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    LLL Week 3 Contendership: Dominate (2-0) vs. Exalted (2-0) DOMINATE WINS

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    Re: LLL Week 3 Contendership: Dominate (2-0) vs. Exalted (2-0)

    Check. Good luck.

    I'm gonna aim for 16.

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    Re: LLL Week 3 Contendership: Dominate (2-0) vs. Exalted (2-0)

    Ok. 14 most likely...

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    Quote Originally Posted by Exalted interview in mag
    What would you like to see change if theres anything?

    One small change is maybe set lower minumum lines to 10.

    In the seasons first contenders match against Dominate Whats your strategy going into this battle?

    My strategy is try to use personal angles and plays that haven't been used on Dom before - that requires some studying on my part.


    Exalted aka Heise aka Infiltrate


    Watch this pussy step & get beaten. Never flames - at best he’s just decent
    Ain’t gonna see Hei burn Nate - 1 punch & he won’t wake up til the end of the season
    It’s head shots only if he gettin pics - girl made sure to frame it just right
    She’ll avoid showing Exercise cuz its clear she’s never done that a day in her life
    Tell this coward to bar up for once. Least lines every week - I’ve seen enough of it
    By going the miniskirts around the fact he’s a pussy w/ barely enough material to even cover it
    “I’ll study Dom’s life to find new personals”… My god. Are you hearing these words?!
    I considered Hypothetic before… Now I KNOW that that theory’s confirmed
    Idc if you rifle through my history. When I bring my rifle through, ur history
    & why the fuck would u have pried in that? Is what I'd ask about ur lines & sense of dignity
    He ain't shit to me. Fuck those tactics. You'll see this faggot get slugged
    Doesn't matter what strategy Infusing. Docs'll have an IV doin that w/ his blood
    I’ll run at his crew w/ the 9 & snub. Pick a few... their time is done
    Start the kill count. Then let fly w/ the machine and have the autopilot up
    No-one believes ur job’s important or that you'll win - u ain't a threat dork
    You’re a secretariat best... & only thing you’re beating here is a dead horse
    Last edited by Dominate; March 21st, 2019 at 11:29 PM

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    Re: LLL Week 3 Contendership: Dominate (2-0) vs. Exalted (2-0)

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    Quote Originally Posted by Dominate View Post
    I could put up half the lines & still make it clear I’m gettin the win…
    Post-tenancy evictor - I’ll make sure this boarder ain’t at home here ever again
    Longbars in ur DNA, clown. This ain't HF dont let that faggot shit out
    Unimpressed how a stretch for spit got off the ground & not sucked back in ya mouth
    Fist Fight at school! For talent day teach we can throw some jabs
    Don't need votes in class.. knockin u to next week REALLY give em a Show of Hands
    My fists home at last. U'll catch a blow to the head in the worst way
    Irony: him wakin up w/ Adelaide Response as they ask... 'What's your Birthplace?'
    Picture Prom Night Dom's like a Fez: sloppy dressed awkward mess
    Shiiit.. even the IDEA of bringing his date Neurosis crippled him with chronic stress
    Your marriage neeeeds to recoup. Divorce cuz MY D she will choose
    Think DBZ: 'Permanent Breakup once i'm inside your Boo' like Vegito defused
    Texted long as christ. On any site none uvya played shit was winning
    Anno Domini system to date hasn't worked - we could start count since ur beginnings
    Homo took it up the ass, split bodyparts but don't know the gym
    & Back in the day? yeaaa DOMS left sore...from being 'Bent Over for Rows' of men
    The mag hyped em out respect, my blade give cords new sound effects
    Doubt I'll fret....'Blues style of playing UP' leave blood when metal slides down ya neck
    Last edited by Exalted.; March 22nd, 2019 at 03:18 AM Reason: Typo - word swap

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    Re: LLL Week 3 Contendership: Dominate (2-0) vs. Exalted (2-0)

    Quote Originally Posted by Dominate View Post
    Exalted aka Heise aka Infiltrate


    Watch this pussy step & get beaten. Never flames - at best he’s just decent
    Ain’t gonna see Hei burn Nate - 1 punch & he won’t wake up til the end of the season

    Nice, your really good at wordplay & not making it awkward.

    It’s head shots only if he gettin pics - girl made sure to frame it just right
    She’ll avoid showing Exercise cuz its clear she’s never done that a day in her life

    lol, this was cool. This was worded really well

    Tell this coward to bar up for once. Least lines every week - I’ve seen enough of it
    By going the miniskirts around the fact he’s a pussy w/ barely enough material to even cover it

    personal dig here, solid punch A bit wordy though for me.

    “I’ll study Dom’s life to find new personals”… My god. Are you hearing these words?!
    I considered Hypothetic before… Now I KNOW that that theory’s confirmed

    lol flipping more of his own statements, good shot here.

    Idc if you rifle through my history. When I bring my rifle through, ur history
    & why the fuck would u have pried in that? Is what I'd ask about ur lines & sense of dignity

    Fire, this was tough

    He ain't shit to me. Fuck those tactics. You'll see this faggot get slugged
    Doesn't matter what strategy Infusing. Docs'll have an IV doin that w/ his blood

    Cool here a solid jab

    I’ll run at his crew w/ the 9 & snub. Pick a few... their time is done
    Start the kill count. Then let fly w/ the machine and have the autopilot up

    Not bad here, but nothing major

    No-one believes ur job’s important or that you'll win - u ain't a threat dork
    You’re a secretariat best... & only thing you’re beating here is a dead horse
    Fire, Secretary-at/Secretariat the famous tripple crown winning horse.

    Quote Originally Posted by Exalted. View Post
    Dom aka Aussie Teacher



    Longbars in ur DNA, clown. This ain't HF dont let that faggot shit out
    Unimpressed how a stretch for spit got off the ground & not sucked back in ya mouth

    This is cool, reminds me of big daddy where julian does the lugi yoyo. It just reads funny to me "Unimpressed how a stretch for spit" sounds forced to make the bar work. But its not a bad bar at all

    Fist Fight at school! For talent day teach we can throw some jabs
    Don't need votes in class.. knockin u to next week REALLY give em a Show of Hands

    I liked this one, good shit.

    My fists home at last. U'll catch a blow to the head in the worst way
    Irony: him wakin up w/ Adelaide Response as they ask... 'What's your Birthplace?'

    dope wordplay adelaide/A-Delayed, its not very scathing albeit witty just not Harsh.

    Picture Prom Night Dom's like a Fez: sloppy dressed awkward mess
    Shiiit.. even the IDEA of bringing his date Neurosis crippled him with chronic stress

    Bringing his Date No roses/Neurosis This was slick. Solid work here. To me this is a FIRE line.

    Your marriage neeeeds to recoup. Divorce cuz MY D she will choose
    Think DBZ: 'Permanent Breakup once i'm inside your Boo' like Vegito defused

    LMAO, nice.

    Texted long as christ. On any site none uvya played shit was winning
    Anno Domini system to date hasn't worked - we could start count since ur beginnings

    Think you tried too hard here. I've notice you tend to word your bars awkwardly; when you go overboard with being creative.

    Homo took it up the ass, split bodyparts but don't know the gym
    & Back in the day? yeaaa DOMS left sore...from being 'Bent Over for Rows' of men

    This was cool, i liked this one.

    The mag hyped em out respect, my blade give cords new sound effects
    Doubt I'll fret....'Blues style of playing UP' leave blood when metal slides down ya neck
    This one's cool.


    Exalted is super creative but it seems to hinder him at times. He goes overboard with some of his concepts & his wording suffers from it. That one Longbar punch, i don't like how you worded the start of the actual punch. You had a very good verse. I just think dom had harder shots & didn't have any real misses. He would have a hard shot with alot of Jabs. Where you had a miss or two and some jabs with a Hard shot. But i really dug that DBZ line, the bent over rows line, Neurosis line, even ur closer was ok to me. Dom had dead horse, HIbernate, Pride, Exercise, Skirting around the others i didnt quote were jabs the infusing line was like Ex's closer to me a solid jab.

    I got dom taking this one in a good battle.

    v/Dom
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    Re: LLL Week 3 Contendership: Dominate (2-0) vs. Exalted (2-0) OPEN 4 VOTES

    Dominate:
    Opener- nice nameplay. But fyi, RB hates on "half" nameplays.. All of a sudden..randomly.. For some reason. This was good tho
    Miniskirts- nice
    Hypothetic- i fk w it
    History- setup was fire.
    Autopilot- yup
    Closer- i like it

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    Exalted:
    Opener-oooooooohhhhh. Ok. I see u
    Neurosis- slightly forced. But i fk w it
    Dbz- yup
    Anno domini- creative
    Closer- decent

    Nice battle.
    Dom- ur shit kinda wordy. Still good tho
    Ex- solid drop. Creative concepts but a lil forced. Plus u had one that i flat out hated

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    Re: LLL Week 3 Contendership: Dominate (2-0) vs. Exalted (2-0) OPEN 4 VOTES

    Watch this pussy step & get beaten. Never flames - at best he’s just decent
    Ain’t gonna see Hei burn Nate - 1 punch & he won’t wake up til the end of the season
    Well worded, creative, excellent.

    It’s head shots only if he gettin pics - girl made sure to frame it just right
    She’ll avoid showing Exercise cuz its clear she’s never done that a day in her life
    decent

    Tell this coward to bar up for once. Least lines every week - I’ve seen enough of it
    By going the miniskirts around the fact he’s a pussy w/ barely enough material to even cover it
    phenomenal

    “I’ll study Dom’s life to find new personals”… My god. Are you hearing these words?!
    I considered Hypothetic before… Now I KNOW that that theory’s confirmed
    stinger

    Idc if you rifle through my history. When I bring my rifle through, ur history
    & why the fuck would u have pried in that? Is what I'd ask about ur lines & sense of dignity
    fire

    He ain't shit to me. Fuck those tactics. You'll see this faggot get slugged
    Doesn't matter what strategy Infusing. Docs'll have an IV doin that w/ his blood
    not a fan of this one in particular but it's decent

    I’ll run at his crew w/ the 9 & snub. Pick a few... their time is done
    Start the kill count. Then let fly w/ the machine and have the autopilot up
    cool wp but a little less direct IMO

    No-one believes ur job’s important or that you'll win - u ain't a threat dork
    You’re a secretariat best... & only thing you’re beating here is a dead horse
    didn't care for this

    vs

    Longbars in ur DNA, clown. This ain't HF dont let that faggot shit out
    Unimpressed how a stretch for spit got off the ground & not sucked back in ya mouth
    man.. after reading Dom's verse I'm like it's over but this was a great opener

    Fist Fight at school! For talent day teach we can throw some jabs
    Don't need votes in class.. knockin u to next week REALLY give em a Show of Hands
    played but ok

    My fists home at last. U'll catch a blow to the head in the worst way
    Irony: him wakin up w/ Adelaide Response as they ask... 'What's your Birthplace?'
    ok this is nice

    Picture Prom Night Dom's like a Fez: sloppy dressed awkward mess
    Shiiit.. even the IDEA of bringing his date Neurosis crippled him with chronic stress
    this was very creative, the flow in the setup was fucking fire, wp is a little bit of a stretch but it works

    Your marriage neeeeds to recoup. Divorce cuz MY D she will choose
    Think DBZ: 'Permanent Breakup once i'm inside your Boo' like Vegito defused
    didn't care for this

    Texted long as christ. On any site none uvya played shit was winning
    Anno Domini system to date hasn't worked - we could start count since ur beginnings
    I like the approach but this didn't quite hit right for me, decent

    Homo took it up the ass, split bodyparts but don't know the gym
    & Back in the day? yeaaa DOMS left sore...from being 'Bent Over for Rows' of men
    ok, pretty good

    The mag hyped em out respect, my blade give cords new sound effects
    Doubt I'll fret....'Blues style of playing UP' leave blood when metal slides down ya neck
    not really feeling this, seemed lazy compared to the rest of your verse


    Wow guys.. this was a fucking DOPE battle IMO.. it would be almost impossible to beat this for BOTW as far as I'm concerned.. Dom is just fire from what I have seen, it's almost like the guy can't fuck up a bar.. however I did see a couple spots that weren't quite as polished as they could be, but that's really just nitpicking.. Also had NO IDEA Exalted was this dope.. fucking props bro you really did stand your ground here.. just hard to beat Dom when he's practically flawlessing these verses.. I'm gonna say you might have won against anyone else's verse here but Dom's was just too clean and he took it. Very enjoyable read thanks to both of you #FTC

    v/ Dominate

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    Re: LLL Week 3 Contendership: Dominate (2-0) vs. Exalted (2-0) OPEN 4 VOTES

    Watch this pussy step & get beaten. Never flames - at best he’s just decent
    Ain’t gonna see Hei burn Nate - 1 punch & he won’t wake up til the end of the season
    Some ppl dont fuck with those nameplays... But i thought this was dope
    It’s head shots only if he gettin pics - girl made sure to frame it just right
    She’ll avoid showing Exercise cuz its clear she’s never done that a day in her life
    Dope
    Tell this coward to bar up for once. Least lines every week - I’ve seen enough of it
    By going the miniskirts around the fact he’s a pussy w/ barely enough material to even cover it
    i fuck with this
    “I’ll study Dom’s life to find new personals”… My god. Are you hearing these words?!
    I considered Hypothetic before… Now I KNOW that that theory’s confirmed
    fire
    Idc if you rifle through my history. When I bring my rifle through, ur history
    & why the fuck would u have pried in that? Is what I'd ask about ur lines & sense of dignity
    Dope
    He ain't shit to me. Fuck those tactics. You'll see this faggot get slugged
    Doesn't matter what strategy Infusing. Docs'll have an IV doin that w/ his blood
    i fuck with this
    I’ll run at his crew w/ the 9 & snub. Pick a few... their time is done
    Start the kill count. Then let fly w/ the machine and have the autopilot up
    this is cool... not crazy
    No-one believes ur job’s important or that you'll win - u ain't a threat dork
    You’re a secretariat best... & only thing you’re beating here is a dead horse
    not feelin this

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    Longbars in ur DNA, clown. This ain't HF dont let that faggot shit out
    Unimpressed how a stretch for spit got off the ground & not sucked back in ya mouth
    Dope
    Fist Fight at school! For talent day teach we can throw some jabs
    Don't need votes in class.. knockin u to next week REALLY give em a Show of Hands
    Thought this was fire
    My fists home at last. U'll catch a blow to the head in the worst way
    Irony: him wakin up w/ Adelaide Response as they ask... 'What's your Birthplace?'
    Dope
    Picture Prom Night Dom's like a Fez: sloppy dressed awkward mess
    Shiiit.. even the IDEA of bringing his date Neurosis crippled him with chronic stress
    this is cool
    Your marriage neeeeds to recoup. Divorce cuz MY D she will choose
    Think DBZ: 'Permanent Breakup once i'm inside your Boo' like Vegito defused
    not a fan..was choppy
    Texted long as christ. On any site none uvya played shit was winning
    Anno Domini system to date hasn't worked - we could start count since ur beginnings
    this was aight
    Homo took it up the ass, split bodyparts but don't know the gym
    & Back in the day? yeaaa DOMS left sore...from being 'Bent Over for Rows' of men
    this was cool
    The mag hyped em out respect, my blade give cords new sound effects
    Doubt I'll fret....'Blues style of playing UP' leave blood when metal slides down ya neck
    thought this was choopy...concept was savage though



    Overall - Dope battle both started off fire then slowed down a bit right at the end... At first i thought Inf may take it but his misses werent as good as Doms... and I felt Doms concepts/Angles were a bit more clever. Close call but I'm edging this to dom


    V/Dom

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    Quote Originally Posted by Dominate View Post
    Exalted aka Heise aka Infiltrate


    Watch this pussy step & get beaten. Never flames - at best he’s just decent
    Ain’t gonna see Hei burn Nate - 1 punch & he won’t wake up til the end of the season
    This is cute. Not hard but it's whatever.
    It’s head shots only if he gettin pics - girl made sure to frame it just right
    She’ll avoid showing Exercise cuz its clear she’s never done that a day in her life
    Lol this is cute
    Tell this coward to bar up for once. Least lines every week - I’ve seen enough of it
    By going the miniskirts around the fact he’s a pussy w/ barely enough material to even cover it
    Didn't need the even. This is cool
    “I’ll study Dom’s life to find new personals”… My god. Are you hearing these words?!
    I considered Hypothetic before… Now I KNOW that that theory’s confirmed
    Lol
    Idc if you rifle through my history. When I bring my rifle through, ur history
    & why the fuck would u have pried in that? Is what I'd ask about ur lines & sense of dignity
    Nope
    He ain't shit to me. Fuck those tactics. You'll see this faggot get slugged
    Doesn't matter what strategy Infusing. Docs'll have an IV doin that w/ his blood
    I don't like these punches but you idiots insist on using them. This was a good one.
    I’ll run at his crew w/ the 9 & snub. Pick a few... their time is done
    Start the kill count. Then let fly w/ the machine and have the autopilot up
    Doesn't rhyme.
    No-one believes ur job’s important or that you'll win - u ain't a threat dork
    You’re a secretariat best... & only thing you’re beating here is a dead horse
    Lol
    This is low key one of my favorite verses so far, this week. No show stoppers, but it's just consistently fun to read.

    Quote Originally Posted by Exalted. View Post
    Dom aka Aussie Teacher



    Longbars in ur DNA, clown. This ain't HF dont let that faggot shit out
    Unimpressed how a stretch for spit got off the ground & not sucked back in ya mouth
    Don't love this
    Fist Fight at school! For talent day teach we can throw some jabs
    Don't need votes in class.. knockin u to next week REALLY give em a Show of Hands
    Ehhh this is coolish
    My fists home at last. U'll catch a blow to the head in the worst way
    Irony: him wakin up w/ Adelaide Response as they ask... 'What's your Birthplace?'
    This is cool. I fuck with this.
    Picture Prom Night Dom's like a Fez: sloppy dressed awkward mess
    Shiiit.. even the IDEA of bringing his date Neurosis crippled him with chronic stress
    Don't get this personal. Too obscure.
    Your marriage neeeeds to recoup. Divorce cuz MY D she will choose
    Think DBZ: 'Permanent Breakup once i'm inside your Boo' like Vegito defused
    Don't love this.
    Texted long as christ. On any site none uvya played shit was winning
    Anno Domini system to date hasn't worked - we could start count since ur beginnings
    Don't love it
    Homo took it up the ass, split bodyparts but don't know the gym
    & Back in the day? yeaaa DOMS left sore...from being 'Bent Over for Rows' of men
    Ehhh
    The mag hyped em out respect, my blade give cords new sound effects
    Doubt I'll fret....'Blues style of playing UP' leave blood when metal slides down ya neck
    Ehh

    VOTE: Dominate Dope.

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    Re: LLL Week 3 Contendership: Dominate (2-0) vs. Exalted (2-0) OPEN 4 VOTES

    Watch this pussy step & get beaten. Never flames - at best he’s just decent
    Ain’t gonna see Hei burn Nate - 1 punch & he won’t wake up til the end of the season
    cool & creative open.. im not typically a fan of these split up wp's anymore but this is pretty smooth tbh and works great with both names being involved.. good open
    It’s head shots only if he gettin pics - girl made sure to frame it just right
    She’ll avoid showing Exercise cuz its clear she’s never done that a day in her life
    nah, this has been done... seen the wp before in a similar way
    Tell this coward to bar up for once. Least lines every week - I’ve seen enough of it
    By going the miniskirts around the fact he’s a pussy w/ barely enough material to even cover it
    fucking fire... great personal & fresh wp.. i wouldve taken out "even" but thats nitpicking
    “I’ll study Dom’s life to find new personals”… My god. Are you hearing these words?!
    I considered Hypothetic before… Now I KNOW that that theory’s confirmed
    dooope.. setup if perfect & this was a well executed personal
    Idc if you rifle through my history. When I bring my rifle through, ur history
    & why the fuck would u have pried in that? Is what I'd ask about ur lines & sense of dignity
    lol this bangs... setup is awesome and i like how you went about the angle
    He ain't shit to me. Fuck those tactics. You'll see this faggot get slugged
    Doesn't matter what strategy Infusing. Docs'll have an IV doin that w/ his blood
    dope.. cant recall infusing being used on him b4 so this was cool
    I’ll run at his crew w/ the 9 & snub. Pick a few... their time is done
    Start the kill count. Then let fly w/ the machine and have the autopilot up
    smooth af.. wp works perfect in slang to me.. really liked this
    No-one believes ur job’s important or that you'll win - u ain't a threat dork
    You’re a secretariat best... & only thing you’re beating here is a dead horse
    lol i thought the wp was cool & hat this was pretty funny... enjyable close

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    Longbars in ur DNA, clown. This ain't HF dont let that faggot shit out
    Unimpressed how a stretch for spit got off the ground & not sucked back in ya mouth
    awesome Spit concept which are tough in this day in age, good personal concept to open
    Fist Fight at school! For talent day teach we can throw some jabs
    Don't need votes in class.. knockin u to next week REALLY give em a Show of Hands
    seen a lot of 'show of hands' concepts over the years, DOmen did a "school" one, but this was still a dece flip
    My fists home at last. U'll catch a blow to the head in the worst way
    Irony: him wakin up w/ Adelaide Response as they ask... 'What's your Birthplace?'
    fire... dope wp and Aussie take... loved this
    Picture Prom Night Dom's like a Fez: sloppy dressed awkward mess
    Shiiit.. even the IDEA of bringing his date Neurosis crippled him with chronic stress
    pretty cool.. wording was nice
    Your marriage neeeeds to recoup. Divorce cuz MY D she will choose
    Think DBZ: 'Permanent Breakup once i'm inside your Boo' like Vegito defused
    ehh seen Boo/DBZ concepts before.. flip was pretty cool i guess & creative for a dbz bar... dom isnt married tho so its a reach
    Texted long as christ. On any site none uvya played shit was winning
    Anno Domini system to date hasn't worked - we could start count since ur beginnings
    cool enough, it "works" but isnt smooth and took me a bt of a reread tbh, okay
    Homo took it up the ass, split bodyparts but don't know the gym
    & Back in the day? yeaaa DOMS left sore...from being 'Bent Over for Rows' of men
    pretty cool & creative, the back/row and all tie ins here are cool
    The mag hyped em out respect, my blade give cords new sound effects
    Doubt I'll fret....'Blues style of playing UP' leave blood when metal slides down ya neck
    nice flip on the Blues concept, creative again ... like this


    Great read here a lot of dope bars & creative concepts, good stuff fellas... Def pretty close, but i think DOm's wording/harshness edged this for him in my eyes.. towards the end of Inf's verse, while creative, i just personally didnt enjoy the concepts as much as Dom's... Dom hardly missed and it's a good thing for him that he didnt or Inf wouldve won... btu again a couple less smooth & less enjoyable concepts to me personally edged it in Doms favour... this didnt disappoint, props again

    Vote - Dominate
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    Re: LLL Week 3 Contendership: Dominate (2-0) vs. Exalted (2-0) OPEN 4 VOTES

    hibernate was alright opener but it doesnt read as smooth as i’d like, pts on creativity
    nooo on exercise
    miniskirts was cool, nice
    hypothetic is pretty good.. wp heavy so far
    wasnt feelin strategy
    nahhh at dignity
    autopilot was heattt, reminds me of myself lol
    a fan of this wordplay.. not broken up to slow it down just flows and easily hits hard.

    vs

    woooo spit line hit heavy
    show of hands was nice
    man adelaide was fiire, smooth wp
    neurosis was ok
    might be the only one here that barely watched dbz
    ad was a good concept but didnt read clean
    rows missed for me
    closer was light


    first 3 bars of Inf’s verse had me like it’s a wrap.. but then he fell off.. so i had to reread again.. this was really close and could go either way.. even tho Inf’s opener was lotb for me i think dom had it on one more quote, razor thin margin and could easily change on another read.. for now i think i gotta go with.. good stuff gentlemen

    v Dom
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    Re: LLL Week 3 Contendership: Dominate (2-0) vs. Exalted (2-0) OPEN 4 VOTES

    “I’ll study Dom’s life to find new personals”… My god. Are you hearing these words?!
    I considered Hypothetic before… Now I KNOW that that theory’s confirmed
    Idc if you rifle through my history. When I bring my rifle through, ur history
    & why the fuck would u have pried in that? Is what I'd ask about ur lines & sense of dignity

    No-one believes ur job’s important or that you'll win - u ain't a threat dork
    You’re a secretariat best... & only thing you’re beating here is a dead horse

    ........

    vs

    Longbars in ur DNA, clown. This ain't HF dont let that faggot shit out
    Unimpressed how a stretch for spit got off the ground & not sucked back in ya mouth
    Picture Prom Night Dom's like a Fez: sloppy dressed awkward mess
    Shiiit.. even the IDEA of bringing his date Neurosis crippled him with chronic stress

    Good battle here one was just one another level imo wording wise and as fire as the sting behind his punches, I thik Ex woulda worded and recreated some of his slighty better it couldve made the difference for him.. Good read here props to both .. v/DOM
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    Re: LLL Week 3 Contendership: Dominate (2-0) vs. Exalted (2-0) OPEN 4 VOTES

    Dom wins
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