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    LLL Week 3: Blas (1-0) vs. Blue Bayou (1-0) - BLUE WINS

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    Re: LLL Week 3: Blas (1-0) vs. Blue Bayou (1-0)

    checkkkkkkk

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    Re: LLL Week 3: Blas (1-0) vs. Blue Bayou (1-0)

    YOURE FUCKING DEADDD
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    Re: LLL Week 3: Blas (1-0) vs. Blue Bayou (1-0)

    how many
    Last edited by Blas; March 18th, 2019 at 04:12 AM Reason: barz

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    Re: LLL Week 3: Blas (1-0) vs. Blue Bayou (1-0)

    Blas in the Chat
    I apologize to everyone for that horrendous verse I posted this week. I will post something actually decent this week lmfao
    My guy, what do you have to say for every other week you’ve posted hot garbage?!

    YOURE FUCKING DEAD!!!!!!!!!!


    Clout said it best..

    i’m STUNNING at golf. i spend all summer putting the ball
    & while i’m busy chipping in.. ur family’s PISSED you contribute nothing at all
    of course i dogged em in the mag & didn’t give this bum some shine
    i mean i’d give em attribute, but ‘wack’ is the only characteristic that comes to mind
    i have eventful nights at the club & that is why i happily diss you
    you have 'eventful' nights too.. bouncers don't let you in due to "capacity issues"
    my misdirection’s involve witty punchlines & assaults w/ the led
    your misdirection’s involve not getting hard while ur girl sulks in the bed
    Blas’ a narc so i finna leave’em slumped to the death
    no arcade in sight; but i’ll still Wack-a-Mole with a club to the head
    actually thinks he’s got talent haha bless this kid
    he’ll never Peaky’s just had Blinders on so long Netflix is checkin’ in
    voters agree you’re awful when it comes to the rhymes ya pen
    those punches just aren't working.. my verse their gonna Pickett time n’ time again
    crazyy thinkin’ ur beaten me, you don't wanna rap n’ want war
    if ur gunna tripwire u messing with me, i just set one at your front door

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    Last edited by Blue Bayou; March 18th, 2019 at 04:47 PM
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    Do you have a wife or are you married to wordplay? Fucking loser.

    TIME TO DIE FAGGOT.

    I'm up next, you’re expecting to win cuz you know voters suck vets?
    nah, if it's vs BLUE I'm out for BLOOD, looks like I’ll be throwing UpSets
    this faggots crying, he’s heated.. you’ll die when I squeeze clips
    I just can’t wait to blast BlueFace, no fucking surprise that I’ll bleed it
    such a yes man, he’s “for the culture” but ur really lame at best bitch
    he thinks fitting in’s the only way to win but this isn’t a game of tetris
    he’s got no squad.. if he sticks around? no question this clown will die
    we’ll watch bluebook it <— no wonder there’s no value in him being down to ride
    this faggots through, hit up an AA meeting you’re literally an addict dude
    still, you’re winning this once in a blue moon even IF this alcoholic has a few
    you’re so hideous & disgusting it’s a sin, if it’s fist to cuffing bitch I’d win
    man I really wish I hadn’t senior pics.. now it’s time to put the knuckle to his chin
    ur wordplay is random as fk..I’m throwing bows at this loser & wrecking his face
    so watch as I knock out a bluetooth <— the only relevant connection you’ll make
    fuck ur thought process & wordplay even if u’ve champed & had a few stints
    how is his text created? it’s never asked we don’t give a fuck about what blueprints

    UPSET CITYYYYYYYY

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    i’m STUNNING at golf. i spend all summer putting the ball
    & while i’m busy chipping in.. ur family’s PISSED you contribute nothing at all
    this was cool, I dig it
    of course i dogged em in the mag & didn’t give this bum some shine
    i mean i’d give em attribute, but ‘wack’ is the only characteristic that comes to mind
    light jab/personal
    i have eventful nights at the club & that is why i happily diss you
    you have 'eventful' nights too.. bouncers don't let you in due to "capacity issues"
    lol this was cool, same style as ur rec leagues bar against me which was doper
    my misdirection’s involve witty punchlines & assaults w/ the led
    your misdirection’s involve not getting hard while ur girl sulks in the bed
    I see you really fucking with this style. This ok not as good as line before
    Blas’ a narc so i finna leave’em slumped to the death
    no arcade in sight; but i’ll still Wack-a-Mole with a club to the head
    dope juice
    actually thinks he’s got talent haha bless this kid
    he’ll never Peaky’s just had Blinders on so long Netflix is checkin’ in
    line is somewhere between good and light. Is this show good btw?
    voters agree you’re awful when it comes to the rhymes ya pen
    those punches just aren't working.. my verse their gonna Pickett time n’ time again
    Pickett was cool wordplay. Not amazing tho. Jab here
    crazyy thinkin’ ur beaten me, you don't wanna rap n’ want war
    if ur gunna tripwire u messing with me, i just set one at your front door
    nice closer






    I'm up next, you’re expecting to win cuz you know voters suck vets?
    nah, if it's vs BLUE I'm out for BLOOD, looks like I’ll be throwing UpSets
    cool opener
    this faggots crying, he’s heated.. you’ll die when I squeeze clips
    I just can’t wait to blast BlueFace, no fucking surprise that I’ll bleed it
    I just used a Blueface line on him. Mine was dope, sorry
    such a yes man, he’s “for the culture” but ur really lame at best bitch
    he thinks fitting in’s the only way to win but this isn’t a game of tetris
    first real miss
    he’s got no squad.. if he sticks around? no question this clown will die
    we’ll watch bluebook it <— no wonder there’s no value in him being down to ride
    nice bar...i fuck with it
    this faggots through, hit up an AA meeting you’re literally an addict dude
    still, you’re winning this once in a blue moon even IF this alcoholic has a few
    st8...using mad Blue flips
    you’re so hideous & disgusting it’s a sin, if it’s fist to cuffing bitch I’d win
    man I really wish I hadn’t senior pics.. now it’s time to put the knuckle to his chin
    haha this your best bar imo
    ur wordplay is random as fk..I’m throwing bows at this loser & wrecking his face
    so watch as I knock out a bluetooth <— the only relevant connection you’ll make
    ehh seen Muff do this better
    fuck ur thought process & wordplay even if u’ve champed & had a few stints
    how is his text created? it’s never asked we don’t give a fuck about what blueprints
    cool


    Mad nameplays Blas some were good but others missed bad which swung this battle in Blues favor. Props on dropping early on a dope battle fellas
    Last edited by RealBodySnatcher; March 18th, 2019 at 09:35 PM

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    Re: LLL Week 3: Blas (1-0) vs. Blue Bayou (1-0) - OPEN FOR VOTES

    Quote Originally Posted by Blue Bayou View Post
    My guy, what do you have to say for every other week you’ve posted hot garbage?!

    YOURE FUCKING DEAD!!!!!!!!!!

    DUN DUN DUN, Blue Bayou prepares a Final kamehameha. He focuses his inner ki to chaotic proportions.

    Clout said it best..

    i’m STUNNING at golf. i spend all summer putting the ball
    & while i’m busy chipping in.. ur family’s PISSED you contribute nothing at all

    LMAO <3 you do love me. I liked this, you got the comedy set it up well.

    of course i dogged em in the mag & didn’t give this bum some shine
    i mean i’d give em attribute, but ‘wack’ is the only characteristic that comes to mind

    good lil play on words here. A slick jab to solar plexes.

    i have eventful nights at the club & that is why i happily diss you
    you have 'eventful' nights too.. bouncers don't let you in due to "capacity issues"

    Utilizing the double entendres, its landing nothing heavy but its consistent

    my misdirection’s involve witty punchlines & assaults w/ the led
    your misdirection’s involve not getting hard while ur girl sulks in the bed

    lol, i knew a dick joke was coming.

    Blas’ a narc so i finna leave’em slumped to the death
    no arcade in sight; but i’ll still Wack-a-Mole with a club to the head

    Although worded well this was a bit corny to me

    actually thinks he’s got talent haha bless this kid
    he’ll never Peaky’s just had Blinders on so long Netflix is checkin’ in

    Fire. thats my show man.

    voters agree you’re awful when it comes to the rhymes ya pen
    those punches just aren't working.. my verse their gonna Pickett time n’ time again

    cool

    crazyy thinkin’ ur beaten me, you don't wanna rap n’ want war
    if ur gunna tripwire u messing with me, i just set one at your front door

    Slick

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    Do you have a wife or are you married to wordplay? Fucking loser.

    TIME TO DIE FAGGOT.

    Blas Charges up his Final Form.

    I'm up next, you’re expecting to win cuz you know voters suck vets?
    nah, if it's vs BLUE I'm out for BLOOD, looks like I’ll be throwing UpSets

    Blood n crip plays are older than i dont even know. Worded well though

    this faggots crying, he’s heated.. you’ll die when I squeeze clips
    I just can’t wait to blast BlueFace, no fucking surprise that I’ll bleed it

    This one was cool.

    such a yes man, he’s “for the culture” but ur really lame at best bitch
    he thinks fitting in’s the only way to win but this isn’t a game of tetris

    I liked this, i know its old concept but i liked it champ at the bit boys; champ at the bit.

    he’s got no squad.. if he sticks around? no question this clown will die
    we’ll watch bluebook it <— no wonder there’s no value in him being down to ride

    A bit heavy on the name flips my dudeski. This was ok.

    this faggots through, hit up an AA meeting you’re literally an addict dude
    still, you’re winning this once in a blue moon even IF this alcoholic has a few

    I like that kind of beer just didn't like this kind of bar.

    you’re so hideous & disgusting it’s a sin, if it’s fist to cuffing bitch I’d win
    man I really wish I hadn’t senior pics.. now it’s time to put the knuckle to his chin

    Senior/seen your pics is nice and all. but you really didn't tie in the old age dig to make this a legit wordplay that works both ways.

    ur wordplay is random as fk..I’m throwing bows at this loser & wrecking his face
    so watch as I knock out a bluetooth <— the only relevant connection you’ll make

    Cool, still od'ing on nameflips man.

    fuck ur thought process & wordplay even if u’ve champed & had a few stints
    how is his text created? it’s never asked we don’t give a fuck about what blueprints

    Nah

    UPSET CITYYYYYYYY

    Well Blue had the better worded bars. Blas had some cool bars but he OD hard on Nameflipping. You Should know not to use a blood/crip punch lol. Wack a mole was corny by blue too but the rest was a solid consistent verse. I think Blas slipped up here. Blue gets him on cleaner execution & Lands.

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    Re: LLL Week 3: Blas (1-0) vs. Blue Bayou (1-0) - OPEN FOR VOTES

    Blue Bayou -

    i’m STUNNING at golf. i spend all summer putting the ball
    & while i’m busy chipping in.. ur family’s PISSED you contribute nothing at all

    Lol..this was okay..


    of course i dogged em in the mag & didn’t give this bum some shine
    i mean i’d give em attribute, but ‘wack’ is the only characteristic that comes to mind

    This was cool..


    i have eventful nights at the club & that is why i happily diss you
    you have 'eventful' nights too.. bouncers don't let you in due to "capacity issues"

    Lol..this could be better..



    my misdirection’s involve witty punchlines & assaults w/ the led
    your misdirection’s involve not getting hard while ur girl sulks in the bed

    This was okay..needs to be better..

    Blas’ a narc so i finna leave’em slumped to the death
    no arcade in sight; but i’ll still Wack-a-Mole with a club to the head

    This was cool..

    actually thinks he’s got talent haha bless this kid
    he’ll never Peaky’s just had Blinders on so long Netflix is checkin’ in

    This could be better..

    voters agree you’re awful when it comes to the rhymes ya pen
    those punches just aren't working.. my verse their gonna Pickett time n’ time again

    This needs to be better in ways..

    crazyy thinkin’ ur beaten me, you don't wanna rap n’ want war
    if ur gunna tripwire u messing with me, i just set one at your front door

    This was cool..

    Blas -

    I'm up next, you’re expecting to win cuz you know voters suck vets?
    nah, if it's vs BLUE I'm out for BLOOD, looks like I’ll be throwing UpSets

    This needs to be better..lol..


    this faggots crying, he’s heated.. you’ll die when I squeeze clips
    I just can’t wait to blast BlueFace, no fucking surprise that I’ll bleed it

    This was okay..needs something more..


    such a yes man, he’s “for the culture” but ur really lame at best bitch
    he thinks fitting in’s the only way to win but this isn’t a game of tetris

    This was cool..

    he’s got no squad.. if he sticks around? no question this clown will die
    we’ll watch bluebook it <— no wonder there’s no value in him being down to ride

    This was cool..



    this faggots through, hit up an AA meeting you’re literally an addict dude
    still, you’re winning this once in a blue moon even IF this alcoholic has a few

    lmao..this was cool..

    you’re so hideous & disgusting it’s a sin, if it’s fist to cuffing bitch I’d win
    man I really wish I hadn’t senior pics.. now it’s time to put the knuckle to his chin

    lol..this was cool..

    ur wordplay is random as fk..I’m throwing bows at this loser & wrecking his face
    so watch as I knock out a bluetooth <— the only relevant connection you’ll make

    wording needs to better..this was okay..

    fuck ur thought process & wordplay even if u’ve champed & had a few stints
    how is his text created? it’s never asked we don’t give a fuck about what blueprints

    This was cool..

    V/ Blue

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    Re: LLL Week 3: Blas (1-0) vs. Blue Bayou (1-0) - OPEN FOR VOTES

    i’m STUNNING at golf. i spend all summer putting the ball
    & while i’m busy chipping in.. ur family’s PISSED you contribute nothing at all
    - a bit weak on the misdirection IMO because it was predictable the way you delivered it

    of course i dogged em in the mag & didn’t give this bum some shine
    i mean i’d give em attribute, but ‘wack’ is the only characteristic that comes to mind
    - Cool wp, but again feels predictable because the play is obvious before it's delivered

    i have eventful nights at the club & that is why i happily diss you
    you have 'eventful' nights too.. bouncers don't let you in due to "capacity issues"
    - This one was cool.. same format as the first two punches but this wp was harder to discern in advance

    my misdirection’s involve witty punchlines & assaults w/ the led
    your misdirection’s involve not getting hard while ur girl sulks in the bed
    - again with the wp coming at the very beginning of the punch, it's now a pattern I can't shake while I'm reading your verse.. still creative writing and a good punch.. just starting to feel repetitive the way it's being laid out

    Blas’ a narc so i finna leave’em slumped to the death
    no arcade in sight; but i’ll still Wack-a-Mole with a club to the head
    - This was OK, different so I liked it, not that impactful but still decent

    actually thinks he’s got talent haha bless this kid
    he’ll never Peaky’s just had Blinders on so long Netflix is checkin’ in
    - Didn't care for this one tbh

    voters agree you’re awful when it comes to the rhymes ya pen
    those punches just aren't working.. my verse their gonna Pickett time n’ time again
    - Not a bad concept per se, but the execution was lacking here and for me it came off cheesy.

    crazyy thinkin’ ur beaten me, you don't wanna rap n’ want war
    if ur gunna tripwire u messing with me, i just set one at your front door
    - there's that format again, and this was a weak concept to me, not feeling this one

    vs

    I'm up next, you’re expecting to win cuz you know voters suck vets?
    nah, if it's vs BLUE I'm out for BLOOD, looks like I’ll be throwing UpSets
    - I feel like we just saw a crips & bloods line against me a couple weeks ago.. but not a bad spin on "upset" wp so decent

    this faggots crying, he’s heated.. you’ll die when I squeeze clips
    I just can’t wait to blast BlueFace, no fucking surprise that I’ll bleed it
    - not feeling this one at all

    such a yes man, he’s “for the culture” but ur really lame at best bitch
    he thinks fitting in’s the only way to win but this isn’t a game of tetris
    - just.. no

    he’s got no squad.. if he sticks around? no question this clown will die
    we’ll watch bluebook it <— no wonder there’s no value in him being down to ride
    - this was fire, very creative and I've never seen it.. nice personal angle.. double meaning.. dope.

    this faggots through, hit up an AA meeting you’re literally an addict dude
    still, you’re winning this once in a blue moon even IF this alcoholic has a few
    - I had a better alcohol wp in mine & Blue's battle, not feeling this one

    you’re so hideous & disgusting it’s a sin, if it’s fist to cuffing bitch I’d win
    man I really wish I hadn’t senior pics.. now it’s time to put the knuckle to his chin
    - weak wp no real meaning behind it.. needed more here, something about age in the punch would have helped but a played concept overall anyway

    ur wordplay is random as fk..I’m throwing bows at this loser & wrecking his face
    so watch as I knock out a bluetooth <— the only relevant connection you’ll make
    - ok

    fuck ur thought process & wordplay even if u’ve champed & had a few stints
    how is his text created? it’s never asked we don’t give a fuck about what blueprints
    - this is OK but too many nameplays in this verse for my taste.. need some variety

    I got Blue taking this one fairly easily, but that "bluebook it" punch was LOTB for me.. decent battle especially for dropping early. Good to see everyone puttin' it in #FTC

    v/ Blue Bayou
    Last edited by $pitacular; March 19th, 2019 at 02:32 PM

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    Re: LLL Week 3: Blas (1-0) vs. Blue Bayou (1-0) - OPEN FOR VOTES

    golf was a cool start
    tribute a little simple but good
    eventful was clowning, that hit
    wasnt feelin misdirection
    wack a mole was corny lol but it still works
    netflix was solid
    u did a better pickett line last week
    trip why’re was solid, i likes it

    vs

    upsets was nice
    bluefave was light
    tetris bars been done so u really need a crazy spin on it to work
    blue book was simple but fiiire.. alotta blue nameplays so far
    i get the blue moon personal but too simple
    even tho senior is played, and i’ve seen pound to ur chin like a thinking man pose lines this was a fresh twist for me
    nahhh on the closer

    blas did a solid job with the nameplays but at the same time went a lil overboard with em.. hurt u at the end bro, blue book was heat tho.. blue was very consistant here and that’s why he took it.. nonchalant wittiness and the eventful line was my fav..

    vote Blue

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    i’m STUNNING at golf. i spend all summer putting the ball
    & while i’m busy chipping in.. ur family’s PISSED you contribute nothing at all
    Heh, cool. Relevance of a golf bar is made better by it being talked about in that chat thread.
    of course i dogged em in the mag & didn’t give this bum some shine
    i mean i’d give em attribute, but ‘wack’ is the only characteristic that comes to mind
    Strong punch, I thought the wp was forced at first but it works fine if you pronounce attribute in the verb form rather than the noun form
    i have eventful nights at the club & that is why i happily diss you
    you have 'eventful' nights too.. bouncers don't let you in due to "capacity issues"
    decent. Could've been worded better for the punch
    my misdirection’s involve witty punchlines & assaults w/ the led
    your misdirection’s involve not getting hard while ur girl sulks in the bed
    LOL. Good.
    Blas’ a narc so i finna leave’em slumped to the death
    no arcade in sight; but i’ll still Wack-a-Mole with a club to the head
    ehhhh. Nah.
    actually thinks he’s got talent haha bless this kid
    he’ll never Peaky’s just had Blinders on so long Netflix is checkin’ in
    Cool. wp isn't the cleanest but it's worded well for the punch.
    voters agree you’re awful when it comes to the rhymes ya pen
    those punches just aren't working.. my verse their gonna Pickett time n’ time again
    Meh. This feels like you wrote this for Resin and then decided you needed to make the picket concept better, then you just dropped the original version here
    crazyy thinkin’ ur beaten me, you don't wanna rap n’ want war
    if ur gunna tripwire u messing with me, i just set one at your front door
    wp concept is good although I remember a few wire bars on HF, maybe not tripwire though... wording could be better for the punch



    I'm up next, you’re expecting to win cuz you know voters suck vets?
    nah, if it's vs BLUE I'm out for BLOOD, looks like I’ll be throwing UpSets
    the blood wp is played, but the tie ins with the blue nameplay and upsets personal are done quite well, this was a good bar
    this faggots crying, he’s heated.. you’ll die when I squeeze clips
    I just can’t wait to blast BlueFace, no fucking surprise that I’ll bleed it
    Had to look up. This is an OK nameplay
    such a yes man, he’s “for the culture” but ur really lame at best bitch
    he thinks fitting in’s the only way to win but this isn’t a game of tetris
    Good punch and wp concept, could have been executed more harshly but still good
    he’s got no squad.. if he sticks around? no question this clown will die
    we’ll watch bluebook it <— no wonder there’s no value in him being down to ride
    Nice! I haven't seen this nameflip on him before, and this was done very well. Set up perfect, and worded to hit. Good job
    this faggots through, hit up an AA meeting you’re literally an addict dude
    still, you’re winning this once in a blue moon even IF this alcoholic has a few
    I've used a blue moon line on him before. This was different though. Actually this isn't even really a nameplay, it would work exactly as well if his name wasn't Blue. It's a decent flip on his apparent alcoholism
    you’re so hideous & disgusting it’s a sin, if it’s fist to cuffing bitch I’d win
    man I really wish I hadn’t senior pics.. now it’s time to put the knuckle to his chin
    I'm conflicted about this. Seen your wp is so old and played that I was NOPEing on this bar as soon as I read it, but the 'knuckle to his chin' bit is fresh and pretty decent. I would've liked this a lot more if you'd just said I'll put the knuckle to his chin like a senior pic...
    ur wordplay is random as fk..I’m throwing bows at this loser & wrecking his face
    so watch as I knock out a bluetooth <— the only relevant connection you’ll make
    Nah that one has been done a lot on him
    fuck ur thought process & wordplay even if u’ve champed & had a few stints
    how is his text created? it’s never asked we don’t give a fuck about what blueprints
    This one too



    This is close IMO. Halfway through reading Blas's verse I had him edging it, but the last few bars hurt him - particularly the last two nameplays. It's frustrating bc I'm sure you thought of them on your own and they were executed quite well, but I've just seen the exact same concepts on him before too many times.

    V/ Blue

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    Re: LLL Week 3: Blas (1-0) vs. Blue Bayou (1-0) - OPEN FOR VOTES

    Typing on. a cell so no quotes, read both verses....blues verse literally had zero personal references to his opponent besides a name mention and a mag reference, which to me werent that significant...Its basically random bars that can aplly to anyone, ....thats always lazy to me bayou...

    Blas had a 2 misses but a couple solid hits ..I think u did the opoosite of bayou and beat the "blue" references to death a lil...the closer was bad but besides that the bars were there....mostly....


    V-Blas....decent showing IMO....

    Blue.....focus on ya opponent ....ya verse literally could a been used on practically anyone else here
    Last edited by GrimmReaperZ; March 21st, 2019 at 02:25 PM Reason: mad typos

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    Re: LLL Week 3: Blas (1-0) vs. Blue Bayou (1-0)

    Blue
    i’m STUNNING at golf. i spend all summer putting the ball
    & while i’m busy chipping in.. ur family’s PISSED you contribute nothing at all
    aha, nice. i swear u refered to urself in this exact manner via chat like u were setting this up lol
    of course i dogged em in the mag & didn’t give this bum some shine
    i mean i’d give em attribute, but ‘wack’ is the only characteristic that comes to mind
    cool
    i have eventful nights at the club & that is why i happily diss you
    you have 'eventful' nights too.. bouncers don't let you in due to "capacity issues"
    lmao fire
    my misdirection’s involve witty punchlines & assaults w/ the led
    your misdirection’s involve not getting hard while ur girl sulks in the bed
    lol good
    Blas’ a narc so i finna leave’em slumped to the death
    no arcade in sight; but i’ll still Wack-a-Mole with a club to the head
    dece
    actually thinks he’s got talent haha bless this kid
    he’ll never Peaky’s just had Blinders on so long Netflix is checkin’ in
    nahhh
    voters agree you’re awful when it comes to the rhymes ya pen
    those punches just aren't working.. my verse their gonna Pickett time n’ time again
    this was done better already recently n tbh i dont think i was fond of the other
    crazyy thinkin’ ur beaten me, you don't wanna rap n’ want war
    if ur gunna tripwire u messing with me, i just set one at your front door
    ok

    4 gd punches
    2 jabs
    2 misses


    Blas
    I'm up next, you’re expecting to win cuz you know voters suck vets?
    nah, if it's vs BLUE I'm out for BLOOD, looks like I’ll be throwing UpSets
    aw nah, too old of flip to get any play from me
    this faggots crying, he’s heated.. you’ll die when I squeeze clips
    I just can’t wait to blast BlueFace, no fucking surprise that I’ll bleed it
    miss
    such a yes man, he’s “for the culture” but ur really lame at best bitch
    he thinks fitting in’s the only way to win but this isn’t a game of tetris
    ok, decent. cud have maybe incorporated "blue block" or "blue square" n made this fire w/ a little rewording
    he’s got no squad.. if he sticks around? no question this clown will die
    we’ll watch bluebook it <— no wonder there’s no value in him being down to ride
    dope
    this faggots through, hit up an AA meeting you’re literally an addict dude
    still, you’re winning this once in a blue moon even IF this alcoholic has a few
    ok
    you’re so hideous & disgusting it’s a sin, if it’s fist to cuffing bitch I’d win
    man I really wish I hadn’t senior pics.. now it’s time to put the knuckle to his chin
    old wp
    ur wordplay is random as fk..I’m throwing bows at this loser & wrecking his face
    so watch as I knock out a bluetooth <— the only relevant connection you’ll make
    this was well done but also old
    fuck ur thought process & wordplay even if u’ve champed & had a few stints
    how is his text created? it’s never asked we don’t give a fuck about what blueprints
    overdoing it w the blue np man, & not getting creative enough w them

    no need to tally
    v/bb

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    Re: LLL Week 3: Blas (1-0) vs. Blue Bayou (1-0) - OPEN FOR VOTES

    Blue wins.
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