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    LLL Week 3: $pitacular1 (1-1) vs. JEM (1-1)- OPEN 4 VOTES

    verses due: Thursday 11:59PST
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    Re: LLL Week 3: $pitacular1 (1-1) vs. JEM (1-1)

    20? Check.

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    Re: LLL Week 3: $pitacular1 (1-1) vs. JEM (1-1)

    20 it is.

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    Re: LLL Week 3: $pitacular1 (1-1) vs. JEM (1-1)

    Bitch I'll splatter your brains, the evidence they won't touch it.
    & they won't recognize your face cuz identify don't crush it
    I'll dishonor your whole family. you know Spit don't plan to stop.
    chivalry's dead.. but I still got your bitch sucking dick on camelot.
    I'm the Tony Stark of text, I ball so hard they call it violent.
    you're Captain America before the serum. aka the smallest private
    you can't deny it, I'ma giant who's always swift with the win
    the only time you got assets is when you try & lift at the gym.
    you were bad enough in text.. but your audio's even worse posing
    when I pull out my sig, I realized this lil juul ain't even worth smoking
    heard ya song, you tryin' get down.. I hustle, I'm really the hardest
    I'm bout come UPS & tracking numbers while your delivery's garbage
    Fucka JEM.. less than worthless is what a punk amount to
    you're barely semi-precious, gollum ain't even give a fuck about you
    you act hard, but bottom line.. it'll be the exit you still run to
    cuz I'll put your head on a spike like volleyball, bitch I Wilson you
    I think it was a big mistake when ya girl asked if she could do me
    now she won't leave me alone, & I swear harassment nothing to me.
    been around for years but still wack, you never focused ya style
    problem is, you ain't integrate you're a fan of mediocre & mild.
    Last edited by $pitacular; March 22nd, 2019 at 10:27 AM Reason: Typo, ok per JEM.

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    Re: LLL Week 3: $pitacular1 (1-1) vs. JEM (1-1)

    My new ways are shocking… kill em at home with no slug or heater
    Just put his finger to the plug like he was snitching on a drug dealer
    Changed his name to remind us of his place in the game, but shit bro
    If you got the prince pull, then dominated Spit down to only a $ymbol !
    Spit scared! Told him don’t call or Texas, I’m ready to connect w/ force
    The 1-2 has him twitching, arms doing crazy shit like Beto O’Rourke
    Bonkers how Dom saw ya cracks spit, & Dom made those cracks split
    Shit, he couldn’t believe it! Hands on his face like a fein for a crack hit
    But that’s a bad weekend, I’ma be the reason he’s never seen when
    I roll up slow and smoke spit on the low like the carburetor leaking !
    Last week was one-sided, but you got the full backing of every dude
    Shit… You Larry Csonka! For the hall of fame RB had to carry you.
    You were praised but now the board’s thinking what a fail! He gotta
    stop those ‘what in the name of God’ bars that got us saying Allah !
    Dropped a track & knew I wasn’t going back, that’s the truth though
    Spit… love isn’t enough, and that song made you invest in a studio?!
    Dog, put it together! Spend wisely! Get your bitch a brand new chin
    A face to tie up loose ends, at least perfume even if the twats a nuisance!
    I’ll knock him the fuck out, because I know I won’t win a split decision
    & if I do get robbed i’m stealing his life like his memoirs worth a million
    Last edited by JEM.; March 21st, 2019 at 05:17 PM

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    Re: LLL Week 3: $pitacular1 (1-1) vs. JEM (1-1)- OPEN 4 VOTES

    Spit
    Bitch I'll splatter your brains, the evidence they won't touch it.
    & they won't recognize your face cuz identify don't crush it
    Wps okay, a little forced
    I'll dishonor your whole family. you know Spit don't plan to stop.
    chivalry's dead.. but I still got your bitch sucking dick on camelot.
    This one works better
    I'm the Tony Stark of text, I ball so hard they call it violent.
    you're Captain America before the serum. aka the smallest private
    Lol
    you can't deny it, I'ma giant who's always swift with the win
    the only time you got assets is when you try & lift at the gym.
    Meh Wps not as great
    you were bad enough in text.. but your audio's even worse posing
    when I pull out my sig, I realized this lil juul ain't even worth smoking
    Nah, set ups a bit lazy too
    heard ya song, you tryin' get down.. I hustle, I'm really the hardest
    I'm bout come UPS & tracking numbers while your delivery's garbage
    Not feeling this, +delivery is played.
    Fucka JEM.. less than worthless is what a punk amount to
    you're barely semi-precious, gollum ain't even give a fuck about you
    Lol. not bad
    you act hard, but bottom line.. it'll be the exit you still run to
    cuz I'll put your head on a spike like volleyball, bitch I Wilson you
    Its well put together, but the wps old
    I think it was a big mistake when ya girl asked if she could to do me
    now she won't leave me alone, & I swear harassment nothing to me.
    Fire wp, setups a little off, (maybe what instead of if)
    been around for years but still wack, you never focused ya style
    problem is, you ain't integrate you're a fan of mediocre & mild.
    Again wps a little forced, good still
    Good wording, all came off pretty consistent easy to read and felt normal.
    Just a couple of little hiccups. Overall diggin the wps.


    JEM
    My new ways are shocking… kill em at home with no slug or heater
    Just put his finger to the plug like he was snitching on a drug dealer
    Hmm not sure, getting the electrocuted part, but dunno about plug/snitch
    Changed his name to remind us of his place in the game, but shit bro
    If you got the prince pull, then dominated Spit down to only a $ymbol !
    Again not to sure, is Dominate in the punch? Im getting the Prince/symbol part
    Spit scared! Told him don’t call or Texas, I’m ready to connect w/ force
    The 1-2 has him twitching, arms doing crazy shit like Beto O’Rourke
    Hmm, had to google, see now the texas setup, politics punch... but its just a comparison
    Bonkers how Dom saw ya cracks spit, & Dom made those cracks split
    Shit, he couldn’t believe it! Hands on his face like a fein for a crack hit
    Nah dont feel this one
    But that’s a bad weekend, I’ma be the reason he’s never seen when
    I roll up slow and smoke spit on the low like the carburetor leaking !
    Bit weird, but okay
    Last week was one-sided, but you got the full backing of every dude
    Shit… You Larry Csonka! For the hall of fame RB had to carry you.
    Had to google, its some American Football ref... I dont watch it
    You were praised but now the board’s thinking what a fail! He gotta
    stop those ‘what in the name of God’ bars that got us saying Allah !
    Dont like this, and wording is off
    Dropped a track & knew I wasn’t going back, that’s the truth though
    Spit… love isn’t enough, and that song made you invest in a studio?!
    Dont get the diss??
    Dog, put it together! Spend wisely! Get your bitch a brand new chin
    A face to tie up loose ends, at least perfume even if the twats a nuisance!
    Nah
    I’ll knock him the fuck out, because I know I won’t win a split decision
    & if I do get robbed i’m stealing his life like his memoirs worth a million
    Kinda okay
    Wasnt feeling a lot of this man, I think your wording/rhymes hurt your delivery,
    and put a little more focus on wordplays than references/statements


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    Re: LLL Week 3: $pitacular1 (1-1) vs. JEM (1-1)- OPEN 4 VOTES

    heard ya song, you tryin' get down.. I hustle, I'm really the hardest
    I'm bout come UPS & tracking numbers while your delivery's garbage
    I think it was a big mistake when ya girl asked if she could do me
    now she won't leave me alone, & I swear harassment nothing to me.

    really the only stand out bars..the Wilson/Camelot/iden ti fy bars are overused and done badly here...

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    Dog, put it together! Spend wisely! Get your bitch a brand new chin
    A face to tie up loose ends, at least perfume even if the twats a nuisance!

    ya verse just never went anywhere..kinda stagnant throughout...some of it didn't even rhyme really..

    V- Spit

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    Re: LLL Week 3: $pitacular1 (1-1) vs. JEM (1-1)- OPEN 4 VOTES

    Bitch I'll splatter your brains, the evidence they won't touch it.
    & they won't recognize your face cuz identify don't crush it
    Cool
    I'll dishonor your whole family. you know Spit don't plan to stop.
    chivalry's dead.. but I still got your bitch sucking dick on camelot.
    Camelot feels familiar but I like how you flipped it here
    I'm the Tony Stark of text, I ball so hard they call it violent.
    you're Captain America before the serum. aka the smallest private
    Like the idea. Not sold on the wording. It comes off to me as 'you are the smallest private' instead of 'you have the smallest privates'.
    you can't deny it, I'ma giant who's always swift with the win
    the only time you got assets is when you try & lift at the gym.
    LOL @ ass sets. This was cool.
    you were bad enough in text.. but your audio's even worse posing
    when I pull out my sig, I realized this lil juul ain't even worth smoking
    Pretty good here
    heard ya song, you tryin' get down.. I hustle, I'm really the hardest
    I'm bout come UPS & tracking numbers while your delivery's garbage
    Pretty good. I was pronouncing UPS as "you-pee-ess" but I can fuck w/ "ups". Like the tracking numbers wp. I wish you'd flipped with something besides 'delivery' - it's not the main wp/focus of the bar but it's a still a super played wp that took something from this for me
    Fucka JEM.. less than worthless is what a punk amount to
    you're barely semi-precious, gollum ain't even give a fuck about you
    heh, ok
    you act hard, but bottom line.. it'll be the exit you still run to
    cuz I'll put your head on a spike like volleyball, bitch I Wilson you
    not feeling this one. Wilson/will son doesn't have to be forced but it feels that way here IMO. Perhaps because I haven't seen someone talk about "I'll son you", "you got sonned" etc in a very long time. Also having it at the end of the line rhyming with 'still run to' made me read the emphasis on 'run' & 'sun' so it was "I will SON you" instead of "I WILL son you". The latter sounds a lot nearer to Wilson. Might've worked better if Wilson was at the start of the line and then flipped w/ volleyball spike after
    I think it was a big mistake when ya girl asked if she could do me
    now she won't leave me alone, & I swear harassment nothing to me.
    Niceeee. This is dope.
    been around for years but still wack, you never focused ya style
    problem is, you ain't integrate you're a fan of mediocre & mild.
    Dope again.




    My new ways are shocking… kill em at home with no slug or heater
    Just put his finger to the plug like he was snitching on a drug dealer
    Had to look up the plug slang, but this works and is creative
    Changed his name to remind us of his place in the game, but shit bro
    If you got the prince pull, then dominated Spit down to only a $ymbol !
    Set up well for what you were trying to do but the second line is a bit confused grammatically and didn't really work for me
    Spit scared! Told him don’t call or Texas, I’m ready to connect w/ force
    The 1-2 has him twitching, arms doing crazy shit like Beto O’Rourke
    the texas tie in was a bit out of place - 'don't call or text us' when everything else in the bar was just about you hitting him and what that'd do. The arms/ORourke thing was okayish
    Bonkers how Dom saw ya cracks spit, & Dom made those cracks split
    Shit, he couldn’t believe it! Hands on his face like a fein for a crack hit
    you cot damn right I did. hands on his face is alright, not super fresh though
    But that’s a bad weekend, I’ma be the reason he’s never seen when
    I roll up slow and smoke spit on the low like the carburetor leaking !
    all the connections are there but they just don't tie in together in a coherent fashion.
    Last week was one-sided, but you got the full backing of every dude
    Shit… You Larry Csonka! For the hall of fame RB had to carry you.
    RB = running back OK OK. Wp is alrightish. Needed a better set up for the punch
    You were praised but now the board’s thinking what a fail! He gotta
    stop those ‘what in the name of God’ bars that got us saying Allah !
    decent. Idea's cool, wording needs work for the punch
    Dropped a track & knew I wasn’t going back, that’s the truth though
    Spit… love isn’t enough, and that song made you invest in a studio?!
    Not bad
    Dog, put it together! Spend wisely! Get your bitch a brand new chin
    A face to tie up loose ends, at least perfume even if the twats a nuisance!
    Might be missing something. Is there a wp here?
    I’ll knock him the fuck out, because I know I won’t win a split decision
    & if I do get robbed i’m stealing his life like his memoirs worth a million
    mmmm okish. Creative.



    Spit takes this. His last two bars were the best of the battle and he was just generally better polished throughout. JEM was creative but wording wasn't quite up to scratch in a few places.

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    Re: LLL Week 3: $pitacular1 (1-1) vs. JEM (1-1)- OPEN 4 VOTES

    Spit
    Bitch I'll splatter your brains, the evidence they won't touch it.
    & they won't recognize your face cuz identify don't crush it
    cool... the setup and wording makes this hit to me, i didnt like it on first read but nah it works & is cool
    I'll dishonor your whole family. you know Spit don't plan to stop.
    chivalry's dead.. but I still got your bitch sucking dick on camelot.
    ehh the word association here is a bit ehh to me, but the wordplay and bar are funny
    I'm the Tony Stark of text, I ball so hard they call it violent.
    you're Captain America before the serum. aka the smallest private
    lol, a little corny imo but its smooth af
    you can't deny it, I'ma giant who's always swift with the win
    the only time you got assets is when you try & lift at the gym.
    ive seen this wordplay done befor so this wasnt as fresh or impactful to me
    you were bad enough in text.. but your audio's even worse posing
    when I pull out my sig, I realized this lil juul ain't even worth smoking
    lol niice, good personal and np this hit
    heard ya song, you tryin' get down.. I hustle, I'm really the hardest
    I'm bout come UPS & tracking numbers while your delivery's garbage
    dece... i appreciate the personal dig here i just dont like the play & this couldve been delivered better, no pun intended
    Fucka JEM.. less than worthless is what a punk amount to
    you're barely semi-precious, gollum ain't even give a fuck about you
    lol, good easy direct hit that has swag
    you act hard, but bottom line.. it'll be the exit you still run to
    cuz I'll put your head on a spike like volleyball, bitch I Wilson you
    ehh the wordplay and concept is old.. not enough of an enjoyable flip for a 10 yr old movie ref here
    I think it was a big mistake when ya girl asked if she could to do me
    now she won't leave me alone, & I swear harassment nothing to me.
    niiice.. this was dope, fresh and delivered well
    been around for years but still wack, you never focused ya style
    problem is, you ain't integrate you're a fan of mediocre & mild.
    ehhh i did disintegrate wp on NC in the Sc with a better concept.. like the delivery but still played to me


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    JEM
    My new ways are shocking… kill em at home with no slug or heater
    Just put his finger to the plug like he was snitching on a drug dealer
    ehh, putting his finger to a socket is a weird attack line imo.. dont love the meta either, this is a miss
    Changed his name to remind us of his place in the game, but shit bro
    If you got the prince pull, then dominated Spit down to only a $ymbol !
    prince pull ? i dunno sorry ive tried rapping my head around this and this isnt hitting
    Spit scared! Told him don’t call or Texas, I’m ready to connect w/ force
    The 1-2 has him twitching, arms doing crazy shit like Beto O’Rourke
    googled & this is a decent concept
    Bonkers how Dom saw ya cracks spit, & Dom made those cracks split
    Shit, he couldn’t believe it! Hands on his face like a fein for a crack hit
    loooove the set-up, but the punch and actual concept is pretty basic imo
    But that’s a bad weekend, I’ma be the reason he’s never seen when
    I roll up slow and smoke spit on the low like the carburetor leaking !
    okayish np
    Last week was one-sided, but you got the full backing of every dude
    Shit… You Larry Csonka! For the hall of fame RB had to carry you.
    nah this whole kindve HOF/RB punch has been done before, and more creatively
    You were praised but now the board’s thinking what a fail! He gotta
    stop those ‘what in the name of God’ bars that got us saying Allah !
    okay
    Dropped a track & knew I wasn’t going back, that’s the truth though
    Spit… love isn’t enough, and that song made you invest in a studio?!
    appreciate the personal attempt, funny jab
    Dog, put it together! Spend wisely! Get your bitch a brand new chin
    A face to tie up loose ends, at least perfume even if the twats a nuisance!
    nah not at all... i see ur playing off your last bar but this was just a miss
    I’ll knock him the fuck out, because I know I won’t win a split decision
    & if I do get robbed i’m stealing his life like his memoirs worth a million
    ehhh, baic comp punch



    Overall SPit you had a solid read with a couple bagers... a bit more up and down this week then weeks past imo - but some great wp concepts & funny lines... harrasment was fire

    JEM i dunno if it was the line limit Spit dictated this week or what, but the creativity and concepts this week were wayyyy worse then in weeks past... hey, it happens - but not your best showing imo.... props to both but Spit clearly took this to me

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    Re: LLL Week 3: $pitacular1 (1-1) vs. JEM (1-1)- OPEN 4 VOTES

    Bitch I'll splatter your brains, the evidence they won't touch it.
    & they won't recognize your face cuz identify don't crush it
    ...aite....
    I'll dishonor your whole family. you know Spit don't plan to stop.
    chivalry's dead.. but I still got your bitch sucking dick on camelot.
    ...seen this n flipped better...still good tho....
    I'm the Tony Stark of text, I ball so hard they call it violent.
    you're Captain America before the serum. aka the smallest private
    ...this is nice cuz imma marvel/comic book nerd...
    you can't deny it, I'ma giant who's always swift with the win
    the only time you got assets is when you try & lift at the gym.
    ...skrait wp n flip....
    you were bad enough in text.. but your audio's even worse posing
    when I pull out my sig, I realized this lil juul ain't even worth smoking
    ....dope.......
    heard ya song, you tryin' get down.. I hustle, I'm really the hardest
    I'm bout come UPS & tracking numbers while your delivery's garbage
    .....self hype but done in a way that's good.....
    Fucka JEM.. less than worthless is what a punk amount to
    you're barely semi-precious, gollum ain't even give a fuck about you
    ....fire....
    you act hard, but bottom line.. it'll be the exit you still run to
    cuz I'll put your head on a spike like volleyball, bitch I Wilson you
    ....played n coulda been flipped better.....
    I think it was a big mistake when ya girl asked if she could do me
    now she won't leave me alone, & I swear harassment nothing to me.
    ....wp n flip fire......
    been around for years but still wack, you never focused ya style
    problem is, you ain't integrate you're a fan of mediocre & mild.
    ...I used this wp but with a diff flip, takes some away from it but still aite......

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    My new ways are shocking… kill em at home with no slug or heater
    Just put his finger to the plug like he was snitching on a drug dealer
    ...creative n cool......
    Changed his name to remind us of his place in the game, but shit bro
    If you got the prince pull, then dominated Spit down to only a $ymbol !
    ...wording hurt this, concept there but wording is all over the place in the punchline..........
    Spit scared! Told him don’t call or Texas, I’m ready to connect w/ force
    The 1-2 has him twitching, arms doing crazy shit like Beto O’Rourke
    ....I remember beta O'Rourke doing crazy shit. I remember he lost to Ted Cruz lol....miss for me......
    Bonkers how Dom saw ya cracks spit, & Dom made those cracks split
    Shit, he couldn’t believe it! Hands on his face like a fein for a crack hit
    ....not feeling......
    But that’s a bad weekend, I’ma be the reason he’s never seen when
    I roll up slow and smoke spit on the low like the carburetor leaking !
    ....exhaust leaking woulda been better but it's a solid bar but still just ehh.....
    Last week was one-sided, but you got the full backing of every dude
    Shit… You Larry Csonka! For the hall of fame RB had to carry you.
    ....this is aite just feels like its missing something extra to give it that pop. Shoulda worded it so fullback tied in....
    You were praised but now the board’s thinking what a fail! He gotta
    stop those ‘what in the name of God’ bars that got us saying Allah !
    ...simple but not bad......
    Dropped a track & knew I wasn’t going back, that’s the truth though
    Spit… love isn’t enough, and that song made you invest in a studio?!
    ...lol...
    Dog, put it together! Spend wisely! Get your bitch a brand new chin
    A face to tie up loose ends, at least perfume even if the twats a nuisance!
    ...is perfume supposed to be a wp?....this a flat out miss.......
    I’ll knock him the fuck out, because I know I won’t win a split decision
    & if I do get robbed i’m stealing his life like his memoirs worth a million
    ....good, creative......



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    Re: LLL Week 3: $pitacular1 (1-1) vs. JEM (1-1)- OPEN 4 VOTES

    spit

    Bitch I'll splatter your brains, the evidence they won't touch it.
    & they won't recognize your face cuz identify don't crush it
    dope wp good direct punch nice sting

    I'll dishonor your whole family. you know Spit don't plan to stop.
    chivalry's dead.. but I still got your bitch sucking dick on camelot.
    seen this flipped before I liked the humor factor and shit but I felt u could've presented better wording

    I'm the Tony Stark of text, I ball so hard they call it violent.
    you're Captain America before the serum. aka the smallest private
    lmao I like this nice concept


    you can't deny it, I'ma giant who's always swift with the win
    the only time you got assets is when you try & lift at the gym.
    played wordplay but anyway didn't like this direction

    you were bad enough in text.. but your audio's even worse posing
    when I pull out my sig, I realized this lil juul ain't even worth smoking
    fucking dope like the concept with the flip off his name


    heard ya song, you tryin' get down.. I hustle, I'm really the hardest
    I'm bout come UPS & tracking numbers while your delivery's garbage
    nice

    Fucka JEM.. less than worthless is what a punk amount to
    you're barely semi-precious, gollum ain't even give a fuck about you
    dope nice wordplay

    you act hard, but bottom line.. it'll be the exit you still run to
    cuz I'll put your head on a spike like volleyball, bitch I Wilson you
    played

    I think it was a big mistake when ya girl asked if she could do me
    now she won't leave me alone, & I swear harassment nothing to me.
    lmao nice wordplay great humor factor

    been around for years but still wack, you never focused ya style
    problem is, you ain't integrate you're a fan of mediocre & mild.
    ok but ive seen the wp before

    Jem

    My new ways are shocking… kill em at home with no slug or heater
    Just put his finger to the plug like he was snitching on a drug dealer
    dope like the creative flip

    Changed his name to remind us of his place in the game, but shit bro
    If you got the prince pull, then dominated Spit down to only a $ymbol !
    didn't like how this was worded but dug the attempt

    Spit scared! Told him don’t call or Texas, I’m ready to connect w/ force
    The 1-2 has him twitching, arms doing crazy shit like Beto O’Rourke
    ok good concept

    Bonkers how Dom saw ya cracks spit, & Dom made those cracks split
    Shit, he couldn’t believe it! Hands on his face like a fein for a crack hit
    nah

    But that’s a bad weekend, I’ma be the reason he’s never seen when
    I roll up slow and smoke spit on the low like the carburetor leaking !
    I felt this was a dope metaphorical comparison

    Last week was one-sided, but you got the full backing of every dude
    Shit… You Larry Csonka! For the hall of fame RB had to carry you.
    felt this could've been worded better

    You were praised but now the board’s thinking what a fail! He gotta
    stop those ‘what in the name of God’ bars that got us saying Allah !

    light jab

    Dropped a track & knew I wasn’t going back, that’s the truth though
    Spit… love isn’t enough, and that song made you invest in a studio?!
    lol good personal


    Dog, put it together! Spend wisely! Get your bitch a brand new chin
    A face to tie up loose ends, at least perfume even if the twats a nuisance!
    miss


    I’ll knock him the fuck out, because I know I won’t win a split decision
    & if I do get robbed i’m stealing his life like his memoirs worth a million
    dope

    Well Spit had some real creative bars that juul line was dope af and some wps ive seen before. Jem couple good bars himself but wording hurt him in some areas.

    V/Spit more consistent and creative
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    Re: LLL Week 3: $pitacular1 (1-1) vs. JEM (1-1)- OPEN 4 VOTES

    Bitch I'll splatter your brains, the evidence they won't touch it.
    & they won't recognize your face cuz identify don't crush it
    I'm missing something here PM me please...
    I'll dishonor your whole family. you know Spit don't plan to stop.
    chivalry's dead.. but I still got your bitch sucking dick on camelot.
    seen this a few times... this was aight
    I'm the Tony Stark of text, I ball so hard they call it violent.
    you're Captain America before the serum. aka the smallest private
    not a fan of this
    you can't deny it, I'ma giant who's always swift with the win
    the only time you got assets is when you try & lift at the gym.
    i fuck with this
    you were bad enough in text.. but your audio's even worse posing
    when I pull out my sig, I realized this lil juul ain't even worth smoking
    dope personal
    heard ya song, you tryin' get down.. I hustle, I'm really the hardest
    I'm bout come UPS & tracking numbers while your delivery's garbage
    this is cool i see what you did
    Fucka JEM.. less than worthless is what a punk amount to
    you're barely semi-precious, gollum ain't even give a fuck about you
    i fuck with this
    you act hard, but bottom line.. it'll be the exit you still run to
    cuz I'll put your head on a spike like volleyball, bitch I Wilson you
    seen this done witht he WP but i liked this angle. savage
    I think it was a big mistake when ya girl asked if she could do me
    now she won't leave me alone, & I swear harassment nothing to me.
    Nice
    been around for years but still wack, you never focused ya style
    problem is, you ain't integrate you're a fan of mediocre & mild.
    meh

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    My new ways are shocking… kill em at home with no slug or heater
    Just put his finger to the plug like he was snitching on a drug dealer
    weird angle its cool tho
    Changed his name to remind us of his place in the game, but shit bro
    If you got the prince pull, then dominated Spit down to only a $ymbol !
    nah
    Spit scared! Told him don’t call or Texas, I’m ready to connect w/ force
    The 1-2 has him twitching, arms doing crazy shit like Beto O’Rourke
    I fuck with this
    Bonkers how Dom saw ya cracks spit, & Dom made those cracks split
    Shit, he couldn’t believe it! Hands on his face like a fein for a crack hit
    Nah basic punch i liked where you were going..was creative but the punch didnt hit for me
    But that’s a bad weekend, I’ma be the reason he’s never seen when
    I roll up slow and smoke spit on the low like the carburetor leaking !
    i liked this...
    Last week was one-sided, but you got the full backing of every dude
    Shit… You Larry Csonka! For the hall of fame RB had to carry you.
    not feelin this..needs more wit
    You were praised but now the board’s thinking what a fail! He gotta
    stop those ‘what in the name of God’ bars that got us saying Allah
    Nallah!
    Dropped a track & knew I wasn’t going back, that’s the truth though
    Spit… love isn’t enough, and that song made you invest in a studio?!
    this is decent at best...idk not really a fan bro
    Dog, put it together! Spend wisely! Get your bitch a brand new chin
    A face to tie up loose ends, at least perfume even if the twats a nuisance!
    no
    I’ll knock him the fuck out, because I know I won’t win a split decision
    & if I do get robbed i’m stealing his life like his memoirs worth a million
    Not a fan buddy


    Overall... Spit took this.. jem had a somewhat lackluster verse this week. spit had some misses to but he had more quotables. Jem needed to be wittier and harsher here.


    V/Spit

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    Re: LLL Week 3: $pitacular1 (1-1) vs. JEM (1-1)

    Quote Originally Posted by $pitacular1 View Post
    Bitch I'll splatter your brains, the evidence they won't touch it.
    & they won't recognize your face cuz identify don't crush it
    A little forced but this is cool
    I'll dishonor your whole family. you know Spit don't plan to stop.
    chivalry's dead.. but I still got your bitch sucking dick on camelot.
    Ehhh. I want to like this but the cam shit just appears out of nowhere
    I'm the Tony Stark of text, I ball so hard they call it violent.
    you're Captain America before the serum. aka the smallest private
    I don't love this as a punch
    you can't deny it, I'ma giant who's always swift with the win
    the only time you got assets is when you try & lift at the gym.
    Don't really love this
    you were bad enough in text.. but your audio's even worse posing
    when I pull out my sig, I realized this lil juul ain't even worth smoking
    I like the WP but I don't resonate with the punch cuz of your music tbh
    heard ya song, you tryin' get down.. I hustle, I'm really the hardest
    I'm bout come UPS & tracking numbers while your delivery's garbage
    I thought this was sick
    Fucka JEM.. less than worthless is what a punk amount to
    you're barely semi-precious, gollum ain't even give a fuck about you
    I like this concept. I don't LOVE the punch but it's creative
    you act hard, but bottom line.. it'll be the exit you still run to
    cuz I'll put your head on a spike like volleyball, bitch I Wilson you
    I don't love son bars
    I think it was a big mistake when ya girl asked if she could do me
    now she won't leave me alone, & I swear harassment nothing to me.
    Lol. Fuck you. This is dumb and cheap.
    been around for years but still wack, you never focused ya style
    problem is, you ain't integrate you're a fan of mediocre & mild.
    I don't love this
    Feedback is more negative than reality. Lots of good raw materials, but I honestly wasn't wowed with a ton of the punches. Better than most verses this week, but you know what I'm saying.

    Quote Originally Posted by JEM. View Post
    My new ways are shocking… kill em at home with no slug or heater
    Just put his finger to the plug like he was snitching on a drug dealer
    This is cool
    Changed his name to remind us of his place in the game, but shit bro
    If you got the prince pull, then dominated Spit down to only a $ymbol !
    Not sure about this one
    Spit scared! Told him don’t call or Texas, I’m ready to connect w/ force
    The 1-2 has him twitching, arms doing crazy shit like Beto O’Rourke
    Lol
    Bonkers how Dom saw ya cracks spit, & Dom made those cracks split
    Shit, he couldn’t believe it! Hands on his face like a fein for a crack hit
    Nah
    But that’s a bad weekend, I’ma be the reason he’s never seen when
    I roll up slow and smoke spit on the low like the carburetor leaking !
    This is cool
    Last week was one-sided, but you got the full backing of every dude
    Shit… You Larry Csonka! For the hall of fame RB had to carry you.
    Eh
    You were praised but now the board’s thinking what a fail! He gotta
    stop those ‘what in the name of God’ bars that got us saying Allah !
    Lol
    Dropped a track & knew I wasn’t going back, that’s the truth though
    Spit… love isn’t enough, and that song made you invest in a studio?!
    Haha
    Dog, put it together! Spend wisely! Get your bitch a brand new chin
    A face to tie up loose ends, at least perfume even if the twats a nuisance!
    No ty
    I’ll knock him the fuck out, because I know I won’t win a split decision
    & if I do get robbed i’m stealing his life like his memoirs worth a million
    Ehh
    Cool verse. More consistent than Spit but we have to count it out.

    VOTE: JEM Spit had a lot of cool shit. He had higher highs and lower lows. JEM just was more consistent, for me. And that won out. My fav bars were Spits probably, but JEM had 5ish v like 3ish I liked.

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    Re: LLL Week 3: $pitacular1 (1-1) vs. JEM (1-1)

    Quote Originally Posted by $pitacular1 View Post
    Bitch I'll splatter your brains, the evidence they won't touch it.
    & they won't recognize your face cuz identify don't crush it
    ok
    I'll dishonor your whole family. you know Spit don't plan to stop.
    chivalry's dead.. but I still got your bitch sucking dick on camelot.
    decent flip
    I'm the Tony Stark of text, I ball so hard they call it violent.
    you're Captain America before the serum. aka the smallest private
    eh this is ok.
    you can't deny it, I'ma giant who's always swift with the win
    the only time you got assets is when you try & lift at the gym.
    lol
    you were bad enough in text.. but your audio's even worse posing
    when I pull out my sig, I realized this lil juul ain't even worth smoking
    ooo this was dope af
    heard ya song, you tryin' get down.. I hustle, I'm really the hardest
    I'm bout come UPS & tracking numbers while your delivery's garbage
    dope wording, kind of a tired concept.
    Fucka JEM.. less than worthless is what a punk amount to
    you're barely semi-precious, gollum ain't even give a fuck about you
    lol
    you act hard, but bottom line.. it'll be the exit you still run to
    cuz I'll put your head on a spike like volleyball, bitch I Wilson you
    cool
    I think it was a big mistake when ya girl asked if she could do me
    now she won't leave me alone, & I swear harassment nothing to me.
    nah
    been around for years but still wack, you never focused ya style
    problem is, you ain't integrate you're a fan of mediocre & mild.
    ok.

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    Quote Originally Posted by JEM. View Post
    My new ways are shocking… kill em at home with no slug or heater
    Just put his finger to the plug like he was snitching on a drug dealer
    decent, would have liked u use this concept a little different. really dope idea
    Changed his name to remind us of his place in the game, but shit bro
    If you got the prince pull, then dominated Spit down to only a $ymbol !
    nah
    Spit scared! Told him don’t call or Texas, I’m ready to connect w/ force
    The 1-2 has him twitching, arms doing crazy shit like Beto O’Rourke
    eh ok
    Bonkers how Dom saw ya cracks spit, & Dom made those cracks split
    Shit, he couldn’t believe it! Hands on his face like a fein for a crack hit
    another cool idea, would have worked better without the simile
    But that’s a bad weekend, I’ma be the reason he’s never seen when
    I roll up slow and smoke spit on the low like the carburetor leaking !
    again, dope idea. could have been harder without the simile
    Last week was one-sided, but you got the full backing of every dude
    Shit… You Larry Csonka! For the hall of fame RB had to carry you.
    decent, set up needed work. should have said dickrode or something instead of "backing"
    You were praised but now the board’s thinking what a fail! He gotta
    stop those ‘what in the name of God’ bars that got us saying Allah !
    nah
    Dropped a track & knew I wasn’t going back, that’s the truth though
    Spit… love isn’t enough, and that song made you invest in a studio?!
    lol ok
    Dog, put it together! Spend wisely! Get your bitch a brand new chin
    A face to tie up loose ends, at least perfume even if the twats a nuisance!
    eh. i see what u were going for
    I’ll knock him the fuck out, because I know I won’t win a split decision
    & if I do get robbed i’m stealing his life like his memoirs worth a million
    good idea. ok execution
    jem u went too hard with the similes here. I really would have liked to see u word a lot of those concepts another way coz there were some dope ideas in there. i'm not against using similes, sometimes they hit hard, but imo thats last resort for wording. Spit went heavy on the wordplay and some were a little tired but as a whole it was definitely a more polished verse.

    vote SPit
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    Re: LLL Week 3: $pitacular1 (1-1) vs. JEM (1-1)- OPEN 4 VOTES

    8-1 Spit wins

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