LLL Week 7: JEM (3-3) vs Kill Spree (0-0) - JEM Wins

[King]

verses due: Thursday 11:59PST
Minimum Lines = 12 Lines
Maximum Lines = 20 Lines



Extension: Up to opponent IF verse completed & posted/sent. Otherwise at the Moderators discretion.

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[Spree]

Pic battle?

[JEM.]

Sure. I’m at an airport (been gone since last week) you can grab my profile pic or do you want another one. ? If so will have to wait until this evening. Lmk.

[Spree]

Sure. I’m at an airport (been gone since last week) you can grab my profile pic or do you want another one. ? If so will have to wait until this evening. Lmk.

If you got a funny pic with ammo I’m down I can get a new funny pic for you to but if not no worries we can reg battle

[JEM.]

My bad shits been super busy this week. Let’s just do reg since it’s already Wednesday

[Spree]

We agreed via PM for the ext

[Blue Bayou]

@Kill Spree , JEM sent me 12

[Spree]

@Kill Spree , JEM sent me 12

I’ll be posting in a few hrs just blew two tires in my truck

[Spree]

Jem aka Boston AKA has 2 ns wins aka Jus lost to ryno

When I'm back in town, I'll deff hit you up to chill

Listen fucko...
chill? nah..all jabs is what it takes to dumb this wack
Makes sense U try & hang @ the top! cos in this league ur the punchin bag

Fuk U pretty boy! No way this noob all in beef
lst wk cldnt stomach Rye Wraps, but u cant blame it on a gluten allergy

Ur verses get 'Bood up'..ya this mans a waste
Choke U till ur eyes are bulging out more than Robrandas face

Ur no champ! Elite talk? Ur always the lame out
U wouldnt be talked about if U paragraphed a cry session w/Lay Doubt

Keyin this I got nothin...Props on the win
Didnt want to ns! But 'u'll get punched in the grin

& Fuck ur Job & location change! this bitch discrace
While I change locations so the goons can shoot U in the face


Sorry jem. Good shit im sure just keyed this so U didnt get NS'd

[Blue Bayou]

JEMs Verse

My girl? A true Mediterranean greek princess, a god sent dream
Ya girl? Not a branch or olive, but smells like humus & feta cheese
You ain’t gangsta! Saying ya cans is close, but I got body radars
& trust I only need 2 rounds to take you out… like the Jayhawks!
If you had a spine you’d put in work and go the rack route
But you can’t even get the workers, comp the way you back out
That’s why ya broke. Talking nonsense but if friends is all you got
Then this @Greedy fuck will look pathetic begging for hotel comps
You asking to pic battle made me piss of laughter
Cuz you a bad accent you got Blas’d by the pink panther
He’s leaving in a body bag or in a whole cast of problems, when
The director cuts, you’re exactly the latter in two and a half men

[Sting3r]

Jem aka Boston AKA has 2 ns wins aka Jus lost to ryno




Listen fucko...
chill? nah..all jabs is what it takes to dumb this wack
Makes sense U try & hang @ the top! cos in this league ur the punchin bag
solid

Fuk U pretty boy! No way this noob all in beef
lst wk cldnt stomach Rye Wraps, but u cant blame it on a gluten allergy
lite, maybe if u schemed a few more wordplays or something i would like it a bit more

Ur verses get 'Bood up'..ya this mans a waste
Choke U till ur eyes are bulging out more than Robrandas face
bruhhhhhhhhhhh fire


Ur no champ! Elite talk? Ur always the lame out
U wouldnt be talked about if U paragraphed a cry session w/Lay Doubt
funny lite hit


Keyin this I got nothin...Props on the win
Didnt want to ns! But 'u'll get punched in the grin
ya punch him in his grin lool


& Fuck ur Job & location change! this bitch discrace
While I change locations so the goons can shoot U in the face
lite


Sorry jem. Good shit im sure just keyed this so U didnt get NS'd

JEMs Verse

My girl? A true Mediterranean greek princess, a god sent dream
Ya girl? Not a branch or olive, but smells like humus & feta cheese
thats funny

You ain’t gangsta! Saying ya cans is close, but I got body radars
& trust I only need 2 rounds to take you out… like the Jayhawks!
kinda lite not bad

If you had a spine you’d put in work and go the rack route
But you can’t even get the workers, comp the way you back out
nice wordplay and concept

That’s why ya broke. Talking nonsense but if friends is all you got
Then this @Greedy fuck will look pathetic begging for hotel comps
talk that shit

You asking to pic battle made me piss of laughter
Cuz you a bad accent you got Blas’d by the pink panther
wording makes this a bit lite coulda used more in the set up maybe

He’s leaving in a body bag or in a whole cast of problems, when
The director cuts, you’re exactly the latter in two and a half men
lite

kill spree had 2 lines that i liked and jem also had 2 lines that i liked. almost a tie but kill sprees last 2 bars were really keyd up bars u could tell. would like to see what kill spree will bring when he has the time for it.

v/ jem

robranda line was funny af tho

[Aero]

KS

Ur verses get 'Bood up'..ya this mans a waste
Choke U till ur eyes are bulging out more than Robrandas face
LOL


JEM

My girl? A true Mediterranean greek princess, a god sent dream
Ya girl? Not a branch or olive, but smells like humus & feta cheese
lol'ed at mediterranean greek princess. if we're going to start off lying like that at least make it funny and you did.. the punchline was humorous too but silly



This vote wont count but I'm voting this a tie.

[$pitacular]

Spree the punching bag opener was ok, the rye could have been used so much better, I actually liked the cry session punch, thought that was a funny jab at Lay but I'm sure he'll make you pay for it later lol.. you could tell it was a keyed verse and for the love of God stop using that weird poetry style format and stick to regular bodies of text.

JEM I about fell out at your opener lol.. good shit.. then you rhyme body radars and Jay Hawks?! I almost stopped reading right there. But then, you come in hard with workers comp.. and then stop rhyming again in the next bar?! You're killing me here bro. Almost gave this to Spree out of principle.. this is RAP battles bro, not sentence battles. The rest of your verse really wasn't great and latter has been used a lot and was even talked about recently so minus cool points on that.. BUT you still won with the clownin

v/ JEM

[Echelon]

Killing Spree -


FL Cypher Winner
2x FL Champion
1-2 Champion
PBX Verse Of The Night
Key 5 Tourney Champion
Re: LLL Week 7: JEM (3-3) vs Kill Spree (0-0) - EXT
Jem aka Boston AKA has 2 ns wins aka Jus lost to ryno

Quote Originally Posted by jem talkin to me
When I'm back in town, I'll deff hit you up to chill

Listen fucko...
chill? nah..all jabs is what it takes to dumb this wack
Makes sense U try & hang @ the top! cos in this league ur the punchin bag

This was cool.


Fuk U pretty boy! No way this noob all in beef
lst wk cldnt stomach Rye Wraps, but u cant blame it on a gluten allergy

This was okay.

Ur verses get 'Bood up'..ya this mans a waste
Choke U till ur eyes are bulging out more than Robrandas face

This was okay.


Ur no champ! Elite talk? Ur always the lame out
U wouldnt be talked about if U paragraphed a cry session w/Lay Doubt

This was okay.

Keyin this I got nothin...Props on the win
Didnt want to ns! But 'u'll get punched in the grin

This was okay.

& Fuck ur Job & location change! this bitch discrace
While I change locations so the goons can shoot U in the face

lol, this was cool.

Jem -


My girl? A true Mediterranean greek princess, a god sent dream
Ya girl? Not a branch or olive, but smells like humus & feta cheese

This was okay.

You ain’t gangsta! Saying ya cans is close, but I got body radars
& trust I only need 2 rounds to take you out… like the Jayhawks!

This was okay.

If you had a spine you’d put in work and go the rack route
But you can’t even get the workers, comp the way you back out

This was okay.


That’s why ya broke. Talking nonsense but if friends is all you got
Then this @Greedy fuck will look pathetic begging for hotel comps

Lol, this was okay.

You asking to pic battle made me piss of laughter
Cuz you a bad accent you got Blas’d by the pink panther

This was nice.

He’s leaving in a body bag or in a whole cast of problems, when
The director cuts, you’re exactly the latter in two and a half men

This was okay.

This was a okay battle, but I'm giving this to Killing Spree.

[Lay Doubt.]

I got JEM for his opener. It was really opener vs. opener here, which I edged to JEM because it was funnier to me. KS could have taken this pretty easily if he hadn't keyed his last two lines into some no show sounding nonsense. Just needed one more solid jab. I also second what @Spitacular1 said about fixing the format to be one solid standard verse and not spacing between each bar. Makes it feel automatically wack before I even begin reading the actual content of it all.

v/ JEM

But good god bro you gotta start rhyming your shit better. Or even at all honestly.