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    LLL Week 6: Josh S. (2-3) vs. Ronin (2-3) - Ronin Wins

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    Re: LLL Week 6: Josh S. (2-3) vs. Ronin (2-3)

    Round 2
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    Re: LLL Week 6: Josh S. (2-3) vs. Ronin (2-3)

    Not really but ok

    Going 12
    Now I am become death; destroyer of worlds.

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    Re: LLL Week 6: Josh S. (2-3) vs. Ronin (2-3)

    Ya 12 is probably best for some 1 like u
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    Re: LLL Week 6: Josh S. (2-3) vs. Ronin (2-3)

    @Reef Flex sent 16
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    Reef lex dime bag deals on wheels / Leo Reef vinci / V/ sinning

    To sway or not to sway that is the question

    ronin tried to get helpful advice; in deep contemplation thinking heavy on the fight;
    but the angel on his left shoulder was to busy being swayed by the devil on the right
    since 2018 you been ducking a knuckle boy, this time you'll get cut in the scuffle boy
    don't care if ya auto immune to missing first thing i'ma do is get to bustin ya bubble boy
    somebody stop flex homies hurting him, spinning elbow; Tony Ferguson
    before the tournament the red marks on his face will say i'm slowly learning em'

    Ronin Vs. allen Knight

    These hands will make u nap quick, jab hit on the cheek...
    Keep acting gay Ambian a complete faggot, you'll get put to sleep.
    U got no famalia, I'm el Jefe. They all want ur ass gone...
    Ur fam? If any of amnesia, they hoping u forget ur way back home.
    i got horses in the back by a Lil Nas; of course its a 9/11 Porche
    ^ thats something of useless steer n' you'll have to compensate for the force
    I got L's for being nice & had plenty fun, now i'm the villain, serve many guns
    sticking up for Ryno? well 'good, some merit in' the league never hurt any one
    whatever you using use less, we'll be forgetting your name just the truth
    if they try to resuscitate less.. s'when the paramedics say what's the use
    we both chasing the dragon, I got hydro, fire purple with my eyes low
    he's passed out assed out in the crack house - that's where you can Spyro
    dime pass cause my aim so hot, steal yo girl if I want, she a lame ol thot
    fade away with the goose; & give ya bitch's back more arch then a rainbow shot

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    Re: LLL Week 6: Josh S. (2-3) vs. Ronin (2-3)

    Ronin's Verse

    Vs. Reef flex aka Josh S

    This kid jumped out the closet, nothing to hold em back with...
    If the cops gotta get ur princess, their system will tell them ur a strait up faggot.
    I've gone insane, pull up to the curb n let that jawn just drain...
    Roll up on him so fast, u can't lift ur arms like John McCain.
    Tf u gonna beat me, dude u can barely rhyme...
    Nothing u do is super man; Reef, lex Luthor would win every time.
    Got the blade; patiently waiting in the bush, to him errything seem chill...
    Till this Irish spring out in all green and get that clean kill.
    Dude's blue collar, hes got a Skill- but txt still isnt it...
    I just bought a brand new trailer........his job is to help build that bitch.
    Gotta dq win on me, time to pay u back. u staying wack kid...
    When u talk about flexibility...Its stiff as the board I used to lay him flat with.
    Ur text is so subpar every word I see just hurts...
    If u talking reefer his writing ability, I gotta smoke a lot of that to read ur verses.
    U make me sick, anyone could swag on his lame ass life...
    I spit acid reef, lux would lose to me in a skr8 up fight.
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    Re: LLL Week 6: Josh S. (2-3) vs. Ronin (2-3) - OPEN FOR VOTES

    spyro line

    vs


    This kid jumped out the closet, nothing to hold em back with...
    If the cops gotta get ur princess, their system will tell them ur a strait up faggot.


    wasn't really digging Josh's execution. Ro's delivery was a bit more aggressive and hit harder

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    Re: LLL Week 6: Josh S. (2-3) vs. Ronin (2-3) - OPEN FOR VOTES

    Josh:
    Opener- conceptually good. I liked the angel angle. But this was a lil too wordy. Softened the impact imo
    Good Samaritan- meh. Didnt like the direction of ur set up. The goid Samaritan play works for me, but wasnt executed all that wel imo.
    Whats the use- decrnt.
    Spyro- nice

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    Opener-ok
    McCain- meh
    Superman- this a big ol miss
    Clean kill- i liked it

    Vote useless on consistency.
    Josh- ur right there as far as concepts go. Just work on saying more, with less
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    Re: LLL Week 6: Josh S. (2-3) vs. Ronin (2-3)

    ronin tried to get helpful advice; in deep contemplation thinking heavy on the fight;
    but the angel on his left shoulder was to busy being swayed by the devil on the right
    creative flip on that personal angle, but not really hard hitting
    since 2018 you been ducking a knuckle boy, this time you'll get cut in the scuffle boy
    don't care if ya auto immune to missing first thing i'ma do is get to bustin ya bubble boy
    That wp/flip combo is nassssty, props. Room for improvement on the wording but I still liked it. I would have worded it so that you're saying you're the one holding the gun & won't miss and that will bust his bubble.
    somebody stop flex homies hurting him, spinning elbow; Tony Ferguson
    before the tournament the red marks on his face will say i'm slowly learning em'
    Not bad, like the red marks/learning concept
    i got horses in the back by a Lil Nas; of course its a 9/11 Porche
    ^ thats something of useless steer n' you'll have to compensate for the force
    I like this idea on 'compensate for the force' but the punch gets lost bc the rest of the wordplay is a little tricky to catch
    I got L's for being nice & had plenty fun, now i'm the villain, serve many guns
    sticking up for Ryno? well 'good, some merit in' the league never hurt any one
    Haha I've done a some-merit-in play before but never saw it again and I haven't thought of it in years til I read this, so this was fun. The wording is fine for the wp but the punch gets lost here IMO. A more plainly stated reference in the set up about his DQs/swaying to contrast with 'merit' would have fixed that
    whatever you using use less, we'll be forgetting your name just the truth
    if they try to resuscitate less.. s'when the paramedics say what's the use
    Almost
    we both chasing the dragon, I got hydro, fire purple with my eyes low
    he's passed out assed out in the crack house - that's where you can Spyro
    Haha this is pretty good
    dime pass cause my aim so hot, steal yo girl if I want, she a lame ol thot
    fade away with the goose; & give ya bitch's back more arch then a rainbow shot
    Too much going on in this



    This kid jumped out the closet, nothing to hold em back with...
    If the cops gotta get ur princess, their system will tell them ur a strait up faggot.
    LoL cool
    I've gone insane, pull up to the curb n let that jawn just drain...
    Roll up on him so fast, u can't lift ur arms like John McCain.
    I didn't know that little tidbit about JM, how interesting. Seen a million 'arms' plays lately so this isn't heavy, but the bar did have a good swagger to it
    Tf u gonna beat me, dude u can barely rhyme...
    Nothing u do is super man; Reef, lex Luthor would win every time.
    Not bad, wp's a little stretched
    Got the blade; patiently waiting in the bush, to him errything seem chill...
    Till this Irish spring out in all green and get that clean kill.
    Assuming that either you're Irish or that 'Irish' has a double meaning I don't know about, this is cool. Worded to sound tough anyway
    Dude's blue collar, hes got a Skill- but txt still isnt it...
    I just bought a brand new trailer........his job is to help build that bitch.
    OKish. No wp and not super creative/aggressive/funny to compensate, but you set it up well
    Gotta dq win on me, time to pay u back. u staying wack kid...
    When u talk about flexibility...Its stiff as the board I used to lay him flat with.
    flex ability good nameflip
    Ur text is so subpar every word I see just hurts...
    If u talking reefer his writing ability, I gotta smoke a lot of that to read ur verses.
    Good np concept, execution is good enough but feel like could've been meaner
    U make me sick, anyone could swag on his lame ass life...
    I spit acid reef, lux would lose to me in a skr8 up fight.
    I don't know who/what lux is... assuming that bit works, needs a stronger tie in for reflux


    Useless got it. Reef was more creative but execution was lacking to make the punches land. Still, auto immune and Spyro were good. But I liked useless's more swaggy/aggressive delivery and he had princess, flexibility and reefer that were good.


    V/ Useless
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