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Thread: All I Want Is You

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    MAD! A Disciple's Avatar
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    All I Want Is You

    ALL I WANT IS YOU

    Saying goodbye you fell asleep too that’s what happens when it’s finally right; answer 1: true
    Always... all I ever do is to do right by you
    But every single time it screw me too
    And maybe I get mad or don’t understand
    But I can take it from anyone else unless it’s you mad? Two: I can’t stand
    Getting chills remembering your hands on either side of my leg
    Whos too proud to beg?
    I’m not mad- just another angel meant to be
    But wasting all this time is a concept I really can’t see
    You slowing down oh boy I see it in your walk on a rare
    Having another you by tomorrow making me sick now - when can we talk? 3: when i stare
    I can’t even have sex with out thinking of us and asking God why
    How many times you gonna sit there and watch me try?
    Just... “Come back baby - boomerang”
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    AJ The Menace Echelon's Avatar
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    Re: All I Want Is You

    Hello, A Disciple.

    I thought this was a good drop, full of good concepts and good writing. You're a talented writer, and I enjoy your writing. Good relationship poem that I enjoyed. Good work, A Disciple. Keep writing,

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    Re: All I Want Is You

    Thank you...
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