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    LLL Week 6: Blas (2-2) vs. Joe Boston (2-2) - Blas Wins

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    Re: LLL Week 6: Blas (2-2) vs. Joe Boston (2-2)

    12s good, checkkkkkk

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    Re: LLL Week 6: Blas (2-2) vs. Joe Boston (2-2)

    ill end this guy NOW, i’ve seen ur work & it’s so shotty
    so fuck your futurama celebrity ~ & he’s just a NO-BODY
    every concept I type is fresh one fucking flip & its over
    guys all takis really trash, explains that awful chip on ur shoulder
    when I’m fucking w/ ropes ur bitch is tied up & the pipe is in
    when he's fucking w/ ropes there's a chair kick as his vitals end
    guys a rapist i told him not to hit his girl & couldn’t understand how it’s bad
    when she’s laid down it’s a charge u’d think it was apples new airpower pad
    i have every advantage in this battle i’d suggest to duck you dyke
    u’d never get a 1up on me & even if you did it’s still FUCK your LIFE
    u get no pussy, broke fuck.. talk shit & i’m gripping the twelves
    creepy loser is always tryna stock something i suggest you stick to the shelves

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    Re: LLL Week 6: Blas (2-2) vs. Joe Boston (2-2)

    Can I get an extension if cool been working like crazy new job
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    Re: LLL Week 6: Blas (2-2) vs. Joe Boston (2-2)

    yep, no problem

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    Re: LLL Week 6: Blas (2-2) vs. Joe Boston (2-2)

    My bad if late just got in from work can’t use phone there

    His bitch loves it in the ass she’s been passed through many men
    She’s not anal during sex at all, I’ll leave that Dark Hole bigger than the one on CNN
    On the scale 1 through 10 you’re no one I’ll fucking open hand slap you
    Think you General Picken on Joe I’ll cut your fucking head off like that Riverdale Statue
    I could aim the heat at you when the shells let loose they misbehave
    I rather watch u die slowly I’ll give you the razor quick like the 5 dollar club shave
    Your mans gonna save you when shots louder then rolling thunder?
    Better Hussle to safety cuz when youre dead theres no tribute from Stevie Wonder
    Love getting his bitch drunker n drunker she doesn’t hesitate to let me long dick it
    I’m all her favorite superhero’s wrapped in one during sex, after I fuck her I’ll buy her Avenger movie tickets
    I don’t think u wanna risk it, all you have plus the ones u fucking cherish
    Claim you’re Truman Show that heart, I’ll leave your body on the doorstep of Ed Harris
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    Re: LLL Week 6: Blas (2-2) vs. Joe Boston (2-2) - OPEN FOR VOTES

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    Re: LLL Week 6: Blas (2-2) vs. Joe Boston (2-2)

    ill end this guy NOW, i’ve seen ur work & it’s so shotty
    so fuck your futurama celebrity ~ & he’s just a NO-BODY
    Aero did a futurama line before but I like how you flipped this with the no-body tie in
    every concept I type is fresh one fucking flip & its over
    guys all takis really trash, explains that awful chip on ur shoulder
    Nice! This is fresh to me, - I had to google what takis was but good flip
    when I’m fucking w/ ropes ur bitch is tied up & the pipe is in
    when he's fucking w/ ropes there's a chair kick as his vitals end
    the wp concept is meh but the wording is good enough that this is decent
    guys a rapist i told him not to hit his girl & couldn’t understand how it’s bad
    when she’s laid down it’s a charge u’d think it was apples new airpower pad
    cool flip here
    i have every advantage in this battle i’d suggest to duck you dyke
    u’d never get a 1up on me & even if you did it’s still FUCK your LIFE
    Hmmm not bad. 1up/life lines I've seen before though
    u get no pussy, broke fuck.. talk shit & i’m gripping the twelves
    creepy loser is always tryna stock something i suggest you stick to the shelves
    stalk/stock ok ok... It feels old but can't say I've seen it recently. Maybe could have flipped this into should've stayed on the shelf/I'll put him on the shelf


    His bitch loves it in the ass she’s been passed through many men
    She’s not anal during sex at all, I’ll leave that Dark Hole bigger than the one on CNN
    lol. funny current event flip
    On the scale 1 through 10 you’re no one I’ll fucking open hand slap you
    Think you General Picken on Joe I’ll cut your fucking head off like that Riverdale Statue
    Had to google, this is OK. Needed more in the set up for him calling himself general
    I could aim the heat at you when the shells let loose they misbehave
    I rather watch u die slowly I’ll give you the razor quick like the 5 dollar club shave
    eh kinda creative. The word 'quick' grates on me here bc you've just said you wanna watch him die slowly
    Your mans gonna save you when shots louder then rolling thunder?
    Better Hussle to safety cuz when youre dead theres no tribute from Stevie Wonder
    Nah we did all the Nipsey Hussle lines last week
    Love getting his bitch drunker n drunker she doesn’t hesitate to let me long dick it
    I’m all her favorite superhero’s wrapped in one during sex, after I fuck her I’ll buy her Avenger movie tickets
    unless 'wrapped in one' is a wp I'm missing I don't like this. Creative but kinda corny
    I don’t think u wanna risk it, all you have plus the ones u fucking cherish
    Claim you’re Truman Show that heart, I’ll leave your body on the doorstep of Ed Harris
    Wp had potential but the flip was lacklustre


    Takis & laid down a charge vs dark hole for quotables. On the other ones, Joe was generally more creative but lacked in execution. Blas had wp concepts that were not super fresh but delivered them well. I almost quoted futurama for that. Blas edges it

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    Re: LLL Week 6: Blas (2-2) vs. Joe Boston (2-2)

    Quote Originally Posted by Blas View Post
    ill end this guy NOW, i’ve seen ur work & it’s so shotty
    so fuck your futurama celebrity ~ & he’s just a NO-BODY
    concept and flip is funny, wording is a bit simple
    every concept I type is fresh one fucking flip & its over
    guys all takis really trash, explains that awful chip on ur shoulder
    takis wordplay is fresh, chip on ur shoulder kinda old
    when I’m fucking w/ ropes ur bitch is tied up & the pipe is in
    when he's fucking w/ ropes there's a chair kick as his vitals end
    super hot fire
    guys a rapist i told him not to hit his girl & couldn’t understand how it’s bad
    when she’s laid down it’s a charge u’d think it was apples new airpower pad
    concept was good
    i have every advantage in this battle i’d suggest to duck you dyke
    u’d never get a 1up on me & even if you did it’s still FUCK your LIFE
    cold
    u get no pussy, broke fuck.. talk shit & i’m gripping the twelves
    creepy loser is always tryna stock something i suggest you stick to the shelves
    ok
    Quote Originally Posted by Joe Boston View Post
    My bad if late just got in from work can’t use phone there
    props for showing


    His bitch loves it in the ass she’s been passed through many men
    She’s not anal during sex at all, I’ll leave that Dark Hole bigger than the one on CNN
    punchline was funny
    On the scale 1 through 10 you’re no one I’ll fucking open hand slap you
    Think you General Picken on Joe I’ll cut your fucking head off like that Riverdale Statue
    flip was good
    I could aim the heat at you when the shells let loose they misbehave
    I rather watch u die slowly I’ll give you the razor quick like the 5 dollar club shave
    good punch
    Your mans gonna save you when shots louder then rolling thunder?
    Better Hussle to safety cuz when youre dead theres no tribute from Stevie Wonder
    current event shiiiit
    Love getting his bitch drunker n drunker she doesn’t hesitate to let me long dick it
    I’m all her favorite superhero’s wrapped in one during sex, after I fuck her I’ll buy her Avenger movie tickets
    to simple
    I don’t think u wanna risk it, all you have plus the ones u fucking cherish
    Claim you’re Truman Show that heart, I’ll leave your body on the doorstep of Ed Harris
    concept was good

    over all; this was a lite read. that's not a knock to say that complexity is so much better. i enjoyed the read on both sides. where joe went right was with the concepts and good set ups. the punchlines were just keyd up and not polished as much. where blas went right was his creative flips. the wording on the ropes line was perfect and made for a slick line. would like to see what joe can bring if he put more time into it. and blas has just been consistent with his style. good battle guys. would also like to see more scheming from both!


    v/blas,
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    Re: LLL Week 6: Blas (2-2) vs. Joe Boston (2-2) - OPEN FOR VOTES

    Futurama was cool
    Taki was cool I liked the punch set up could have been a bit better
    Ropes was savage I thought... wording was slightly choppy but I liked it



    Vs


    Black hole was cool
    General picken - liked this

    Nipsey Hussle was done last week pretty sure you did one to.
    Trumen show could have been dope but working butchered it


    Blas had a nice verse here joe had some cool hits and some choppy bars. I got blas being more consistent here

    V/blas

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    Re: LLL Week 6: Blas (2-2) vs. Joe Boston (2-2) - OPEN FOR VOTES

    Blas:

    ill end this guy NOW, i’ve seen ur work & it’s so shotty
    so fuck your futurama celebrity ~ & he’s just a NO-BODY
    nope
    every concept I type is fresh one fucking flip & its over
    guys all takis really trash, explains that awful chip on ur shoulder
    not feeling but it works
    when I’m fucking w/ ropes ur bitch is tied up & the pipe is in
    when he's fucking w/ ropes there's a chair kick as his vitals end
    too obscure to be a good misdirection
    guys a rapist i told him not to hit his girl & couldn’t understand how it’s bad
    when she’s laid down it’s a charge u’d think it was apples new airpower pad
    passive punch here. it works but not worded aggressively to make it hit
    i have every advantage in this battle i’d suggest to duck you dyke
    u’d never get a 1up on me & even if you did it’s still FUCK your LIFE
    that's not even a diss
    u get no pussy, broke fuck.. talk shit & i’m gripping the twelves
    creepy loser is always tryna stock something i suggest you stick to the shelves
    nope



    Joe boston:

    His bitch loves it in the ass she’s been passed through many men
    She’s not anal during sex at all, I’ll leave that Dark Hole bigger than the one on CNN
    just awful.. and you ruined it with the she's not anal at all.. CNN reference came out of nowhere
    On the scale 1 through 10 you’re no one I’ll fucking open hand slap you
    Think you General Picken on Joe I’ll cut your fucking head off like that Riverdale Statue
    nope
    I could aim the heat at you when the shells let loose they misbehave
    I rather watch u die slowly I’ll give you the razor quick like the 5 dollar club shave
    terrible
    Your mans gonna save you when shots louder then rolling thunder?
    Better Hussle to safety cuz when youre dead theres no tribute from Stevie Wonder
    lol Joe, never change fam. This was trash but I cant help but laugh
    Love getting his bitch drunker n drunker she doesn’t hesitate to let me long dick it
    I’m all her favorite superhero’s wrapped in one during sex, after I fuck her I’ll buy her Avenger movie tickets
    LMAOOOOOOO this is terrible but hilarious so I like it
    I don’t think u wanna risk it, all you have plus the ones u fucking cherish
    Claim you’re Truman Show that heart, I’ll leave your body on the doorstep of Ed Harris
    good grief


    Both verses were awful but Joe's was comically bad. I want to vote for him bc it was more entertaining but I'm going to go with the Blas for the less bad verse.

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