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    Week 1: Networth vs Joe Boston Networth Wins

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    Re: Week 1: Networth vs Joe Boston

    Yo Boston..

    Hit the mirror like U a killa. Don't put on the clothes n think ur proven
    If u wanna look departed help to check ya self out before I beat u to it
    Knife slicin thru film, it wont even seem like u'll make it wit some help
    And after that direct cut... you gone speak to the creator for yourself

    Quote Originally Posted by Joe Boston View Post
    Every fucking battle the last million has been with blue I ain’t showing to this shit. There’s other people could be fucking battling. It’s like y’all fucking give me blue so y’all can vote for him he wins and moves on all the time when clearly there is times I felt shit was closer.
    Give me some one else or just give Blue the win
    Alota talk in the threads, but on the streets Id make u run ya spot
    Its odd that those vagrants, didn't clarify if you're still a bumb or not
    Dim fuck wont leave his cot, too dumb to see the welcome he wearin out
    Man its clear U dont kno squattin I wonder Y U do that at ya parents house
    Tried to son this nigga... passed his moms off to all the guys...
    But u turned out to be a bitch... and for that, tell the dogs I apologize
    I thought u were from overseas- it's how I do yo shit verses w/o tryin
    Maybe Im newly incontinent, cos Im pissed u're on the same one as I am!
    This old bitch hiding in cribs, well go give hurricane- I give no fucks clown
    See I dont care which Dorian, cause Ima blow Joe away soon as I touchdown
    Two cars gone drive through... sayin ya heads in high demand which...
    Means when hands fly I'll pop eyes and leave this fuckin chicken sandwhiched!
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    Re: Week 1: Networth vs Joe Boston

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    Net travel cross country for ass, Joe always get free pussy I got my ways
    You’ll let her collect the Fiancé she about to fuck up the marriage in less then 90 days
    Your whole squad full of gays I can tell they don’t fight often
    I’m striping them for Straight Pride, Antifa blow connects yall be screaming like they did through Boston
    Straight right to the chest your coughing up blood, to me you’re just another stick in the mud
    hide inside that Ideal Home then when I kick the door in play the faggot role like Paul Rudd
    Your bitch call me a stud but she nasty with that ass to mouth
    Realized she got disinfection now I gotta quarantine the bitch then clean my whole house
    Attempting to take dangerous routes how he gonna react when paths are crossed
    Once I see Son,Beam leave him asleep in the bread aisle his name will never be mentioned again like Asher Roth’s
    Dry cloths applying pressure to your wound, laughing as your blood soaks the floor
    Leave it stained with two fresh coats and if reach i in your pockets see that Benjamin Moore
    Dick your whore until she runs outta orgasms back shots give her permanent back spasms
    Always a Boston Massacre every time I’m in your bedroom its like I’m role playing as John Quincy Adams
    Could never fathom how much of bitch you are it difficult to explain
    Bullet to your dome you need that “head checked” you’ll be pleading for help like Leron McClain

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    Re: Week 1: Networth vs Joe Boston

    Quote Originally Posted by Networth View Post
    Yo Boston..

    Hit the mirror like U a killa. Don't put on the clothes n think ur proven
    If u wanna look departed help to check ya self out before I beat u to it
    Ok flip on old wp
    Knife slicin thru film, it wont even seem like u'll make it wit some help
    And after that direct cut... you gone speak to the creator for yourself

    I digg tbh
    Alota talk in the threads, but on the streets Id make u run ya spot
    Its odd that those vagrants, didn't clarify if you're still a bumb or not
    Didn’t really see the wp connecting here
    Dim fuck wont leave his cot, too dumb to see the welcome he wearin out
    Man its clear U dont kno squattin I wonder Y U do that at ya parents house
    Funny
    Tried to son this nigga... passed his moms off to all the guys...
    But u turned out to be a bitch... and for that, tell the dogs I apologize
    Nahh
    I thought u were from overseas- it's how I do yo shit verses w/o tryin
    Maybe Im newly incontinent, cos Im pissed u're on the same one as I am!
    Coulda been better, more like a statement. Maybe go a lil harsher with it next time but I dig the creativity
    This old bitch hiding in cribs, well go give hurricane- I give no fucks clown
    See I dont care which Dorian, cause Ima blow Joe away soon as I touchdown
    Cool
    Two cars gone drive through... sayin ya heads in high demand which...
    Means when hands fly I'll pop eyes and leave this fuckin chicken sandwhiched!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Joe Boston View Post
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    Net travel cross country for ass, Joe always get free pussy I got my ways
    You’ll let her collect the Fiancé she about to fuck up the marriage in less then 90 days
    Nah
    Your whole squad full of gays I can tell they don’t fight often
    I’m striping them for Straight Pride, Antifa blow connects yall be screaming like they did through Boston
    Coulda been shorter I think but ok relevant punch, Antifa/and if a is aight and punch was decent just a lil long
    Straight right to the chest your coughing up blood, to me you’re just another stick in the mud
    hide inside that Ideal Home then when I kick the door in play the faggot role like Paul Rudd
    Kinda were losing me but I see what u were going for, kinda weak tho imo
    Your bitch call me a stud but she nasty with that ass to mouth
    Realized she got disinfection now I gotta quarantine the bitch then clean my whole house
    Nah, I tried to like this but too soft imo,
    Attempting to take dangerous routes how he gonna react when paths are crossed
    Once I see Son,Beam leave him asleep in the bread aisle his name will never be mentioned again like Asher Roth’s
    Lordy lord man, first I don’t think the son beam thing works the best. Second it took way too long to get to the point. I like your stuff man but I’m outta breath by the time I finish the punch haha. I know you been like this for a while but I still can’t really get with the whole long bar thing
    Dry cloths applying pressure to your wound, laughing as your blood soaks the floor
    Leave it stained with two fresh coats and if reach i in your pockets see that Benjamin Moore
    Aight this was better
    Dick your whore until she runs outta orgasms back shots give her permanent back spasms
    Always a Boston Massacre every time I’m in your bedroom its like I’m role playing as John Quincy Adams
    Lol I dig this man, if we had more like this in the verse I think this would be closer
    Could never fathom how much of bitch you are it difficult to explain
    Bullet to your dome you need that “head checked” you’ll be pleading for help like Leron McClain
    Dope

    Open for votes @King
    Aight I gave more of a breakdown in my vote but how Im leaning now would be Networth cause I think Joe came out a little more slow and light while worth had a more rounded consistent verse. I dug a couple of Boston’s at the end and a few at the beginning but I don’t think it was enough here. I’m going with Networth

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    Re: Week 1: Networth vs Joe Boston OPEN FOR VOTES

    Dry cloths applying pressure to your wound, laughing as your blood soaks the floor
    Leave it stained with two fresh coats and if reach i in your pockets see that Benjamin Moore

    JOE BOSTON KILLED IT!!!! It's a brand of paint...

    His flows were more consistent and his rhyme scheme - easier to read and more clever disses.

    I'm still an unexperienced writer so I don't have any critiques for net worth other then amazing delivery but more time tightening it up.
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    Re: Week 1: Networth vs Joe Boston OPEN FOR VOTES

    Networth had: Direct cut, squatting, Dorian
    Joe had: Quincy Adams & Leron McCain
    This was one of the better verses I’ve seen from Net.
    Joe was alil too wordy for my taste.

    V/Net

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    Re: Week 1: Networth vs Joe Boston

    Quote Originally Posted by Networth View Post
    Yo Boston..

    Hit the mirror like U a killa. Don't put on the clothes n think ur proven
    If u wanna look departed help to check ya self out before I beat u to it
    This is cool
    Knife slicin thru film, it wont even seem like u'll make it wit some help
    And after that direct cut... you gone speak to the creator for yourself

    Eh. Good idea clunky execution.
    Alota talk in the threads, but on the streets Id make u run ya spot
    Its odd that those vagrants, didn't clarify if you're still a bumb or not
    I don't love this
    Dim fuck wont leave his cot, too dumb to see the welcome he wearin out
    Man its clear U dont kno squattin I wonder Y U do that at ya parents house
    Eh. You coulda flipped this better.
    Tried to son this nigga... passed his moms off to all the guys...
    But u turned out to be a bitch... and for that, tell the dogs I apologize
    No
    I thought u were from overseas- it's how I do yo shit verses w/o tryin
    Maybe Im newly incontinent, cos Im pissed u're on the same one as I am!
    So you have the runs? Dope punch
    This old bitch hiding in cribs, well go give hurricane- I give no fucks clown
    See I dont care which Dorian, cause Ima blow Joe away soon as I touchdown
    Nope
    Two cars gone drive through... sayin ya heads in high demand which...
    Means when hands fly I'll pop eyes and leave this fuckin chicken sandwhiched!

    Nope
    Quote Originally Posted by Joe Boston View Post
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    Net travel cross country for ass, Joe always get free pussy I got my ways
    You’ll let her collect the Fiancé she about to fuck up the marriage in less then 90 days
    Cute
    Your whole squad full of gays I can tell they don’t fight often
    I’m striping them for Straight Pride, Antifa blow connects yall be screaming like they did through Boston
    Super stretched and the pronunciation is off
    Straight right to the chest your coughing up blood, to me you’re just another stick in the mud
    hide inside that Ideal Home then when I kick the door in play the faggot role like Paul Rudd
    I like Paul Rudd. Fuck you, Joe Boston
    Your bitch call me a stud but she nasty with that ass to mouth
    Realized she got disinfection now I gotta quarantine the bitch then clean my whole house
    I don't get this one
    Attempting to take dangerous routes how he gonna react when paths are crossed
    Once I see Son,Beam leave him asleep in the bread aisle his name will never be mentioned again like Asher Roth’s
    I hate having to google bars. Let's just assume it's cool cuz Sunbeam is cool
    Dry cloths applying pressure to your wound, laughing as your blood soaks the floor
    Leave it stained with two fresh coats and if reach i in your pockets see that Benjamin Moore
    LOTB
    Dick your whore until she runs outta orgasms back shots give her permanent back spasms
    Always a Boston Massacre every time I’m in your bedroom its like I’m role playing as John Quincy Adams
    I can't wait to read the comments on this post
    Could never fathom how much of bitch you are it difficult to explain
    Bullet to your dome you need that “head checked” you’ll be pleading for help like Leron McClain
    Eh

    Open for votes @King
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    Re: Week 1: Networth vs Joe Boston OPEN FOR VOTES

    Knife slicin thru film, it wont even seem like u'll make it wit some help
    And after that direct cut... you gone speak to the creator for yourself
    Dim fuck wont leave his cot, too dumb to see the welcome he wearin out
    Man its clear U dont kno squattin I wonder Y U do that at ya parents house
    This old bitch hiding in cribs, well go give hurricane- I give no fucks clown
    See I dont care which Dorian, cause Ima blow Joe away soon as I touchdown!

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    Dick your whore until she runs outta orgasms back shots give her permanent back spasms
    Always a Boston Massacre every time I’m in your bedroom its like I’m role playing as John Quincy Adams
    Could never fathom how much of bitch you are it difficult to explain
    Bullet to your dome you need that “head checked” you’ll be pleading for help like Leron McClain


    Net got this. Joe just needed so make his wording more concise and this could have gone either way but net was more polished and landed more often imo.

    vote NET
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