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Thread: LLL Week 11: Joe Boston (4-5) vs JEM (6-4) - OPEN 4 VOTES

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    LLL Week 11: Joe Boston (4-5) vs JEM (6-4) - OPEN 4 VOTES

    verses due: FRIDAY 11:59PST
    AUTOMATIC EXTENSION HAS BEEN GIVEN IF NEEDED, DUE TO THE WEEK STRETCH
    Minimum Lines = 12 Lines
    Maximum Lines = 20 Lines



    Extension: Up to opponent IF verse completed & posted/sent. Otherwise at the Moderators discretion.

    VOTING CLOSES SUNDAY NIGHT/MONDAY MORNING
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    Re: LLL Week 12: Joe Boston (4-5) vs JEM (5-4)

    @JEM.
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    Re: LLL Week 12: Joe Boston (4-5) vs JEM (6-4)

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    Re: LLL Week 12: Joe Boston (4-5) vs JEM (6-4)

    20.

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    Re: LLL Week 11: Joe Boston (4-5) vs JEM (6-4)

    Ayo @Jem granting ext in case man been busy with work I’ll try to drop tonight if not tomorrow my dude
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    Re: LLL Week 11: Joe Boston (4-5) vs JEM (6-4)

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    I can have 12 tonight. You good w that?
    Last edited by JEM.; June 8th, 2019 at 09:02 PM

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    Re: LLL Week 11: Joe Boston (4-5) vs JEM (6-4)

    Quote Originally Posted by JEM. View Post
    @Joe Boston
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    I can have 12 tonight. You good w that?
    Yeah man been busy last minute shit should be posting few minutes
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    Re: LLL Week 11: Joe Boston (4-5) vs JEM (6-4)

    12 @JEM.

    Talk shit I’ll split his head he’ll be counting each staple
    Run his mouth again next time I see Jemima fill his body with shells till he’s leaking pure maple
    Your life’s a fable, claim you on that thug shit I’m disputing
    This fags a Princess Anne a initial beat down could take place, but I rather turn his block to a fucking Virginia shooting
    Stop polluting with trash verses, 20 lines
    shit is worthless
    Why even pray to drop flames? I rather throw you next to a group of burning churches
    You cop your bitch shoes n purses but for me to dick it she doesn’t charge a cent
    Each time we fuck I’ll keep you updated, everyone will tell ya I’m a man of current events
    You tense when it comes to violent acts you better off hiding in the back
    See my goons in the Kawhi riding so think your a warrior I’ll hit ya with the Rap
    Don’t set yourself a death trap I’ll literally show up where you stay
    Protect the ones you love even your Queen, cuz I could a fuck about her like I was Trump in the U.K
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    Re: LLL Week 11: Joe Boston (4-5) vs JEM (6-4)

    *I sent previously to Blue yesterday, posting before he got a chance to.

    My shots reality TV entertaining, ima hit fat boys tits off
    And then buck at Joe's budden cuz ain't no love in hip hop
    I seen you reaching for greatness, but see that very thing
    will kill Joe! Cuz if he gravel, it's only after I bury him
    Approach your block, wearing all white...I want to be seen
    Open hand, it ain't peace. Smack em then pull out the piece!
    Dude's desperate for material, it's clear he needs the help
    So he googled best bars, & posted the top rated ones on yelp
    The team take aim... market cap! it don't matter if man ran
    Crew got more choppers to his top than ubers expansion plan
    This is great verses worst, bible.. cuz i'm destined to win
    These bars I promise land, you barely got a vote against sin

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    Re: LLL Week 11: Joe Boston (4-5) vs JEM (6-4) - OPEN 4 VOTES

    Joe Boston -

    Good verse, very nice with the pen' indeed. You're quite the nice text-battler. I enjoy your written very much. Good verse, such as the aunt maple syrup line. Good work on this verse. Nice one.

    JEM -

    Good verse, very nice' with the pen indeed here. You're quite well done here. I enjoyed your verse. Good lines throughout. Nice one!

    Overall - Good battle, but I'm giving this to Joe Boston - had the more finesse to it. Good work, guys.

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    Re: LLL Week 11: Joe Boston (4-5) vs JEM (6-4) - OPEN 4 VOTES

    I vote Joe Boston as well.
    Had more punches and they hit better, had a little wordplay too. Some of the rhymes were simpler, but they didn't feel forced whereas a few from JEM did. (Very thing / bury him)
    I feel like both verses had great openers, and Joe's closer was a little better so again
    VOTE - Joe Boston

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    Re: LLL Week 11: Joe Boston (4-5) vs JEM (6-4) - OPEN 4 VOTES

    Elaborate Vote -

    Joe Boston -

    Very nice verse. Very intricate webbed verse, with good formula and scheme. Reminds me of a Ness Lee verse. It's a well written verse, with good wordplay and formula. I appreciate it. It's very well done, and I enjoy it. A lot of good lines as 'The Maple Syrup Line' and the churhces line. Good work on this verse. Keep writing!

    JEM -

    Very nice verse here. You're nice with the pen' here for sure. This reminds of Jehst the UK rapper; very well done - and nice with the formula as-well. You're quite the pen' kid - and I enjoy it. The 'Chopper's' line was well done - good work. Keep writing!

    Overall -

    I enjoyed both verse, as Joe Boston had the more elaborate verse. Good work, guys.

    V/ Joe Boston

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