Week 2: Slecht (0-1) vs GrimmReaperz (1-0) OPEN FOR VOTES

[King]

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LLL Season 24
Regular Season Rules

10 line minimum
16 line maximum (unless agreed upon by both battlers)

No Bullshit Allowed

MUST CHECK IN BY WEDNESDAY!!

VERSES DUE FRIDAY 11:59 PST

24 hour EXT must be granted by opponent

BATTLES CLOSE SUNDAY

[slecht]

Checkkkkk

[GrimmReaperZ]

..kkkkkkkkkk

[slecht]

Posting tomorrow.

[GrimmReaperZ]

Cool

[slecht]

I body fools yearly. this LOSS? all caps so this queer can see it clearly.
told him I'm that MF...Grimm, expect DOOM when you hear me.
His evil deeds will not just haunt him but also Mrs.Grimm.
Destructive punches rapidly knock him out though, give reap's... the whirlwind
The travesty! This queer has a cop fetish, likes to be cuffed & on his knees, savagely.
If grimm show's up with the truth, we'll find out about his dark twist n police fantasy.
I got high with your bitch on E. I had that skank screaming, inside her pants, winning.
Just off one piligrim, she was showing more than just her thanksgiving.
You should already know something about the battle culture, if not - you're probably a rookie
Don't push me, or this whiteboy will go off on Grimm like I am Adam from Bodied the Movie.
I wood be bothered but he's all bark. I'll mean mug any wanna be buster.
Stick creep out with the arms like an annoying tree hugger.

[King]

GRIMM



http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...t=#post8923995

Sletch vs RS.....Razor Sharp wins by NS


they gave me the No show bitch....




Bro, u more than earned that title, defending it proud with every putrid view
and the way we watched u.. skip across from sharp, clearly it's undisputed too...


That match was in the spring, they said u no showed, but I see a different agenda in play
Way u was avoiding THAT razor, look like u wanted an early start to “no shave November” in May


U aint worth wasting lead, which means the gun handle is what I’ll feed sletch next
Reaperz'll Pistol whip ‘em…that hammer swingin’ for ya cap aint a reflex test


Why beef with Grimm?, them pussies with u wont move a muscle or put hands to jaws…
Trust me, not even ya right hand man would wanna walk into it…like Ned Flanders store


Ya Avys an homage to ur shortcomings, the writing on the wall should more than trouble you
I mean, u can try & paint it how u wanna, but always seem to come up just short of a W

[Networth]

I got high with your bitch on E. I had that skank screaming, inside her pants, winning.
Just off one piligrim, she was showing more than just her thanksgiving.
You should already know something about the battle culture, if not - you're probably a rookie
Don't push me, or this whiteboy will go off on Grimm like I am Adam from Bodied the Movie.


versus



Bro, u more than earned that title, defending it proud with every putrid view
and the way we watched u.. skip across from sharp, clearly it's undisputed too...
That match was in the spring, they said u no showed, but I see a different agenda in play
Way u was avoiding THAT razor, look like u wanted an early start to “no shave November” in May
U aint worth wasting lead, which means the gun handle is what I’ll feed sletch next
Reaperz'll Pistol whip ‘em…that hammer swingin’ for ya cap aint a reflex test



So yea, we got here two fairly well formulated verses on both sides from two battlers who can bring the punches in spades, but the difference in this one was quite clearly consistency. Slecht had trouble getting started imo before he kinda heated up and brought some relatable bars that attempted to strike the opponent harder than the first. Grimm started right out the gate with some haymakers and that comedic edge and even when he faltered slightly at the end, there was enough throughout to warrant what seems a clear W.

V/Grimm

[Ryno]

I body fools yearly. this LOSS? all caps so this queer can see it clearly.
told him I'm that MF...Grimm, expect DOOM when you hear me.
...Eh nah
His evil deeds will not just haunt him but also Mrs.Grimm.
Destructive punches rapidly knock him out though, give reap's... the whirlwind
...not feeling
The travesty! This queer has a cop fetish, likes to be cuffed & on his knees, savagely.
If grimm show's up with the truth, we'll find out about his dark twist n police fantasy.
...same as above
I got high with your bitch on E. I had that skank screaming, inside her pants, winning.
Just off one piligrim, she was showing more than just her thanksgiving.
...lol nice
You should already know something about the battle culture, if not - you're probably a rookie
Don't push me, or this whiteboy will go off on Grimm like I am Adam from Bodied the Movie.
...not familiar
I wood be bothered but he's all bark. I'll mean mug any wanna be buster.
Stick creep out with the arms like an annoying tree hugger.
...eh could have finished better

GRIMM



http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...t=#post8923995

Sletch vs RS.....Razor Sharp wins by NS


they gave me the No show bitch....




Bro, u more than earned that title, defending it proud with every putrid view
and the way we watched u.. skip across from sharp, clearly it's undisputed too...

...lol cool
That match was in the spring, they said u no showed, but I see a different agenda in play
Way u was avoiding THAT razor, look like u wanted an early start to “no shave November” in May

...eh
U aint worth wasting lead, which means the gun handle is what I’ll feed sletch next
Reaperz'll Pistol whip ‘em…that hammer swingin’ for ya cap aint a reflex test

...yes indeed
Why beef with Grimm?, them pussies with u wont move a muscle or put hands to jaws…
Trust me, not even ya right hand man would wanna walk into it…like Ned Flanders store
...not familiar

Ya Avys an homage to ur shortcomings, the writing on the wall should more than trouble you
I mean, u can try & paint it how u wanna, but always seem to come up just short of a W
...not feeling the avy punch

Pilgrim vs opener, reflex test

V/Grimm

[Phalanx]

I body fools yearly. this LOSS? all caps so this queer can see it clearly.
told him I'm that MF...Grimm, expect DOOM when you hear me.
Wasn't big on This. I love some me doom. But no one says "mf" in place on mother fuckers, outside of lazy texting. It just feels forced to me.
His evil deeds will not just haunt him but also Mrs.Grimm.
Destructive punches rapidly knock him out though, give reap's... the whirlwind
This missed for me. Maybe Im missing some personal relevance, but this just feels stale to me.
The travesty! This queer has a cop fetish, likes to be cuffed & on his knees, savagely.
If grimm show's up with the truth, we'll find out about his dark twist n police fantasy.
This was wierd....and didn't really qualify as a punch
I got high with your bitch on E. I had that skank screaming, inside her pants, winning.
Just off one piligrim, she was showing more than just her thanksgiving.
This was okay. I did a pilgrim flip against him years back though, so it looses so sting for me personally.
You should already know something about the battle culture, if not - you're probably a rookie
Don't push me, or this whiteboy will go off on Grimm like I am Adam from Bodied the Movie.
This was nice. I liked it.
I wood be bothered but he's all bark. I'll mean mug any wanna be buster.
Stick creep out with the arms like an annoying tree hugger.
[B]Light jab. Not horrible, but not good either.

GRIMM




http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...t=#post8923995

Sletch vs RS.....Razor Sharp wins by NS


they gave me the No show bitch....




Bro, u more than earned that title, defending it proud with every putrid view
and the way we watched u.. skip across from sharp, clearly it's undisputed too...

This missed for me. It's like a whole bar as a filler set up.
That match was in the spring, they said u no showed, but I see a different agenda in play
Way u was avoiding THAT razor, look like u wanted an early start to “no shave November” in May

Clever flip on the personal. Cool shit

U aint worth wasting lead, which means the gun handle is what I’ll feed sletch next
Reaperz'll Pistol whip ‘em…that hammer swingin’ for ya cap aint a reflex test

Decent jab.

Why beef with Grimm?, them pussies with u wont move a muscle or put hands to jaws…
Trust me, not even ya right hand man would wanna walk into it…like Ned Flanders store
This was light, but funny.

Ya Avys an homage to ur shortcomings, the writing on the wall should more than trouble you
I mean, u can try & paint it how u wanna, but always seem to come up just short of a W
[B]I am not a fan of avatar flips. This was too simple to overcome that..

Both had there moments. Adam from bodied was my favorite bar, but I think Grimm was more consistent and landed more jabs. Slecht heated up towards the end, but it wasn't enough to overcome the misses early on.

Vote - Grim

[Spree]

Grimm wins