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Thread: LLL Week 9 Contendership Match: King (6-1) vs. Blue Bayou (6-1) Blue Wins

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    LLL Week 9 Contendership Match: King (6-1) vs. Blue Bayou (6-1) Blue Wins

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    always a pleasure. 16?

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    Re: LLL Week 9 Contendership Match: King (6-1) vs. Blue Bayou (6-1)

    16 it is
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    Re: LLL Week 9 Contendership Match: King (6-1) vs. Blue Bayou (6-1)

    will be dropping tomorrow
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    Re: LLL Week 9 Contendership Match: King (6-1) vs. Blue Bayou (6-1)

    Cool np I'll be ready tonight I'm away on the weekend

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    Re: LLL Week 9 Contendership Match: King (6-1) vs. Blue Bayou (6-1)

    have to post now as i'm not going to be around... FTC, gluck King


    say good night King, i’m hyped to smash. one of the best to ever write this craft
    you’re No One. Arya gave you a shout-out in her speech once she knifed his ass
    ifuckedurgirl.com – click the link man i blasted your bae in the mouth
    ^there’s a video of meander. taken after i strolled thru you on my way to the belt
    she loves my pump action thrusts & when a load covers her chin
    my pacemaker take feeling’s to heart...you just get under her skin
    leave you silent-g, no way youre breathing once the mac is felt
    once the trey starts to sinking your chances a livin' start doin that as well
    i’m like a missile thats come to hit you cuz i target direct
    heat-seeking...on page 7 of a search & haven’t found a dope bar of urs yet
    you’re verses are mad inconsistent, never great cuz you’re flowin is spotty
    Range goes from awful to decent...mine goes from driveway to forest to dispose of ur body
    his girl turns off the lights when he’s naked, keeps that lard at arms reach
    she knows seeing this cracker barrel remind her he’s had farrr too much cheese
    want me to best describe all the ways this pussy guy is a chump?!
    calm/endearing’s a good way too put it...he’s been doin that w/ my style for months
    name suits em just perfect, im bein' honest it’s sublime n’ direct
    King stands for the ruler...everytime i walk in a room as a sign of respect
    Last edited by Blue Bayou; May 11th, 2019 at 09:52 AM

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    Re: LLL Week 9 Contendership Match: King (6-1) vs. Blue Bayou (6-1)

    See em public I'll be in his face quick, no denyin that
    n If Blueshift towards me I'll turn em red when I send em flying back
    Ur a fuckin joke. A clown that I repeatedly stomp
    Bout to toss this barrel of laughs far enough to win a strong man comp
    Smash every girl u love, have em lingerie'd out n wet with a glance
    Only garter belt action for Blue is tryina stop me from gettin in his sisters pants
    Run thru ur town like a hurricane, I got guns for days n I'll bring em out
    If u got cans stocked up it's coz a storms coming n u cant leave the house
    Last battle I dropped 50% filler, u were lucky to catch less fury
    Fuck a full verse, I only need a good half to knock u out like Steph Curry
    Kick in ur door n show no mercy, that's what we gon' do
    U'll take a pump to stomach then I'll make u girl swallow nut to she does too
    Shoulda never returned, bout to send this fag to jesus
    Ironic u came back from a break just to get smashed to pieces
    Put a nice number on em then hittas headin this nerds way
    If it gets em hit I'll be throwing bands out faster than Simon on his worst day
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    Re: LLL Week 9 Contendership Match: King (6-1) vs. Blue Bayou (6-1) OPEN FOR VOTES

    V/ tie


    Syke! This is the only battle up I can vote on so I’ll give it another read tomorrow for the vote
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    $9.99 for an unbiased vote
    $14.99 full breakdown vote

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    Re: LLL Week 9 Contendership Match: King (6-1) vs. Blue Bayou (6-1) OPEN FOR VOTES

    Blue -

    Dope verse here; very intricate with nice bars. Under the skin and your closer were pretty sick. You're nice with the pen' here. You're doing good here. Nice - clean verse.

    King - This was dope. You came with nice witty' punchlines. You're nice with the pen' as-well. Your opener was very nice. Good work all-around. Keep doing this!

    Overall -

    Last battle I read from you guys..I had King winning..this battle..Blue Bayou takes this..nice one guys..

    V/ Blue Bayou

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    Re: LLL Week 9 Contendership Match: King (6-1) vs. Blue Bayou (6-1) OPEN FOR VOTES

    say good night King, i’m hyped to smash. one of the best to ever write this craft
    you’re No One. Arya gave you a shout-out in her speech once she knifed his ass
    Eh. Kind of obvious and not your better build ups even with the faceless tie-in. Ok.

    ifuckedurgirl.com – click the link man i blasted your bae in the mouth
    ^there’s a video of meander. taken after i strolled thru you on my way to the belt
    I tried sounding this out in a million ways and it doesn't rhyme and just not feeling it.

    she loves my pump action thrusts & when a load covers her chin
    my pacemaker take feeling’s to heart...you just get under her skin
    Dope... this is what i'm talking about.

    leave you silent-g, no way youre breathing once the mac is felt
    once the trey starts to sinking your chances a livin' start doin that as well
    Nice... but not typical Blue smooth/polished but still hit.

    i’m like a missile thats come to hit you cuz i target direct
    heat-seeking...on page 7 of a search & haven’t found a dope bar of urs yet
    Direct... I dig it.

    you’re verses are mad inconsistent, never great cuz you’re flowin is spotty
    Range goes from awful to decent...mine goes from driveway to forest to dispose of ur body
    Alright.

    his girl turns off the lights when he’s naked, keeps that lard at arms reach
    she knows seeing this cracker barrel remind her he’s had farrr too much cheese
    Mmm... I like it but and I hate the pun here it does lean towards 'cheesy' territory.

    want me to best describe all the ways this pussy guy is a chump?!
    calm/endearing’s a good way too put it...he’s been doin that w/ my style for months
    I get it. Nice...even if a bit if the way you had to use the slanted line to get to commandeering
    took a bit off it.

    name suits em just perfect, im bein' honest it’s sublime n’ direct
    King stands for the ruler...everytime i walk in a room as a sign of respect
    Yo, you might want to PM me if there's something i'm missing here... because
    as a direct bar I think this is very light... and i've looked at it at all angles
    then again - I'm tired.. as it stands... it's alright at best, almost a throw away.



    See em public I'll be in his face quick, no denyin that
    n If Blueshift towards me I'll turn em red when I send em flying back
    lol... Fire < get it? haha no seriously pretty good start.

    Ur a fuckin joke. A clown that I repeatedly stomp
    Bout to toss this barrel of laughs far enough to win a strong man comp
    Ok, only because barrel of laughs?

    Smash every girl u love, have em lingerie'd out n wet with a glance
    Only garter belt action for Blue is tryina stop me from gettin in his sisters pants
    Nice.

    Run thru ur town like a hurricane, I got guns for days n I'll bring em out
    If u got cans stocked up it's coz a storms coming n u cant leave the house
    Pretty good.

    Last battle I dropped 50% filler, u were lucky to catch less fury
    Fuck a full verse, I only need a good half to knock u out like Steph Curry
    Pretty good current event.

    Kick in ur door n show no mercy, that's what we gon' do
    U'll take a pump to stomach then I'll make u girl swallow nut to she does too
    God, man... this was just not smooth/well written.

    Shoulda never returned, bout to send this fag to jesus
    Ironic u came back from a break just to get smashed to pieces
    Nice.

    Put a nice number on em then hittas headin this nerds way
    If it gets em hit I'll be throwing bands out faster than Simon on his worst day
    Pretty good...


    I mean... really? Look, I get it - life, busy, y'all write a ton.. especially Blue
    but this is saddly a reflection of the current state of the leauge... This was suppose
    to be a marquee match up... and y'all both disappointed greatly. I truly hope this turns
    around.

    I'm giving it to King because it was his collective vs the heart/inner skin line for me....
    and as I was debating... Blue had a bar that didn't rhyme. I know y'all both did this FTC
    I remember one week I had 2 bars that didn't rhyme and wrote my drop in the quick reply...

    Let's get back to a thriving league... y'all two matter.

    v/King.

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    Re: LLL Week 9 Contendership Match: King (6-1) vs. Blue Bayou (6-1) OPEN FOR VOTES

    she loves my pump action thrusts & when a load covers her chin
    my pacemaker take feeling’s to heart...you just get under her skin
    i’m like a missile thats come to hit you cuz i target direct
    heat-seeking...on page 7 of a search & haven’t found a dope bar of urs yety
    want me to best describe all the ways this pussy guy is a chump?!
    calm/endearing’s a good way too put it...he’s been doin that w/ my style for months

    vs

    See em public I'll be in his face quick, no denyin that
    n If Blueshift towards me I'll turn em red when I send em flying back
    Last battle I dropped 50% filler, u were lucky to catch less fury
    Fuck a full verse, I only need a good half to knock u out like Steph Curry



    Was very generous with quotes here to be honest. Neither tried or gave a fuck. Difference is probably BB spent 8 minutes on his verse while King spent 4. BB edged it. Liked the Steph line from King and heat seeker was funny from BB. Lets get this moved on so we can keep the league going.

    V BB
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