Jutebox Vs. hello there

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    Post Jutebox Vs. hello there

    8 Bars = 16 Lines

    Due by midnight. Good luck, let's have some fun.

    Consider this my check.

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    Re: Jutebox Vs. hello there

    Check, check.

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    Re: Jutebox Vs. hello there

    I'll vote in a bit. Lemme get this up before I get pulled away tonight...

    You get 10.


    Listen faggot,

    I'ma beat this kid like he's Irish... so 'shakin the rust?'
    That's me finger bangin' his mom - knuckles deep in her taint n' her muff..
    Disrespect flagrant as fuck... My chill is "No." Not settled..
    This kid "old school" cuz when I visit now, head at blowjob level...
    Flows so far above you... Try n' piece it all together..
    When we bang, it's liquid fire like I'm creepin' in the Nether..
    I Red your Bull shit.. You write like some Quickie Mart scrubber..
    So take this Monster to the head till your fuckin' heart flutters..
    You're vanilla as fuck... just a twig and a shirt...
    So I'll be balls deep in your girl's ass when I'm diggin' up dirt..


    Ez.

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    Re: Jutebox Vs. hello there

    We agreed on 16 so you get the whole clip kid.

    Quote Originally Posted by hello there View Post
    Bet you're amazing.

    Open something and mention me. Will post tomorrow.
    Iíll take that bet, mother fucker you can double down.
    Trouble found, lyrically Iíll gun you down and shuffle round,
    through the rubble on the ground. Hello kitty.
    You yellow bellied bitty, with a shitty flow, run you and your fellows out the city.
    Mention you? Iíll dismember you, Iím fixiní to.
    When I do like a pigeon do, you get split in two.
    Lyrically Iíll beat you to a pulp, lyrically Iíll eat you in a gulp.
    Thanks for the inquiry, but lyrically I defeat you in a jolt.
    I do this frequent on the daily bitch, and I donít expect much
    from someone who couldnít even come up with a decent alias.
    You earned a custom title, you better read something from the bible,
    Iím a leader, youíre a child. Rank and file. Get spanked causeí I ainít spit nothing in a while.
    I know he said he would post by the next moon, but heíll be perplexed
    with post-traumatic stress in the next room, Jutebox complex with the text doom,
    Your avatar is silly stupid, you must be really stupid and spit trash. Get smashed, and denied to rap,
    Hello, goodbye. Lyrically I could kill you with 4 bars and 2 hands tied behind my back.

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    Re: Jutebox Vs. hello there

    Up for voting please.

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    Re: Jutebox Vs. hello there

    I'ma beat this kid like he's Irish... so 'shakin the rust?'
    That's me finger bangin' his mom - knuckles deep in her taint n' her muff..


    versus

    I do this frequent on the daily bitch, and I donít expect much
    from someone who couldnít even come up with a decent alias.


    So yea, i havent seen hello battle in a while but i've read much better and maybe he dropped to suit the competition, which was almost a mistake because 16 lines vs 10 puts you at a clear disadvantage in a more closely contested battle, Jutebox I've never seen battle and i can tell off the bat he's mostly into audio rap which can be different and difficult to adopt a text style to at first(it was for me). That being said this verse from Jute was better than my first text verse so i can see u improving greatly with just a few battles if you work towards it. Nice rhyme structure but not enough direct punches and/or thought provoking/comical lines. Good try, really man, but you were slightly outclassed here.

    V/ h.t.

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    Re: Jutebox Vs. hello there

    Up for votes.

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    Re: Jutebox Vs. hello there

    I'ma beat this kid like he's Irish... so 'shakin the rust?'
    That's me finger bangin' his mom - knuckles deep in her taint n' her muff..
    this legit right here lots of humor nice flow n multi nuun heavy tho 4 out of 5
    Disrespect flagrant as fuck... My chill is "No." Not settled..
    This kid "old school" cuz when I visit now, head at blowjob level...
    you reaching here but it lands cuz the flow is here 3 out of 5
    Flows so far above you... Try n' piece it all together..
    When we bang, it's liquid fire like I'm creepin' in the Nether..
    you missed with this 1 out of 5

    I Red your Bull shit.. You write like some Quickie Mart scrubber..
    So take this Monster to the head till your fuckin' heart flutters..
    whew this is hot lava right here
    You're vanilla as fuck... just a twig and a shirt...
    So I'll be balls deep in your girl's ass when I'm diggin' up dirt..
    back to back hay makers



    I’ll take that bet, mother fucker you can double down.
    Trouble found, lyrically I’ll gun you down and shuffle round,
    flow supreme
    through the rubble on the ground. Hello kitty.
    You yellow bellied bitty, with a shitty flow, run you and your fellows out the city.
    okkkayeee flowing hot lava
    Mention you? I’ll dismember you, I’m fixin’ to.
    When I do like a pigeon do, you get split in two.
    flow filler? get to it now
    Lyrically I’ll beat you to a pulp, lyrically I’ll eat you in a gulp.
    Thanks for the inquiry, but lyrically I defeat you in a jolt.
    bleh blah first line solid fall off second line
    I do this frequent on the daily bitch, and I don’t expect much
    from someone who couldn’t even come up with a decent alias.
    4 out of 5
    You earned a custom title, you better read something from the bible,
    I’m a leader, you’re a child. Rank and file. Get spanked cause’ I ain’t spit nothing in a while.
    streching em out now n just kinda swinging wild here
    I know he said he would post by the next moon, but he’ll be perplexed
    with post-traumatic stress in the next room, Jutebox complex with the text doom,
    elementary shit here not impressed getting bored with this verse
    Your avatar is silly stupid, you must be really stupid and spit trash. Get smashed, and denied to rap,
    Hello, goodbye. Lyrically I could kill you with 4 bars and 2 hands tied behind my back.
    nice concept but the mention of your bars is not a fact you lost this one jack



    hello there killed him in this one

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    Re: Jutebox Vs. hello there

    I Red your Bull shit.. You write like some Quickie Mart scrubber..
    So take this Monster to the head till your fuckin' heart flutters..
    You're vanilla as fuck... just a twig and a shirt...
    So I'll be balls deep in your girl's ass when I'm diggin' up dirt..

    Vs nothing

    And ur supposed to match the first person to drop so technically this a dq win for hello there
    Now I am become death; destroyer of worlds.

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    Re: Jutebox Vs. hello there

    Quote Originally Posted by Ronin View Post
    I Red your Bull shit.. You write like some Quickie Mart scrubber..
    So take this Monster to the head till your fuckin' heart flutters..
    You're vanilla as fuck... just a twig and a shirt...
    So I'll be balls deep in your girl's ass when I'm diggin' up dirt..

    Vs nothing

    And ur supposed to match the first person to drop so technically this a dq win for hello there
    We agreed to a specific amount of bars prior to setting up the battle. So I imagine it would technically be a DQ on 'hello there' for not meeting the requirements. But doesn't make any different to me because y'all are like congress you skim through the shit and vote by party lines.

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    Re: Jutebox Vs. hello there

    Quote Originally Posted by Jutebox View Post
    We agreed to a specific amount of bars prior to setting up the battle. So I imagine it would technically be a DQ on 'hello there' for not meeting the requirements. But doesn't make any different to me because y'all are like congress you skim through the shit and vote by party lines.
    Doesn't matter u still gotta match who drop first or tell them to add bars. But u still lost what sad

    Nigga fight me
    Now I am become death; destroyer of worlds.

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    Re: Jutebox Vs. hello there

    So it doesn't matter the amount of bar agreed up in the before hand the first person to drop decides how many bars the battles is going to be. That's brilliant. And while your opinion is appreciated it's worth less than you intranet accomplishment.

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