Week 2: Joe Boston (0-1) vs A Disciple (0-1) JB wins

[King]

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LLL Season 24
Regular Season Rules

10 line minimum
16 line maximum (unless agreed upon by both battlers)

No Bullshit Allowed

MUST CHECK IN BY WEDNESDAY!!

VERSES DUE FRIDAY 11:59 PST

24 hour EXT must be granted by opponent

BATTLES CLOSE SUNDAY

[Joe Boston]

Check

[Joe Boston]

10

She says no fucking on the first date I’ll pull out my dick she’s down
Stuff her in that tight end she’ll get excited like the Pats signing Antonio Brown
Fucking clown put the pen down you suck just own it
Verses should be wrapped in purple ribbons, I’ll leave scars worse then last weeks opponent
Fuck your emotional moment everything in your life is a fable
They say trust A Disciple I believe in god but you wouldn’t find this bitch anywhere at my table
Finagle trash bars not even the slightest we compare
Writing you’re getting back In the mist? Use that to cover that raunchy smell down there
Lets get it clear just cuz your female I don’t respect you I was created to slap ugly
You don’t deserve the paper bag or flag over your face youre the most disgusting bitch to land on this country

[King]

@A Disciple

[A Disciple]

I just saw this... I’m a be late I’m sorry - extension for tomorrow?

[King]

@Joe Boston

[Joe Boston]

@Joe Boston

Yeah that’s cool

[A Disciple]

He think he's the hulk, alter ego, Jo Boston boxing on it
He just mad cause he wanna kick it but I told him let's keep it platonic
My name is for student and not of a God
Trying to learn how to write here but you faggots making it hard
So which one are you, the one throwing or taking it to the face
Hey, we all take back shots homie but up the ass just isn't my taste
If I'm not at your table it's probably cause I own it
But you think a girl not worth the opponent
You must be talking about your bitch and the infection she got
You know point the finger else where to shift blame, we see it a lot
But it's all good, it's what got us here
Get your trophies up, you got none but you been here 8 years

[Networth]

Finagle trash bars not even the slightest we compare
Writing you’re getting back In the mist? Use that to cover that raunchy smell down there

versus

You must be talking about your bitch and the infection she got
You know point the finger else where to shift blame, we see it a lot


So yea this battle was a bit lackluster without many quotables but its good to see the showing from yall an putting forth the effort.
Joe came with what seemed a half polished verse far lower than the quality of his norm, whole A Disciple dropped the best verse I've read from her. AD, you're definitely on your way to vast improvement and I can without a doubt see you elevating well enough to win some battles in frontlines in the near future if you drop more bars like this. Here, the lines weren't hard hitting enough to give you the W, but you absolutely showed that you're capable of adapting your style and you're a quick learner, so keep at it Sis frfr.

V/Joe Boston

[Ryno]

10

She says no fucking on the first date I’ll pull out my dick she’s down
Stuff her in that tight end she’ll get excited like the Pats signing Antonio Brown
Fucking clown put the pen down you suck just own it
Verses should be wrapped in purple ribbons, I’ll leave scars worse then last weeks opponent
Fuck your emotional moment everything in your life is a fable
They say trust A Disciple I believe in god but you wouldn’t find this bitch anywhere at my table
...Opener was lol, not feeling purple ribbons, A disciple punch was cool
Finagle trash bars not even the slightest we compare
Writing you’re getting back In the mist? Use that to cover that raunchy smell down there
Lets get it clear just cuz your female I don’t respect you I was created to slap ugly
You don’t deserve the paper bag or flag over your face youre the most disgusting bitch to land on this country
...Raunchy smell was funny, didn’t like the closer

He think he's the hulk, alter ego, Jo Boston boxing on it
He just mad cause he wanna kick it but I told him let's keep it platonic
My name is for student and not of a God
Trying to learn how to write here but you faggots making it hard
So which one are you, the one throwing or taking it to the face
Hey, we all take back shots homie but up the ass just isn't my taste
...Lol at the opener, next 2 were kinda blah
If I'm not at your table it's probably cause I own it
But you think a girl not worth the opponent
You must be talking about your bitch and the infection she got
You know point the finger else where to shift blame, we see it a lot
But it's all good, it's what got us here
Get your trophies up, you got none but you been here 8 years
...The closer was solid, didn’t care for the other 2

Browns, A disciple vs Closer

V/Joe Boston...best verse from A Disciple so far...keep writing, you’re getting the hang of it

[Spree]

Jow wins