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    LLL Week 5 Contendership Match: Exalted (3-1) vs. Ryno (2-0) - OPEN FOR VOTES

    verses due: Thursday 11:59PST
    Minimum Lines = 14 Lines
    Maximum Lines = 24 Lines



    Extension: Up to opponent IF verse completed & posted/sent. Otherwise at the Moderators discretion.

    VOTING CLOSES SUNDAY NIGHT/MONDAY MORNING
    BATTLES SET SHORTLY AFTER!


    2 No-Shows = Season Ban

    NO BITING OR RECYCLING!!!!
    Biting results in a SEASON BAN
    Recycle Once = DQ
    RECYCLE TWICE = BANNED FOR SEASON

    Edits:
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    Second person can't edit after first vote


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    Re: LLL Week 5 Contendership Match: Exalted (3-1) vs. Ryno (2-0)

    16...

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    Re: LLL Week 5 Contendership Match: Exalted (3-1) vs. Ryno (2-0)

    14.

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    Re: LLL Week 5 Contendership Match: Exalted (3-1) vs. Ryno (2-0)

    @EXalted

    Ryno sent me 16.
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    Re: LLL Week 5 Contendership Match: Exalted (3-1) vs. Ryno (2-0)

    Quote Originally Posted by Blue Bayou View Post
    @EXalted

    Ryno sent me 16.
    I'll do 16. Haven't began to write yet

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    Re: LLL Week 5 Contendership Match: Exalted (3-1) vs. Ryno (2-0)

    ext till tomorrow if poss.ible

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    Re: LLL Week 5 Contendership Match: Exalted (3-1) vs. Ryno (2-0) - EXT

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...4-Cypher/page2

    Quote Originally Posted by Reef Flex about biting from smack battles View Post
    bash is a biter bro. U can’t tell me nothing bout it

    It’s the damn wording You choose stop lying

    That was 30 minutes of research homie u gonna dig this hole or what?

    Let the community decide? They already did u just keep changing names and playing games
    Access denied! after that bite the link showed he bends the truth..
    Ripens w/o 'Permission from URL'. should've known that shit's Forbidden Fruit
    Listen youth. Shots leave ur mind blown. You'll need a fortified zone
    Homie diiie slow – see Metal 'Engrain in Ry Dome' &&& make a Storage Silo
    Biting had this fag changing names...Bash wasn't the worst exposed
    Bad news spreads fast, you've washed hands of more Dirty Handles than a Germaphobe
    Buck ur stance. Give my goons the hand signal like they're up to bat..
    We Touchin Caps. PUTTIN one in each knee... have ya doin the Butterfly Dance
    w/ ya girl we record sex alll the time. together ya'll never did thrive..
    & if Extremophile... deeep down it'd leave ya in a condition you'd barely survive
    For'a band she'll do ANYTHING fam...even convulse during a sloppy suck
    She choke on dick til Foam Rolls down my balls...a tension release cuz i'm Knotted Up
    Loves unique. Signature Move leads women shoo'n this fuckin creep..
    They ALWAYS say Notorize Advances....w/ a Court Order to not come within a 100 feet
    You annoyed Blue to get contenders...dog gives me a funny vibe
    I'd make a Big Stink about it but ur only In-sense you Nag Champa dozen times...
    Last edited by Exalted.; April 6th, 2019 at 01:06 AM

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    Re: LLL Week 5 Contendership Match: Exalted (3-1) vs. Ryno (2-0) - EXT

    Rynos versse


    Took a week off for rest, bet. Rys back to trash the wackest cat.
    Beat Josh within inches of his life - now I’m leaving ‘Ex across the map’.
    Got Dominated 1st contenders match, stop pressing ur luck.
    U Bledsoe bad from the beatdown we thought u played for the Bucks.
    If I mention a can? It’s boss shit. I empty clips till I’m through.
    If he mentions a can? Dull shit. We know he’s never lit up a room.
    Exalted? Heise? Infiltration? W/e ur name is u’re leaving here domeless.
    Truth is, u suck by all accounts - thought I was battling Ronnin .
    U’ve had ONE good NBL season. Against Ry the chances r slim.
    I saw cuts from ur past. Now ur face is getting mangled with them.
    These hands could fill arenas. This queers gettin beat somethin savage.
    Faggot - u’ve NEVER had a ring entrance that didn’t involve tossin salads .
    It’s a scary scene to see my team, but by all means if u wanted a fight...
    Come & see US. U’ll be surrounded by more blacks than opening night.
    This queer thrashing vag? Nah, we know that this cats fake.
    Heard ya bouillon during sex. It left the relationship in bad taste.
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    Re: LLL Week 5 Contendership Match: Exalted (3-1) vs. Ryno (2-0) - EXT

    Quote Originally Posted by Exalted. View Post
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...4-Cypher/page2



    Access denied! after that bite the link showed he bends the truth..
    Ripens w/o 'Permission from URL'. should've known that shit's Forbidden Fruit

    fire, Off w/ his head!

    Listen youth. Shots leave ur mind blown. You'll need a fortified zone
    Homie diiie slow – see Metal 'Engrain in Ry Dome' &&& make a Storage Silo

    fire, get a bucket of watttttah

    Biting had this fag changing names...Bash wasn't the worst exposed
    Bad news spreads fast, you've washed hands of more Dirty Handles than a Germaphobe

    damn ur a on streak.

    Buck ur stance. Give my goons the hand signal like they're up to bat..
    We Touchin Caps. PUTTIN one in each knee... have ya doin the Butterfly Dance

    Not bad

    w/ ya girl we record sex alll the time. together ya'll never did thrive..
    & if Extremophile... deeep down it'd leave ya in a condition you'd barely survive

    cool

    For'a band she'll do ANYTHING fam...even convulse during a sloppy suck
    She choke on dick til Foam Rolls down my balls...a tension release cuz i'm Knotted Up

    ha, i dug this one.

    Loves unique. Signature Move leads women shoo'n this fuckin creep..
    They ALWAYS say Notorize Advances....w/ a Court Order to not come within a 100 feet

    Ugh

    You annoyed Blue to get contenders...dog gives me a funny vibe
    I'd make a Big Stink about it but ur only In-sense you Nag Champa dozen times...
    eh kinda corny to me.

    Quote Originally Posted by Blue Bayou View Post
    Rynos versse


    Took a week off for rest, bet. Rys back to trash the wackest cat.
    Beat Josh within inches of his life - now I’m leaving ‘Ex across the map’.

    Light to me.

    Got Dominated 1st contenders match, stop pressing ur luck.
    U Bledsoe bad from the beatdown we thought u played for the Bucks.

    Cool, good shot here.

    If I mention a can? It’s boss shit. I empty clips till I’m through.
    If he mentions a can? Dull shit. We know he’s never lit up a room.

    Nah

    Exalted? Heise? Infiltration? W/e ur name is u’re leaving here domeless.
    Truth is, u suck by all accounts - thought I was battling Ronnin .

    fire

    U’ve had ONE good NBL season. Against Ry the chances r slim.
    I saw cuts from ur past. Now ur face is getting mangled with them.

    This is ok

    These hands could fill arenas. This queers gettin beat somethin savage.
    Faggot - u’ve NEVER had a ring entrance that didn’t involve tossin salads .

    lol, gay joke this was light tossing salad is a corny joke to begin with

    It’s a scary scene to see my team, but by all means if u wanted a fight...
    Come & see US. U’ll be surrounded by more blacks than opening night.

    This is cool

    This queer thrashing vag? Nah, we know that this cats fake.
    Heard ya bouillon during sex. It left the relationship in bad taste.
    Seen a bouillon flip a few times, this is cool.



    I got Exalted winning this one. He just had a strong verse where ryno was off the mark to me. Exalted definitely took this comfortably this week. He really brought some venom for the biting situation.


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    Re: LLL Week 5 Contendership Match: Exalted (3-1) vs. Ryno (2-0) - OPEN FOR VOTES

    Upp
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    Re: LLL Week 5 Contendership Match: Exalted (3-1) vs. Ryno (2-0) - OPEN FOR VOTES

    Access denied! after that bite the link showed he bends the truth..
    Ripens w/o 'Permission from URL'. should've known that shit's Forbidden Fruit
    Nice.

    Listen youth. Shots leave ur mind blown. You'll need a fortified zone
    Homie diiie slow – see Metal 'Engrain in Ry Dome' &&& make a Storage Silo
    Good. I fuck w this.

    Biting had this fag changing names...Bash wasn't the worst exposed
    Bad news spreads fast, you've washed hands of more Dirty Handles than a Germaphobe
    Eh, not really feeling this… MAINLY because I thought the execution was a bit wonky.

    Buck ur stance. Give my goons the hand signal like they're up to bat..
    We Touchin Caps. PUTTIN one in each knee... have ya doin the Butterfly Dance
    Lol, nice. I chuckled.

    w/ ya girl we record sex alll the time. together ya'll never did thrive..
    & if Extremophile... deeep down it'd leave ya in a condition you'd barely survive
    Eh. I get it, but I don’t know just felt light to me.

    For'a band she'll do ANYTHING fam...even convulse during a sloppy suck
    She choke on dick til Foam Rolls down my balls...a tension release cuz i'm Knotted Up
    Nice.

    Loves unique. Signature Move leads women shoo'n this fuckin creep..
    They ALWAYS say Notorize Advances....w/ a Court Order to not come within a 100 feet
    LMAO. Dope. I’ve never seen this WP on em. Well done.

    You annoyed Blue to get contenders...dog gives me a funny vibe
    I'd make a Big Stink about it but ur only In-sense you Nag Champa dozen times...
    Eh.



    Took a week off for rest, bet. Rys back to trash the wackest cat.
    Beat Josh within inches of his life - now I’m leaving ‘Ex across the map’.
    Jab. Ok start.

    Got Dominated 1st contenders match, stop pressing ur luck.
    U Bledsoe bad from the beatdown we thought u played for the Bucks.
    Lol, nice.

    If I mention a can? It’s boss shit. I empty clips till I’m through.
    If he mentions a can? Dull shit. We know he’s never lit up a room.
    Haha, I fuck w this.

    Exalted? Heise? Infiltration? W/e ur name is u’re leaving here domeless.
    Truth is, u suck by all accounts - thought I was battling Ronnin .
    Pretty good personal.

    U’ve had ONE good NBL season. Against Ry the chances r slim.
    I saw cuts from ur past. Now ur face is getting mangled with them.
    Eh.

    These hands could fill arenas. This queers gettin beat somethin savage.
    Faggot - u’ve NEVER had a ring entrance that didn’t involve tossin salads .
    LMAO. Funny and def impactful.

    It’s a scary scene to see my team, but by all means if u wanted a fight...
    Come & see US. U’ll be surrounded by more blacks than opening night.
    lol. nice.

    This queer thrashing vag? Nah, we know that this cats fake.
    Heard ya bouillon during sex. It left the relationship in bad taste.
    Ok.

    Honestly, had to go back and count the lines (I NEVER DO THAT) I typically have a feel after reading for who won… So, I counted and go with which I found more enjoyable… and I think (very close to me) I am going with Ryno, because I thought it was smoother, more entertaining… I suppose if you want more complexity and WP from your drop go with Ex… but in SUCH a tight battle (for me) I’m going with the style of punches I prefer.

    v/Ry

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    Re: LLL Week 5 Contendership Match: Exalted (3-1) vs. Ryno (2-0) - EXT

    Access denied! after that bite the link showed he bends the truth..
    Ripens w/o 'Permission from URL'. should've known that shit's Forbidden Fruit
    dope personal
    Listen youth. Shots leave ur mind blown. You'll need a fortified zone
    Homie diiie slow – see Metal 'Engrain in Ry Dome' &&& make a Storage Silo
    ok, not crazy about it.
    Biting had this fag changing names...Bash wasn't the worst exposed
    Bad news spreads fast, you've washed hands of more Dirty Handles than a Germaphobe
    another dope personal
    Buck ur stance. Give my goons the hand signal like they're up to bat..
    We Touchin Caps. PUTTIN one in each knee... have ya doin the Butterfly Dance
    ok, rhyme was a little off imo
    w/ ya girl we record sex alll the time. together ya'll never did thrive..
    & if Extremophile... deeep down it'd leave ya in a condition you'd barely survive
    cool wp
    For'a band she'll do ANYTHING fam...even convulse during a sloppy suck
    She choke on dick til Foam Rolls down my balls...a tension release cuz i'm Knotted Up
    lol dope
    Loves unique. Signature Move leads women shoo'n this fuckin creep..
    They ALWAYS say Notorize Advances....w/ a Court Order to not come within a 100 feet
    cool np
    You annoyed Blue to get contenders...dog gives me a funny vibe
    I'd make a Big Stink about it but ur only In-sense you Nag Champa dozen times.
    lol ok

    dope verse. pretty consistent.



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    Took a week off for rest, bet. Rys back to trash the wackest cat.
    Beat Josh within inches of his life - now I’m leaving ‘Ex across the map’.
    not really feeling this
    Got Dominated 1st contenders match, stop pressing ur luck.
    U Bledsoe bad from the beatdown we thought u played for the Bucks.
    definitely a played wp/np coz of drew bledsoe. not a creative enough flip imo
    If I mention a can? It’s boss shit. I empty clips till I’m through.
    If he mentions a can? Dull shit. We know he’s never lit up a room.
    nah
    Exalted? Heise? Infiltration? W/e ur name is u’re leaving here domeless.
    Truth is, u suck by all accounts - thought I was battling Ronnin .
    lol this was dope
    U’ve had ONE good NBL season. Against Ry the chances r slim.
    I saw cuts from ur past. Now ur face is getting mangled with them.
    i like the idea a lot. execution was ok.
    These hands could fill arenas. This queers gettin beat somethin savage.
    Faggot - u’ve NEVER had a ring entrance that didn’t involve tossin salads .
    decent flip, i lol'd
    It’s a scary scene to see my team, but by all means if u wanted a fight...
    Come & see US. U’ll be surrounded by more blacks than opening night.
    cool
    This queer thrashing vag? Nah, we know that this cats fake.
    Heard ya bouillon during sex. It left the relationship in bad taste
    havent seen the wp before, dope idea. could have been worded better

    cool verse. started off slow and that killed u.

    vote Ex
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    Re: LLL Week 5 Contendership Match: Exalted (3-1) vs. Ryno (2-0) - OPEN FOR VOTES

    Exalted

    Access denied! after that bite the link showed he bends the truth..
    Ripens w/o 'Permission from URL'. should've known that shit's Forbidden Fruit
    Listen youth. Shots leave ur mind blown. You'll need a fortified zone
    Homie diiie slow – see Metal 'Engrain in Ry Dome' &&& make a Storage Silo
    Loves unique. Signature Move leads women shoo'n this fuckin creep..
    They ALWAYS say Notorize Advances....w/ a Court Order to not come within a 100 feet
    You annoyed Blue to get contenders...dog gives me a funny vibe
    I'd make a Big Stink about it but ur only In-sense you Nag Champa dozen times..


    vs

    Ryno

    Got Dominated 1st contenders match, stop pressing ur luck.
    U Bledsoe bad from the beatdown we thought u played for the Bucks.
    If I mention a can? It’s boss shit. I empty clips till I’m through.
    If he mentions a can? Dull shit. We know he’s never lit up a room.
    Exalted? Heise? Infiltration? W/e ur name is u’re leaving here domeless.
    Truth is, u suck by all accounts - thought I was battling Ronnin.

    These hands could fill arenas. This queers gettin beat somethin savage.
    Faggot - u’ve NEVER had a ring entrance that didn’t involve tossin salads .


    This was actually a fairly close battle.. and not a bad read from either really.. couple of misses each but overall an enjoyable read. My favorite line was the Ronin punch from Ryno, but Exalted did have more creativity and a more personal angle IMO.. and while I did quote the Bledsoe punch, something tells me it's probably been done to death


    v/ Exalted

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    Access denied! after that bite the link showed he bends the truth..
    Ripens w/o 'Permission from URL'. should've known that shit's Forbidden Fruit
    dont see how permission from url ties into the fruit part but if ur just connecting it with ripen its pretty meh other than the wp being cool
    Listen youth. Shots leave ur mind blown. You'll need a fortified zone
    Homie diiie slow – see Metal 'Engrain in Ry Dome' &&& make a Storage Silo
    eh
    Biting had this fag changing names...Bash wasn't the worst exposed
    Bad news spreads fast, you've washed hands of more Dirty Handles than a Germaphobe
    a germaphone washing specifically a dirty handle is so random but ill give u this one for creativity sake
    Buck ur stance. Give my goons the hand signal like they're up to bat..
    We Touchin Caps. PUTTIN one in each knee... have ya doin the Butterfly Dance
    this literally doesn't rhyme but putting that aside i dont know what the fuck a butterfly dance is
    w/ ya girl we record sex alll the time. together ya'll never did thrive..
    & if Extremophile... deeep down it'd leave ya in a condition you'd barely survive
    alright
    For'a band she'll do ANYTHING fam...even convulse during a sloppy suck
    She choke on dick til Foam Rolls down my balls...a tension release cuz i'm Knotted Up
    this is pretty cool
    Loves unique. Signature Move leads women shoo'n this fuckin creep..
    They ALWAYS say Notorize Advances....w/ a Court Order to not come within a 100 feet
    finally, something dope, thank god
    You annoyed Blue to get contenders...dog gives me a funny vibe
    I'd make a Big Stink about it but ur only In-sense you Nag Champa dozen times...
    dope again, should have put together bars structured more like ur last 2, in all honesty a lot of ur bars are so forced/choppy u need to work on cleaner connections and i'd fuck w/ it way more

    ..

    Took a week off for rest, bet. Rys back to trash the wackest cat.
    Beat Josh within inches of his life - now I’m leaving ‘Ex across the map’.
    nah
    Got Dominated 1st contenders match, stop pressing ur luck.
    U Bledsoe bad from the beatdown we thought u played for the Bucks.
    this is way too simple it's almost absurd u attempted this, the wordplay is fine but u have to do better connecting it than this
    If I mention a can? It’s boss shit. I empty clips till I’m through.
    If he mentions a can? Dull shit. We know he’s never lit up a room.
    no sir
    Exalted? Heise? Infiltration? W/e ur name is u’re leaving here domeless.
    Truth is, u suck by all accounts - thought I was battling Ronnin .
    lmaoooo now this is fire, good shit
    U’ve had ONE good NBL season. Against Ry the chances r slim.
    I saw cuts from ur past. Now ur face is getting mangled with them.
    not bad tbh, aight angle
    These hands could fill arenas. This queers gettin beat somethin savage.
    Faggot - u’ve NEVER had a ring entrance that didn’t involve tossin salads .
    dunno if its played but tbh its cool
    It’s a scary scene to see my team, but by all means if u wanted a fight...
    Come & see US. U’ll be surrounded by more blacks than opening night.
    eh ok
    This queer thrashing vag? Nah, we know that this cats fake.
    Heard ya bouillon during sex. It left the relationship in bad taste.
    WOTB

    ..

    well, both had a severe amount of misses but for different reasons. infil literally tries to do too much with his bars and force shit randomly while trying to be complex where as ryno just goes super simple mode but comes out with some clean bangers when he's actually focusing. close battle but i have to edge to infil for creativity and complexity but if he could just word shit well he would be so much better. close fucking battle though.

    v/ infil

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    Re: LLL Week 5 Contendership Match: Exalted (3-1) vs. Ryno (2-0) - OPEN FOR VOTES

    Access denied! after that bite the link showed he bends the truth..
    Ripens w/o 'Permission from URL'. should've known that shit's Forbidden Fruit
    I'm not catching the 'permissions from URL' wp but I like the Ry pen nameflip and the forbidden fruit tie in
    Listen youth. Shots leave ur mind blown. You'll need a fortified zone
    Homie diiie slow – see Metal 'Engrain in Ry Dome' &&& make a Storage Silo
    siiiick. Really nice. 'dome' was an excellent choice to take the rye wp with, and the ingrain tie in was the icing on the cake. Well done.
    Biting had this fag changing names...Bash wasn't the worst exposed
    Bad news spreads fast, you've washed hands of more Dirty Handles than a Germaphobe
    fire again. good wp/flip and solid personal angle
    Buck ur stance. Give my goons the hand signal like they're up to bat..
    We Touchin Caps. PUTTIN one in each knee... have ya doin the Butterfly Dance
    dece. Would have been slicker if the rhyme scheme wasn't off by a syllable at the end there.
    w/ ya girl we record sex alll the time. together ya'll never did thrive..
    & if Extremophile... deeep down it'd leave ya in a condition you'd barely survive
    dece for a self nameplay. Slightly obscure word makes it hard to flip well - you did alright with it
    For'a band she'll do ANYTHING fam...even convulse during a sloppy suck
    She choke on dick til Foam Rolls down my balls...a tension release cuz i'm Knotted Up
    not bad
    Loves unique. Signature Move leads women shoo'n this fuckin creep..
    They ALWAYS say Notorize Advances....w/ a Court Order to not come within a 100 feet
    Pretty good nameflip
    You annoyed Blue to get contenders...dog gives me a funny vibe
    I'd make a Big Stink about it but ur only In-sense you Nag Champa dozen times...[/QUOTE]
    Had to google nag champa. Bit forced in the sense of having to say "you nag champ" instead of "you nag THE champ". Creative though and the other tie ins were good




    Took a week off for rest, bet. Rys back to trash the wackest cat.
    Beat Josh within inches of his life - now I’m leaving ‘Ex across the map’.
    I've looked at this for for a couple minutes and I'm not sure I'm really getting it. I have two issues with what I think you're going for (my sincere apologies in advance if I'm way off the mark here and please do let me know) - "leaving someone across the map" doesn't mean anything to my knowledge. It sounds like it should be an idiom for beating someone up, but as far as I know it isn't. Second, I don't see any tie in for X across the map. I've seen lines against guys called Ex/X like "you'd need directions to treasure to put X on the map" but I don't see anything like that here...
    Got Dominated 1st contenders match, stop pressing ur luck.
    U Bledsoe bad from the beatdown we thought u played for the Bucks.
    Seen this wp before. Points for indirect props to me though
    If I mention a can? It’s boss shit. I empty clips till I’m through.
    If he mentions a can? Dull shit. We know he’s never lit up a room.
    Pretty cool. The wp is just OK/kinda sketchy but you executed and flipped it as well as possible I think, that elevates it
    Exalted? Heise? Infiltration? W/e ur name is u’re leaving here domeless.
    Truth is, u suck by all accounts - thought I was battling Ronnin .
    Blue did a similar 'accounts' play against Zelph, otherwise this was good
    U’ve had ONE good NBL season. Against Ry the chances r slim.
    I saw cuts from ur past. Now ur face is getting mangled with them.
    Simple/light, but not a miss
    These hands could fill arenas. This queers gettin beat somethin savage.
    Faggot - u’ve NEVER had a ring entrance that didn’t involve tossin salads .
    lol OK. Pretty funny flip
    It’s a scary scene to see my team, but by all means if u wanted a fight...
    Come & see US. U’ll be surrounded by more blacks than opening night.
    [B]Don't get the wp.. prob bc not American. I don't know what opening night refers to[. Punch is okayish/B]
    This queer thrashing vag? Nah, we know that this cats fake.
    Heard ya bouillon during sex. It left the relationship in bad taste.
    How you gonna flip boullion with BAD taste like that shit isn't delicious?!? Lol this was OK


    I got Ex here. Both were pretty consistently good/decent but Ex had a couple bars that were flames which Ry didn't have.

    V/ Ex

    - - - Updated - - -

    Access denied! after that bite the link showed he bends the truth..
    Ripens w/o 'Permission from URL'. should've known that shit's Forbidden Fruit
    I'm not catching the 'permissions from URL' wp but I like the Ry pen nameflip and the forbidden fruit tie in
    Listen youth. Shots leave ur mind blown. You'll need a fortified zone
    Homie diiie slow – see Metal 'Engrain in Ry Dome' &&& make a Storage Silo
    siiiick. Really nice. 'dome' was an excellent choice to take the rye wp with, and the ingrain tie in was the icing on the cake. Well done.
    Biting had this fag changing names...Bash wasn't the worst exposed
    Bad news spreads fast, you've washed hands of more Dirty Handles than a Germaphobe
    fire again. good wp/flip and solid personal angle
    Buck ur stance. Give my goons the hand signal like they're up to bat..
    We Touchin Caps. PUTTIN one in each knee... have ya doin the Butterfly Dance
    dece. Would have been slicker if the rhyme scheme wasn't off by a syllable at the end there.
    w/ ya girl we record sex alll the time. together ya'll never did thrive..
    & if Extremophile... deeep down it'd leave ya in a condition you'd barely survive
    dece for a self nameplay. Slightly obscure word makes it hard to flip well - you did alright with it
    For'a band she'll do ANYTHING fam...even convulse during a sloppy suck
    She choke on dick til Foam Rolls down my balls...a tension release cuz i'm Knotted Up
    not bad
    Loves unique. Signature Move leads women shoo'n this fuckin creep..
    They ALWAYS say Notorize Advances....w/ a Court Order to not come within a 100 feet
    Pretty good nameflip
    You annoyed Blue to get contenders...dog gives me a funny vibe
    I'd make a Big Stink about it but ur only In-sense you Nag Champa dozen times...[/QUOTE]
    Had to google nag champa. Bit forced in the sense of having to say "you nag champ" instead of "you nag THE champ". Creative though and the other tie ins were good




    Took a week off for rest, bet. Rys back to trash the wackest cat.
    Beat Josh within inches of his life - now I’m leaving ‘Ex across the map’.
    I've looked at this for for a couple minutes and I'm not sure I'm really getting it. I have two issues with what I think you're going for (my sincere apologies in advance if I'm way off the mark here and please do let me know) - "leaving someone across the map" doesn't mean anything to my knowledge. It sounds like it should be an idiom for beating someone up, but as far as I know it isn't. Second, I don't see any tie in for X across the map. I've seen lines against guys called Ex/X like "you'd need directions to treasure to put X on the map" but I don't see anything like that here...
    Got Dominated 1st contenders match, stop pressing ur luck.
    U Bledsoe bad from the beatdown we thought u played for the Bucks.
    Seen this wp before. Points for indirect props to me though
    If I mention a can? It’s boss shit. I empty clips till I’m through.
    If he mentions a can? Dull shit. We know he’s never lit up a room.
    Pretty cool. The wp is just OK/kinda sketchy but you executed and flipped it as well as possible I think, that elevates it
    Exalted? Heise? Infiltration? W/e ur name is u’re leaving here domeless.
    Truth is, u suck by all accounts - thought I was battling Ronnin .
    Blue did a similar 'accounts' play against Zelph, otherwise this was good
    U’ve had ONE good NBL season. Against Ry the chances r slim.
    I saw cuts from ur past. Now ur face is getting mangled with them.
    Simple/light, but not a miss
    These hands could fill arenas. This queers gettin beat somethin savage.
    Faggot - u’ve NEVER had a ring entrance that didn’t involve tossin salads .
    lol OK. Pretty funny flip
    It’s a scary scene to see my team, but by all means if u wanted a fight...
    Come & see US. U’ll be surrounded by more blacks than opening night.
    [B]Don't get the wp.. prob bc not American. I don't know what opening night refers to[. Punch is okayish/B]
    This queer thrashing vag? Nah, we know that this cats fake.
    Heard ya bouillon during sex. It left the relationship in bad taste.
    How you gonna flip boullion with BAD taste like that shit isn't delicious?!? Lol this was OK


    I got Ex here. Both were pretty consistently good/decent but Ex had a couple bars that were flames which Ry didn't have.

    V/ Ex
    3TC

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