LLL Week 5: Dominate (3-1) vs. Blas (2-1) - OPEN 4 VOTES

[Blue Bayou]

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[Blas]

v/ dom, oh fuck i mean check

[Dominate]

Haha check. G/luck man. Prob just 12 this week if that’s cool.

[Blas]

that's my best chance to win, i shall drop 12 glucketh

[Dominate]

this is cool but the personal is very untrue to my knowledge as Dom is literally a robot

Dom is like a robot that’s programmed to text respectfully

C++ for effort, but

You’re tryin wayyy too hard kid. Write ur heart out, I’m trashin careers
If u think calling me a bottle up ur chances… good luck doin that w/ ur tears
Getcha legs fractured w/ baseball bats – I don’t even bother to clap heaters
It’s gon take wayyy more than Sunday school to tryn straighten out Blas femurs
He only DREAMS of gettin women. Really I’m doubtin this geek’s worth
Some haggis the best he’d get.. and even THEN he’s countin on sheep first
Bet he squeamish around strippers too – quickkk to flee from the boobs
If this virgin sees Nipsey hustle past… it’s not from readin the news
I’m a brawler. When I get into scraps u can trust a dude gettin ruptured
If Blas’s gettin into scraps its when he’s looking for food in a dumpster
Kid’s been mid-tier forever, and another L bout happen again now
Way he keep dropping the ballpoints to a need to just put the pen down

[Blas]

thank god you’ve been so fucking wack lately.

DIE
SLOW
LIKE
AIDS

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u really shouldn't show it's appalling we can't stand ur rants
emergency you're fucking dead there'll be no point in calling the ambulance 
catch me lurking in ur backyard, gotta be careful cuz that pump is long
trust i’m not changing relationship dynamics when i turn the SUB to DOM
this battle? easiest sweep. won’t be fair when im bombing this guy
when i grip the stock, mark it over.. no surprise what he shares is on a decline
get ur own bitch to fucking kill u, guns fire & when he falls bag em
this is alllll just a long con, dom.. yet ur broads @ ur door w/ a small magnum
torture chamber, limbs removed.. grab the glock & i’m bucking fast
then i’ll sodomize off, goes w/o saying all of his bars are fucking ass
grab the blade or do I bomb him first? I’m committing homi’s, WORSE:
if he’s on his way to work???
i’m shooting ativan.. his death will REALLY calm my nerves

[Blue Bayou]

You’re tryin wayyy too hard kid. Write ur heart out, I’m trashin careers
If u think calling me a bottle up ur chances… good luck doin that w/ ur tears
fire, really like the concept here and this was done well
Getcha legs fractured w/ baseball bats – I don’t even bother to clap heaters
It’s gon take wayyy more than Sunday school to tryn straighten out Blas femurs
lol cool np, the 'straighten out' part was a good direction to go with this.. nice nice
He only DREAMS of gettin women. Really I’m doubtin this geek’s worth
Some haggis the best he’d get.. and even THEN he’s countin on sheep first
lol @ hag, like it.. good swag to the bar and funny punch
Bet he squeamish around strippers too – quickkk to flee from the boobs
If this virgin sees Nipsey hustle past… it’s not from readin the news
lmao funny and dope again.. i see you went more comical then i did on the nipsey concept.. i aint mad at it lol, nice wp
I’m a brawler. When I get into scraps u can trust a dude gettin ruptured
If Blas’s gettin into scraps its when he’s looking for food in a dumpster
nah seen trash/scraps reference before and this is straightforward.. its one of those good simple and effective bars but unfortunately it lacks the freshness to hit for me
Kid’s been mid-tier forever, and another L bout happen again now
Way he keep dropping the ballpoints to a need to just put the pen down
nice, this ws pretty dope.. worked well for a closer

vs.

u really shouldn't show it's appalling we can't stand ur rants
emergency you're fucking dead there'll be no point in calling the ambulance
the timing is bad here, as spit did emerge n' see against me literally last week lol.. i prob wouldve liked it if i hadnt just seen it done
catch me lurking in ur backyard, gotta be careful cuz that pump is long
trust i’m not changing relationship dynamics when i turn the SUB to DOM
okay okay... pretty solid np i liked this
this battle? easiest sweep. won’t be fair when im bombing this guy
when i grip the stock, mark it over.. no surprise what he shares is on a decline
cool tie ins etc. i did similar against aero tho so it lacks a wow factor for me personally
get ur own bitch to fucking kill u, guns fire & when he falls bag em
this is alllll just a long con, dom.. yet ur broads @ ur door w/ a small magnum
haha, i usually dont love the chopped wp bars but this was funny to me.. cool np
torture chamber, limbs removed.. grab the glock & i’m bucking fast
then i’ll sodomize off, goes w/o saying all of his bars are fucking ass
cool flip on the wp.. ive done saw-demise in your future or something similar but saw-dem-eyes works in slang and is cool.. his bars are fuckin ass was solid enough imo for the punch/tie in
grab the blade or do I bomb him first? I’m committing homi’s, WORSE:
if he’s on his way to work???
i’m shooting ativan.. his death will REALLY calm my nerves
fire, you motherfucker i have an ativan wp too i havent used yet haha.. actually like urs better as an attack line, mine was a chick punch.. that said, his death will calm 'my" nerves i feel couldve been executed diff to hit harder.. but thats nitpicking


Pretty enjoyable battle here...Very impressed with Blas this week tbh, he had some cool concpets & wordplay tat were done pretty well

Overall i've got Dom as he was very consistent with only 1 miss on a played idea to me... Blas had the emergency wp that was just done and the mark-it stock concept ive seen done before... put up a hell of a fight tho in a great read... props to both

Vote - Dominate

[hello there]

C++ for effort, but

Getcha legs fractured w/ baseball bats – I don’t even bother to clap heaters
It’s gon take wayyy more than Sunday school to tryn straighten out Blas femurs
Bet he squeamish around strippers too – quickkk to flee from the boobs
If this virgin sees Nipsey hustle past… it’s not from readin the news
Kid’s been mid-tier forever, and another L bout happen again now
Way he keep dropping the ballpoints to a need to just put the pen down

Pretty sick.

That first line was stupid though. Don't you try to pitch me bottle being a thing or some wordplay I missed.

It was dumb. Just own it.

torture chamber, limbs removed.. grab the glock & i’m bucking fast
then i’ll sodomize off, goes w/o saying all of his bars are fucking ass

Blas, I saw your vote. This vote isn't cuz of your vote. It's cuz your shit is too edgy for real life, and also forced. And also like the first possible connection that comes to your mind.

Vote: Dominate

[Sting3r]

C++ for effort, but
lol these lil 1 liners are winning matches

You’re tryin wayyy too hard kid. Write ur heart out, I’m trashin careers
If u think calling me a bottle up ur chances… good luck doin that w/ ur tears
this is solid, hard punch, im getting tired of the compound apostrophe LL but this is dope
Getcha legs fractured w/ baseball bats – I don’t even bother to clap heaters
It’s gon take wayyy more than Sunday school to tryn straighten out Blas femurs
hahaha fuck thats a solid name flip
He only DREAMS of gettin women. Really I’m doubtin this geek’s worth
Some haggis the best he’d get.. and even THEN he’s countin on sheep first
dope wp
Bet he squeamish around strippers too – quickkk to flee from the boobs
If this virgin sees Nipsey hustle past… it’s not from readin the news
nips lol
I’m a brawler. When I get into scraps u can trust a dude gettin ruptured
If Blas’s gettin into scraps its when he’s looking for food in a dumpster
this wordplay is old, punch was just ok
Kid’s been mid-tier forever, and another L bout happen again now
Way he keep dropping the ballpoints to a need to just put the pen down
creative line, didn't hit very hard but it's a well crafted line

thank god you’ve been so fucking wack lately.

DIE
SLOW
LIKE
AIDS

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.
.

u really shouldn't show it's appalling we can't stand ur rants
emergency you're fucking dead there'll be no point in calling the ambulance 
well worded and solid, I was told that this wordplay was played when i used it in 07'
catch me lurking in ur backyard, gotta be careful cuz that pump is long
trust i’m not changing relationship dynamics when i turn the SUB to DOM
creative name flip and solid punch, might be best bar ive seen from u dope
this battle? easiest sweep. won’t be fair when im bombing this guy
when i grip the stock, mark it over.. no surprise what he shares is on a decline
nice wordplay, possibly could have worded the punch different but i still think it's nice, stock lines are on the incline lol
get ur own bitch to fucking kill u, guns fire & when he falls bag em
this is alllll just a long con, dom.. yet ur broads @ ur door w/ a small magnum
the problem i find with this is the emphasis for dom, when i say condom it's like "con dumb" decent line
torture chamber, limbs removed.. grab the glock & i’m bucking fast
then i’ll sodomize off, goes w/o saying all of his bars are fucking ass
lol, could have worded the ending a lil better but still got a laugh out of me
grab the blade or do I bomb him first? I’m committing homi’s, WORSE:
if he’s on his way to work???
i’m shooting ativan.. his death will REALLY calm my nerves
fire

fuck this was better than I thought it was gonna be. no offense to blas but up until this battle I wasn't checking for ur drops. the emergency line was definitely played and the only bar that wasn't up to par. dominate just dropped a fucking barrage of wordplays. blas did well to match the wordplays and threw in some funny punch lines.

blas - closer was fucking BARS. sub to dom. 2 fire bars. 1 bad bar, 2 solid bars, and 1 ok bar

dom - 3 fire bars, 1 bad bar, and 2 solid bars

im gonna say that closer from blas was LOTB. this is surprisingly close to me. dominate was very consistent and dropped 3 fire bars. this didn't need to go any more than 6 bars for each because u both had a great showing.

i got dominate with 1 more fire bar than blas. i hate to say there was a loser here but

vote / dom

[A. Diction]

You’re tryin wayyy too hard kid. Write ur heart out, I’m trashin careers
If u think calling me a bottle up ur chances… good luck doin that w/ ur tears
...bottle up is good, flips aite.......
Getcha legs fractured w/ baseball bats – I don’t even bother to clap heaters
It’s gon take wayyy more than Sunday school to tryn straighten out Blas femurs
....fire.....
He only DREAMS of gettin women. Really I’m doubtin this geek’s worth
Some haggis the best he’d get.. and even THEN he’s countin on sheep first
....again I like haggis but how u tie in and flip it I thought the sheep flip coulda been better tbh. But the bar is good........
Bet he squeamish around strippers too – quickkk to flee from the boobs
If this virgin sees Nipsey hustle past… it’s not from readin the news
.....this is niiiiiiiice......
I’m a brawler. When I get into scraps u can trust a dude gettin ruptured
If Blas’s gettin into scraps its when he’s looking for food in a dumpster
.....yeah nah this ur first miss. Been on a roll so far hit a speed bump here.......
Kid’s been mid-tier forever, and another L bout happen again now
Way he keep dropping the ballpoints to a need to just put the pen down
.......fire. esp as closer.........

Vs

u really shouldn't show it's appalling we can't stand ur rants
emergency you're fucking dead there'll be no point in calling the ambulance
....played, if u woulda did something n flipped it n had an original flip played wp can be used but this was literally just used lol.....
catch me lurking in ur backyard, gotta be careful cuz that pump is long
trust i’m not changing relationship dynamics when i turn the SUB to DOM
....this is good.....
this battle? easiest sweep. won’t be fair when im bombing this guy
when i grip the stock, mark it over.. no surprise what he shares is on a decline
.....nah myself n others used stock market wps on aero, I think I tried to make mine more original by adding in him trading penny stocks or something anyway sorry bro been done to death.......
get ur own bitch to fucking kill u, guns fire & when he falls bag em
this is alllll just a long con, dom.. yet ur broads @ ur door w/ a small magnum
....first magnums are for big dicks such as myself. To the bar: con dom I dont mind the comma in the middle but I've caught shit for using wp like that. And it really isn't pronounced condom, con dom condom not the same but close enuff.....with all that said I actually like the bar and wanna see more wp like that. Set up n wording were good. Good shit.........
torture chamber, limbs removed.. grab the glock & i’m bucking fast
then i’ll sodomize off, goes w/o saying all of his bars are fucking ass
.......Saw them eyes off. Fucking ass, nice tie in. Nice bar. Imma nit pick, who says imma saw ur eyes off lol, it's a good wp dont get me wrong but who says that. Like aite, imma saw ur eyes out bitch lol. Nice bar.......
grab the blade or do I bomb him first? I’m committing homi’s, WORSE:
if he’s on his way to work???
i’m shooting ativan.. his death will REALLY calm my nerves
......fiiiiiiiiire.....this is the bar that lives up to the hype of u acting u better n everyone n theirs bars are trash but........

V. Dom

Overall a better verse, 1 miss the rest hit and was either good or better. Blas had a good verse tho.

Dom's blas femurs bar was lotb

[Blas]

good game, dom is a hard man to beat

close it

[Barcotic]

Dominate
You’re tryin wayyy too hard kid. Write ur heart out, I’m trashin careers
If u think calling me a bottle up ur chances… good luck doin that w/ ur tears
good
Getcha legs fractured w/ baseball bats – I don’t even bother to clap heaters
It’s gon take wayyy more than Sunday school to tryn straighten out Blas femurs
my cap blasphemy bar was better. this is ok
He only DREAMS of gettin women. Really I’m doubtin this geek’s worth
Some haggis the best he’d get.. and even THEN he’s countin on sheep first
k
Bet he squeamish around strippers too – quickkk to flee from the boobs
If this virgin sees Nipsey hustle past… it’s not from readin the news
best & ONLY nip line i read this wk thus far.. gs
I’m a brawler. When I get into scraps u can trust a dude gettin ruptured
If Blas’s gettin into scraps its when he’s looking for food in a dumpster
played out
Kid’s been mid-tier forever, and another L bout happen again now
Way he keep dropping the ballpoints to a need to just put the pen down
good

3 gd punches
2 jabs
1 miss

u really shouldn't show it's appalling we can't stand ur rants
emergency you're fucking dead there'll be no point in calling the ambulance
no, too played. cud have flipped it w a fresh twist but nah
catch me lurking in ur backyard, gotta be careful cuz that pump is long
trust i’m not changing relationship dynamics when i turn the SUB to DOM
i like it
this battle? easiest sweep. won’t be fair when im bombing this guy
when i grip the stock, mark it over.. no surprise what he shares is on a decline
good
get ur own bitch to fucking kill u, guns fire & when he falls bag em
this is alllll just a long con, dom.. yet ur broads @ ur door w/ a small magnum
ehhh, ok. i did these all the time while still elevating my game on original nc. decent here but id stay away from these. theyre awk./semi forced when said aloud
torture chamber, limbs removed.. grab the glock & i’m bucking fast
then i’ll sodomize off, goes w/o saying all of his bars are fucking ass
if saw dom eyes is what u were going for, then this np is really forced... if saw dem eyes is what u meant, its dece. so i will give u the benefit of the doubt but i gotta sneaky suspicion u was going for the nameplay lolll
grab the blade or do I bomb him first? I’m committing homi’s, WORSE:
if he’s on his way to work???
i’m shooting ativan.. his death will REALLY calm my nerves
just ok. better wording cuda made this dope tho

2 gd punches
3 jabs
1 miss

dayum, dom almost got caught here
wuda ben the first batt he lost recently i think (king beat him in votes but iont think he lost)... so yeah, almost an upset but
v/dom

ill hopefully be seeing u in contenders next wk homie, lets make it hof

[Exalted.]

Dominate
You’re tryin wayyy too hard kid. Write ur heart out, I’m trashin careers
If u think calling me a bottle up ur chances… good luck doin that w/ ur tears

cool opener. flip was clever here

Getcha legs fractured w/ baseball bats – I don’t even bother to clap heaters
It’s gon take wayyy more than Sunday school to tryn straighten out Blas femurs

this was straight, not bad.

He only DREAMS of gettin women. Really I’m doubtin this geek’s worth
Some haggis the best he’d get.. and even THEN he’s countin on sheep first

ok. hag is/sheep, not a fire concept but dece. worded fine

Bet he squeamish around strippers too – quickkk to flee from the boobs
If this virgin sees Nipsey hustle past… it’s not from readin the news

I've seen Boston do this.. urs was better, nice hit

I’m a brawler. When I get into scraps u can trust a dude gettin ruptured
If Blas’s gettin into scraps its when he’s looking for food in a dumpster

nahh.. read like a throwaway

Kid’s been mid-tier forever, and another L bout happen again now
Way he keep dropping the ballpoints to a need to just put the pen down

coo ender.. simple wp done smart.

VS

Blas

u really shouldn't show it's appalling we can't stand ur rants
emergency you're fucking dead there'll be no point in calling the ambulance

Spit just did this wp & it was played then. Eh

catch me lurking in ur backyard, gotta be careful cuz that pump is long
trust i’m not changing relationship dynamics when i turn the SUB to DOM

lol i had this idea but thought it was too obv. wording was right here.. cool

this battle? easiest sweep. won’t be fair when im bombing this guy
when i grip the stock, mark it over.. no surprise what he shares is on a decline

executed again well.. stock markets been done but cool flip

get ur own bitch to fucking kill u, guns fire & when he falls bag em
this is alllll just a long con, dom.. yet ur broads @ ur door w/ a small magnum

ehh.. nice try here but not working for me.. almost tho

torture chamber, limbs removed.. grab the glock & i’m bucking fast
then i’ll sodomize off, goes w/o saying all of his bars are fucking ass

sodomize whether saw dem or dom ive seen here, decent flip tho..

grab the blade or do I bomb him first? I’m committing homi’s, WORSE:
if he’s on his way to work???
i’m shooting ativan.. his death will REALLY calm my nerves

wording was a lil off.. ativan I think ak has done
but I'll give it to you, dope wp & alright here

Vote Dom. Dom had one clear miss here. a jab or two & 3 good ones. Blas put up a valiant effort tho. his wording was better than I've seen, concepts were cool too just not quite fresh enough for me. Cool battle

[Resin M-I-C]

bot came off a lil light, decent flip tho
blas femurs was solid, fucked with it
haggis is corny to me
nipsy is just straightforward, didnt hit
scraps/dumpster play has been done, simple here
ender was cool

vs

emerge and see been done to death homie but alright
sub to dom was simple, yet effective.. nice
stock market was a fresh flip
ehhh not feelin magnum
sodomize was decent
ativan was good, coulda been a real heater with better execution


this was close.. dom had the closer and femurs vs sub/dom, stock and ativan.. i wasnt feelin the middle of Dom’s verse, Blas only had one big miss to me

this surprised me here..

v Blas

[JEM.]

You’re tryin wayyy too hard kid. Write ur heart out, I’m trashin careers
If u think calling me a bottle up ur chances… good luck doin that w/ ur tears
Dope.

Getcha legs fractured w/ baseball bats – I don’t even bother to clap heaters
It’s gon take wayyy more than Sunday school to tryn straighten out Blas femurs
Dope. Well executed.

He only DREAMS of gettin women. Really I’m doubtin this geek’s worth
Some haggis the best he’d get.. and even THEN he’s countin on sheep first
lol. nice.

Bet he squeamish around strippers too – quickkk to flee from the boobs
If this virgin sees Nipsey hustle past… it’s not from readin the news
No more Nipsey bars… EVERYONE HAD ONE. RIP.

I’m a brawler. When I get into scraps u can trust a dude gettin ruptured
If Blas’s gettin into scraps its when he’s looking for food in a dumpster
lol. Chuckle but light.

Kid’s been mid-tier forever, and another L bout happen again now
Way he keep dropping the ballpoints to a need to just put the pen down
Nice.

u really shouldn't show it's appalling we can't stand ur rants
emergency you're fucking dead there'll be no point in calling the ambulance 
Okay. I think Spit dropped something similar and I felt that one more.

catch me lurking in ur backyard, gotta be careful cuz that pump is long
trust i’m not changing relationship dynamics when i turn the SUB to DOM
Lol. Nice.

this battle? easiest sweep. won’t be fair when im bombing this guy
when i grip the stock, mark it over.. no surprise what he shares is on a decline
I thought this was well done… excellently executed. Impact? Pretty good.

get ur own bitch to fucking kill u, guns fire & when he falls bag em
this is alllll just a long con, dom.. yet ur broads @ ur door w/ a small magnum
Nice.

torture chamber, limbs removed.. grab the glock & i’m bucking fast
then i’ll sodomize off, goes w/o saying all of his bars are fucking ass
Pretty good.

grab the blade or do I bomb him first? I’m committing homi’s, WORSE:
if he’s on his way to work???
i’m shooting ativan.. his death will REALLY calm my nerves
Dope.

Blas was seriously one bar being okay to nice or nice to dope from taking this… With that being said, in a close call I have dom.

v/Dom.