Jutebox Vs. hello there

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  1. #1

    Post Jutebox Vs. hello there

    8 Bars = 16 Lines

    Due by midnight. Good luck, let's have some fun.

    Consider this my check.

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    Re: Jutebox Vs. hello there

    Check, check.

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    Re: Jutebox Vs. hello there

    I'll vote in a bit. Lemme get this up before I get pulled away tonight...

    You get 10.


    Listen faggot,

    I'ma beat this kid like he's Irish... so 'shakin the rust?'
    That's me finger bangin' his mom - knuckles deep in her taint n' her muff..
    Disrespect flagrant as fuck... My chill is "No." Not settled..
    This kid "old school" cuz when I visit now, head at blowjob level...
    Flows so far above you... Try n' piece it all together..
    When we bang, it's liquid fire like I'm creepin' in the Nether..
    I Red your Bull shit.. You write like some Quickie Mart scrubber..
    So take this Monster to the head till your fuckin' heart flutters..
    You're vanilla as fuck... just a twig and a shirt...
    So I'll be balls deep in your girl's ass when I'm diggin' up dirt..


    Ez.

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    Re: Jutebox Vs. hello there

    We agreed on 16 so you get the whole clip kid.

    Quote Originally Posted by hello there View Post
    Bet you're amazing.

    Open something and mention me. Will post tomorrow.
    Iíll take that bet, mother fucker you can double down.
    Trouble found, lyrically Iíll gun you down and shuffle round,
    through the rubble on the ground. Hello kitty.
    You yellow bellied bitty, with a shitty flow, run you and your fellows out the city.
    Mention you? Iíll dismember you, Iím fixiní to.
    When I do like a pigeon do, you get split in two.
    Lyrically Iíll beat you to a pulp, lyrically Iíll eat you in a gulp.
    Thanks for the inquiry, but lyrically I defeat you in a jolt.
    I do this frequent on the daily bitch, and I donít expect much
    from someone who couldnít even come up with a decent alias.
    You earned a custom title, you better read something from the bible,
    Iím a leader, youíre a child. Rank and file. Get spanked causeí I ainít spit nothing in a while.
    I know he said he would post by the next moon, but heíll be perplexed
    with post-traumatic stress in the next room, Jutebox complex with the text doom,
    Your avatar is silly stupid, you must be really stupid and spit trash. Get smashed, and denied to rap,
    Hello, goodbye. Lyrically I could kill you with 4 bars and 2 hands tied behind my back.

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    Re: Jutebox Vs. hello there

    Up for voting please.

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    Re: Jutebox Vs. hello there

    I'ma beat this kid like he's Irish... so 'shakin the rust?'
    That's me finger bangin' his mom - knuckles deep in her taint n' her muff..


    versus

    I do this frequent on the daily bitch, and I donít expect much
    from someone who couldnít even come up with a decent alias.


    So yea, i havent seen hello battle in a while but i've read much better and maybe he dropped to suit the competition, which was almost a mistake because 16 lines vs 10 puts you at a clear disadvantage in a more closely contested battle, Jutebox I've never seen battle and i can tell off the bat he's mostly into audio rap which can be different and difficult to adopt a text style to at first(it was for me). That being said this verse from Jute was better than my first text verse so i can see u improving greatly with just a few battles if you work towards it. Nice rhyme structure but not enough direct punches and/or thought provoking/comical lines. Good try, really man, but you were slightly outclassed here.

    V/ h.t.

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