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Thread: LLL Week 4 Championship: Dominate vs. King - OPEN FOR VOTES

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    LLL Week 4 Championship: Dominate vs. King - OPEN FOR VOTES

    verses due: Thursday 11:59PST
    Minimum Lines = 16 Lines
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    Extension: Up to opponent IF verse completed & posted/sent. Otherwise at the Moderators discretion.

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    Re: LLL Week 4 Championship: Dominate vs. King

    let's go 20?

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    Re: LLL Week 4 Championship: Dominate vs. King

    yessir
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    Re: LLL Week 4 Championship: Dominate vs. King

    You needed an extension LAST week you fat fuck…

    You’re the lamest, kid. Can’t believe ur trying that same old shit
    I’m scoffing at deLays. You’re doing that w/ a bag of potato chips
    & u w/ girls? Lmao… flirting w/ someone THAT fat’s fallacy
    The idea of someone hitting on King’s got me doubling up, no blackjack strategy
    Barc should’ve DQ’d em. He had 4 EXTRA DAYS to create his stuff
    Such a tardy slips by in contender matches only w/ permission to come late as fuck
    & even THEN he only won off hate votes – that Zelph is a fag of a guy
    If it weren’t for the Lip locking it up for ‘em he woulda kissed this battle goodbye
    Now how the helllll is he 63-14? His best bars are average as shit
    That rectifies logic … I can only assume all those battled were fixed
    Claim girls calling u daddy and that you’re balling thru clubs…
    That logic doesn’t hold water, fatty. At BEST a girl’s calling u ‘tubs’
    Lazy mind, lazy body. I see u struggling to prepare the writtens
    & it’s only fitting ur half-assin it … the same is true of any chair u sit in
    Go outside u pasty faggot – go see the sun and the pavement
    U look pallid’n like you spend allll ur time roleplaying one in ur basement
    I used to HATE your style, but lately I’ve seen you start to get better
    I couldn’t continue disliking … i.e. the truth is you’re garbage as ever
    Swap those boring ass concepts out. U can’t think what ur writin is boss
    Need an ‘exchange of ideas’ so bad.. at this pt we’re just hoping u’ll dialogue off

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    Re: LLL Week 4 Championship: Dominate vs. King

    He's a teacher

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    Thats it?

    They said u were Fresh! n In these Threads its rare to get credit...
    But boyyy u been rockin a cleaaan rep, n I gotta know....WHERE did u get it??
    I will make u quit life, teach the Teacher to never do this again
    Bet u misclassify body here, coz I'ma make it hard to recognize u as a man
    I'm the fucking king of RB, Dom. All I do is champ n ruin careers
    Ur NC's governor, u dont do shit n then make a run every two fuckin years
    Got carried to a NS champ, n no one cared what he had to say
    Ur lost, thinking u can navigate a champ match without Aero leading the way.
    Kill ur fam in shocking ways, u cant handle the trauma dude
    I just got that Wow factor, now watch how quick these cans'll departure crew
    Had high hopes to champ, now I gotta knock em down to earth
    Stompin on his verse. Only way this fag sees Bluer Spit is toppin off a smurf
    U hard? 'Tf is u talkin bout? Around cops u couldn't stop ur mouth
    This Aussie bitch'd sing so much he could sell out the Sydney Opera House
    Only tough in writing, n all his pre-written bars sound dumb common
    So Idgaf about the penny stocks, I just wanna grab the pump n dump on em
    We out here worryin bout 5 to 15's, one fuck up n we're history
    When Dom faces mandatory minimums, he didnt order enough for delivery
    The mag had u hyped. Shit felt like a dream but now ur wakin up
    Make u cry like ur 'amid teargas'...coz thats all that number one ranking was
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    Re: LLL Week 4 Championship: Dominate vs. King - OPEN FOR VOTES

    You’re the lamest, kid. Can’t believe ur trying that same old shit
    I’m scoffing at deLays. You’re doing that w/ a bag of potato chips
    had to make sure scoffing could be used for eating too, but as usual u are correct sir, cool start
    & u w/ girls? Lmao… flirting w/ someone THAT fat’s fallacy
    The idea of someone hitting on King’s got me doubling up, no blackjack strategy
    doubling down is the only blackjack strat im aware of, and if you were hitting on a pair of kings u wouldn't be winning in blackjack so i don't see it working either way, good concept tho
    Barc should’ve DQ’d em. He had 4 EXTRA DAYS to create his stuff
    Such a tardy slips by in contender matches only w/ permission to come late as fuck
    nice
    & even THEN he only won off hate votes – that Zelph is a fag of a guy
    If it weren’t for the Lip locking it up for ‘em he woulda kissed this battle goodbye
    zelph really is a massive faggot, cool stuff
    Now how the helllll is he 63-14? His best bars are average as shit
    That rectifies logic … I can only assume all those battled were fixed
    dopeeeeee
    Claim girls calling u daddy and that you’re balling thru clubs…
    That logic doesn’t hold water, fatty. At BEST a girl’s calling u ‘tubs’
    fire
    Lazy mind, lazy body. I see u struggling to prepare the writtens
    & it’s only fitting ur half-assin it … the same is true of any chair u sit in
    this was just literally too easy/simple..needed something more. it's ok tho lol
    Go outside u pasty faggot – go see the sun and the pavement
    U look pallid’n like you spend allll ur time roleplaying one in ur basement
    this is forced for me, apparently it might not be for you but nah
    I used to HATE your style, but lately I’ve seen you start to get better
    I couldn’t continue disliking … i.e. the truth is you’re garbage as ever
    cool wp/name flip.. felt like the connection could have been better but it was cool
    Swap those boring ass concepts out. U can’t think what ur writin is boss
    Need an ‘exchange of ideas’ so bad.. at this pt we’re just hoping u’ll dialogue off
    it sucks this concept was so dope because dialogue simply does not = dia or log for me, but ur aussie so i feel like i can't really judge it poorly based off that, that being said it was nice

    ..

    They said u were Fresh! n In these Threads its rare to get credit...
    But boyyy u been rockin a cleaaan rep, n I gotta know....WHERE did u get it??
    lol ok start
    I will make u quit life, teach the Teacher to never do this again
    Bet u misclassify body here, coz I'ma make it hard to recognize u as a man
    god that connection could have been better like "the coroners won't even recognize him" or something like that, but this wp/concept was tight
    I'm the fucking king of RB, Dom. All I do is champ n ruin careers
    Ur NC's governor, u dont do shit n then make a run every two fuckin years
    hah simple but cool
    Got carried to a NS champ, n no one cared what he had to say
    Ur lost, thinking u can navigate a champ match without Aero leading the way.
    aero stuff is so played but this personal flip was reasonable
    Kill ur fam in shocking ways, u cant handle the trauma dude
    I just got that Wow factor, now watch how quick these cans'll departure crew
    do not understand the connection between wow factor & departure crew, plz pm explanation before i vote
    EDIT:: after now knowing that wow air is a air travel company that just shut down a bunch of peoples flights without warning this is cool but a bit of the reach calling a company called wow air, just "wow"

    Had high hopes to champ, now I gotta knock em down to earth
    Stompin on his verse. Only way this fag sees Bluer Spit is toppin off a smurf
    this connection is just so stupid and u could have really made this concept dope but i just don't think im sucking a smurfs dick makes it a hard hitting punch/connection man
    U hard? 'Tf is u talkin bout? Around cops u couldn't stop ur mouth
    This Aussie bitch'd sing so much he could sell out the Sydney Opera House
    simple but effective
    Only tough in writing, n all his pre-written bars sound dumb common
    So Idgaf about the penny stocks, I just wanna grab the pump n dump on em
    holy fuck this was so dope, LOTB
    We out here worryin bout 5 to 15's, one fuck up n we're history
    When Dom faces mandatory minimums, he didnt order enough for delivery
    lmaoooooo light but cool man
    The mag had u hyped. Shit felt like a dream but now ur wakin up
    Make u cry like ur 'amid teargas'...coz thats all that number one ranking was
    holy fuck, fire again

    ..

    yeah need explanation from king but this is super close imo.. will edit vote when he explains it to me

    EDIT:: dom had the usual dope verse but king came slightly more dope to me with LOTB and LOTB runner up, after reading doms verse i thought king had no chance but i was wrong

    v/ king
    Last edited by Blas; March 29th, 2019 at 09:42 AM

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    Re: LLL Week 4 Championship: Dominate vs. King - OPEN FOR VOTES

    You’re the lamest, kid. Can’t believe ur trying that same old shit
    I’m scoffing at deLays. You’re doing that w/ a bag of potato chips
    ....cool, good personal tie in....
    & u w/ girls? Lmao… flirting w/ someone THAT fat’s fallacy
    The idea of someone hitting on King’s got me doubling up, no blackjack strategy
    ....it would be double down on 2 kings if they're ur first 2 cards, like the concept just needed rewording...
    Barc should’ve DQ’d em. He had 4 EXTRA DAYS to create his stuff
    Such a tardy slips by in contender matches only w/ permission to come late as fuck
    ....nice wp personal tie in..... @Kill Spree start aggravating king about dropping late lol.....
    & even THEN he only won off hate votes – that Zelph is a fag of a guy
    If it weren’t for the Lip locking it up for ‘em he woulda kissed this battle goodbye
    ...lol nice.....
    Now how the helllll is he 63-14? His best bars are average as shit
    That rectifies logic … I can only assume all those battled were fixed
    ...rec defies logic, fire wp.....
    Claim girls calling u daddy and that you’re balling thru clubs…
    That logic doesn’t hold water, fatty. At BEST a girl’s calling u ‘tubs’
    ...lol aite...
    Lazy mind, lazy body. I see u struggling to prepare the writtens
    & it’s only fitting ur half-assin it … the same is true of any chair u sit in
    ....lmao liking the comedy bars.....
    Go outside u pasty faggot – go see the sun and the pavement
    U look pallid’n like you spend allll ur time roleplaying one in ur basement
    ...shoulda been 'ur moms basement' imo but this is niiiiice......
    I used to HATE your style, but lately I’ve seen you start to get better
    I couldn’t continue disliking … i.e. the truth is you’re garbage as ever
    ...this lie king/disliking. Nice.....
    Swap those boring ass concepts out. U can’t think what ur writin is boss
    Need an ‘exchange of ideas’ so bad.. at this pt we’re just hoping u’ll dialogue off
    ...die or log/dialogue, good closer.....

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    Thats it?

    They said u were Fresh! n In these Threads its rare to get credit...
    But boyyy u been rockin a cleaaan rep, n I gotta know....WHERE did u get it??
    ....aite start...
    I will make u quit life, teach the Teacher to never do this again
    Bet u misclassify body here, coz I'ma make it hard to recognize u as a man
    ....dope personal wp, flip coulda been tweaked but this is dope.....
    I'm the fucking king of RB, Dom. All I do is champ n ruin careers
    Ur NC's governor, u dont do shit n then make a run every two fuckin years
    ....simple but it hit imo, good wording.....
    Got carried to a NS champ, n no one cared what he had to say
    Ur lost, thinking u can navigate a champ match without Aero leading the way.
    ....ehhhh I used a similar punch vs aero in our battle. Still a decent personal....
    Kill ur fam in shocking ways, u cant handle the trauma dude
    I just got that Wow factor, now watch how quick these cans'll departure crew
    ....depart your/departure, I dont see the tie in or connection tho between wow factor and cans'll departure crew, now I know Wow air was a company that shut down n let everyone go with no warning this woulda been dope reworded, referring to the company as just wow is a no go......
    Had high hopes to champ, now I gotta knock em down to earth
    Stompin on his verse. Only way this fag sees Bluer Spit is toppin off a smurf
    ....cool personal wp, weak flip. Smurfs, really lol.........
    U hard? 'Tf is u talkin bout? Around cops u couldn't stop ur mouth
    This Aussie bitch'd sing so much he could sell out the Sydney Opera House
    ....simple but aite. No miss but not a good hit......
    Only tough in writing, n all his pre-written bars sound dumb common
    So Idgaf about the penny stocks, I just wanna grab the pump n dump on em
    .....niiiiice.....
    We out here worryin bout 5 to 15's, one fuck up n we're history
    When Dom faces mandatory minimums, he didnt order enough for delivery
    .....lol I like humor bars.......
    The mag had u hyped. Shit felt like a dream but now ur wakin up
    Make u cry like ur 'amid teargas'...coz thats all that number one ranking was
    ......dope......


    Overall: I think dom had a slightly better verse with a couple harder hitting punches. Close battle could go either way.

    Dope shit ya'll


    V. Dominatrix
    Last edited by A. Diction; March 29th, 2019 at 11:11 AM

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    Re: LLL Week 4 Championship: Dominate vs. King - OPEN FOR VOTES

    You’re the lamest, kid. Can’t believe ur trying that same old shit
    I’m scoffing at deLays. You’re doing that w/ a bag of potato chips
    something's missing from this.. doesn't come across as hard or dope to me. not your usual caliber
    & u w/ girls? Lmao… flirting w/ someone THAT fat’s fallacy
    The idea of someone hitting on King’s got me doubling up, no blackjack strategy
    concept is good here
    Barc should’ve DQ’d em. He had 4 EXTRA DAYS to create his stuff
    Such a tardy slips by in contender matches only w/ permission to come late as fuck
    Harsh and personal
    & even THEN he only won off hate votes – that Zelph is a fag of a guy
    If it weren’t for the Lip locking it up for ‘em he woulda kissed this battle goodbye
    good, personal
    Now how the helllll is he 63-14? His best bars are average as shit
    That rectifies logic … I can only assume all those battled were fixed
    wp concept is nice, wording is just OK to me, not hard hitting
    Claim girls calling u daddy and that you’re balling thru clubs…
    That logic doesn’t hold water, fatty. At BEST a girl’s calling u ‘tubs’
    logic twice in a row? not sure what's going on here but I feel like your wording is really off this week, & I don't like this punch
    Lazy mind, lazy body. I see u struggling to prepare the writtens
    & it’s only fitting ur half-assin it … the same is true of any chair u sit in
    this one was just OK
    Go outside u pasty faggot – go see the sun and the pavement
    U look pallid’n like you spend allll ur time roleplaying one in ur basement
    nice
    I used to HATE your style, but lately I’ve seen you start to get better
    I couldn’t continue disliking … i.e. the truth is you’re garbage as ever
    a weaker dis play than others I've seen lately IMO
    Swap those boring ass concepts out. U can’t think what ur writin is boss
    Need an ‘exchange of ideas’ so bad.. at this pt we’re just hoping u’ll dialogue off
    a little of a stretch but if you say it out loud w/swag it works.. I liked it

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    They said u were Fresh! n In these Threads its rare to get credit...
    But boyyy u been rockin a cleaaan rep, n I gotta know....WHERE did u get it??
    haha this was a little simple but funny
    I will make u quit life, teach the Teacher to never do this again
    Bet u misclassify body here, coz I'ma make it hard to recognize u as a man
    daaamn
    I'm the fucking king of RB, Dom. All I do is champ n ruin careers
    Ur NC's governor, u dont do shit n then make a run every two fuckin years
    ouch
    Got carried to a NS champ, n no one cared what he had to say
    Ur lost, thinking u can navigate a champ match without Aero leading the way.
    nice personal but there wasn't enough here to make it witty IMO
    Kill ur fam in shocking ways, u cant handle the trauma dude
    I just got that Wow factor, now watch how quick these cans'll departure crew
    eh.. nah
    Had high hopes to champ, now I gotta knock em down to earth
    Stompin on his verse. Only way this fag sees Bluer Spit is toppin off a smurf
    lmao
    U hard? 'Tf is u talkin bout? Around cops u couldn't stop ur mouth
    This Aussie bitch'd sing so much he could sell out the Sydney Opera House
    a little too simple, but not bad, just not dope
    Only tough in writing, n all his pre-written bars sound dumb common
    So Idgaf about the penny stocks, I just wanna grab the pump n dump on em
    haha wow
    We out here worryin bout 5 to 15's, one fuck up n we're history
    When Dom faces mandatory minimums, he didnt order enough for delivery
    this isn't a punch. like, he didn't order enough pizza? I mean... just no
    The mag had u hyped. Shit felt like a dream but now ur wakin up
    Make u cry like ur 'amid teargas'...coz thats all that number one ranking was
    this one works.. similar to Dom's closer.. a little of a stretch but out loud, ok

    I have to admit.. I thought this was going to be a one-sided slaughter because honestly I think Dom's one of the best active battler's there is.. top 3 for sure.. but this week's verse.. apparently Dom has his ups and downs like the rest of us.. but I'm still not ready to knock him down a peg just because of one week where he wasn't flawless, especially after that ass whooping he gave me (4TC suckas!) BUT.. King really, really surprised me here.. I didn't think he could be consistent enought to take this.. there were just enough stingers in there to pull it off.. but I still feel like Dom beat himself here.. King had a couple that were like, nah... Dom's wording was just off this week, and using logic in the execution of two punches in a row really drove that feeling home.. I got King taking this in what I would consider an upset tbh.

    DOPE battle though guys, seriously, props to both for showing up like that

    And King that Bluer Spit line was fucking laughs bro

    v/ King

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    Re: LLL Week 4 Championship: Dominate vs. King - OPEN FOR VOTES

    Dom:
    Delays/ De Lays was alright, dont ussually like the 'de' 'da' flips. pers angle was cool
    The hitting King missed a lil with blackjack terminology, coulda changed
    Tardy/retard/late was cool, again with the pers, but coulda had a retard connection
    Lip-locking/Zelph was pretty dope. relevant
    rectifys was dope wp. Dunno how it dont need the d, just works
    Tubs, wasnt feeling this one
    Half assed was jut ok
    Palladin was fuckn dope
    Disliking/dis lie king was Dope
    Didnt like Dialog

    King:
    Clean Rep, seems soft. maybe you needed a stealing connection or something
    Missclassify is smooth AF
    Govenor was good pers, not hard tho
    Again with the Aero
    Didnt like departure
    Lol at smurf, to old man, I remember a blue moon/smurfs asshole line from 04
    Opera house was alright, sing/dob coulda had more
    Penny stocks/pen he stocks was dope, if a lil awkward
    delivery was just ok, tad weak but lols
    Amid teargas/ A mid-tier gas, cant get the gas to work but pretty nice

    Nice read Ive got Dom with harder punches.

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    Re: LLL Week 4 Championship: Dominate vs. King - OPEN FOR VOTES

    Dom
    You’re the lamest, kid. Can’t believe ur trying that same old shit
    I’m scoffing at deLays. You’re doing that w/ a bag of potato chips
    Nah
    & u w/ girls? Lmao… flirting w/ someone THAT fat’s fallacy
    The idea of someone hitting on King’s got me doubling up, no blackjack strategy
    Lines goes on too long
    Barc should’ve DQ’d em. He had 4 EXTRA DAYS to create his stuff
    Such a tardy slips by in contender matches only w/ permission to come late as fuck
    Like the flip but again, line is a little too long
    & even THEN he only won off hate votes – that Zelph is a fag of a guy
    If it weren’t for the Lip locking it up for ‘em he woulda kissed this battle goodbye
    Nah
    Now how the helllll is he 63-14? His best bars are average as shit
    That rectifies logic … I can only assume all those battled were fixed
    Nah
    Claim girls calling u daddy and that you’re balling thru clubs…
    That logic doesn’t hold water, fatty. At BEST a girl’s calling u ‘tubs’
    Lol
    Lazy mind, lazy body. I see u struggling to prepare the writtens
    & it’s only fitting ur half-assin it … the same is true of any chair u sit in
    Killing the fat jokes now
    Go outside u pasty faggot – go see the sun and the pavement
    U look pallid’n like you spend allll ur time roleplaying one in ur basement
    Flip was good, execution could use work
    I used to HATE your style, but lately I’ve seen you start to get better
    I couldn’t continue disliking … i.e. the truth is you’re garbage as ever
    Decent
    Swap those boring ass concepts out. U can’t think what ur writin is boss
    Need an ‘exchange of ideas’ so bad.. at this pt we’re just hoping u’ll dialogue off
    Decent ender

    King
    They said u were Fresh! n In these Threads its rare to get credit...
    But boyyy u been rockin a cleaaan rep, n I gotta know....WHERE did u get it??
    Lol.. decent
    I will make u quit life, teach the Teacher to never do this again
    Bet u misclassify body here, coz I'ma make it hard to recognize u as a man
    Shit didn't even rhyme, King.
    I'm the fucking king of RB, Dom. All I do is champ n ruin careers
    Ur NC's governor, u dont do shit n then make a run every two fuckin years
    Good
    Got carried to a NS champ, n no one cared what he had to say
    Ur lost, thinking u can navigate a champ match without Aero leading the way.
    Eh
    Kill ur fam in shocking ways, u cant handle the trauma dude
    I just got that Wow factor, now watch how quick these cans'll departure crew
    Decent scheme
    Had high hopes to champ, now I gotta knock em down to earth
    Stompin on his verse. Only way this fag sees Bluer Spit is toppin off a smurf
    Cool concept, not bad execution
    U hard? 'Tf is u talkin bout? Around cops u couldn't stop ur mouth
    This Aussie bitch'd sing so much he could sell out the Sydney Opera House
    Decent
    Only tough in writing, n all his pre-written bars sound dumb common
    So Idgaf about the penny stocks, I just wanna grab the pump n dump on em
    Fire af.
    We out here worryin bout 5 to 15's, one fuck up n we're history
    When Dom faces mandatory minimums, he didnt order enough for delivery
    Not bad
    The mag had u hyped. Shit felt like a dream but now ur wakin up
    Make u cry like ur 'amid teargas'...coz thats all that number one ranking was
    Tighten 'em rhyme schemes up, shit is sloppy



    Battle was alright. I think Dom's tunnel vision focus on King's weight was a little much and some bars went on longer than they should have, taking the 'oomph' out of the punch. Rhymes were clean, although execution was slightly off. King had a nice readability to his. Concise format, although some shit rhymes. Your focus was more generalized and flipping different angles. If I had to vote, it'd be King because overall I felt his lines were hitting harder and resonating more than what Dom brought. His overall approach packed more of a sting in my eyes.


    V/ King



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    Re: LLL Week 4 Championship: Dominate vs. King - OPEN FOR VOTES

    You’re the lamest, kid. Can’t believe ur trying that same old shit
    I’m scoffing at deLays. You’re doing that w/ a bag of potato chips
    Barc should’ve DQ’d em. He had 4 EXTRA DAYS to create his stuff
    Such a tardy slips by in contender matches only w/ permission to come late as fuck
    & even THEN he only won off hate votes – that Zelph is a fag of a guy
    If it weren’t for the Lip locking it up for ‘em he woulda kissed this battle goodbye
    Now how the helllll is he 63-14? His best bars are average as shit
    That rectifies logic … I can only assume all those battled were fixed
    Claim girls calling u daddy and that you’re balling thru clubs…
    That logic doesn’t hold water, fatty. At BEST a girl’s calling u ‘tubs’
    Lazy mind, lazy body. I see u struggling to prepare the writtens
    & it’s only fitting ur half-assin it … the same is true of any chair u sit in
    I used to HATE your style, but lately I’ve seen you start to get better
    I couldn’t continue disliking … i.e. the truth is you’re garbage as ever
    VS
    I will make u quit life, teach the Teacher to never do this again
    Bet u misclassify body here, coz I'ma make it hard to recognize u as a man
    I'm the fucking king of RB, Dom. All I do is champ n ruin careers
    Ur NC's governor, u dont do shit n then make a run every two fuckin years
    Kill ur fam in shocking ways, u cant handle the trauma dude
    I just got that Wow factor, now watch how quick these cans'll departure crew
    Had high hopes to champ, now I gotta knock em down to earth
    Stompin on his verse. Only way this fag sees Bluer Spit is toppin off a smurf
    Only tough in writing, n all his pre-written bars sound dumb common
    So Idgaf about the penny stocks, I just wanna grab the pump n dump on em
    We out here worryin bout 5 to 15's, one fuck up n we're history
    When Dom faces mandatory minimums, he didnt order enough for delivery
    The mag had u hyped. Shit felt like a dream but now ur wakin up
    Make u cry like ur 'amid teargas'...coz thats all that number one ranking was

    v/King...another dope battle this week. I think King had lotb w/ the tear gas line.
    honestly this could go either way but im leaning his way. Good shit from both

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    Re: LLL Week 4 Championship: Dominate vs. King - OPEN FOR VOTES

    King
    They said u were Fresh! n In these Threads its rare to get credit...
    But boyyy u been rockin a cleaaan rep, n I gotta know....WHERE did u get it??
    ehhh, ok
    I will make u quit life, teach the Teacher to never do this again
    Bet u misclassify body here, coz I'ma make it hard to recognize u as a man
    dope
    I'm the fucking king of RB, Dom. All I do is champ n ruin careers
    Ur NC's governor, u dont do shit n then make a run every two fuckin years
    good
    Got carried to a NS champ, n no one cared what he had to say
    Ur lost, thinking u can navigate a champ match without Aero leading the way
    good again
    Kill ur fam in shocking ways, u cant handle the trauma dude
    I just got that Wow factor, now watch how quick these cans'll departure crew
    miss
    Had high hopes to champ, now I gotta knock em down to earth
    Stompin on his verse. Only way this fag sees Bluer Spit is toppin off a smurf
    lol wtf, i guess this was decent
    U hard? 'Tf is u talkin bout? Around cops u couldn't stop ur mouth
    This Aussie bitch'd sing so much he could sell out the Sydney Opera House
    ok
    Only tough in writing, n all his pre-written bars sound dumb common
    So Idgaf about the penny stocks, I just wanna grab the pump n dump on em
    dope
    We out here worryin bout 5 to 15's, one fuck up n we're history
    When Dom faces mandatory minimums, he didnt order enough for delivery
    lol cool
    The mag had u hyped. Shit felt like a dream but now ur wakin up
    Make u cry like ur 'amid teargas'...coz thats all that number one ranking was
    dope

    6 gd punches
    3 jabs
    1 miss


    Quote Originally Posted by Dominate View Post
    You’re the lamest, kid. Can’t believe ur trying that same old shit
    I’m scoffing at deLays. You’re doing that w/ a bag of potato chips
    lol good
    & u w/ girls? Lmao… flirting w/ someone THAT fat’s fallacy
    The idea of someone hitting on King’s got me doubling up, no blackjack strategy
    coo
    Barc should’ve DQ’d em. He had 4 EXTRA DAYS to create his stuff
    Such a tardy slips by in contender matches only w/ permission to come late as fuck
    ouch, nice
    & even THEN he only won off hate votes – that Zelph is a fag of a guy
    If it weren’t for the Lip locking it up for ‘em he woulda kissed this battle goodbye
    true lol this is dope
    Now how the helllll is he 63-14? His best bars are average as shit
    That rectifies logic … I can only assume all those battled were fixed
    ok
    Claim girls calling u daddy and that you’re balling thru clubs…
    That logic doesn’t hold water, fatty. At BEST a girl’s calling u ‘tubs’
    lol
    Lazy mind, lazy body. I see u struggling to prepare the writtens
    & it’s only fitting ur half-assin it … the same is true of any chair u sit in
    ok at best
    Go outside u pasty faggot – go see the sun and the pavement
    U look pallid’n like you spend allll ur time roleplaying one in ur basemen
    k
    I used to HATE your style, but lately I’ve seen you start to get better
    I couldn’t continue disliking … i.e. the truth is you’re garbage as ever
    cool
    Swap those boring ass concepts out. U can’t think what ur writin is boss
    Need an ‘exchange of ideas’ so bad.. at this pt we’re just hoping u’ll dialogue off
    i already did a dialogue wp + urs is forced

    6 gd punches
    3 jabs
    1 miss
    v/hof nom
    ill be seeing one of u soon

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    Re: LLL Week 4 Championship: Dominate vs. King - OPEN FOR VOTES

    @Barcotic nah pick a winner
    Now I am become death; destroyer of worlds.

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    Re: LLL Week 4 Championship: Dominate vs. King - OPEN FOR VOTES

    Quote Originally Posted by Useless View Post
    @Barcotic nah pick a winner
    foh, i left feed. cant pick a winner, nor do i have to

    delete it if its not gd enuff

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    Re: LLL Week 4 Championship: Dominate vs. King - OPEN FOR VOTES

    Quote Originally Posted by Barcotic View Post
    foh, i left feed

    delete it if its not gd enuff
    The feeds good and appreciated but 4tc pick a winner. Someone's gotta take it.

    @Allen Knight @EXalted @Orc @Blue Bayou @Kill Spree @Clout @Resin M-I-C
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