LLL Week 3 Contendership: King (2-0) vs. Barcotic (1-0) - King Wins

[Blue Bayou]

verses due: Thursday 11:59PST
Minimum Lines = 14 Lines
Maximum Lines = 24 Lines



Extension: Up to opponent IF verse completed & posted/sent. Otherwise at the Moderators discretion.

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[Barcotic]

16.

[King]

word

[Barcotic]

u just champed a whole season, but..

vs josh S? pffffft. the entire net can witness that shit
yep, u didnt scratch him. cudnt leave SMS w an attachment
ur best should have an * ..i did quit, then miss bouts
remove Barc from the playoff tree and this insect sticks out
FACTS!
i got 2 subwoofers to bump tunes heavy n spit flows
fatty. the only other subwoofer wud be U begging in quiznos
i agree that going minimum is wack. tryn relax, sucker
just focus on whats inside of my coat, i got the Max covered
think ur flab'll save a casualty? 40 cal will keep busting
Spoiler- if an 'auto parts' his frame, the 'cowl screen' nothing
learn the hard way when bar sprays around ya estate
drive by your house like 9/11, arms waving out the Escape
its rainin now. got a modified k about to launch things
when smoke from the Semi-Formal spray w/o a prom, king
jp. think LIVE battles..snipers locked if u want it worse
i bet no one will notify King of the Dot when its on his shirt
u'll stay shootin for more hofs til ya choke! bet u tank
the only Halls ur getting into are for da throat, extra strength
got ya bitch riding crazy. ur bae's a slave for the meat
ill make sure the Horizontal she gotta lay that way for a wk.
10 seconds in bed n shes givin me head w/ a purpose
Kinki 'n weak...which is exactly what i expect with ur verses
ur a rival? try a punk. its that Signature style ima crush
The Last Level is just another way i describe the final punch

[Barcotic]

@King nvm
i see ur online. clean this

[Blue Bayou]

@King , barc has given you until noon PST... Get your verse up

[King]

well thats a given

& to be 100, dom killed it
if spit killed it like him, i wudnt be using my reasoning
and compared to 90% of the battles already in the hof, it SHOULD make it.. n so should me vs bayou
im proving a pt. its all politics

Damn son. U are one petty landscaper.

I'm like Thanos in Infinity War, snappin on cats w/ a sadistic plan
Ur like Bruce Banner, coz whenever theres beef u cant be the bigger man
Gave his profile pic to the crew, told em bring the cans n fill 'em with lead...
Let shots fly n make sure their final destination is the landing strip on his head
U have no crew, No loyalty. U act a fool despite knowin' whats right
My boys'd ride on The Mountain for me, u never taken the high road in ur life
Have u tryina wake ur girl after u find her OD'd, flat on her chest
Ironic theres no reaction coz I put more needles in her arm than an allergy test
Everythings a pissing match with bar, but that shit just isn't new
All that tough talk to Miss King...s'like R Kelly goin full Barcotic in that interview
Try n DQ me? I got u into the fucking HOF! n u hittin me w/ this?
I gave u a leg up just to watch u fall, this time it'll be a Spartan kick to the abyss
He just cant help burying himself. I try to help but this guys bezerk
Worst landscaper EVER! We want to see u grow but u just keep supplying dirt
n I'll shoot ur crib to the ground while u n the wife gettin intimate
News'll be saying that the Max 8 thru his crib like one crashed directly into it
Cant fuck with u, I keep real ones around me. no lame coward shit
To my people yard time is a one hour gift. To Bar? that's just an 8 hour shift
Can't wait to catch em sleepin, need a pillow or all the sound blares
U'll hear a muffled pop, then his eyes roll like his father called him downstairs
Based on how u act u cant have friends, fuckin loser ur worthless
Bar ur Social status is more questionable than half the dudes that u work with
CLOWN. After this I bet u gronk spike ur phone to a furious death
I'm making another claim as champ, ur making another call to the asurion rep

[Sting3r]

Great battle, I'll edit with vote later when I have time to break it down. Battle of the season so far.

[Sting3r]

u just champed a whole season, but..

vs josh S? pffffft. the entire net can witness that shit
yep, u didnt scratch him. cudnt leave SMS w an attachment
i'm biased toward liking this
ur best should have an * ..i did quit, then miss bouts
remove Barc from the playoff tree and this insect sticks out
FACTS!
bark np is fresh to me, wouldnt be surprised if it's been used against u but the punch is good
i got 2 subwoofers to bump tunes heavy n spit flows
fatty. the only other subwoofer wud be U begging in quiznos
funny
i agree that going minimum is wack. tryn relax, sucker
just focus on whats inside of my coat, i got the Max covered
not a fresh word play but the wording is cool
think ur flab'll save a casualty? 40 cal will keep busting
Spoiler- if an 'auto parts' his frame, the 'cowl screen' nothing
good scheme
learn the hard way when bar sprays around ya estate
drive by your house like 9/11, arms waving out the Escape
not fresh
its rainin now. got a modified k about to launch things
when smoke from the Semi-Formal spray w/o a prom, king
ok punch
jp. think LIVE battles..snipers locked if u want it worse
i bet no one will notify King of the Dot when its on his shirt
yuuuuuuup
u'll stay shootin for more hofs til ya choke! bet u tank
the only Halls ur getting into are for da throat, extra strength
nice 1
got ya bitch riding crazy. ur bae's a slave for the meat
ill make sure the Horizontal she gotta lay that way for a wk.
best line so far
10 seconds in bed n shes givin me head w/ a purpose
Kinki 'n weak...which is exactly what i expect with ur verses
a bit of a stretch for text, spoken aloud works
ur a rival? try a punk. its that Signature style ima crush
The Last Level is just another way i describe the final punch
this is fairly simple

Damn son. U are one petty landscaper.

I'm like Thanos in Infinity War, snappin on cats w/ a sadistic plan
Ur like Bruce Banner, coz whenever theres beef u cant be the bigger man
good choice for an opener
Gave his profile pic to the crew, told em bring the cans n fill 'em with lead...
Let shots fly n make sure their final destination is the landing strip on his head
that was funny, technically using pics tho or is using pics just when u post them on verse thread
U have no crew, No loyalty. U act a fool despite knowin' whats right
My boys'd ride on The Mountain for me, u never taken the high road in ur life
not bad
Have u tryina wake ur girl after u find her OD'd, flat on her chest
Ironic theres no reaction coz I put more needles in her arm than an allergy test
ok, straight forward
Everythings a pissing match with bar, but that shit just isn't new
All that tough talk to Miss King...s'like R Kelly goin full Barcotic in that interview
good punch
Try n DQ me? I got u into the fucking HOF! n u hittin me w/ this?
I gave u a leg up just to watch u fall, this time it'll be a Spartan kick to the abyss
this is sparta!!!!! kinda simple
He just cant help burying himself. I try to help but this guys bezerk
Worst landscaper EVER! We want to see u grow but u just keep supplying dirt
good punch
n I'll shoot ur crib to the ground while u n the wife gettin intimate
News'll be saying that the Max 8 thru his crib like one crashed directly into it
ok
Cant fuck with u, I keep real ones around me. no lame coward shit
To my people yard time is a one hour gift. To Bar? that's just an 8 hour shift
thats damn funny
Can't wait to catch em sleepin, need a pillow or all the sound blares
U'll hear a muffled pop, then his eyes roll like his father called him downstairs
not a fan of this
Based on how u act u cant have friends, fuckin loser ur worthless
Bar ur Social status is more questionable than half the dudes that u work with
hard punch
CLOWN. After this I bet u gronk spike ur phone to a furious death
I'm making another claim as champ, ur making another call to the asurion rep
solid dope closer

battle of the week probably best battle so far this season. king put 2 great punches at the opener and closer. favorite bars of kings is the 8 hour shift line and closer. both original and hard hitting. there were a few simple lines that i didn't love and didn't hate either.

bars verse; solid. like i said, i'm biased towards the opener i just think that shit is a nice dig not the hardest hitting punch tho. king of the dot name flip was hard. considering how many king of the dot battles there are it wouldnt be a stretch to see something similar but not as a nameflip. horizontal wordplay and subwoofer were both clever.

over all; king structured his verse better or maybe it just came off like that. his personal digs were nice. & barcotic was consistent with solid punches and fresh wordplay (from what i've seen; others seem to claim that every wp has been done so idk)

v/ barcotic


would also be nice to see people grow a pair of nuts and vote on this battle. y'all both brought fire. almost 500 views and all i see is people lurking in the shadows because their afraid to express an opinion when it comes to bars. quick to spam the chats flirting with other men tho.

[Zunto]

vs josh S? pffffft. the entire net can witness that shit
yep, u didnt scratch him. cudnt leave SMS w an attachment
doesnt make sense
ur best should have an * ..i did quit, then miss bouts
remove Barc from the playoff tree and this insect sticks out
FACTS!
another one
i got 2 subwoofers to bump tunes heavy n spit flows
fatty. the only other subwoofer wud be U begging in quiznos
umm no lmao
i agree that going minimum is wack. tryn relax, sucker
just focus on whats inside of my coat, i got the Max covered
how could he see something that’s hidden? Whatever, it’s still nice
think ur flab'll save a casualty? 40 cal will keep busting
Spoiler- if an 'auto parts' his frame, the 'cowl screen' nothing
cowl screen? Nah
learn the hard way when bar sprays around ya estate
drive by your house like 9/11, arms waving out the Escape
no
its rainin now. got a modified k about to launch things
when smoke from the Semi-Formal spray w/o a prom, king
alright
jp. think LIVE battles..snipers locked if u want it worse
i bet no one will notify King of the Dot when its on his shirt
lol fire af
u'll stay shootin for more hofs til ya choke! bet u tank
the only Halls ur getting into are for da throat, extra strength
nah really gay
got ya bitch riding crazy. ur bae's a slave for the meat
ill make sure the Horizontal she gotta lay that way for a wk.
whore is on till? On till what? Doesn’t make sense smh
10 seconds in bed n shes givin me head w/ a purpose
Kinki 'n weak...which is exactly what i expect with ur verses
pretty cool
ur a rival? try a punk. its that Signature style ima crush
The Last Level is just another way i describe the final punch
decent closer



3 nice
1 ok
1 Decent
7 misses

Vs


I'm like Thanos in Infinity War, snappin on cats w/ a sadistic plan
Ur like Bruce Banner, coz whenever theres beef u cant be the bigger man
this is OK
Gave his profile pic to the crew, told em bring the cans n fill 'em with lead...
Let shots fly n make sure their final destination is the landing strip on his head
not a pic battle
U have no crew, No loyalty. U act a fool despite knowin' whats right
My boys'd ride on The Mountain for me, u never taken the high road in ur life
nah
Have u tryina wake ur girl after u find her OD'd, flat on her chest
Ironic theres no reaction coz I put more needles in her arm than an allergy test
alright
Everythings a pissing match with bar, but that shit just isn't new
All that tough talk to Miss King...s'like R Kelly goin full Barcotic in that interview
nice I liked it
Try n DQ me? I got u into the fucking HOF! n u hittin me w/ this?
I gave u a leg up just to watch u fall, this time it'll be a Spartan kick to the abyss
alright, had potential to be better
He just cant help burying himself. I try to help but this guys bezerk
Worst landscaper EVER! We want to see u grow but u just keep supplying dirt
ha, this is dope
n I'll shoot ur crib to the ground while u n the wife gettin intimate
News'll be saying that the Max 8 thru his crib like one crashed directly into it
damn you both used a max wp lol, this was ok
Cant fuck with u, I keep real ones around me. no lame coward shit
To my people yard time is a one hour gift. To Bar? that's just an 8 hour shift
lmao
Can't wait to catch em sleepin, need a pillow or all the sound blares
U'll hear a muffled pop, then his eyes roll like his father called him downstairs
lol cute but corny
Based on how u act u cant have friends, fuckin loser ur worthless
Bar ur Social status is more questionable than half the dudes that u work with
fireeeee, LOTB for sure
CLOWN. After this I bet u gronk spike ur phone to a furious death
I'm making another claim as champ, ur making another call to the asurion rep
ehh wasn’t feelin this


4 nice
4 ok
4 misses


Pretty cool battle here, I’m glad barc let king drop, great sportsmanship there. Barc you had a few nice lines that I really liked but you also had a good number that made no sense or only worked one day, misses. King you had a much more well rounded verse with a consistent number of hits and less misses. I have king taking this by a fair margin. Props.


Vote King

[hello there]

u just champed a whole season, but..

vs josh S? pffffft. the entire net can witness that shit
yep, u didnt scratch him. cudnt leave SMS w an attachment
I don't really follow this
ur best should have an * ..i did quit, then miss bouts
remove Barc from the playoff tree and this insect sticks out
FACTS!
Hype bar. I don't mind them, but peeps don't like em and I have to vote the site.
i got 2 subwoofers to bump tunes heavy n spit flows
fatty. the only other subwoofer wud be U begging in quiznos
This is a super stretch and kind of a weak punch. It's def left field
i agree that going minimum is wack. tryn relax, sucker
just focus on whats inside of my coat, i got the Max covered
Set up was kinda weak but the Max is cool
think ur flab'll save a casualty? 40 cal will keep busting
Spoiler- if an 'auto parts' his frame, the 'cowl screen' nothing
Like auto parts, really don't like cowl screen. This is the type of shit I try to force and get no votes for it.
learn the hard way when bar sprays around ya estate
drive by your house like 9/11, arms waving out the Escape
Ouch haha. This bar is not kosher.
its rainin now. got a modified k about to launch things
when smoke from the Semi-Formal spray w/o a prom, king
Ehhhhh... this is cool enough
jp. think LIVE battles..snipers locked if u want it worse
i bet no one will notify King of the Dot when its on his shirt
I like the concept do not respect the wording at all. But check my votes, I consistently hate bars worded this way
u'll stay shootin for more hofs til ya choke! bet u tank
the only Halls ur getting into are for da throat, extra strength
See above. I do like the idea though
got ya bitch riding crazy. ur bae's a slave for the meat
ill make sure the Horizontal she gotta lay that way for a wk.
95% sure I saw a Horizontal bar last season. You sure it didn't set up with slave for the meat, too?
10 seconds in bed n shes givin me head w/ a purpose
Kinki 'n weak...which is exactly what i expect with ur verses
This is neat
ur a rival? try a punk. its that Signature style ima crush
The Last Level is just another way i describe the final punch
No I don't like this

4.5ish

Damn son. U are one petty landscaper.

I'm like Thanos in Infinity War, snappin on cats w/ a sadistic plan
Ur like Bruce Banner, coz whenever theres beef u cant be the bigger man
Ehhhhhhhhh I like the idea, but its just so literal
Gave his profile pic to the crew, told em bring the cans n fill 'em with lead...
Let shots fly n make sure their final destination is the landing strip on his head
eh
U have no crew, No loyalty. U act a fool despite knowin' whats right
My boys'd ride on The Mountain for me, u never taken the high road in ur life
This is solid. I like this a lot.
Have u tryina wake ur girl after u find her OD'd, flat on her chest
Ironic theres no reaction coz I put more needles in her arm than an allergy test
Haha
Everythings a pissing match with bar, but that shit just isn't new
All that tough talk to Miss King...s'like R Kelly goin full Barcotic in that interview
Jesus
Try n DQ me? I got u into the fucking HOF! n u hittin me w/ this?
I gave u a leg up just to watch u fall, this time it'll be a Spartan kick to the abyss
Nah
He just cant help burying himself. I try to help but this guys bezerk
Worst landscaper EVER! We want to see u grow but u just keep supplying dirt
This is cool
n I'll shoot ur crib to the ground while u n the wife gettin intimate
News'll be saying that the Max 8 thru his crib like one crashed directly into it
Ehh
Cant fuck with u, I keep real ones around me. no lame coward shit
To my people yard time is a one hour gift. To Bar? that's just an 8 hour shift
Lol
Can't wait to catch em sleepin, need a pillow or all the sound blares
U'll hear a muffled pop, then his eyes roll like his father called him downstairs
Haha
Based on how u act u cant have friends, fuckin loser ur worthless
Bar ur Social status is more questionable than half the dudes that u work with
Eh. Cool.
CLOWN. After this I bet u gronk spike ur phone to a furious death
I'm making another claim as champ, ur making another call to the asurion rep
Eh

Vote: King. To be honest, I expected this to be closer. Barc had some cool concepts, but some really lazy wording. King came with a much better verse than the last couple of weeks; and actually had a DOPE example of how to handle someone like Barc or Ronin in a battle. Some of the punches were really tough too.

Cool battle. TELL ME HOW IT'S A HATE VOTE, BARC! SEE YOU IN CHAT SON.

[Spree]

vs josh S? pffffft. the entire net can witness that shit
yep, u didnt scratch him. cudnt leave SMS w an attachment
this was aight
ur best should have an * ..i did quit, then miss bouts
remove Barc from the playoff tree and this insect sticks out
This is nice
FACTS!
i got 2 subwoofers to bump tunes heavy n spit flows
fatty. the only other subwoofer wud be U begging in quiznos
lol, humor factor was cool but nothin to harsh. plus hes not fat
i agree that going minimum is wack. tryn relax, sucker
just focus on whats inside of my coat, i got the Max covered
cool
think ur flab'll save a casualty? 40 cal will keep busting
Spoiler- if an 'auto parts' his frame, the 'cowl screen' nothing
this is fire.. If you dont know what a cowl screen is dont vote or ask
learn the hard way when bar sprays around ya estate
drive by your house like 9/11, arms waving out the Escape
this is savage yeah
its rainin now. got a modified k about to launch things
when smoke from the Semi-Formal spray w/o a prom, king
nice
jp. think LIVE battles..snipers locked if u want it worse
i bet no one will notify King of the Dot when its on his shirt
dope
u'll stay shootin for more hofs til ya choke! bet u tank
the only Halls ur getting into are for da throat, extra strength
this was nice
got ya bitch riding crazy. ur bae's a slave for the meat
ill make sure the Horizontal she gotta lay that way for a wk.
this is fire..whore is on till she gotta lay that way... dope
10 seconds in bed n shes givin me head w/ a purpose
Kinki 'n weak...which is exactly what i expect with ur verses
this was cool
ur a rival? try a punk. its that Signature style ima crush
The Last Level is just another way i describe the final punch
cool

Vs

I'm like Thanos in Infinity War, snappin on cats w/ a sadistic plan
Ur like Bruce Banner, coz whenever theres beef u cant be the bigger man
i fuck with this
Gave his profile pic to the crew, told em bring the cans n fill 'em with lead...
Let shots fly n make sure their final destination is the landing strip on his head
I fuck with this... Only cos i've seen that pic when editing his accomps and shit. dope
U have no crew, No loyalty. U act a fool despite knowin' whats right
My boys'd ride on The Mountain for me, u never taken the high road in ur life
nice clever flip here
Have u tryina wake ur girl after u find her OD'd, flat on her chest
Ironic theres no reaction coz I put more needles in her arm than an allergy test
Meh this seems too basic idk
Everythings a pissing match with bar, but that shit just isn't new
All that tough talk to Miss King...s'like R Kelly goin full Barcotic in that interview
this is cool..bit wordy but i fuck with it
Try n DQ me? I got u into the fucking HOF! n u hittin me w/ this?
I gave u a leg up just to watch u fall, this time it'll be a Spartan kick to the abyss
cool
He just cant help burying himself. I try to help but this guys bezerk
Worst landscaper EVER! We want to see u grow but u just keep supplying dirt
nice
n I'll shoot ur crib to the ground while u n the wife gettin intimate
News'll be saying that the Max 8 thru his crib like one crashed directly into it
this is cool
Cant fuck with u, I keep real ones around me. no lame coward shit
To my people yard time is a one hour gift. To Bar? that's just an 8 hour shift
FIRE
Can't wait to catch em sleepin, need a pillow or all the sound blares
U'll hear a muffled pop, then his eyes roll like his father called him downstairs
this is dope
Based on how u act u cant have friends, fuckin loser ur worthless
Bar ur Social status is more questionable than half the dudes that u work with
lmao...this is cool
CLOWN. After this I bet u gronk spike ur phone to a furious death
I'm making another claim as champ, ur making another call to the asurion rep
this was clever i like this...


OVerall.. IDK what the voters didnt like about this battle. this was dope read for me. Both did their thing and its deff close in quotables as of right now I got Barc with 1 more quotable i felt his wordplay/wit was stronger. King had a few real Fire bars/personals... so I'm edging this to Barc for being more consistant. not by much at all... Might reread this but


V/Barc

[Blue Bayou]

vs josh S? pffffft. the entire net can witness that shit
yep, u didnt scratch him. cudnt leave SMS w an attachment
lol at capitalizing S in the set-up.. i have mixed feelings on the open, conceptually i like it, its certianly not forced and can work but i wouldnt sayits smooth.. plus reffering to him as "S" seems like reaching for a concept to me
ur best should have an * ..i did quit, then miss bouts
remove Barc from the playoff tree and this insect sticks out
ehh, appreciate the personal attempt but ive told you in the past i hate when u use self bark plays because theyre so done
FACTS!
i got 2 subwoofers to bump tunes heavy n spit flows
fatty. the only other subwoofer wud be U begging in quiznos
lol funny wp & personal.. that said, while i know 'woofing' down foo is a term, ive never heard someone reffered to as a woofer per se... still, i like it
i agree that going minimum is wack. tryn relax, sucker
just focus on whats inside of my coat, i got the Max covered
nah.. i dont like indirect s&f gun bars.. which this is.. the concept is dece, but i prefer gun bars that actually make a point of dong damage to someone.. the punch here is i have a gun tucked, so light but a cool swag bar
think ur flab'll save a casualty? 40 cal will keep busting
Spoiler- if an 'auto parts' his frame, the 'cowl screen' nothing
dope. one of the better "auto" plays ive seen recently.. wording was good
learn the hard way when bar sprays around ya estate
drive by your house like 9/11, arms waving out the Escape
nice, uve done a ton of variations of gun kind / car brand these days but this was def one ofthe better ones
its rainin now. got a modified k about to launch things
when smoke from the Semi-Formal spray w/o a prom, king
dope wp, but the connection is off & this needs a reword to me.. semi formal & prom have nothing to do with each other, theyre completely diff dances... dope wp but this wouldve reallly hit with a diff twist
jp. think LIVE battles..snipers locked if u want it worse
i bet no one will notify King of the Dot when its on his shirt
seen KOTD plays but the wording is really good here and bonus points for the np.. cool bar
u'll stay shootin for more hofs til ya choke! bet u tank
the only Halls ur getting into are for da throat, extra strength
nah played... cant remember the specific person, but RM/Bboys days had 'if Halls comin out of anyones mouth they choked on a lasange' type bar.. this is the type of bar that once uve seen it theres not really much else that can be done in regards to a flip
got ya bitch riding crazy. ur bae's a slave for the meat
ill make sure the Horizontal she gotta lay that way for a wk.
fiiiree... dope w/p that was done perfectly
10 seconds in bed n shes givin me head w/ a purpose
Kinki 'n weak...which is exactly what i expect with ur verses
dope again, awesome np & wp.. was this reworded during an edit? i feel like i liked this bar even better when i first read ur original 20... regardless dope stuff
ur a rival? try a punk. its that Signature style ima crush
The Last Level is just another way i describe the final punch
solid close w/ the crew ref.. good, not great

Vs

I'm like Thanos in Infinity War, snappin on cats w/ a sadistic plan
Ur like Bruce Banner, coz whenever theres beef u cant be the bigger man
lol, solid open & personal
Gave his profile pic to the crew, told em bring the cans n fill 'em with lead...
Let shots fly n make sure their final destination is the landing strip on his head
pretty cool personal on the mohawk.. solid
U have no crew, No loyalty. U act a fool despite knowin' whats right
My boys'd ride on The Mountain for me, u never taken the high road in ur life
cool again.. concept is pretty good and the punch lands
Have u tryina wake ur girl after u find her OD'd, flat on her chest
Ironic theres no reaction coz I put more needles in her arm than an allergy test
nah, okay meta but as an attack line on his girl the central concept is pretty light imo
Everythings a pissing match with bar, but that shit just isn't new
All that tough talk to Miss King...s'like R Kelly goin full Barcotic in that interview
haha the imagery is jokes.. well delivered bar & current event punch here.. like it
Try n DQ me? I got u into the fucking HOF! n u hittin me w/ this?
I gave u a leg up just to watch u fall, this time it'll be a Spartan kick to the abyss
solid, good not great
He just cant help burying himself. I try to help but this guys bezerk
Worst landscaper EVER! We want to see u grow but u just keep supplying dirt
haha good take on this personal.. took some pretty basic ideas but worded this very well to it
n I'll shoot ur crib to the ground while u n the wife gettin intimate
News'll be saying that the Max 8 thru his crib like one crashed directly into it
pretty cool gun bar here that was set up well w/ a current angle.. this is more harsh then his Max bar, i dig
Cant fuck with u, I keep real ones around me. no lame coward shit
To my people yard time is a one hour gift. To Bar? that's just an 8 hour shift
boom, good personal thats worded to hit.. nice
Can't wait to catch em sleepin, need a pillow or all the sound blares
U'll hear a muffled pop, then his eyes roll like his father called him downstairs
fiiire, this is dope & worded well
Based on how u act u cant have friends, fuckin loser ur worthless
Bar ur Social status is more questionable than half the dudes that u work with
lol, good hit again
CLOWN. After this I bet u gronk spike ur phone to a furious death
I'm making another claim as champ, ur making another call to the asurion rep
solid use of the claim concept.. works well for a closer


Yeahh this was a great read and really solid battle here, props to both. Barc had some fire bars (kinki, horizontal off the top) but also missed imo in spots and while creative his personals didnt hit as hard to me as Kings did... King was more consistent on the whole with very few misses and more harshness... props to both this was a dope battle, i got King this week


Vote - King

[Exalted.]

Barc: KOTD, Horizontal, Semi Formal, Kinki
I liked Cowl Screen not to wild about the bar..
Escape was cool imagery but like the Max line more indirect..

King: 8 hour shift, Miss King, Social Status, Muffled Pop,
Mountain was ok, Max 8 was better, opener was ok

Vote: King.. more consistent, a cpl less misses, personals hit which IMO holds more weight. Barc had the clever/creative bar here & there.. & took a couple bars in to get rolling. That S a mess was cool play but for whatever reason did not like the line. Also Bar was more concise Kings was more natural in his wording even if some setups were a bit choppy...but good battle for 24 lines here - could swing based on preference.

[A. Diction]

vs josh S? pffffft. the entire net can witness that shit
yep, u didnt scratch him. cudnt leave SMS w an attachment
...fire. S a mess, SMS, attachment..wording made it that much better. Lotb.....
ur best should have an * ..i did quit, then miss bouts
remove Barc from the playoff tree and this insect sticks out
....self hype diss aite......
FACTS!
i got 2 subwoofers to bump tunes heavy n spit flows
fatty. the only other subwoofer wud be U begging in quiznos
.......aite......
i agree that going minimum is wack. tryn relax, sucker
just focus on whats inside of my coat, i got the Max covered
...damn, first miss....
think ur flab'll save a casualty? 40 cal will keep busting
Spoiler- if an 'auto parts' his frame, the 'cowl screen' nothing
...nice, thought the flip could be better but this nice.......
learn the hard way when bar sprays around ya estate
drive by your house like 9/11, arms waving out the Escape
...niiice, wording on point....
its rainin now. got a modified k about to launch things
when smoke from the Semi-Formal spray w/o a prom, king
.....dope wp but proms aren't semi formal, other than that nice......
jp. think LIVE battles..snipers locked if u want it worse
i bet no one will notify King of the Dot when its on his shirt
.....nice, havent seen this np.....
u'll stay shootin for more hofs til ya choke! bet u tank
the only Halls ur getting into are for da throat, extra strength
....ehh......
got ya bitch riding crazy. ur bae's a slave for the meat
ill make sure the Horizontal she gotta lay that way for a wk.
......g'damn......
10 seconds in bed n shes givin me head w/ a purpose
Kinki 'n weak...which is exactly what i expect with ur verses
.....wow.......
ur a rival? try a punk. its that Signature style ima crush
The Last Level is just another way i describe the final punch
....decent but shouldnt of been ur closer, those other 2 bars shoulda been ur last 2 imo........

Vs

Damn son. U are one petty landscaper.

I'm like Thanos in Infinity War, snappin on cats w/ a sadistic plan
Ur like Bruce Banner, coz whenever theres beef u cant be the bigger man
....nice personal opener......
Gave his profile pic to the crew, told em bring the cans n fill 'em with lead...
Let shots fly n make sure their final destination is the landing strip on his head
....thought u couldnt reference pics unless it's a pic battle.......fucking with u, landing strip was aite good personal.........
U have no crew, No loyalty. U act a fool despite knowin' whats right
My boys'd ride on The Mountain for me, u never taken the high road in ur life
....simple but good.....
Have u tryina wake ur girl after u find her OD'd, flat on her chest
Ironic theres no reaction coz I put more needles in her arm than an allergy test
.....not really feeling this......
Everythings a pissing match with bar, but that shit just isn't new
All that tough talk to Miss King...s'like R Kelly goin full Barcotic in that interview
.....I almost stopped reading when u called urself Miss King, and I don't know to what interview u refer. This is below a miss, this a self diss lmao I'm fucking around but yeah miss on the miss bar...............
Try n DQ me? I got u into the fucking HOF! n u hittin me w/ this?
I gave u a leg up just to watch u fall, this time it'll be a Spartan kick to the abyss
.......good.......
He just cant help burying himself. I try to help but this guys bezerk
Worst landscaper EVER! We want to see u grow but u just keep supplying dirt
.......good personal n flip.......
n I'll shoot ur crib to the ground while u n the wife gettin intimate
News'll be saying that the Max 8 thru his crib like one crashed directly into it
........aite.....
Cant fuck with u, I keep real ones around me. no lame coward shit
To my people yard time is a one hour gift. To Bar? that's just an 8 hour shift
.....cool personal coming at it from the prison angle......
Can't wait to catch em sleepin, need a pillow or all the sound blares
U'll hear a muffled pop, then his eyes roll like his father called him downstairs
.......simple but well worded that elevates it to nice......
Based on how u act u cant have friends, fuckin loser ur worthless
Bar ur Social status is more questionable than half the dudes that u work with
......this is fire and lmao........
CLOWN. After this I bet u gronk spike ur phone to a furious death
I'm making another claim as champ, ur making another call to the asurion rep
.......solid.........


Overall: battle was fire. Well worth the read. King had a lot of good personal flips against bar and bar just barred out with a couple personals. Overall tho I think barc had the better verse, towards the end of it was just bananas. Bar had 1 miss n king had 1 miss but I think bars hits hit harder, some had me like God damn. Anyway............



V. Barc