User Tag List

Showing results 1 to 11 of 11

Thread: LLL Week 3: Ryno (1-0) vs. Josh S. (1-1) - Open 4 Votes

  1. #1
    HOF
    Join Date
    Jul 2005
    Age
    38
    Posts
    3,201
    Battle Record
    19-6
    Awards Legendary Member LLL Champion 1-2 Punch HW Champion LLL HOF

    LLL Week 3: Ryno (1-0) vs. Josh S. (1-1) - Open 4 Votes

    verses due: Thursday 11:59PST
    Minimum Lines = 12 Lines
    Maximum Lines = 20 Lines



    Extension: Up to opponent IF verse completed & posted/sent. Otherwise at the Moderators discretion.

    VOTING CLOSES SUNDAY NIGHT/MONDAY MORNING
    BATTLES SET SHORTLY AFTER!


    2 No-Shows = Season Ban

    NO BITING OR RECYCLING!!!!
    Biting results in a SEASON BAN
    Recycle Once = DQ
    RECYCLE TWICE = BANNED FOR SEASON

    Edits:
    First Person can't edit after second person posts their verse
    Second person can't edit after first vote


    CHECKS,VERSES VOTES ONLY IN BATTLE THREADS!!!!!
    "Sound stuff out guys" - Barcotic

  2. #2
    Same OG Sting3r's Avatar
    Join Date
    Nov 2008
    Location
    MI
    Age
    34
    Posts
    2,713
    Battle Record
    2-2

    Re: LLL Week 3: Ryno (1-0) vs. Josh S. (1-1)

    Check
    $usernamejoshs

    $9.99 for an unbiased vote
    $14.99 full breakdown vote

  3. #3
    ROMANTICAL Ryno's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jul 2014
    Posts
    4,124
    Battle Record
    12-3
    Awards Cypher Winner Golden Glove Champion GBL Champion LLL Champion FL Tournament Winner FL Tag Champion FL Champion

    Re: LLL Week 3: Ryno (1-0) vs. Josh S. (1-1)

    Quote Originally Posted by Josh S. View Post
    Check
    Shut up.

    Yeah u talk a big game homie, just wait until Ry gets a crack atchu
    I’ll keep that same energy & give it back twice fold, black panther suit
    U run w/ gorillas? Plz ya team full of carnies so I’m raising the shotty
    It’s like a date w/ a hottie, I’m expected to leave w/ a cpl animal bodies
    U gets no love from me nigga, promise u’ll get slapped like a BITCH
    Think Simmons & Embiid, I’ll be posted on ya block talkin trash w/ the 5th
    Treat ya sleez w/ dope weave, now she sucks me off hard like a star
    I keep her head fly, she keeps her head pressed against my fly in the car
    Gun in ya mouth, I never measure myself to these queer challengers
    Instead I’ll let the ‘piece open ya jaws up’ like some vernier calipers
    Got the knife in the left but this right fist? It could end u so tragic
    I’ll ‘switch hands & hit u w/ 3 swipes’ like Han from return of the dragon
    Ya bullshit don’t fly here homie, try to run & that heat WILL stop u
    I’ll have the sticks moving before you take off like an Aircraft marshal
    Ya bitch gets banged out, who hasn’t smashed her box in my hood?
    No matter where that frequent, she gave her snatch away as much as she could

    ...The GOAT
    Last edited by Ryno; March 18th, 2019 at 05:43 AM

  4. #4
    Same OG Sting3r's Avatar
    Join Date
    Nov 2008
    Location
    MI
    Age
    34
    Posts
    2,713
    Battle Record
    2-2

    Re: LLL Week 3: Ryno (1-0) vs. Josh S. (1-1)

    ur into nut hugging & butt touchin'.. gassed up & cant get enough of it
    I'm known to split the dutch, you're only known for getting dutch ovened

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...EmUp-Blue-Wins

    he's no thug doing hits for cash, ur fully auto couldn't hit me in the belly
    last time he got a blue face to shoot he was just shitty with the semi
    I got axe to slash, graves need flowers to, I sell em' in a bundle
    my magnum opus is guns n roses, pussy, now welcome to the jungle
    my coat of arms is loaded, my pedigree is telling me to slam his chest
    he grew up ina house with 1 tooth brush aint the same as a family crest
    he'll say shit like "before I let the band die, I'll bring the tech in"
    this that gore, doe, cop O' era style - he can't even win without a weapon

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...-6-3-king-wins

    I aint losing to ryno the goat, ur highness has spoke
    Me Vs. Kings water under the bridge; Bash em up & died ina moat

    VS. Iontech
    ur a pussy behind closed doors, man this guy is a bust
    ur the kahwi leonard of text, dawg every shot u take is quiet as fuck
    VS. Bomb bard
    Hold up dawg, if ur lackin' in traffic the matic dumpin' it all
    Heat check! Release comin' from the side of ya face...Lonzo Ball
    Vs. Blue
    2 has beens dick riding, How u ballin’ when ya rhymin’ is poor?
    Think NBA halftime, all i see is old niggas that aint got it no more
    ect.. ect..

    NBA & gun bars. often he's pulling these; talking in full esteem..
    I predict the highlight of ur career will be a Washington bullets scheme
    listen sport, tiger, i can't be mad at'cha, it's all pitter patter
    i'm sure we'll still be friends after I take yo girl & "whip her snapper"!
    Last edited by Sting3r; March 19th, 2019 at 05:25 AM
    $usernamejoshs

    $9.99 for an unbiased vote
    $14.99 full breakdown vote

  5. #5
    Merk Squad
    Join Date
    Aug 2003
    Location
    Los Angeles
    Posts
    12,828
    Battle Record
    52-32
    Awards Legendary Battle Haymaker Maddnes Champion - HM 3 winner 50+ Wins Legendary Member OM HOF LLL Champion LLL Season Champion LLL HOF

    Re: LLL Week 3: Ryno (1-0) vs. Josh S. (1-1)

    Yeah u talk a big game homie, just wait until Ry gets a crack atchu
    I’ll keep that same energy & give it back twice fold, black panther suit
    Concept is good, I personally hate the young money style execution (I feel it's easy/lazy) but decent opener

    U run w/ gorillas? Plz ya team full of carnies so I’m raising the shotty
    It’s like a date w/ a hottie, I’m expected to leave w/ a cpl animal bodies
    Nah

    U gets no love from me nigga, promise u’ll get slapped like a BITCH
    Think Simmons & Embiid, I’ll be posted on ya block talkin trash w/ the 5th
    Not feeling

    Treat ya sleez w/ dope weave, now she sucks me off hard like a star
    I keep her head fly, she keeps her head pressed against my fly in the car
    OK.. I guess

    Gun in ya mouth, I never measure myself to these queer challengers
    Instead I’ll let the ‘piece open ya jaws up’ like some vernier calipers
    I've used calipers in Aerospace inspection before but this was just OK to me.. I don't like comparison punches with no concept

    Got the knife in the left but this right fist? It could end u so tragic
    I’ll ‘switch hands & hit u w/ 3 swipes’ like Han from return of the dragon
    Another comparison punch, no wit/concept..

    Ya bullshit don’t fly here homie, try to run & that heat WILL stop u
    I’ll have the sticks moving before you take off like an Aircraft marshal
    Comparison punch, no concept..

    Ya bitch gets banged out, who hasn’t smashed her box in my hood?
    No matter where that frequent, she gave her snatch away as much as she could
    I don't even know what you're trying to say here, weak closer.

    vs

    ur into nut hugging & butt touchin'.. gassed up & cant get enough of it
    I'm known to split the dutch, you're only known for getting dutch ovened
    funny but not hard.. decent opener

    he's no thug doing hits for cash, ur fully auto couldn't hit me in the belly
    last time he got a blue face to shoot he was just shitty with the semi
    don't really care for this

    I got axe to slash, graves need flowers to, I sell em' in a bundle
    my magnum opus is guns n roses, pussy, now welcome to the jungle
    ok w/a few tie ins, hard but not hard hitting.. decent

    my coat of arms is loaded, my pedigree is telling me to slam his chest
    he grew up ina house with 1 tooth brush aint the same as a family crest
    man this could have been worded so much better.. half points for the concept, poorly executed

    he'll say shit like "before I let the band die, I'll bring the tech in"
    this that gore, doe, cop O' era style - he can't even win without a weapon
    trying too hard and it doesn't work. And yes I know Tekken so I know what you're going for here..

    I aint losing to ryno the goat, ur highness has spoke
    Me Vs. Kings water under the bridge; Bash em up & died ina moat
    Uh.. no?

    NBA & gun bars. often he's pulling these; talking in full esteem..
    I predict the highlight of ur career will be a Washington bullets scheme
    This could have been done better.. it's kind of creative but not really insulting, which seems to be a theme in this verse

    listen sport, tiger, i can't be mad at'cha, it's all pitter patter
    i'm sure we'll still be friends after I take yo girl & "whip her snapper"!
    absolutely not


    This was a tough one to call for me.. Ryno was harder w/more swag but no real concepts.. Josh S. had more creativity yet lacked execution to the point it came across silly instead of hard. I guess I gotta go w/the harder of the two verses because of Ryno's opener.. he clinches this w/just enough creativity to counter his repetitive comparison punches.. and the added swag pushed it in his direction more. I'd really like to see both of you step it up a bit, this is a great season so put that extra effort in and be a bigger part of it.

    v/ Ryno

  6. #6
    BesT Blas's Avatar
    Join Date
    Feb 2019
    Posts
    385
    Battle Record
    31-1

    Re: LLL Week 3: Ryno (1-0) vs. Josh S. (1-1)

    Yeah u talk a big game homie, just wait until Ry gets a crack atchu
    I’ll keep that same energy & give it back twice fold, black panther suit
    the concept is ok but it has almost no hard hitting connection, the wording is just bleh
    U run w/ gorillas? Plz ya team full of carnies so I’m raising the shotty
    It’s like a date w/ a hottie, I’m expected to leave w/ a cpl animal bodies
    did not enjoy
    U gets no love from me nigga, promise u’ll get slapped like a BITCH
    Think Simmons & Embiid, I’ll be posted on ya block talkin trash w/ the 5th
    just simple self hype
    Treat ya sleez w/ dope weave, now she sucks me off hard like a star
    I keep her head fly, she keeps her head pressed against my fly in the car
    lolz funny but eh
    Gun in ya mouth, I never measure myself to these queer challengers
    Instead I’ll let the ‘piece open ya jaws up’ like some vernier calipers
    alright
    Got the knife in the left but this right fist? It could end u so tragic
    I’ll ‘switch hands & hit u w/ 3 swipes’ like Han from return of the dragon
    dont know the reference but it's so simple i can just assume it works which isn't great
    Ya bullshit don’t fly here homie, try to run & that heat WILL stop u
    I’ll have the sticks moving before you take off like an Aircraft marshal
    lolz i kinda like this
    Ya bitch gets banged out, who hasn’t smashed her box in my hood?
    No matter where that frequent, she gave her snatch away as much as she could
    cool wp this was pretty good, at first i thought the wording was kinda meh but its actually fine

    ..

    ur into nut hugging & butt touchin'.. gassed up & cant get enough of it
    I'm known to split the dutch, you're only known for getting dutch ovened
    lolzzz aight
    he's no thug doing hits for cash, ur fully auto couldn't hit me in the belly
    last time he got a blue face to shoot he was just shitty with the semi
    meh ok
    I got axe to slash, graves need flowers to, I sell em' in a bundle
    my magnum opus is guns n roses, pussy, now welcome to the jungle
    liked it
    my coat of arms is loaded, my pedigree is telling me to slam his chest
    he grew up ina house with 1 tooth brush aint the same as a family crest
    LMFAOOOOO i liked it
    he'll say shit like "before I let the band die, I'll bring the tech in"
    this that gore, doe, cop O' era style - he can't even win without a weapon
    ok
    I aint losing to ryno the goat, ur highness has spoke
    Me Vs. Kings water under the bridge; Bash em up & died ina moat
    i think the concept is really good but the connection was so obv
    NBA & gun bars. often he's pulling these; talking in full esteem..
    I predict the highlight of ur career will be a Washington bullets scheme
    meh pretty weak imo
    listen sport, tiger, i can't be mad at'cha, it's all pitter patter
    i'm sure we'll still be friends after I take yo girl & "whip her snapper"!
    good god this was horrific my man

    ..

    Well, there's no way around it, ryno was extreeeeemely simple with his bars, stuff started going better near the end with some cooler concepts and w/p but overall the start of the verse just seemed like some sort of keystyle with some very simple/hype stuff. Josh came rather consistent and had some funny/cool concepts, he clearly knows what he's doing. A few bars I didn't feel but overall a decent verse. Thought Josh took this, wasn't that close imo.

    v/ Josh

  7. #7
    HOF
    Join Date
    Jul 2005
    Age
    38
    Posts
    3,201
    Battle Record
    19-6
    Awards Legendary Member LLL Champion 1-2 Punch HW Champion LLL HOF

    Re: LLL Week 3: Ryno (1-0) vs. Josh S. (1-1)

    Yeah u talk a big game homie, just wait until Ry gets a crack atchu
    I’ll keep that same energy & give it back twice fold, black panther suit
    nice, this was a cool concept & good open
    U run w/ gorillas? Plz ya team full of carnies so I’m raising the shotty
    It’s like a date w/ a hottie, I’m expected to leave w/ a cpl animal bodies
    meh, dont like this one
    U gets no love from me nigga, promise u’ll get slapped like a BITCH
    Think Simmons & Embiid, I’ll be posted on ya block talkin trash w/ the 5th
    sorry man heres good swag to tis but im missing how the 5th ties into the concept
    Treat ya sleez w/ dope weave, now she sucks me off hard like a star
    I keep her head fly, she keeps her head pressed against my fly in the car
    dece... seen a lot of fly concepts over the years so this feels a bit tired
    Gun in ya mouth, I never measure myself to these queer challengers
    Instead I’ll let the ‘piece open ya jaws up’ like some vernier calipers
    cool attack line, solid - not great
    Got the knife in the left but this right fist? It could end u so tragic
    I’ll ‘switch hands & hit u w/ 3 swipes’ like Han from return of the dragon
    cool game concept.. this was worded well
    Ya bullshit don’t fly here homie, try to run & that heat WILL stop u
    I’ll have the sticks moving before you take off like an Aircraft marshal
    nahhhh, seen sticks/airplane/air traffic control shit done before
    Ya bitch gets banged out, who hasn’t smashed her box in my hood?
    No matter where that frequent, she gave her snatch away as much as she could
    hahaha dope... like the simple effective use of the wordplay, funny girl diss punch

    vs

    ur into nut hugging & butt touchin'.. gassed up & cant get enough of it
    I'm known to split the dutch, you're only known for getting dutch ovened
    lol.. decent, its funny
    he's no thug doing hits for cash, ur fully auto couldn't hit me in the belly
    last time he got a blue face to shoot he was just shitty with the semi
    ehhh , the bad multi doesnt help... nah dont lvoe the concept
    I got axe to slash, graves need flowers to, I sell em' in a bundle
    my magnum opus is guns n roses, pussy, now welcome to the jungle
    cool... like the cncept, good swag & this is worded well concetually, punch light tho - prob beter as a s&f bar tbh
    my coat of arms is loaded, my pedigree is telling me to slam his chest
    he grew up ina house with 1 tooth brush aint the same as a family crest
    ehhh, its just corny to me conceptually & the wrding isnt great
    he'll say shit like "before I let the band die, I'll bring the tech in"
    this that gore, doe, cop O' era style - he can't even win without a weapon
    capoera? cap/cop no, i duno this is creative but it just doesnt hit for me
    I aint losing to ryno the goat, ur highness has spoke
    Me Vs. Kings water under the bridge; Bash em up & died ina moat
    nah this is a miss
    NBA & gun bars. often he's pulling these; talking in full esteem..
    I predict the highlight of ur career will be a Washington bullets scheme
    can appreciate the personal attempt here, but this falls flat as its just not overly creative or dope.. very statementy, needed more
    listen sport, tiger, i can't be mad at'cha, it's all pitter patter
    i'm sure we'll still be friends after I take yo girl & "whip her snapper"!
    lol the worplay is cool but the execution here leaves a lot to be desired



    Not the best verses ive seen from either... but def have Ryno winning this, his opener and closer were by far my 2 fav lines of the battle, and to me he had more enjoyable concepts with less misses.... props to both

    Vote - Ryno
    "Sound stuff out guys" - Barcotic

  8. #8
    You've Earned a Custom Title! hello there's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jul 2011
    Posts
    1,272
    Battle Record
    1-9

    Re: LLL Week 3: Ryno (1-0) vs. Josh S. (1-1)

    Quote Originally Posted by Ryno View Post
    Shut up.

    Yeah u talk a big game homie, just wait until Ry gets a crack atchu
    I’ll keep that same energy & give it back twice fold, black panther suit
    I usually don't like these types of bars, but this was creative and done well.
    U run w/ gorillas? Plz ya team full of carnies so I’m raising the shotty
    It’s like a date w/ a hottie, I’m expected to leave w/ a cpl animal bodies
    Lol. This is cool
    U gets no love from me nigga, promise u’ll get slapped like a BITCH
    Think Simmons & Embiid, I’ll be posted on ya block talkin trash w/ the 5th
    Don't get this
    Treat ya sleez w/ dope weave, now she sucks me off hard like a star
    I keep her head fly, she keeps her head pressed against my fly in the car
    Ehhh hype bars get no love
    Gun in ya mouth, I never measure myself to these queer challengers
    Instead I’ll let the ‘piece open ya jaws up’ like some vernier calipers
    Don't pretend you didn't just Google this whole bar
    Got the knife in the left but this right fist? It could end u so tragic
    I’ll ‘switch hands & hit u w/ 3 swipes’ like Han from return of the dragon
    Coolish
    Ya bullshit don’t fly here homie, try to run & that heat WILL stop u
    I’ll have the sticks moving before you take off like an Aircraft marshal
    Ehh
    Ya bitch gets banged out, who hasn’t smashed her box in my hood?
    No matter where that frequent, she gave her snatch away as much as she could
    Don't love this.
    ...The GOAT
    Quote Originally Posted by Josh S. View Post
    ur into nut hugging & butt touchin'.. gassed up & cant get enough of it
    I'm known to split the dutch, you're only known for getting dutch ovened
    Ehh
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...EmUp-Blue-Wins

    he's no thug doing hits for cash, ur fully auto couldn't hit me in the belly
    last time he got a blue face to shoot he was just shitty with the semi
    Nope
    I got axe to slash, graves need flowers to, I sell em' in a bundle
    my magnum opus is guns n roses, pussy, now welcome to the jungle
    Not loving this
    my coat of arms is loaded, my pedigree is telling me to slam his chest
    he grew up ina house with 1 tooth brush aint the same as a family crest
    haha
    he'll say shit like "before I let the band die, I'll bring the tech in"
    this that gore, doe, cop O' era style - he can't even win without a weapon
    Yooo you missed a dope capoera punch here.
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...-6-3-king-wins

    I aint losing to ryno the goat, ur highness has spoke
    Me Vs. Kings water under the bridge; Bash em up & died ina moat
    Eh






    ect.. ect..

    NBA & gun bars. often he's pulling these; talking in full esteem..
    I predict the highlight of ur career will be a Washington bullets scheme
    Haha
    listen sport, tiger, i can't be mad at'cha, it's all pitter patter
    i'm sure we'll still be friends after I take yo girl & "whip her snapper"!
    Not loving this

    Vote: RYNO Josh had some good, fun bars but needs some time. We're in the same boat man, keep at it.

  9. #9
        
    Join Date
    Jun 2004
    Posts
    12,547
    Battle Record
    64-17
    Awards Legendary Battle SAP Champion 1-2 Season Champion FL Champion LLL Champion Haiku Champion OM HOF Legendary Member LLL Season Champion PC HOF

    Re: LLL Week 3: Ryno (1-0) vs. Josh S. (1-1)

    Quote Originally Posted by Ryno View Post

    Yeah u talk a big game homie, just wait until Ry gets a crack atchu
    I’ll keep that same energy & give it back twice fold, black panther suit
    decent
    U run w/ gorillas? Plz ya team full of carnies so I’m raising the shotty
    It’s like a date w/ a hottie, I’m expected to leave w/ a cpl animal bodies
    eh this misses for me
    U gets no love from me nigga, promise u’ll get slapped like a BITCH
    Think Simmons & Embiid, I’ll be posted on ya block talkin trash w/ the 5th
    ok
    Treat ya sleez w/ dope weave, now she sucks me off hard like a star
    I keep her head fly, she keeps her head pressed against my fly in the car
    lol ok
    Gun in ya mouth, I never measure myself to these queer challengers
    Instead I’ll let the ‘piece open ya jaws up’ like some vernier calipers
    not gonna lie, had to google lol cool bar tho
    Got the knife in the left but this right fist? It could end u so tragic
    I’ll ‘switch hands & hit u w/ 3 swipes’ like Han from return of the dragon
    eh
    Ya bullshit don’t fly here homie, try to run & that heat WILL stop u
    I’ll have the sticks moving before you take off like an Aircraft marshal
    ok
    Ya bitch gets banged out, who hasn’t smashed her box in my hood?
    No matter where that frequent, she gave her snatch away as much as she could
    definitely a used wp but decent flip

    ...The GOAT
    not feeling this one right here

    vs


    Quote Originally Posted by Josh S. View Post
    ur into nut hugging & butt touchin'.. gassed up & cant get enough of it
    I'm known to split the dutch, you're only known for getting dutch ovened
    eh not crazy about it
    he's no thug doing hits for cash, ur fully auto couldn't hit me in the belly
    last time he got a blue face to shoot he was just shitty with the semi
    nah
    I got axe to slash, graves need flowers to, I sell em' in a bundle
    my magnum opus is guns n roses, pussy, now welcome to the jungle
    decent jab
    my coat of arms is loaded, my pedigree is telling me to slam his chest
    he grew up ina house with 1 tooth brush aint the same as a family crest
    lol cool
    he'll say shit like "before I let the band die, I'll bring the tech in"
    this that gore, doe, cop O' era style - he can't even win without a weapon
    i like the creative attempt but didnt connect for me
    I aint losing to ryno the goat, ur highness has spoke
    Me Vs. Kings water under the bridge; Bash em up & died ina moat
    i like the idea but u needed to do a little more with it.
    NBA & gun bars. often he's pulling these; talking in full esteem..
    I predict the highlight of ur career will be a Washington bullets scheme
    again, nice idea just not executed harsh enough
    listen sport, tiger, i can't be mad at'cha, it's all pitter patter
    i'm sure we'll still be friends after I take yo girl & "whip her snapper"!
    i lol'd cant front
    cool battle. Josh, from week one to our battle was a big jump. guessing u were just shaking a little rust. ur concepts are pretty dope for the most part, the next thing u should work is being more harsh and direct with the angles u take on them and I think u could rack up some wins. Ryno had some cool bars, not his best verse but consistent enough and harsher execution.


    vote Ryno
    The Last Level

  10. #10
    You've Earned a Custom Title!
    Join Date
    Jul 2005
    Posts
    79

    Re: LLL Week 3: Ryno (1-0) vs. Josh S. (1-1)

    panther was aight, cool
    animal bodies was a miss
    embiid was light
    fly was okay
    had to google calipiers, not crazy ab it
    han was decent.. light
    aircraft was good, liked that shit
    freak went was solid wp

    vs

    opener was ok, light
    blueface wasnt feelin
    guns & roses was cool but more like a swag bar
    even tho family crest came off a lil corny i liked it alot
    wasnt feelin capoeira
    most was ok
    bullets is played n the second one ive seen fairly recently
    closer was funny

    surprised me here, last 2 lines took it for ry th0

  11. #11
        
    Join Date
    Jun 2004
    Posts
    12,547
    Battle Record
    64-17
    Awards Legendary Battle SAP Champion 1-2 Season Champion FL Champion LLL Champion Haiku Champion OM HOF Legendary Member LLL Season Champion PC HOF

    Re: LLL Week 3: Ryno (1-0) vs. Josh S. (1-1) - Open 4 Votes

    5-1
    The Last Level

Posting Rules

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •