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    rock

    used to be a minor dick, run around the dope fiend diner,
    mom and dad out here selling plastic china, major vaginas,
    driving to the brighter lights every time they get inspired
    by mindless cyber spiders, cypher writers and daily rhymers,
    me and you, we were ready to conspire to acquire the riders,
    but now here, hear a roar like a lion, by which i mean a raw liar,
    but yet i'm ready to auto fire shots like america online designer,
    at the crooked empire if it's hot, the sniper, quick to viper,
    because even i, myself, i know how the pressures getting,
    could have used the imposed reminder, dose the other guy,
    the old timer, post armageddon, the cold heart, no forgiving,
    back from the show called survivor, the whole cast signers,
    child outcast of the wild ghosts, when they're so busy forgetting,
    the riled spy spires of the outsiders in tradition of religions,
    are their misfit fighters with lighters, leaping at suspicions,
    the sinking feeling of pipers, strap supplying the victims,
    trap biters, baring teeth on the trash, bout to blow the jackass,
    into two more holes for your organs, church, so if you're holy,
    go higher. start recording. there's no limit or restriction
    on me or my missions in the villages of villains and demons,
    to incriminate the wicked and teach idiots what they are being,
    that the fiction is they can't face the facts without friction,
    when they're children end up missing with the milk cartons,
    in the kitchen from a traffic signal that witnessed them start it,
    fishing out the addicted sick ones while the rich busters forfeit,
    sitting in the public restroom flicking their vaporized cigarettes,
    the big gun is in the restaurant basement, take that to parents
    and let the hatred of naked nature chase you through scarcest,
    to the bank safe, save that ass a good spank space sacred,
    before you retire. i'm out on the wire, with the whole nation,
    but i'm in the game like the fucking umpire. go catch a ball.
    son of the bullet, yeah that name can go in the clip. scrawled,
    quoted out the grown ups who couldn't pass the same test, at all,
    that's called quizlet. they can't try and still everything is wrong
    because the alphabet is left like even a sniff of some scratching,
    of that right shit. i might think swifter than thundering lightning,
    bucking quicker than the pick ups but i ain't with that white crypt
    when all i seen was the black of gutter waters. the river styx,
    get a whiff off my closed hand that i just had open my pants
    it stinks when i patriot pat you on the shoulder to loosen grips,
    up on headaches, back to the packs, acres because i'm goosing
    on you rats with the ratchet, dang racket, dangling goofy,
    name tags say dingus like some booger eating poop smackers,
    i'm banging on you until you smooch lucifer's satan scrambler,
    scooch on the lunch snacks, scooting like a scat from the jazzy,
    when i hang you off a stack attack, cracker rack em, snazzy,
    kisses, i'm your worst nightmare, snag the rag like your drag,
    whipping like a boosted bag, doing it to you, soup or salad
    du jeur, dude can't stand it, i ain't seated like you, group ballot,
    i ran, moving up like iraq with uranium, the new ballads, battles
    out open lands through a huge human life span. stupid baeddels.

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    https://genius.com/Twyll-th-chylltyrant-rock-lyrics

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    Re: rock

    I really enjoyed this. My favorite part was everything between major vaginas and quizlet.
    I gotta admit when you started with minor dick, I wasn't expecting much (that's what she said).
    But after the first bar I ascended the spectrum for levels of enjoyment.
    There was an array of different rhyming techniques, which usually (to me) isnt the most appealing, but although maybe it wasn't some perfectly formed scheme with a clear and concise format I really just feel it works well for the most part. There was some 'played stuff' but this isn't a battle setting so eh, but it does kind of dull the effect battle or not.
    Cool flow

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    Re: rock

    It was long but good too... I imagine even better if I wasn’t feeling like my eyes were getting poked out by pins (which says I should probably go back and read it again) ... id like to see more explanations and shit since really I’m sheltered from most of the inside shit but trying to catch up. Good read... hope to see more!
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