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    touch stone

    as i'm sitting in my room my mind opens up like a wound
    i start to think about the opportunities i had to bloom
    potential in my hands with lack of motivation to be used
    a special gift i was given only for it to get abused
    i didn't know the value that was in appreciating jewels
    it was all about appearance couldn't comprehend the roots
    momentary pleasure was the only rule i ever knew
    i'm blinded to what is true i have been so lost and confused
    like everything i always do is underneath a cloud of doom
    i'm barely holding composure it's hard enough staying sober
    i struggle just to roll over and get out of bed all over again
    have to pretend like everyday i wished it all just didn't end
    it feels so meaningless like all i ever feel is fear and stress
    so disassociated from the me i need to be to see success
    i suffer with every breath i must muster strength to collect
    the will to take another step need to get up out of the mess
    when is it my turn to be blessed or just get a moment of rest
    Father i beg you to protect and lead me to your resurrection
    this is all a test i've learned the value of a hard lesson
    the end time is soon to come better prepare for armageddon
    there's revelation in the ways The Son came to equip us with
    the only way to exit worldly ways is by accepting what He did
    The Father gave you life so he could cherish and call you His
    the time of salvation is now The Kingdom's in the hearts of men
    when they repent and ask His grace to cover and forgive their sin
    i'm pleading with you for hell is real but Heaven really exists
    if you need a way to escape the mundane plane of existence
    ask Him with sincerity for truth and clarity He listens
    The Life of Jesus Christ will lead out of the tempest
    the time has come tonight The Son has called you to true repentance

  2. #2

    Re: touch stone

    as i'm sitting in my room my mind opens up like a wound
    i start to think about the opportunities i had to bloom
    potential in my hands with lack of motivation to be used
    a special gift i was given only for it to get abused
    i didn't know the value that was in appreciating jewels
    it was all about appearance couldn't comprehend the roots
    momentary pleasure was the only rule i ever knew
    i'm blinded to what is true i have been so lost and confused
    like everything i always do is underneath a cloud of doom
    i'm barely holding composure it's hard enough staying sober
    i struggle just to roll over and get out of bed all over again
    have to pretend like everyday i wished it all just didn't end
    it feels so meaningless like all i ever feel is fear and stress
    so disassociated from the me i need to be to see success
    i suffer with every breath i must muster strength to collect
    the will to take another step need to get up out of the mess
    when is it my turn to be blessed or just get a moment of rest
    Father i beg you to protect and lead me to your resurrection
    this is all a test i've learned the value of a hard lesson
    the end time is soon to come better prepare for armageddon
    there's revelation in the ways The Son came to equip us with
    the only way to exit worldly ways is by accepting what He did
    The Father gave you life so he could cherish and call you His
    the time of salvation is now The Kingdom's in the hearts of men
    when they repent and ask His grace to cover and forgive their sin
    i'm pleading with you hell is real but Heaven really exists
    if you need a way to escape the mundane plane of existence
    ask Him sincerely for truth and clarity for He will listen
    The Life of Jesus Christ alone will lead out of the tempest
    the time has come tonight The Son has called you to true repentance [edit]

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    Re: touch stone

    can't edit open mics? that sucks final edit... i think...

    as i'm sitting in my room my mind opens up like a wound
    i start to think about the opportunities i had to bloom
    potential in my hands with lack of motivation to be used
    a special gift i was given only for it to get abused
    i didn't know the value that was in appreciating jewels
    it was all about appearance couldn't comprehend the roots
    momentary pleasure was the only rule i ever knew
    i'm blinded to what is true i have been so lost and confused
    like everything i always do is underneath a cloud of doom
    i'm barely holding composure it's hard enough staying sober
    i struggle just to roll over and get out of bed all over again
    have to pretend like everyday i wished it all just didn't end
    it feels so meaningless like all i ever feel is fear and stress
    so disassociated from the me i need for success
    i suffer with every breath i must muster strength to collect
    the will to take another step need to get up out of the mess
    when is it my turn to be blessed or have a moment of rest
    Father i beg for protection lead me to your resurrection
    if this is all a test i've learned the value of a hard lesson
    the end is soon to come we better prepare for armageddon
    there's revelation in the pages He spoke as a manuscript
    the way to exiting worldly ways is accepting what He did
    The Father gave you life so he could cherish and call you His
    the time of salvation is now The Kingdom's in the hearts of men
    when they repent and ask His grace to cover and forgive their sin
    i'm pleading with you hell is real but Heaven really exists
    if you need a way to escape the mundane plane of existence
    ask Him sincerely for truth and clarity because He will listen
    The Life of Jesus Christ alone will lead out of the tempest
    the time has come tonight The Son calls you to true repentance [edit]

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    Re: touch stone

    Nice... trinity too. I know (well assume) Jesus judges the people he died for; at least that’s what my prayers say. I liked the piece it said a lot. As far as sins I think there are degrees to them. Maybe I’m wrong cause I feel I did good but I’m stuck in hell you can’t even comprehend instead. I want to read more. I’ve always been religious but I get aggregated when everyone wanna take it to church. Like that story I wrote that really wasn’t about that - it was for the people who aren’t really about that and how they can see too. But anyways; your rhyme scheme and flow on point but it was your topic that caught me.
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