LLL Week 9: Reef Flex (2-6) vs. Joe Boston (3-4) Joe Wins

[Blue Bayou]

verses due: Friday 11:59PST
AUTOMATIC EXTENSION HAS BEEN GIVEN TO SATURDAY IF NEEDED, DUE TO THE WEEK STRETCH
Minimum Lines = 12 Lines
Maximum Lines = 20 Lines



Extension: Up to opponent IF verse completed & posted/sent. Otherwise at the Moderators discretion.

VOTING CLOSES SUNDAY NIGHT/MONDAY MORNING
BATTLES SET SHORTLY AFTER!


2 No-Shows = Season Ban

NO BITING OR RECYCLING!!!!
Biting results in a SEASON BAN
Recycle Once = DQ
RECYCLE TWICE = BANNED FOR SEASON

Edits:
First Person can't edit after second person posts their verse
Second person can't edit once dropping unless they request and have been given permission from a mod (i.e. spelling errors, duplicate words or something minor)
*The thought process here is this will limit the amount of power given to the second poster in tweaking verses while waiting for votes to come in (which have been slow), and will force people to realllly look over their verses, or PM them to mods, before posting. PM'ing to myself or Reef Flex is encouraged.


CHECKS,VERSES VOTES ONLY IN BATTLE THREADS!!!!!

[Sting3r]

Ayo Boston

[Joe Boston]

Ayo check good luck

[Sting3r]

AYYYO BOSTON

eat a rapper for dinner, left overs for breakfest is how the story go
for the first meal I'll do him sloppy then I’ll wake up to some mourning Joe
twist tops off til i hear a crack and lick a shot, you’ll see if it’s toxic
the evidence is tamper proof once I bust a cap and keep a lid on it
Reef ziplock insta-grams to make you snap, chat til ya pissed, ock
They'll do anything for clout but I only did it to get you ticked, ock
knife tucked in the long john, doing donuts outside his office scene
ready to let the blade cut to the white stuff and outline Boston cream
I'm known to skin heads like inglorious bastards, knives i still juggle
So when it comes to scalping i'm the best to sell ticks since Bill Russel
destroy Joe sooner, he’s funny with the clips but I enjoy those bloopers
from superman to captain hook. I'll hit em harder than Roy Jones Junior

[Joe Boston]

Bye bye

Your bitch said your worthless in the bedroom she couldn’t be more realistic
Now whenever we fuck I have her toes curling you’d think it was Beijing Winter Olympics
I’m gonna nitpick his bars, those nameplays n wordplays are beyond the worst
Is he fucking high? Not sure what reefunder but I’ll give him a full one for buying such a shitty verse.
Curse upon your family I wish them all a painful death
My goons kumbaya residence but we won’t be singing that to the smell of your burning flesh
Don’t ever fucking address me and if you speak pain better know how to apply it
So Fuck Dukan it out I’m feeding you shells as a well stabilized diet
Watch your squad remain quiet, you only affiliate with dudes that are bitch made
I got a sharp razors edge enough to make Scott Hall cringe the way I rip your skin with switch blades
Gonna need First Aid along with Defibrillators, tourniquets for missing limbs as they tear
The shotty has so much force when it leaves his brains Delocated you’d think they took Adult Swim off the air

[Echelon]

Reef Flex -

Dope verse here. A lot of cool lines. Mourning Joe was a excellent line. Good work here. Your verse was really nice.

Joe Boston -

This was dope, good work. You're nice with the pen'. A lot of dope lines here. Props for this verse!

Overall -

Good work guys, but I have Joe Boston winning..

V/ Joe Boston

[Sting3r]

Damn Boston did do his thing here if this don’t get any more votes then props to u Boston. I didn’t give u the business here but maybe we will battle again sometime

[JEM.]

eat a rapper for dinner, left overs for breakfest is how the story go
for the first meal I'll do him sloppy then I’ll wake up to some mourning Joe
Not bad, prett good.... liked the tie-in.

twist tops off til i hear a crack and lick a shot, you’ll see if it’s toxic
the evidence is tamper proof once I bust a cap and keep a lid on it
I thought this was pretty clever, but just didnt have that STRONG killing ending...even if
the lid on it really brought it together.

Reef ziplock insta-grams to make you snap, chat til ya pissed, ock
They'll do anything for clout but I only did it to get you ticked, ock
Eh.

knife tucked in the long john, doing donuts outside his office scene
ready to let the blade cut to the white stuff and outline Boston cream
Na man, sorry... Joe probablly seen 2300230 boston cream punches/security guard schemes.

I'm known to skin heads like inglorious bastards, knives i still juggle
So when it comes to scalping i'm the best to sell ticks since Bill Russel
This was decent, problem is you didn't sell (no pun intended) the enterainment
of selling tickets strong enough... couldve had somethng with the celtic/boston/russel angle

destroy Joe sooner, he’s funny with the clips but I enjoy those bloopers
from superman to captain hook. I'll hit em harder than Roy Jones Junior
Light.


Your bitch said your worthless in the bedroom she couldn’t be more realistic
Now whenever we fuck I have her toes curling you’d think it was Beijing Winter Olympics
Lol, good opening jab.

I’m gonna nitpick his bars, those nameplays n wordplays are beyond the worst
Is he fucking high? Not sure what reefunder but I’ll give him a full one for buying such a shitty verse.
Pretty strong... now a suggestion you could start cleaning up how things read
example... nameplays n wordplays to just name n wordplays so you don't double up
the plays and takes away from a pretty dope bar

Curse upon your family I wish them all a painful death
My goons kumbaya residence but we won’t be singing that to the smell of your burning flesh
This was alriht.

Don’t ever fucking address me and if you speak pain better know how to apply it
So Fuck Dukan it out I’m feeding you shells as a well stabilized diet
Nice.... good imapct here.


Watch your squad remain quiet, you only affiliate with dudes that are bitch made
I got a sharp razors edge enough to make Scott Hall cringe the way I rip your skin with switch blades
Alright.

Gonna need First Aid along with Defibrillators, tourniquets for missing limbs as they tear
The shotty has so much force when it leaves his brains Delocated you’d think they took Adult Swim off the air
Alright.

This was actually one of the stronger joe drops i've seen in a bit... the wordplay game was pretty
strong... still some trouble with adding extra words, etc... But I think he did enough to get Reef
that probably shouldve spent a bit more on droping an extra impact bar.

v/Joe