LLL Week 6 Championship: Blue Bayou (4-0) vs Exalted (4-1) - Blue Wins

[Blue Bayou]

verses due: Thursday 11:59PST
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[Exalted.]

18?

[Blue Bayou]

Yeah something like that... Not sure what I feel like writing this week

Gluck man

[Blue Bayou]

24 done & ready.

[Exalted.]

Sorry bro ima need an ext.

[Blue Bayou]

here's the verse i wrote...




Exalted , the manic depressive

Inf on NC in 2018
Yall dudes a disgrace, mfer i move w/ the grace
Yall got that fire but Italy View when my shoe leaves an impression of a boot in ya face

Coop on RB in 2008
You're the wackest UK head, so since we frown at ya junk
You feel Europe for a clean fight, but Italy view down in the dumps

Ex i’ve actually been there, saw every site from the clubs to the parks
my fave was the Roman Archives. you know, what you do to come up w/ ya bars
for Pete’s sake that flip’s awful, you got no business being the cocky type
i know rapping gives you a High Exalted…but mannn you can’t even Copywrite
no charges or priors, he’s never been booked for some gats or some rock
AT BEST theres an ex-citation...but sadly never any of that for his drops
Inf we’re NCs tag team champs. it’s awesome! we went home w/ two belts
thanks for the support man…agreeing to use only two of ur bars was a huge help
the team is over! listen up as i tell you that w/ purpose bitch
reason? creative differences.. the main one being i can actually word my shit
last week most elites were so-so & the rest dropped some wack stuff
that’s a trickle down effect…your leg felt the same when you saw this matchup
uppercut after cut, no more suicidal thoughts everytime a gat is near
only headspace you’re worried about now is yours entering the stratosphere
what a week man, from therapy straight to a wake & coffin
went from getting life support to being hit so hard ur family takes you off it
tellin me i fell off and there's no longer any swag to Blue..
ur right, i have declined a lot...of ur PM’s askin me to stay tagged w/ you
i’m not a pill guy, not ONCE has my throat been popped
but i’ll still drop Ex...when i know the coast is clear & the boat has stopped
the throne is mine! throw hands that’ll darken my eye?!
faggit plz...you’ll pull Harrenhal ass like Ned Stark in his prime (GOT premiere bitches)
get ya steeze in check. if you keep copying my NC style every scheme you text..
denigrates something you'll never be...not when you’ll always belittle me at best

24.

[Exalted.]

Lol @ yo catfished ex in hot or thot...c'mon! nobody believin u smash
thot 'hiding behind a fake picture made it safe' but nah ur just easier to crack

due now
love you, repsect
10

fire. fresh wordplay, prob the best safe concept ive ever seen.

LLL this season
i got his pic so i’m runnin’ in his house while the nine is aimed
it’s nothing to ‘take Art down.’ i hope he knows he isn’t Safe behind a frame
man

AKA Ayperos to Blue Bayou


Sorry for the pain of recent loss...takes balls to not feel helplessness
Nah! Only time we'll find 'Stones in a Blue Bitch' for life is the plot in Fifth Element
Fag got laughed off NCs...the snit debacle made em horribly sulk..
Was Ruffalo point in his career now feels 'anger w/ green' he'd transform to the Hulk
You sound like a faggot as well. Knuck's review on the battle was FAIL
Way 30 mins made me 'Sleep in the Pod' rivaled any of Japans Capsule Hotels
My concepts you Phylum. Saving my bars to champ is his plan..
Be true to self & know at your Chor dat a mean i'm Classified as an animal fam
Reallly the flips fuckin trash. I HOPE u leave the bar drunk & crash..
Play was SafeLite... like when this pussy needs a fix & orders ANOTHER glass
Putting 2 & 2 together i renounced respect. Eat this round of lead..
The fact I'd Perrenial mean a Canna leave ya body to decompose in a flowerbed
Your gunbars stink. Him not spraying anything is an honest statement..
Cover it up allll u want we KNOW ur Light Blue, no Dolce & Gabbaba fragrance
Ever get sleep son? Drops 40 bars on MDMA & always needs some..
u'd think Game Streaming way he gets a Twitch & sets records w/ his speedruns
Raged when noone HOF'd ur battle w/ bar. shit was wack on ur part..
Then talks went WWE. Peers defended the canuck cuz it was attacking his hart
Lucky for me his wife cheats too. w/ an ass i'd be happy to eat thru
She Benthic homie...I'ma dive in as a Bottom Feeder before I go in'er Deeep Blue
My shooters aimin at ya larnyx. Hittin vital areas is their true hustle
^a throat shot so to speak... u'll need a voicebox & therapist to train new muscles
At first it was I <3 Inf! 'kids fantasic!' - then cryyy once i seal the casket..
After he'll Lucille Ball his eyes out til he resembles the face of that 50s actress

[King]

up.

[King]

VOTES

[Sting3r]

FIRST !!

here's the verse i wrote...
bet



Exalted , the manic depressive
oh word



Ex i’ve actually been there, saw every site from the clubs to the parks
my fave was the Roman Archives. you know, what you do to come up w/ ya bars
hot fire
for Pete’s sake that flip’s awful, you got no business being the cocky type
i know rapping gives you a High Exalted…but mannn you can’t even Copywrite
super hot fire, spit that copywrite shit
no charges or priors, he’s never been booked for some gats or some rock
AT BEST theres an ex-citation...but sadly never any of that for his drops
luke warm
Inf we’re NCs tag team champs. it’s awesome! we went home w/ two belts
thanks for the support man…agreeing to use only two of ur bars was a huge help
fire, i have no knowledge of ur business on nc and without links it takes off some steam
the team is over! listen up as i tell you that w/ purpose bitch
reason? creative differences.. the main one being i can actually word my shit
cold
last week most elites were so-so & the rest dropped some wack stuff
that’s a trickle down effect…your leg felt the same when you saw this matchup
fire
uppercut after cut, no more suicidal thoughts everytime a gat is near
only headspace you’re worried about now is yours entering the stratosphere
ok, simple
what a week man, from therapy straight to a wake & coffin
went from getting life support to being hit so hard ur family takes you off it
cool scheme could have been expanded on, could be a 2-3 bar scheme IMO
tellin me i fell off and there's no longer any swag to Blue..
ur right, i have declined a lot...of ur PM’s askin me to stay tagged w/ you
ok, tag team text battle swag it up
i’m not a pill guy, not ONCE has my throat been popped
but i’ll still drop Ex...when i know the coast is clear & the boat has stopped
simple
the throne is mine! throw hands that’ll darken my eye?!
faggit plz...you’ll pull Harrenhal ass like Ned Stark in his prime (GOT premiere bitches)
supa hot fire, could been another 2-3 bar scheme here, instead i get a one off bar that belongs in 1,2 league.
get ya steeze in check. if you keep copying my NC style every scheme you text..
denigrates something you'll never be...not when you’ll always belittle me at best
fire wp

24.

AKA Ayperos to Blue Bayou


Sorry for the pain of recent loss...takes balls to not feel helplessness
Nah! Only time we'll find 'Stones in a Blue Bitch' for life is the plot in Fifth Element
he said stones ina blue bitch, i liked that movie enough to like this bar
Fag got laughed off NCs...the snit debacle made em horribly sulk..
Was Ruffalo point in his career now feels 'anger w/ green' he'd transform to the Hulk
i don't get why he would be angry with green, i get the hulk side but the rest is over my head
You sound like a faggot as well. Knuck's review on the battle was FAIL
Way 30 mins made me 'Sleep in the Pod' rivaled any of Japans Capsule Hotels
punch was ok
My concepts you Phylum. Saving my bars to champ is his plan..
Be true to self & know at your Chor dat a mean i'm Classified as an animal fam
wp was real nice, ur classified as an animal yes, a lil fishy thing. what a beast
Reallly the flips fuckin trash. I HOPE u leave the bar drunk & crash..
Play was SafeLite... like when this pussy needs a fix & orders ANOTHER glass
cool concept and attack w/ glass line
Putting 2 & 2 together i renounced respect. Eat this round of lead..
The fact I'd Perrenial mean a Canna leave ya body to decompose in a flowerbed
super hot fire plant schemes bruh
Your gunbars stink. Him not spraying anything is an honest statement..
Cover it up allll u want we KNOW ur Light Blue, no Dolce & Gabbaba fragrance
i like the set up
Ever get sleep son? Drops 40 bars on MDMA & always needs some..
u'd think Game Streaming way he gets a Twitch & sets records w/ his speedruns
damn speed runs was a nice add to the scheme, another example of a scheme that could have went 2-3 bars but gets reduced to a 1 off bar and personal attack
Raged when noone HOF'd ur battle w/ bar. shit was wack on ur part..
Then talks went WWE. Peers defended the canuck cuz it was attacking his hart
good flip
Lucky for me his wife cheats too. w/ an ass i'd be happy to eat thru
She Benthic homie...I'ma dive in as a Bottom Feeder before I go in'er Deeep Blue
funny wording for the punch
My shooters aimin at ya larnyx. Hittin vital areas is their true hustle
^a throat shot so to speak... u'll need a voicebox & therapist to train new muscles
hot fire
At first it was I <3 Inf! 'kids fantasic!' - then cryyy once i seal the casket..
After he'll Lucille Ball his eyes out til he resembles the face of that 50s actress
hot fire

I enjoyed the read on both sides. only a couple misses each so the consistency was good. wordplay was creative on both sides. again with personals both brought some heat (super hot fire bruh). Where this battle takes a big split is when it comes to the punchlines. if you go back and just read the punches you'll see that blue was more direct and "harsh" so to speak. and to counter that i think you need to come with a different angle or match that style. ex had a respectable verse for a champ match. this needs a lot more attention then it's getting. my critique about doing longer schemes is just my preference and you can take it how ever u want.

v/ blue

[Celph Taut]

Blue

Ex i’ve actually been there, saw every site from the clubs to the parks
my fave was the Roman Archives. you know, what you do to come up w/ ya bars
Cool
for Pete’s sake that flip’s awful, you got no business being the cocky type
i know rapping gives you a High Exalted…but mannn you can’t even Copywrite
Good concept, eh execution
no charges or priors, he’s never been booked for some gats or some rock
AT BEST theres an ex-citation...but sadly never any of that for his drops
Good
Inf we’re NCs tag team champs. it’s awesome! we went home w/ two belts
thanks for the support man…agreeing to use only two of ur bars was a huge help
Good
the team is over! listen up as i tell you that w/ purpose bitch
reason? creative differences.. the main one being i can actually word my shit
Lol, simple but nice.
last week most elites were so-so & the rest dropped some wack stuff
that’s a trickle down effect…your leg felt the same when you saw this matchup
OK
uppercut after cut, no more suicidal thoughts everytime a gat is near
only headspace you’re worried about now is yours entering the stratosphere
Nice
what a week man, from therapy straight to a wake & coffin
went from getting life support to being hit so hard ur family takes you off it
Eh
tellin me i fell off and there's no longer any swag to Blue..
ur right, i have declined a lot...of ur PM’s askin me to stay tagged w/ you
Cool
i’m not a pill guy, not ONCE has my throat been popped
but i’ll still drop Ex...when i know the coast is clear & the boat has stopped
Not bad
the throne is mine! throw hands that’ll darken my eye?!
faggit plz...you’ll pull Harrenhal ass like Ned Stark in his prime (GOT premiere bitches)
Good, I guess.
get ya steeze in check. if you keep copying my NC style every scheme you text..
denigrates something you'll never be...not when you’ll always belittle me at best
Good



Ex
Sorry for the pain of recent loss...takes balls to not feel helplessness
Nah! Only time we'll find 'Stones in a Blue Bitch' for life is the plot in Fifth Element
Nah
Fag got laughed off NCs...the snit debacle made em horribly sulk..
Was Ruffalo point in his career now feels 'anger w/ green' he'd transform to the Hulk
Wording was poor.
You sound like a faggot as well. Knuck's review on the battle was FAIL
Way 30 mins made me 'Sleep in the Pod' rivaled any of Japans Capsule Hotels
Alright
My concepts you Phylum. Saving my bars to champ is his plan..
Be true to self & know at your Chor dat a mean i'm Classified as an animal fam
Choppy and wordy
Reallly the flips fuckin trash. I HOPE u leave the bar drunk & crash..
Play was SafeLite... like when this pussy needs a fix & orders ANOTHER glass
Nah
Putting 2 & 2 together i renounced respect. Eat this round of lead..
The fact I'd Perrenial mean a Canna leave ya body to decompose in a flowerbed
Once again, choppy and wordy
Your gunbars stink. Him not spraying anything is an honest statement..
Cover it up allll u want we KNOW ur Light Blue, no Dolce & Gabbaba fragrance
Nah
Ever get sleep son? Drops 40 bars on MDMA & always needs some..
u'd think Game Streaming way he gets a Twitch & sets records w/ his speedruns
LOL...funny.
Raged when noone HOF'd ur battle w/ bar. shit was wack on ur part..
Then talks went WWE. Peers defended the canuck cuz it was attacking his hart
Good choice of concept, poor execution
Lucky for me his wife cheats too. w/ an ass i'd be happy to eat thru
She Benthic homie...I'ma dive in as a Bottom Feeder before I go in'er Deeep Blue
Wordy, but decent
My shooters aimin at ya larnyx. Hittin vital areas is their true hustle
^a throat shot so to speak... u'll need a voicebox & therapist to train new muscles
Decent
At first it was I <3 Inf! 'kids fantasic!' - then cryyy once i seal the casket..
After he'll Lucille Ball his eyes out til he resembles the face of that 50s actress
Eh




V/ Blue



Many instances in where I had trouble reading through Ex's bars based on its wording. In contrast, Blue took a more simpler approach and produced more smoother results. Ex waned on execution and had a few highlight concepts that just didn't fare well. Blue didn't have any hay makers, but his material is consistently more witty and personal. Overall, it was just a matter of simple/convoluted, and because Blue seemed more concise here, I got this going to him.

[Exalted.]

Blue wins. Close it.

[Aero]

Blue:

Ex i’ve actually been there, saw every site from the clubs to the parks
my fave was the Roman Archives. you know, what you do to come up w/ ya bars
tellin me i fell off and there's no longer any swag to Blue..
ur right, i have declined a lot...of ur PM’s askin me to stay tagged w/ you


i’m not a pill guy, not ONCE has my throat been popped
^Very gay.


Exhalted:

ou sound like a faggot as well. Knuck's review on the battle was FAIL
Way 30 mins made me 'Sleep in the Pod' rivaled any of Japans Capsule Hotels
Lucky for me his wife cheats too. w/ an ass i'd be happy to eat thru
She Benthic homie...I'ma dive in as a Bottom Feeder before I go in'er Deeep Blue

[$pitacular]

Ex i’ve actually been there, saw every site from the clubs to the parks
my fave was the Roman Archives. you know, what you do to come up w/ ya bars
seen a ton of archve punches in my day, but the tie in w/the Italy punch made this hit
for Pete’s sake that flip’s awful, you got no business being the cocky type
i know rapping gives you a High Exalted…but mannn you can’t even Copywrite
not feeling this, seen many copywrite punches and this one wasn't better IMO
no charges or priors, he’s never been booked for some gats or some rock
AT BEST theres an ex-citation...but sadly never any of that for his drops
a little bit predictable, and the concept isn't new, but it still hit IMO
Inf we’re NCs tag team champs. it’s awesome! we went home w/ two belts
thanks for the support man…agreeing to use only two of ur bars was a huge help
this is my type of personal! misdirection, hard hitting w/facts, not necessary to have some wild wp. Text battling in it's pure form IMO
the team is over! listen up as i tell you that w/ purpose bitch
reason? creative differences.. the main one being i can actually word my shit
again, similar, personal/misdirection, this one didn't have as much impact because it was right after the other one, but also worked because you continued the previous angle
last week most elites were so-so & the rest dropped some wack stuff
that’s a trickle down effect…your leg felt the same when you saw this matchup
this was a little simple for you IMO... plus didn't have any personal tie ins.. just OK
uppercut after cut, no more suicidal thoughts everytime a gat is near
only headspace you’re worried about now is yours entering the stratosphere
I didn't like this at all. too simple, too obvious & poorly delivered
what a week man, from therapy straight to a wake & coffin
went from getting life support to being hit so hard ur family takes you off it
another very simple generic misdirection, getting away from being effective at this point..
tellin me i fell off and there's no longer any swag to Blue..
ur right, i have declined a lot...of ur PM’s askin me to stay tagged w/ you
see above
i’m not a pill guy, not ONCE has my throat been popped
but i’ll still drop Ex...when i know the coast is clear & the boat has stopped
same thing again, generic misdirection w/very little creativity
the throne is mine! throw hands that’ll darken my eye?!
faggit plz...you’ll pull Harrenhal ass like Ned Stark in his prime (GOT premiere bitches)
this was cool but not hard
get ya steeze in check. if you keep copying my NC style every scheme you text..
denigrates something you'll never be...not when you’ll always belittle me at best
I've done a much better belittle play, but this is OK I guess

I really feel l ike you were lazy this week, or facing writer's block. A lot of very simple misdirections, basic concepts and old flips.. this isn't the Blue I am used to seeing. No big deal, we all have those weeks.. but def a risky approach to a champ match..

vs

Sorry for the pain of recent loss...takes balls to not feel helplessness
Nah! Only time we'll find 'Stones in a Blue Bitch' for life is the plot in Fifth Element
I feel like this was a weak tie (stones w/balls) cuz I don't really ever hear stoned used to refer to balls.. weak opener IMO..
Fag got laughed off NCs...the snit debacle made em horribly sulk..
Was Ruffalo point in his career now feels 'anger w/ green' he'd transform to the Hulk
Uh.. you did see my angry/green/Banner play LAST WEEK right?
You sound like a faggot as well. Knuck's review on the battle was FAIL
Way 30 mins made me 'Sleep in the Pod' rivaled any of Japans Capsule Hotels
didn't care for this one, comparison concept and a lil reachy IMO
My concepts you Phylum. Saving my bars to champ is his plan..
Be true to self & know at your Chor dat a mean i'm Classified as an animal fam
this was creative but just bragging not punching
Reallly the flips fuckin trash. I HOPE u leave the bar drunk & crash..
Play was SafeLite... like when this pussy needs a fix & orders ANOTHER glass
not a fan of this
Putting 2 & 2 together i renounced respect. Eat this round of lead..
The fact I'd Perrenial mean a Canna leave ya body to decompose in a flowerbed
wayyy too much of a reach, which is starting to become a habit at this point
Your gunbars stink. Him not spraying anything is an honest statement..
Cover it up allll u want we KNOW ur Light Blue, no Dolce & Gabbaba fragrance
this is OK
Ever get sleep son? Drops 40 bars on MDMA & always needs some..
u'd think Game Streaming way he gets a Twitch & sets records w/ his speedruns
speed/MDMA are not the same.. reaching again IMO
Raged when noone HOF'd ur battle w/ bar. shit was wack on ur part..
Then talks went WWE. Peers defended the canuck cuz it was attacking his hart
creative, OK
Lucky for me his wife cheats too. w/ an ass i'd be happy to eat thru
She Benthic homie...I'ma dive in as a Bottom Feeder before I go in'er Deeep Blue
THIS was harrrd.. nice
My shooters aimin at ya larnyx. Hittin vital areas is their true hustle
^a throat shot so to speak... u'll need a voicebox & therapist to train new muscles
hard but not that witty
At first it was I <3 Inf! 'kids fantasic!' - then cryyy once i seal the casket..
After he'll Lucille Ball his eyes out til he resembles the face of that 50s actress
poor use of a great actress


When I read Blue's verse, I thought, mannnn... he might actually lose this one! Then I read Ex's verse.. and nah. This was dece/played vs mostly meh IMO

v/Blue

[King]

3-0-1