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    everything under the sun on foot

    stomps trample beneath me, a tramp's cries
    comic gamin in some chaplin, games to die
    i against i but youthful, early, it's all only lies
    cause mother goose girls rhyme in my eyes
    gambits' gambles behind, a bet from beyond
    lonely ramblers rap through proverbs or psalms
    in effect reliving the author's mostly forgotten
    and forgiving mood music, swan song moments
    hip hop arts, actors parts, scripted relief, brotie
    totally misinterpreted mistakes, suspended belief
    recoil snake, knock a royal crown off a pawn
    climates climax, inhale as i slowly boil my frogs
    shouldn't exclaim taxes as money to holy god
    could aim at hollywood blind, a china mall like bull
    jokers write the same tricks for old dogs, no, bitch
    ghost house in store walls, gross domestic product

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    Re: everything under the sun on foot

    check out my verb, this jaunts fresco on it top five. country roads featuring john denver. reverbnation.com/twyllthchylltyrant feed back appreciated. facebook.com/twyllthechylltyrant.xyz

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    Re: everything under the sun on foot

    I loved this... What was weird was I was like the rhyme scheme needs to hit harder and that comes with practice but then when I was reading/saying it I did pick up easily on the flow. You have a gift - I hope to see you here more cause if that's the beginning you probably will be an amazing writer. Keep it up!
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    Re: everything under the sun on foot

    dude your sig is awesome

    and yo thanks man, i'm trying to stay active on boards since i was on rapreviews, sohh, and mic club and b-boys too back in the old days.



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    one percent of my soul is a callous polar bear kodiak
    on jesus don't hold me back, chalice quarterback throwback
    you shouldn't talk like that, julius caesar, no salads
    i know and now i want it back, everything sold from my ballads
    one percent is on your income tax, but that's that malice
    percentage that the management can split it in half, no math
    for one percent of the time my flow retracts space, chaos
    i'm not holding back anymore, my bow spits ratchet arrows
    my boy gets the racks and my bro hits you rats, like a pyro
    stir the pot up in syracuse you know it's all facts, random
    when i roll up on that scary juice, drop all your plans
    i got you that oscar boy, your life's in a can with macros
    i throw on some pants and grow plants on my planet microphone
    sticking, but if you show up short like a shack and a mansion
    i'm a blow up photographs with my selfie stick cannon extention
    i ain't a real star, but i put your heart on nebulas respiration
    one percent of your lungs, i tear up like cilia in the basement
    bronchial, firing off topics like objects on visual statements
    i want one percent of your nucleus, every molecular is caligula
    one percent of in particular, i rep it irregular with ridiculous
    southpaw to goofy boys, i rock skateboards etcetera etcetera
    caligula, calculus, i drop the green on peligulas with pelicans
    in and out, i'm on and off, through detriment centrifuge interviews
    separate the vehicular homicide to homile massacre, in personal

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