Week 5: Echelon (1-3) vs A Disciple (2-2) Echelon Wins

[King]

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LLL Season 24
Regular Season Rules

10 lines
(unless agreed upon by both battlers)

No Bullshit Allowed

MUST CHECK IN BY WEDNESDAY!!

VERSES DUE FRIDAY 11:59 PST

24 hour EXT must be granted by opponent

BATTLES CLOSE SUNDAY

[Echelon]

Time to kill you a second time....

I am serene, eyeful; gleam light from chapels; serene kindful
Gleam rhymful; I'll 'kill disciple with the rifle' like a ... street disciple..
I'm soley dope; rhyming dope; zone with oaths
Dope as rope..you 'pale in comparison' you're as white as the holy ghost..
Come to zone felons; the rhyming funnel dope reverend
Pummel dope methods..you're 'word is bond'..but you're not 007..

6 Bars, you're death..

[A Disciple]

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Dang... that shit was pretty hot

[A Disciple]

I never thought I'd ever be one to pull it, I guess cause I didn't im not
But I drove straight to his eye, with a maybe would've worked plot
A few years back, I was counting how many years - I'd still be in there
And nah it was over principal in the 222 not cause I cared
But that's the breaks when anger shatters any tears
But nah I don't have average adult fears
But wait, don't confuse rapbattles with therapy
So I'm calling my own wild card - insanity
That makes it premeditated - extra to prevent me cause I don't ever want to get that close again.
Is this considered bullshit though instead of a diss, cause really im just trying to pick back up my pen

[Jutebox]

Vote: Echelon

Vote goes to baby fox for halfway decent rhyme scheme that shows some potential on some OK wordplay. Disciple basic rhyme that lacked solid punches or any decent metaphors/wordplay. Not terrible, but not a good battle verse.

[MoFo]

I am serene, eyeful; gleam light from chapels; serene kindful
Gleam rhymful; I'll 'kill disciple with the rifle' like a ... street disciple.
not feeling.
I'm soley dope; rhyming dope; zone with oaths
Dope as rope..you 'pale in comparison' you're as white as the holy ghost..
this shit is cool here kinda bland tho
Come to zone felons; the rhyming funnel dope reverend
Pummel dope methods..you're 'word is bond'..but you're not 007..
this sauce rigt here 5 out of 5

I never thought I'd ever be one to pull it, I guess cause I didn't im not
But I drove straight to his eye, with a maybe would've worked plot
soft hitting
A few years back, I was counting how many years - I'd still be in there
And nah it was over principal in the 222 not cause I cared
idc attack attack attack wasting lines here get greasy
But that's the breaks when anger shatters any tears
But nah I don't have average adult fears
miss
But wait, don't confuse rapbattles with therapy
So I'm calling my own wild card - insanity
i feel you all the way but this a battle with 10 lines you gone swing
That makes it premeditated - extra to prevent me cause I don't ever want to get that close again.
Is this considered bullshit though instead of a diss, cause really im just trying to pick back up my pen
put that pen down if you gone come like this. freestyle it hell might be better

ech get the win here and he only went 6 lines but it is enough. short fight but he did swing on her

[A. Diction]

How is this battle allowed in LLL @King this is a disgrace.

V. Double L

[Stranger]

@echalon

You didn't have nothing quottable, no real punch in the whole thing.

@a diciple

did you really drop a poem?

v/ echalon for having one actual dis with the holy ghost line, they both dropped a borderline topical/poem but echalon had one diss even tho it wasn't good

[King]

3-0

[miracle]

Vote- echelon.. Both were weak but he atleast attempting punches.. Dis was more like a open mic type drop.. Nothing dissing the other person..in a battle u gotta attack the other person.. U didnt.. So he gets the vote

[Networth]

I'm soley dope; rhyming dope; zone with oaths
Dope as rope..you 'pale in comparison' you're as white as the holy ghost..
Come to zone felons; the rhyming funnel dope reverend
Pummel dope methods..you're 'word is bond'..but you're not 007..
^Some well intended wordplay here with direct shots at your opponent
The drop is a 4 overall


versus

That makes it premeditated - extra to prevent me cause I don't ever want to get that close again.
Is this considered bullshit though instead of a diss, cause really im just trying to pick back up my pen
^Compelling introspective and a good nod to your trials , but like the rest of the verse it fails to attack the opposition.
The drop is a 2 overall

V/Echelon

[A. Diction]

That nigga said dope 3 times in one sentence that shit is a -4 lmao

He only gonna win cus his opponent on the wrong site. He thought it was a Shakespearean the ass fgt poem msg board

Both should stop or learn quick, what I seen shows no potential tho. But who knows