, my accord will flame guys!
The force of this sword will rain knives! I'll 'hit Joe with a Cobra strike' like Storm Shadow in war with snake eyes!
My flow is like oceans, I rock with seas marking! Ya'll couldn't 'sell dope' with a dock and plea bargin!
My slang will rock your weak jargon! This mexican don't respect Joe, I'll 'piss brown liquid on Boston' like the Boston Tea Party!
In this duel, this is a clash of stars! But I'm turning you 'pale men blue' like the movie avatar!
Your drive to succeed will make you crash your car! Skurj has the most 'ReTaRDed NaMe I've ever seen' to match his bars!
I'm a dragon that consumes flames! I'm Sinning, and this is world domination; this is doomsday!
My punches will leave you with a blue face! I'm giving it to 'you straight' ya'll are so crooked; ya'll came out the womb gay!
BARS!
Don't get it don't vote!
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Their bitches left them for this good dick under the sheets Joe get it done
I love fucking both their Ex Skurj sin had them both legs up in the back of one
Y’all create these shitty bars and think it’s fun, these trash battlers Joe envy
They always throw punches and Neverland, I vision both not lasting long like the MJ Documentary
These fags defense be call the cops if they see Joe appear
I’ll set fire to their kicks, you’d think it was the new Game Of Thrones Adidas wear
This here ain’t Beverly Hills no fucking acting when Joe Pack something heavy
Y’all gonna recognize a real Donna burial plot will be made especially for y’all next to Luke Perry
I’ll pop their virgin sisters cherries, get them pregnant even let the squad sample
We all will play that good father role, send the kids through school like the Loughlin and Huffman scandal
Y’all fags scramble when shots ring out, to the block y’all a big insult
My goons come having the barrels “Burning For You” you’d think we were the Blue Oyster Cult
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@Sinning @Joe Boston
Possible I could get the ext?
I’m cool with itOriginally Posted by Skurj.
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Sin aka AJ Da Menace
AJ!
Ya had a proper buriel set in stone! so rock's out approachin faggot
Sin Da Block heavy, & w/1 of those I'll make sure you have no open casket
U target practice! Allah shoot has duke screamin, In fact...
you'll be covered in sheets & so much blood it'll rival the New Zealand attack
Mall cop'll get the biscuit! I'll clap the fear in ya
U went fom slob to Watchin your ppl eat... n making their change in a cafateria
Guy weak, Running back would be wise Chief
Cos your jus another Hill to Beat, son.. quicker than that boy Tyreek
Your words hold no sound here! punch till joes hurting
"Ppl are slow" always your loss cause, but thats how we define your wording
& all the "Joe boston Hype"? I'm beatin this bitch
All you've done is such a dark legacy even greedy thinks that your sick
Upping for votes
"Sound stuff out guys" - Barcotic
Sinning
When it comes to microphones? I slay ploy dummys! I'm making a mockery of you guys! Ain't boy funny!
I'll grab the tech, taste noise, dunnys! The 'magazine will make you strip' have you dogs looking like playboy bunnys!
Are magazine bars making a comeback? lol. This was decent.
I strike like thunder, but you guys don't roll with flare! I'm a wizard with a magic wand that'll send your souls to air!
My soul is rare, and like soccer my goal will snare! Ya'll dummys, ya'll couldn't have 'a bright future' if I hit you with a solar flare!
No. For many reasons, double use of soul… I’m not into “magic” bars, and the bright future culmination was not impactful.
In duels of penmanship? My sword will take lives! I'm scorching with flames, my accord will flame guys!
The force of this sword will rain knives! I'll 'hit Joe with a Cobra strike' like Storm Shadow in war with snake eyes!
Um, no.
My flow is like oceans, I rock with seas marking! Ya'll couldn't 'sell dope' with a dock and plea bargin!
My slang will rock your weak jargon! This mexican don't respect Joe, I'll 'piss brown liquid on Boston' like the Boston Tea Party!
I mean, this was your most impactful bar… a personal that actually was a diss of some sorts… but suggestion, make sure you edit your verses… Drop some of the fluff… you had rock twice… Boston twice… etc…
Couldve wrote:
Brick game got me paid.. y’all couldn’t sell dope w/ a dock and plea bargain
Cuz no one respects y’all, Joe getting brown liquid piss like the Boston Tea Party
Or w/e…
In this duel, this is a clash of stars! But I'm turning you 'pale men blue' like the movie avatar!
Your drive to succeed will make you crash your car! Skurj has the most 'ReTaRDed NaMe I've ever seen' to match his bars!
Not bad… but again SOOO much going on man.
I'm a dragon that consumes flames! I'm Sinning, and this is world domination; this is doomsday!
My punches will leave you with a blue face! I'm giving it to 'you straight' ya'll are so crooked; ya'll came out the womb gay!
No. And again, edit your drops… your before bar had blue in it too…
Joe Boston:
Their bitches left them for this good dick under the sheets Joe get it done
I love fucking both their Ex Skurj sin had them both legs up in the back of one
Lol, Nice.
Y’all create these shitty bars and think it’s fun, these trash battlers Joe envy
They always throw punches and Neverland, I vision both not lasting long like the MJ Documentary
Not bad,
the wording bro bro… I mean, it almost seems like you envy the battlers just because
For the sake of the rhyme you put Joe envy instead of envy Joe… feel me?
These fags defense be call the cops if they see Joe appear
I’ll set fire to their kicks, you’d think it was the new Game Of Thrones Adidas wear
Wording again here… plus appear and wear doesn’t rhyme but I fuck w the concept.
This here ain’t Beverly Hills no fucking acting when Joe Pack something heavy
Y’all gonna recognize a real Donna burial plot will be made especially for y’all next to Luke Perry
Ok.
I’ll pop their virgin sisters cherries, get them pregnant even let the squad sample
We all will play that good father role, send the kids through school like the Loughlin and Huffman scandal
Not feeling this one man.
Y’all fags scramble when shots ring out, to the block y’all a big insult
My goons come having the barrels “Burning For You” you’d think we were the Blue Oyster Cult
Not bad.
Skurj.
Ya had a proper buriel set in stone! so rock's out approachin faggot
Sin Da Block heavy, & w/1 of those I'll make sure you have no open casket
ok.
U target practice! Allah shoot has duke screamin, In fact...
you'll be covered in sheets & so much blood it'll rival the New Zealand attack
I see where you are going conceptually… the punch just wasn’t MEAN
Mall cop'll get the biscuit! I'll clap the fear in ya
U went fom slob to Watchin your ppl eat... n making their change in a cafateria
Ok personal… but execution hurt the impact.
Guy weak, Running back would be wise Chief
Cos your jus another Hill to Beat, son.. quicker than that boy Tyreek
Again, punch was a let down.
Your words hold no sound here! punch till joes hurting
"Ppl are slow" always your loss cause, but thats how we define your wording
Ok.
& all the "Joe boston Hype"? I'm beatin this bitch
All you've done is such a dark legacy even greedy thinks that your sick
eh.
Skurj, work on your punches man… your concepts are there but when it gets to the MEAT of it they just are light/let down.
v/Joe… yes, his wording/editing has always hindered him… but he gets the point is to hit your opponent and I think he did that the best here.
When it comes to microphones? I slay ploy dummys! I'm making a mockery of you guys! Ain't boy funny!
I'll grab the tech, taste noise, dunnys! The 'magazine will make you strip' have you dogs looking like playboy bunnys!
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Their bitches left them for this good dick under the sheets Joe get it done
I love fucking both their Ex Skurj sin had them both legs up in the back of one
quoting this strictly for wp/concept, the wording literally makes it seem like they both had their legs up not their ex's which makes this very gay. i did enjoy the concept though if it was worded properly
Y’all create these shitty bars and think it’s fun, these trash battlers Joe envy
They always throw punches and Neverland, I vision both not lasting long like the MJ Documentary
v
Ya had a proper buriel set in stone! so rock's out approachin faggot
Sin Da Block heavy, & w/1 of those I'll make sure you have no open casket
this is very forced/not gr8 but I'm quoting it for the wp attempt
U target practice! Allah shoot has duke screamin, In fact...
you'll be covered in sheets & so much blood it'll rival the New Zealand attack
Your words hold no sound here! punch till joes hurting
"Ppl are slow" always your loss cause, but thats how we define your wording
overall this was rather close, sinning ur style is too stretched imo & a lot of ur concepts just seems so random/not very hard hitting. i would suggest making ur bars a bit more relevant and have harder connections. joe ur wording was questionable and halfway through ur concepts seemed to become a lot more forced, but u had some valid attempts and i didn't mind the bars i quoted concept wise. skurj you had clean wording and ur concepts were quite reasonable, a bit simple but you obviously get this.
v/ Skurj, more consistency and better wording. just understands what's going on here a bit more than the others imo. decent battle.
1 cool bar, 2 cool concepts.
Usually like Joe's stuff. Liked nothing, here. All template punches on pretty weak or obscure concepts.
vote sinning i cant believe it either
bar of the battle goes to skurj, his opener was dope
best punches, this is hard to pick because the wording and delivery from joe boston may have been simple but they worked. where as sinning just had no real set ups. skurj had 1 haymaker and some lesser lite stuff.
sadly idk how to even vote on this 1. guess it just comes down to the more personal approach from skurj. i liked sins rhyme schemes and flow, i liked joes bostons original concepts for the most part. but i think skurj jusrt had the harder hitters.
V/ skurj
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When it comes to microphones? I slay ploy dummys! I'm making a mockery of you guys! Ain't boy funny!
I'll grab the tech, taste noise, dunnys! The 'magazine will make you strip' have you dogs looking like playboy bunnys!
taste noise dunnys lolol... magazine played as done not enuff of a flip imo
I strike like thunder, but you guys don't roll with flare! I'm a wizard with a magic wand that'll send your souls to air!
My soul is rare, and like soccer my goal will snare! Ya'll dummys, ya'll couldn't have 'a bright future' if I hit you with a solar flare!
flare / flare used twice, no... soccer play in the setup ruined this before im even at the punch.. punch nah
In duels of penmanship? My sword will take lives! I'm scorching with flames, my accord will flame guys!
The force of this sword will rain knives! I'll 'hit Joe with a Cobra strike' like Storm Shadow in war with snake eyes!
game concept cool ish .. setups are horrific & really take away from the punch to me
My flow is like oceans, I rock with seas marking! Ya'll couldn't 'sell dope' with a dock and plea bargin!
My slang will rock your weak jargon! This mexican don't respect Joe, I'll 'piss brown liquid on Boston' like the Boston Tea Party!
my flow is like oceans? no... the punch is stupid
In this duel, this is a clash of stars! But I'm turning you 'pale men blue' like the movie avatar!
Your drive to succeed will make you crash your car! Skurj has the most 'ReTaRDed NaMe I've ever seen' to match his bars!
set-up played... punch nah
I'm a dragon that consumes flames! I'm Sinning, and this is world domination; this is doomsday!
My punches will leave you with a blue face! I'm giving it to 'you straight' ya'll are so crooked; ya'll came out the womb gay!
straight tie in here is very played.. not a fan of the punch
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Their bitches left them for this good dick under the sheets Joe get it done
I love fucking both their Ex Skurj sin had them both legs up in the back of one
ehhh to big a reach for me, have to call it forced its not smooth enough
Y’all create these shitty bars and think it’s fun, these trash battlers Joe envy
They always throw punches and Neverland, I vision both not lasting long like the MJ Documentary
so played, i get that the doc is new but this is earllly days text wp
These fags defense be call the cops if they see Joe appear
I’ll set fire to their kicks, you’d think it was the new Game Of Thrones Adidas wear
okay concept, set fire to their kicks is light
This here ain’t Beverly Hills no fucking acting when Joe Pack something heavy
Y’all gonna recognize a real Donna burial plot will be made especially for y’all next to Luke Perry
lol throwback, this was okay
I’ll pop their virgin sisters cherries, get them pregnant even let the squad sample
We all will play that good father role, send the kids through school like the Loughlin and Huffman scandal
through school? who is school? i dont get the drection here
Y’all fags scramble when shots ring out, to the block y’all a big insult
My goons come having the barrels “Burning For You” you’d think we were the Blue Oyster Cult
okay song ref punch
vs
Ya had a proper buriel set in stone! so rock's out approachin faggot
Sin Da Block heavy, & w/1 of those I'll make sure you have no open casket
dece open on the np flip
U target practice! Allah shoot has duke screamin, In fact...
you'll be covered in sheets & so much blood it'll rival the New Zealand attack
okay.. more couldve been done to further develop this imo
Mall cop'll get the biscuit! I'll clap the fear in ya
U went fom slob to Watchin your ppl eat... n making their change in a cafateria
okay personal & punch
Guy weak, Running back would be wise Chief
Cos your jus another Hill to Beat, son.. quicker than that boy Tyreek
dece relevant sports punch.. the wording left a lot to be desired
Your words hold no sound here! punch till joes hurting
"Ppl are slow" always your loss cause, but thats how we define your wording
ehh
& all the "Joe boston Hype"? I'm beatin this bitch
All you've done is such a dark legacy even greedy thinks that your sick
Okay site punch
I dunno this is a tough battle to vote on... Sin had the Cobra strike punch which was a cool concept but hes setups signle handidly ruin his verses for me... Tough call between JB & Skurj, i thik i have to go Skurj bcuz his opening wp was way better then JB's and Joe had a neverland / J reference ... yeah SKurj gets my vote
Vote - Skurj.
"Sound stuff out guys" - Barcotic
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