LLL Week 8: Reef Flex (2-5) vs Unfukwitable (0-0) OPEN FOR VOTES

[King]

verses due: Thursday 11:59PST
Minimum Lines = 12 Lines
Maximum Lines = 20 Lines



Extension: Up to opponent IF verse completed & posted/sent. Otherwise at the Moderators discretion.

VOTING CLOSES SUNDAY NIGHT/MONDAY MORNING
BATTLES SET SHORTLY AFTER!


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NO BITING OR RECYCLING!!!!
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Recycle Once = DQ
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Edits:
First Person can't edit after second person posts their verse
Second person can't edit after first vote


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[Sting3r]

Check round 5 or some shit let’s go

[Unfukwitable]

a 20pc it is

[Sting3r]

this lazy fat fuck no shows again

put this gun in yo mouth pussy, you can hold that fast
one point of the finger will expose ya grill.. no Kodak Black
u take dick in the ass, at least 1 butt fuck minimal
I think he did that just to prove Noquear is Unfuckwitable
him and two other dudes, oh I get it, thats a Mike TriO
bet you smell like dried Cheetos with a hint of trife BO
he in private mode searching words like "dudes in hot speedos "
i got the tools to grind ya gears, a monkey wrench in cog, neeto!!
u said u wanted the 20pc, dis fickle fuck is not showin'..
take ya style & wash it down, then use ur verse to stop chokin'
I just got high af, realized my shits lit, it was a fiyaaahhh
ur just another fat bitch on RB the last one was Mariaaaahhh
word is bond'll make u rage quit, I got the golden eye for multi
remote mines, it's show time, in no time, you'll be mortified & salty
but since u spinning in place, heres the code that you'll use best
it will send u back 2 where u came from. that's the bathroom to vent
lazy hog, this fat fuck stuffing Hostes right now til his belly swell
shit makes me wanna drop the glock & pioneer rapper like melly mel
go try ya luck on netcees, u and zelph can be besties
take turns trynna figure out wordplays & fondle each others testies

[Unfukwitable]

I dont wanna hear how u blast a 9 or its crashing time;
Put a Brick on the pedal of Reef Lexus & Speed up his Reaction time.
After this beating he gon want a doctor;
Punches got RPG impact & King replaced Orc w/ another Monster
Iridescence lasers have'em reading rainbows that he can't pan,
He'll go frm near death to getting a 'black host'.. for a transplant.
Its all Thug Life Makaveli talk til things is pointed
leave Lil Pox spread out. Dr's tryna revive u w/ Shingles ointment
tell em breathing is a peice of cake he'll lose weigh ina yr;
struggling to take breaths so he can savor the flavor of air.
I wouldnt even take pay to grip on a blade n scalp u;
The MAGA Snap on you & make America Great w/ out you.
All crazed intentions... I'm Point Blank w/ Wessons...
Bout to roc ya chest-piece like Shawshank Redemption.
Bombs droppin, Hammers Spit, Bullets feelin Cancerous;
Try to make it thru a 'War n Tee's" w/ his face on it get made for the Damages.
No awards since 08?
u must need 40 Rare candies from a Pokemon stash tryna face sharks where they lure at;
They want me to face a 'C Level' opponent, but how he learn to swim w/ out his 1st badge!
Whoever seen his last fight should wonder why im his next issue;
Watch the Smoke between Barc and Reef & that ass whoppin called for a Distress signal.

[Lay Doubt.]

put this gun in yo mouth pussy, you can hold that fast
one point of the finger will expose ya grill.. no Kodak Black
see what you were going for here but a bit too simple and not a great way to open a verse imo
u take dick in the ass, at least 1 butt fuck minimal
I think he did that just to prove Noquear is Unfuckwitable
ok so “noquear” is “knockout” in Spanish but I’m not seeing any tie-in to that
him and two other dudes, oh I get it, thats a Mike TriO
bet you smell like dried Cheetos with a hint of trife BO
funny-ish but not much of a concept here and feels more like some cypher shit to me than a league battle bar
he in private mode searching words like "dudes in hot speedos "
i got the tools to grind ya gears, a monkey wrench in cog, neeto!!
see above
u said u wanted the 20pc, dis fickle fuck is not showin'..
take ya style & wash it down, then use ur verse to stop chokin'
I actually like this. Woulda been better if you’d said something like “ya style’s so watered down..”
I just got high af, realized my shits lit, it was a fiyaaahhh
ur just another fat bitch on RB the last one was Mariaaaahhh
that’s my home girl you’re talking bout, sir! this was funny but once again more suitable for some cypher shit
word is bond'll make u rage quit, I got the golden eye for multi
remote mines, it's show time, in no time, you'll be mortified & salty
not sure how “mortified & salty” fits into the 007 theme you led into it with, not is that much of an actual punch
but since u spinning in place, heres the code that you'll use best
it will send u back 2 where u came from. that's the bathroom to vent
decent, original
lazy hog, this fat fuck stuffing Hostes right now til his belly swell
shit makes me wanna drop the glock & pioneer rapper like melly mel
pie a near rapper, I see you. Creative and comedy, good imagery here
go try ya luck on netcees, u and zelph can be besties
take turns trynna figure out wordplays & fondle each others testies
filler and a weak closer but you already knew that

vs.

I dont wanna hear how u blast a 9 or its crashing time;
Put a Brick on the pedal of Reef Lexus & Speed up his Reaction time.
reflexes, gotcha. pretty creative but idk why ‘brick’ and ‘speed’ are capitalized tho
After this beating he gon want a doctor;
Punches got RPG impact & King replaced Orc w/ another Monster
lazy set up, good punch. Like the RPG impact tie-in along with a personal element
Iridescence lasers have'em reading rainbows that he can't pan,
He'll go frm near death to getting a 'black host'.. for a transplant.
not feeling, and ‘iridescence”’should never be used in a text verse again
Its all Thug Life Makaveli talk til things is pointed
leave Lil Pox spread out. Dr's tryna revive u w/ Shingles ointment
creative idea but pluralizing ‘pac’ to ‘pacs’ is a reach to me. Could’ve been dope if you’d mentioned his ashes or bones in your set up so that it read like “lil pac’s spread out” as a possessive form referring to leaving either of em spread out
tell em breathing is a peice of cake he'll lose weigh ina yr;
struggling to take breaths so he can savor the flavor of air.
year/air don’t rhyme but wouldn’t have been feeling this regardless
I wouldnt even take pay to grip on a blade n scalp u;
The MAGA Snap on you & make America Great w/ out you.
I’d like this more if I didn’t just see a “mag’a” wp used in the same way over on NC like a week ago
All crazed intentions... I'm Point Blank w/ Wessons...
Bout to roc ya chest-piece like Shawshank Redemption.
I fuck with this, coulda done more with the execution than a simple analogy to the movie title tho
Bombs droppin, Hammers Spit, Bullets feelin Cancerous;
Try to make it thru a 'War n Tee's" w/ his face on it get made for the Damages.
what? nah
No awards since 08?
u must need 40 Rare candies from a Pokemon stash tryna face sharks where they lure at;
They want me to face a 'C Level' opponent, but how he learn to swim w/ out his 1st badge!
creative but not hard hitting or much of a diss here
Whoever seen his last fight should wonder why im his next issue;
Watch the Smoke between Barc and Reef & that ass whoppin called for a Distress signal.
not feeling, weak close

It sucks that Reef clearly thought/assumed his opponent wasn’t gonna show, because he had the ability to make this closer and maybe even win if he had taken this more seriously. Had some concepts with potential and comedy in there for sure, but too much of his verse felt like some cypher type stuff to me. Pioneer was cool tho for a joke bar. I gotta give this to Un for a more functional and cohesive battle verse. Replaced Orc w/ another monster and rock ya chest piece were pretty dope and the rest was more consistent and effective as a whole. Way to show up fellas


v/ Unfukwitable

[Echelon]

Reef Flex -

Nice verse here; very nice with it man. You're good, and it showed here. Nice wordplay and nice conglomerate. Good work.

Unfukwitable -

Good verse. Nice one here, man. You're a beast and it shows. Good work.

Overall -

Dope verses you two, but I'm giving this to Reef Flex. Nice one guys.

V/ Reef Flex


@Sinning you've been talked to about this before.... I know you're a troll but when it comes to votes you're going to have to provide actual feedback and breakdowns of the material. This doesn't count (none of his will) for now until edited

[Unfukwitable]

Reef Flex -

Nice verse here; very nice with it man. You're good, and it showed here. Nice wordplay and nice conglomerate. Good work.

Unfukwitable -

Good verse. Nice one here, man. You're a beast and it shows. Good work.

Overall -

Dope verses you two, but I'm giving this to Reef Flex. Nice one guys.

V/ Reef Flex

Lets get some actual content to your vote....

[JEM.]

put this gun in yo mouth pussy, you can hold that fast
one point of the finger will expose ya grill.. no Kodak Black
To quote Spit... I just don't like these young money bars... and
I didn't think it was strong here.

u take dick in the ass, at least 1 butt fuck minimal
I think he did that just to prove Noquear is Unfuckwitable
Okay... I get the tie in just was alright to me

him and two other dudes, oh I get it, thats a Mike TriO
bet you smell like dried Cheetos with a hint of trife BO
Lol funny but a jab.

he in private mode searching words like "dudes in hot speedos "
i got the tools to grind ya gears, a monkey wrench in cog, neeto!!
lol, I thought this hit.

u said u wanted the 20pc, dis fickle fuck is not showin'..
take ya style & wash it down, then use ur verse to stop chokin'
Nice.

I just got high af, realized my shits lit, it was a fiyaaahhh
ur just another fat bitch on RB the last one was Mariaaaahhh
Eh. I guess it wouldve hit harder if I knew who Mariah was...
I assume just a fat bitch... and assume a reasonable personal...
But just thought it was bland.

word is bond'll make u rage quit, I got the golden eye for multi
remote mines, it's show time, in no time, you'll be mortified & salty
Na.

but since u spinning in place, heres the code that you'll use best
it will send u back 2 where u came from. that's the bathroom to vent
Decent.

lazy hog, this fat fuck stuffing Hostes right now til his belly swell
shit makes me wanna drop the glock & pioneer rapper like melly mel
Nice and to me your best bar here...

go try ya luck on netcees, u and zelph can be besties
take turns trynna figure out wordplays & fondle each others testies
Eh... a statement diss at best.


I dont wanna hear how u blast a 9 or its crashing time;
Put a Brick on the pedal of Reef Lexus & Speed up his Reaction time.
Nice.

After this beating he gon want a doctor;
Punches got RPG impact & King replaced Orc w/ another Monster
Nice.

Iridescence lasers have'em reading rainbows that he can't pan,
He'll go frm near death to getting a 'black host'.. for a transplant.
Alright.

Its all Thug Life Makaveli talk til things is pointed
leave Lil Pox spread out. Dr's tryna revive u w/ Shingles ointment
I get it but something about it... the execution maybe? Just wasn't smooth.

tell em breathing is a peice of cake he'll lose weigh ina yr;
struggling to take breaths so he can savor the flavor of air.
Eh.

I wouldnt even take pay to grip on a blade n scalp u;
The MAGA Snap on you & make America Great w/ out you.
Decent.

All crazed intentions... I'm Point Blank w/ Wessons...
Bout to roc ya chest-piece like Shawshank Redemption.
Alright.

Bombs droppin, Hammers Spit, Bullets feelin Cancerous;
Try to make it thru a 'War n Tee's" w/ his face on it get made for the Damages.
Good word play... but this was just not executed right to be real.

No awards since 08?
u must need 40 Rare candies from a Pokemon stash tryna face sharks where they lure at;
They want me to face a 'C Level' opponent, but how he learn to swim w/ out his 1st badge!
No.

Whoever seen his last fight should wonder why im his next issue;
Watch the Smoke between Barc and Reef & that ass whoppin called for a Distress signal.
Alright...


This battle actually disappointed me... Reef didn't have any of his typical wp and comparison bars...
and I thought it was rushed... surely un would give me an easy call... all in all UN did do a bit better
but not by much... Was expecting a banger here...

v/Un

[Blue Bayou]

put this gun in yo mouth pussy, you can hold that fast
one point of the finger will expose ya grill.. no Kodak Black
cool meta, i dig it
u take dick in the ass, at least 1 butt fuck minimal
I think he did that just to prove Noquear is Unfuckwitable
lol but nah
him and two other dudes, oh I get it, thats a Mike TriO
bet you smell like dried Cheetos with a hint of trife BO
haha kinda funny but cheesy (no pun intended)
he in private mode searching words like "dudes in hot speedos "
i got the tools to grind ya gears, a monkey wrench in cog, neeto!!
lol, pretty funny wp angle
u said u wanted the 20pc, dis fickle fuck is not showin'..
take ya style & wash it down, then use ur verse to stop chokin'
solid
I just got high af, realized my shits lit, it was a fiyaaahhh
ur just another fat bitch on RB the last one was Mariaaaahhh
nahh, dunno if Un fat and this one is too basic to sting imo
word is bond'll make u rage quit, I got the golden eye for multi
remote mines, it's show time, in no time, you'll be mortified & salty
cool multis but the punch falls flat
but since u spinning in place, heres the code that you'll use best
it will send u back 2 where u came from. that's the bathroom to vent
okayish, knda chuckle worthy
lazy hog, this fat fuck stuffing Hostes right now til his belly swell
shit makes me wanna drop the glock & pioneer rapper like melly mel
pretty cool meta & fresh wp.. like this bar
go try ya luck on netcees, u and zelph can be besties
take turns trynna figure out wordplays & fondle each others testies
hahah no man


vs

I dont wanna hear how u blast a 9 or its crashing time;
Put a Brick on the pedal of Reef Lexus & Speed up his Reaction time.
pretty cool.. solid wp on the nameplay and the punch was developed well imo
After this beating he gon want a doctor;
Punches got RPG impact & King replaced Orc w/ another Monster
cool, good jab & relevant angle
Iridescence lasers have'em reading rainbows that he can't pan,
He'll go frm near death to getting a 'black host'.. for a transplant.
cool & creative
Its all Thug Life Makaveli talk til things is pointed
leave Lil Pox spread out. Dr's tryna revive u w/ Shingles ointment
its creative but i dunno the ref to him being a lil pac is mehh
tell em breathing is a peice of cake he'll lose weigh ina yr;
struggling to take breaths so he can savor the flavor of air.
not feeling this one
I wouldnt even take pay to grip on a blade n scalp u;
The MAGA Snap on you & make America Great w/ out you.
seen a couple MAGA bars recently but this was pretty solid for a gun bar
All crazed intentions... I'm Point Blank w/ Wessons...
Bout to roc ya chest-piece like Shawshank Redemption.
dece meta on the chess/chest angle.. coolish
Bombs droppin, Hammers Spit, Bullets feelin Cancerous;
Try to make it thru a 'War n Tee's" w/ his face on it get made for the Damages.
its an old wp tbh and not sure the flip elevates it enough .

No awards since 08?
u must need 40 Rare candies from a Pokemon stash tryna face sharks where they lure at;
They want me to face a 'C Level' opponent, but how he learn to swim w/ out his 1st badge!
for a sea/c play this was pretty creative.. punch feels lite tho
Whoever seen his last fight should wonder why im his next issue;
Watch the Smoke between Barc and Reef & that ass whoppin called for a Distress signal.
pretty nice, coolish personal


Yeah it seems like Reef mailed it in thinking UN was gunna no-show, he went the comedic approach which was cool and had some funny hitters, but others were just under developed or too basic imo... UN had some creative concepts throughout and was fairly consistent... I think he did enough to win this one this week

Vote - Unfuk

[Blue Bayou]

Unfukwitble wins