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Thread: Bahriman Vs Razor Sharp - OPEN FOR VOTES

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    Bahriman Vs Razor Sharp - OPEN FOR VOTES

    5 bars(10 Lines)
    Due by tomorrow night



    Good luck Iíll post first

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    Re: Bahriman Vs Razor Sharp

    @ Bahriman were your verse at man see this why I took the win last time I knew you wouldnít respond.

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    Duckin that work

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    Re: Bahriman Vs Razor Sharp

    Quote Originally Posted by Razor Sharp View Post
    @ Bahriman were your verse at man see this why I took the win last time I knew you wouldn’t respond.

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    Duckin that work
    I’ll have it posted in a few hrs

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    Re: Bahriman Vs Razor Sharp

    This knife’ll slice through this bad guy, I don’t fuck around
    Won’t even see Razors Edge cos on sight he’ll be on his back laid out on the ground
    Talkin muscle? Relax’er I’ll roll up to your crib & bed your lady
    When it comes to sex a pill got her feelin good yet she dnt fuk w/You unless she highly medicated
    I’ll beat your family..But your G Ma? I’ll rock the bitch worse
    Then punch Rays son! Ironic your a sorry excuse for a father figure
    You Rich’N wack. Bitch it’s facts.. I don’t condone the wimp shit
    Heat’ll have you melt down more than SoIcey when you vote against him!
    All your bars are trash, no one will rep ya shit
    Literally needed me to NS is the only way you’ll get a win


    @Razor Sharp

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    Re: Bahriman Vs Razor Sharp

    Run up JAMES HARDEN beard on with a ROCKET, take off 1/2 ya back
    TRIPLE THREAT, pump the strap, B-4 I shoot it I gotta GATHER-STEP
    Bring out da OLD-HEAT, ur whole "D" played, wet u up, leave U N da WATER to "WADE"
    RUSSELL WILSON flow, I SEE-ERA's N U loser, SEA-I'll-HAWK U, n son ur lil FUTURE
    I got RINGS, RAZOR a vet, "RONDO", u "BALL" but ur BARS got dat FUNNY FORM "LONZO"
    U talk wreck-less 2 me it sounds "GREEK-FREEK" RAZOR spray LLamas
    Play wit "BUCKS" I pull out pumps, same wing-span as "GIANNIS"
    4 dem "LARRY-BIRDS" I'll DOUBLE-CROSS U, I'm "KYRIE" over carrots
    These shells uh "PIERCE" u "COUSY" when RAZOR "ROB" bet you "PARRISH"

    @Bahriman

    You should have no-showed again R.I.P. Bahr

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    Re: Bahriman Vs Razor Sharp - OPEN FOR VOTES

    ?????????

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    Re: Bahriman Vs Razor Sharp - OPEN FOR VOTES

    Still can't believe how this got slept on, I literally Ripped this dudes to shreds with the Bars. This verse alone is hall of fame worthy!!!!

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    Re: Bahriman Vs Razor Sharp - OPEN FOR VOTES

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    Check ins verses and votes only in battles. Stop free posting final warning
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    Re: Bahriman Vs Razor Sharp

    Quote Originally Posted by Bahriman View Post
    This knife’ll slice through this bad guy, I don’t fuck around
    Won’t even see Razors Edge cos on sight he’ll be on his back laid out on the ground
    EH
    Talkin muscle? Relax’er I’ll roll up to your crib & bed your lady
    When it comes to sex a pill got her feelin good yet she dnt fuk w/You unless she highly medicated
    THIS COULD HAVE BEEN WAY BETTER
    I’ll beat your family..But your G Ma? I’ll rock the bitch worse
    Then punch Rays son! Ironic your a sorry excuse for a father figure
    THIS OK
    You Rich’N wack. Bitch it’s facts.. I don’t condone the wimp shit
    Heat’ll have you melt down more than SoIcey when you vote against him!
    COOL
    All your bars are trash, no one will rep ya shit
    Literally needed me to NS is the only way you’ll get a win
    NAH MAN

    @Razor Sharp
    Rays son, soicey

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    Quote Originally Posted by Razor Sharp View Post
    Run up JAMES HARDEN beard on with a ROCKET, take off 1/2 ya back
    TRIPLE THREAT, pump the strap, B-4 I shoot it I gotta GATHER-STEP
    BACK AND STEP DONT RHYME BRO
    Bring out da OLD-HEAT, ur whole "D" played, wet u up, leave U N da WATER to "WADE"
    RUSSELL WILSON flow, I SEE-ERA's N U loser, SEA-I'll-HAWK U, n son ur lil FUTURE
    NAH MAN
    I got RINGS, RAZOR a vet, "RONDO", u "BALL" but ur BARS got dat FUNNY FORM "LONZO"
    U talk wreck-less 2 me it sounds "GREEK-FREEK" RAZOR spray LLamas
    NAH
    Play wit "BUCKS" I pull out pumps, same wing-span as "GIANNIS"
    4 dem "LARRY-BIRDS" I'll DOUBLE-CROSS U, I'm "KYRIE" over carrots
    These shells uh "PIERCE" u "COUSY" when RAZOR "ROB" bet you "PARRISH"
    A LOT OF LOW HANGING FRUIT CONCEPTS, POOR RHYMING


    @Bahriman

    You should have no-showed again R.I.P. Bahr
    V/Bahriman

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    Re: Bahriman Vs Razor Sharp - OPEN FOR VOTES

    This knife’ll slice through this bad guy, I don’t fuck around
    Won’t even see Razors Edge cos on sight he’ll be on his back laid out on the ground
    Decent hit/wordplay. Decent rhyme.

    Talkin muscle? Relax’er I’ll roll up to your crib & bed your lady
    When it comes to sex a pill got her feelin good yet she dnt fuk w/You unless she highly medicated
    Cold blooded, rhyme doesn't much connect and a bit winded.

    I’ll beat your family..But your G Ma? I’ll rock the bitch worse
    Then punch Rays son! Ironic your a sorry excuse for a father figure
    More cold blooded personal but doesn't rhyme or flow for shit.

    You Rich’N wack. Bitch it’s facts.. I don’t condone the wimp shit
    Heat’ll have you melt down more than SoIcey when you vote against him!
    Decent bar with some multiples.

    All your bars are trash, no one will rep ya shit
    Literally needed me to NS is the only way you’ll get a win
    Not much of a rhyme, not a great finish.

    -VS-

    Run up JAMES HARDEN beard on with a ROCKET, take off 1/2 ya back
    TRIPLE THREAT, pump the strap, B-4 I shoot it I gotta GATHER-STEP
    Flows nice, wordplay is there. Decent rhyme holding it together.

    Bring out da OLD-HEAT, ur whole "D" played, wet u up, leave U N da WATER to "WADE"
    RUSSELL WILSON flow, I SEE-ERA's N U loser, SEA-I'll-HAWK U, n son ur lil FUTURE
    Decent rhymes, I see the wordplay not super cohesive.

    I got RINGS, RAZOR a vet, "RONDO", u "BALL" but ur BARS got dat FUNNY FORM "LONZO"
    U talk wreck-less 2 me it sounds "GREEK-FREEK" RAZOR spray LLamas
    Mediocre, wordplay is there. Basketball references becoming a dead horse.

    Play wit "BUCKS" I pull out pumps, same wing-span as "GIANNIS"
    4 dem "LARRY-BIRDS" I'll DOUBLE-CROSS U, I'm "KYRIE" over carrots
    These shells uh "PIERCE" u "COUSY" when RAZOR "ROB" bet you "PARRISH"
    Rhyme scheme connects. More of that word play. Finish is OK.

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    Alright this is the way I see it. Bahriman came more personal but needed tighter rhymes to make it cohesive and take motion. Both opened up pretty strong. Wordplay was there, Razor had bit more quality and quantity. Although the basketball metaphors got pretty boring after the second one. Rhyme scheme, flow, multiples, format - Razor had the advantage for the majority of the battle. A little bit stronger finish from Razor and although not as personal far more cohesive of a verse.

    Vote: Razor Sharp

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    Re: Bahriman Vs Razor Sharp

    Quote Originally Posted by Bahriman View Post
    This knife’ll slice through this bad guy, I don’t fuck around
    Won’t even see Razors Edge cos on sight he’ll be on his back laid out on the ground
    Don't love this. Why his edge?
    Talkin muscle? Relax’er I’ll roll up to your crib & bed your lady
    When it comes to sex a pill got her feelin good yet she dnt fuk w/You unless she highly medicated
    Don't like it
    I’ll beat your family..But your G Ma? I’ll rock the bitch worse
    Then punch Rays son! Ironic your a sorry excuse for a father figure
    This doesn't rhyme
    You Rich’N wack. Bitch it’s facts.. I don’t condone the wimp shit
    Heat’ll have you melt down more than SoIcey when you vote against him!
    This doesn't rhyme again. Do you have a weird accent or something?
    All your bars are trash, no one will rep ya shit
    Literally needed me to NS is the only way you’ll get a win
    Eh


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    Quote Originally Posted by Razor Sharp View Post
    Run up JAMES HARDEN beard on with a ROCKET, take off 1/2 ya back
    TRIPLE THREAT, pump the strap, B-4 I shoot it I gotta GATHER-STEP
    Don't like this and hate the formating
    Bring out da OLD-HEAT, ur whole "D" played, wet u up, leave U N da WATER to "WADE"
    RUSSELL WILSON flow, I SEE-ERA's N U loser, SEA-I'll-HAWK U, n son ur lil FUTURE
    Massive force
    I got RINGS, RAZOR a vet, "RONDO", u "BALL" but ur BARS got dat FUNNY FORM "LONZO"
    U talk wreck-less 2 me it sounds "GREEK-FREEK" RAZOR spray LLamas
    What in the fuck is that last line? Did you have a stroke?
    Play wit "BUCKS" I pull out pumps, same wing-span as "GIANNIS"
    4 dem "LARRY-BIRDS" I'll DOUBLE-CROSS U, I'm "KYRIE" over carrots
    These shells uh "PIERCE" u "COUSY" when RAZOR "ROB" bet you "PARRISH"

    ... I had to count cuz you have an odd number of lines

    @Bahriman

    You should have no-showed again R.I.P. Bahr

    Vote The first guy. This was a rough one boys.

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    Re: Bahriman Vs Razor Sharp - OPEN FOR VOTES

    Vote bah
    Better verse.. Nothing really hard here but ok jabs.. Razor seems like a audio dude texting for the first time.. Gotta work on set ups and putting a punch together

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