LLL Week 7: King (4-1) vs Aero (1-0) - King Wins

[King]

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[Aero]

12 & you’d better come with it.

[King]

He did it in the NC 1-2. Zelig posted a bar then deleted it and aero copy & pasted it. Then Zelph went to use the same bar here I still have the post saved

Y'all niggas better beg for me to return to this site. So what I used a bar Zelph NEVER USED.
@Letterman if you don't win these playoffs then it's fuck you.

He deals with stocks for a living

Yoo..u claim GOAT?? Lmaooo, clown wtf is u dreamin' bout
Of course Zelph missing a lip, u bitin' his words before they can leave his mouth
U stole a bar he fucking scrapped, don't try n sit there gassed
Bitch u went from dropping mid tier trash to actually dropping the mid tier's trash
I bet every stock u trade is a fuckin loser, ur so bad at ur life
Next time u'll see a bull markets territory it'll be watching King ravage ur wife
I'll rush ur office, kick in the door n bring the heat out quick
Son the last stock u'll see will be on the AR I knock ur fucking teeth out with
He can't compete with the goat. Come take this faggot away
Tony Romo of text, u talk a great game but choke whenever u actually play
Returned just to catch an L then I know that he'll whine
So fuck his comeback, I'm about to make Aero turn around like a rotary sign



didn't have time my bad. just didnt want to ns

[Aero]

Blue you still doing $250 for winner?

For sure

Good looking!

Champ matches:

King vs Blue Bayou winner = Blue Bayou
Dominate vs Blue Bayou winner = Blue Bayou


Let's chill on the praise of Blue, to me he's still cheap & he's bummy
Hell I'd promise $250 too if I knew facing midtiers meant keeping my money
Wording I'm a perfectionist, put the final touches on a masterpiece
When King puts on the final touches his victims were able to contact police
As for beef? It's gore to this queer shots thru his top shortens careers
Bullets leave you with a redshirt that'll have you sitting out more than a year
King your girl gave us a double handjob.. good grief you're little dude
She calls it the steering wheel position, her hands stay at 10 & 2
My friends are true & look out for me, see an opp they say let's ride
I heard your friends look out for you too like "there he is, let's hide"
I've been to Bali, the Maldives it's like I'm supposed to be afar
Only time your weak ass makes multiple trips is carrying groceries from the car

[A. Diction]

Yoo..u claim GOAT?? Lmaooo, clown wtf is u dreamin' bout
Of course Zelph missing a lip, u bitin' his words before they can leave his mouth
.........Supah hawt fiya...........
U stole a bar he fucking scrapped, don't try n sit there gassed
Bitch u went from dropping mid tier trash to actually dropping the mid tier's trash
...nice....
I bet every stock u trade is a fuckin loser, ur so bad at ur life
Next time u'll see a bull markets territory it'll be watching King ravage ur wife
...cool......
I'll rush ur office, kick in the door n bring the heat out quick
Son the last stock u'll see will be on the AR I knock ur fucking teeth out with
......nice personal......
He can't compete with the goat. Come take this faggot away
Tony Romo of text, u talk a great game but choke whenever u actually play
....not feeling but not a complete miss.....
Returned just to catch an L then I know that he'll whine
So fuck his comeback, I'm about to make Aero turn around like a rotary sign
.....cool. good closer.......

Vs

Let's chill on the praise of Blue, to me he's still cheap & he's bummy
Hell I'd promise $250 too if I knew facing midtiers meant keeping my money
.....this is all well n good but u battling king not blue my dude.......vs blue woulda been dope tho lol......
Wording I'm a perfectionist, put the final touches on a masterpiece
When King puts on the final touches his victims were able to contact police
.....are u saying kings putting on the final touches like his finger prints at police intake. Or am I not seeing another connection between final touches and victims contacting police. I see what going for kinda but coulda been worded cleaner......
As for beef? It's gore to this queer shots thru his top shortens careers
Bullets leave you with a redshirt that'll have you sitting out more than a year
.....redshirt played. Set up better than punchline tbh......
King your girl gave us a double handjob.. good grief you're little dude
She calls it the steering wheel position, her hands stay at 10 & 2
....this is aite I just have one problem with it. U just standing across from another dude getting a hand job. U do u bro that shit ain't for me..........
My friends are true & look out for me, see an opp they say let's ride
I heard your friends look out for you too like "there he is, let's hide"
.......worse line of the week.........
I've been to Bali, the Maldives it's like I'm supposed to be afar
Only time your weak ass makes multiple trips is carrying groceries from the car
.........eh........

Aero dropped the ball, kings personals were good and his lines hit harder. And aero had the worse line I've seen wrote so far this season.

V. King

[Echelon]

King -

Yoo..u claim GOAT?? Lmaooo, clown wtf is u dreamin' bout
Of course Zelph missing a lip, u bitin' his words before they can leave his mouth

Lmao, dope.

U stole a bar he fucking scrapped, don't try n sit there gassed
Bitch u went from dropping mid tier trash to actually dropping the mid tier's trash

Lmao, nice.


I bet every stock u trade is a fuckin loser, ur so bad at ur life
Next time u'll see a bull markets territory it'll be watching King ravage ur wife

This could've been better. But it was okay.

I'll rush ur office, kick in the door n bring the heat out quick
Son the last stock u'll see will be on the AR I knock ur fucking teeth out with

This was dope, nice.


He can't compete with the goat. Come take this faggot away
Tony Romo of text, u talk a great game but choke whenever u actually play

This was okay.


Returned just to catch an L then I know that he'll whine
So fuck his comeback, I'm about to make Aero turn around like a rotary sign

This was nice, cool.


Aero -

Let's chill on the praise of Blue, to me he's still cheap & he's bummy
Hell I'd promise $250 too if I knew facing midtiers meant keeping my money

This was okay.

Let's chill on the praise of Blue, to me he's still cheap & he's bummy
Hell I'd promise $250 too if I knew facing midtiers meant keeping my money

Wording I'm a perfectionist, put the final touches on a masterpiece
When King puts on the final touches his victims were able to contact police

Lmao, cool.

As for beef? It's gore to this queer shots thru his top shortens careers
Bullets leave you with a redshirt that'll have you sitting out more than a year

This was okay.

King your girl gave us a double handjob.. good grief you're little dude
She calls it the steering wheel position, her hands stay at 10 & 2

LOL, nice.


My friends are true & look out for me, see an opp they say let's ride
I heard your friends look out for you too like "there he is, let's hide"

Lmao, nice.


I've been to Bali, the Maldives it's like I'm supposed to be afar
Only time your weak ass makes multiple trips is carrying groceries from the car

Lol.

Overall -

This was a okay battle. Both are good battlers. I have to give it to King though.

V/ King.

[Sting3r]

He deals with stocks for a living

Yoo..u claim GOAT?? Lmaooo, clown wtf is u dreamin' bout
Of course Zelph missing a lip, u bitin' his words before they can leave his mouth
supa hot fire
U stole a bar he fucking scrapped, don't try n sit there gassed
Bitch u went from dropping mid tier trash to actually dropping the mid tier's trash
more flames that's a scheme
I bet every stock u trade is a fuckin loser, ur so bad at ur life
Next time u'll see a bull markets territory it'll be watching King ravage ur wife
nice punch and wp
I'll rush ur office, kick in the door n bring the heat out quick
Son the last stock u'll see will be on the AR I knock ur fucking teeth out with
to simple stock wp and punch was ight
He can't compete with the goat. Come take this faggot away
Tony Romo of text, u talk a great game but choke whenever u actually play
lite
Returned just to catch an L then I know that he'll whine
So fuck his comeback, I'm about to make Aero turn around like a rotary sign
lite



didn't have time my bad. just didnt want to ns

Champ matches:

King vs Blue Bayou winner = Blue Bayou
Dominate vs Blue Bayou winner = Blue Bayou


Let's chill on the praise of Blue, to me he's still cheap & he's bummy
Hell I'd promise $250 too if I knew facing midtiers meant keeping my money
indirect but this is some fire
Wording I'm a perfectionist, put the final touches on a masterpiece
When King puts on the final touches his victims were able to contact police
kinda lite, but the flip was cool
As for beef? It's gore to this queer shots thru his top shortens careers
Bullets leave you with a redshirt that'll have you sitting out more than a year
solid
King your girl gave us a double handjob.. good grief you're little dude
She calls it the steering wheel position, her hands stay at 10 & 2
sick punch
My friends are true & look out for me, see an opp they say let's ride
I heard your friends look out for you too like "there he is, let's hide"
kinda lite
I've been to Bali, the Maldives it's like I'm supposed to be afar
Only time your weak ass makes multiple trips is carrying groceries from the car
thats pretty funny, nice 1

solid battle here, expected more flames and more bars. king's personals were fire and hit hard. he fell off for the last two bars. if aero's opener wasn't indirect this would be a harder vote.

i got 3 dope bars each. King's personal attacks just hit hard. but goddamn those last 2 bars were bad. ying and yang i guess. not enough lines to make an argument for consistency i got

v/ KING

glad to see aero back in the league. if resting bitch face had a text rap persona it would be aero.

[Greedy]

King:
Opener- ok
Mid tier- nice personal
Bull market- solid personal angle
Ar- decent
Vs
Aero:
Opener- ok
Redshirt- seen this done similarly
10/2- ok
Closer- i like it

Vote king.
Areo had a nice drop, just a lil light imo

[$pitacular]

King came in throwing haymaker personals for the head and cleaned Aero's clock. Not a bad verse from Aero but King was punching hard. Some of Aero's wording was a little basic and delivery was undeveloped but the concepts we're mostly good. This was better than the champ match tbh

v/King

[Lay Doubt.]

Yoo..u claim GOAT?? Lmaooo, clown wtf is u dreamin' bout
Of course Zelph missing a lip, u bitin' his words before they can leave his mouth
U stole a bar he fucking scrapped, don't try n sit there gassed
Bitch u went from dropping mid tier trash to actually dropping the mid tier's trash
I bet every stock u trade is a fuckin loser, ur so bad at ur life
Next time u'll see a bull markets territory it'll be watching King ravage ur wife
He can't compete with the goat. Come take this faggot away
Tony Romo of text, u talk a great game but choke whenever u actually play

vs.

King your girl gave us a double handjob.. good grief you're little dude
She calls it the steering wheel position, her hands stay at 10 & 2
I've been to Bali, the Maldives it's like I'm supposed to be afar
Only time your weak ass makes multiple trips is carrying groceries from the car


I got King in quotables 4 to 2 here. Yall both had some straight comedy here but to me Aero was just outdone by the personal tie-ins and approach that King took. That quote about using the line from Zelph and then the execution thereafter was overwhelming in a short 12 line battle, and so to me it was a just a more solid and effective verse overall. Less misses as well.


v/ King