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    Flex

    I知 taking my assets and rippin this track yeah
    I知 sick and I知 graphic, I知 depicting a smash hit
    Burn smoke into ashes, you folks can get blasted
    so dope you can稚 grasp it, when I知 provoked
    You get your ass kicked, white lines, no coke, just savage
    Define hope, rewind, nope, surpass it, Devine quote
    In rhyme mode, I知 Bruce Wayne, I知 batshit, a rhino
    I find notes like magic, the pyro, so high though
    I spiral in fashion, and I know, that I wrote with passion
    I defy those who try flows to bypass my title and I知 cold
    Alaskan, the viral assassin, the vitals aren稚
    Lastin
    Don稚 trifle with me, my rifle is clean my demeanor obscene
    Wicked vicious vindictive im with this a little bit ridiculous
    When I spit this formidable literal little flow it値l go insane
    Indefensible, off the chain, intense and so cocky
    You can稚 knock me off of my game, I値l check you
    Like hockey and then slash off the top of the brain
    So intelligent, no embellishments, I知 a hellish
    Man to the go the distance with, provocative
    God who will not be beat, as rocky as ozzy it痴 obvious
    I知 onry as onyx when I知 on the beat, honestly
    Omnipotent, I知 invoking death to the peasants
    The rodents, those in my presence, I知 awoken...
    That痴 it I知 done, I知 out of breath, but I got one eye open
    I知 oden..

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    Re: Flex

    I’m not going to comment on the WiFi being named flex or the other that I felt and started realizing he was a snitch and probably set him up. Rhyme or lyric wise? Ask me when I’m less disabled and my vision isn’t so blurry or when I’m not tapping or been hit so hard spiritually again. Nah I’m not HOWEVER a snitch yeah I would call one out and them girls nah not facts but if that’s why I been audited so much maybe you should look there. I can’t do this - I don’t feel good. I need my side right and I need more help.
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    Re: Flex

    Was that a critique or are you attempting to write some kinda lyrics instead of critiquing the piece??? This site has changed so much, not for the better.. That being said

    Not to shabby bro, liked the multis, your rhyme scheme wasn't too bad, it wasn't all over the place and your structure was decent, another skill boasting piece, I like skill pieces, no real story to follow just how dope can you rhyme... Not bad.. All together I liked it, not a lot of talent left in hip hop these days, so its always nice to see talent .. Dope piece.. Keep elevating

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