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Re: Week 5: Networth (3-1) vs Diasick (3-1)
Listen,
This beef wont be for taco shells, so talk foreign theyll be seein u wear those
I'll celebrate cos the Fifth May kill'em in 1 shot, theyll mistake u for Dia de Muertos!
But fr..
Sick of the antics, n idk why Depot his whole heart out in chat w/nothin to prove for
Lowes, idc if you wanna show ya home improvement, I just wish you'd Say less and Do more!
Irregardless of yo position, you don't look right against hoes when arguin all w/ 'em
Makes no difference if you coder module still fail tryna change rules in a flawed sytstem!
Ithink u're prolly mixedish wit this rapbattlin shit, cant tell if u'll be in or bounce
Still U n us colored folks a lot alike, n how U rarely vote but swear your opinion counts!
Spree of repetitive emotional stabs at Bar like a Ronin, ya actions only defended them
Props Scot,
U showed us how it looks to do the most..with failed leaders here who only do the minimum!
10
my original opponent for this week was rhyno and they changed my opponent to networth*
It's not even Halloween yet, and seeing you topping me would be a frightful venture.
Whats net really worth when he bout to receive more hatches to the face than micheals sister.
I'm pulling ya card for bluffing, he coming in here with a poker face, what's this guy gone tell me?
We can try to access net's worth, we'll just see a hand, that's more slimy than a python's belly.
You're playing your self son, like nerds in critical care, acting like we won't see casualty.
How you going to kill me? because you can't grip the tech, when you aint got a grip on reality.
They tried to upgrade my opponent, I asked for some damn change, and barely got a cent back.
so I'll have to air out this fools dirty laundry, because there's more worth, inside of a lent trap.
They'll ask you where's ya heart at, like fat dudes after cardio ya displaying a slowed up growth rate.
You're trying to claim status, when you look more miniscule than brain cells in a coked up sole mate.
This beef wont be for taco shells, so talk foreign theyll be seein u wear those
I'll celebrate cos the Fifth May kill'em in 1 shot, theyll mistake u for Dia de Muertos!
Little spanish/english compound rhyme. Decen't wordplay, decent bar.
Sick of the antics, n idk why Depot his whole heart out in chat w/nothin to prove for
Lowes, idc if you wanna show ya home improvement, I just wish you'd Say less and Do more!
Decen't bar, wordplay there just a little stretch.
Irregardless of yo position, you don't look right against hoes when arguin all w/ 'em
Makes no difference if you coder module still fail tryna change rules in a flawed sytstem!
Basically filler w/ a loose rhyme.
Ithink u're prolly mixedish wit this rapbattlin shit, cant tell if u'll be in or bounce
Still U n us colored folks a lot alike, n how U rarely vote but swear your opinion counts!
Powder puff punch, basic rhyme.
Spree of repetitive emotional stabs at Bar like a Ronin, ya actions only defended them
Props Scot,
U showed us how it looks to do the most..with failed leaders here who only do the minimum!
Rhyme kind of connects, medicore personal.
It's not even Halloween yet, and seeing you topping me would be a frightful venture.
Whats net really worth when he bout to receive more hatches to the face than micheals sister.
Also a decent bar with a little play. Compound rhyme connects.
I'm pulling ya card for bluffing, he coming in here with a poker face, what's this guy gone tell me?
We can try to access net's worth, we'll just see a hand, that's more slimy than a python's belly.
Mediocre, decent rhyme, wordplay but not super strong.
You're playing your self son, like nerds in critical care, acting like we won't see casualty.
How you going to kill me? because you can't grip the tech, when you aint got a grip on reality.
Loose rhyme, mediocre bar.
They tried to upgrade my opponent, I asked for some damn change, and barely got a cent back.
so I'll have to air out this fools dirty laundry, because there's more worth, inside of a lent trap.
Not bad, rhyme scheme on point. Good punch.
They'll ask you where's ya heart at, like fat dudes after cardio ya displaying a slowed up growth rate.
You're trying to claim status, when you look more miniscule than brain cells in a coked up sole mate.
Compounding syllables not quite connecting, mediocre finish.
Vote: Diasick
For a slightly better rhyme scheme, more complexity. Both had wordplay/punches, Diasick less corny and connected better.
Sick of the antics, n idk why Depot his whole heart out in chat w/nothin to prove for
Lowes, idc if you wanna show ya home improvement, I just wish you'd Say less and Do more!
....this had potential but ur wording and delivery are all over the place. It's too much, quality over quantity.......
Ithink u're prolly mixedish wit this rapbattlin shit, cant tell if u'll be in or bounce
Still U n us colored folks a lot alike, n how U rarely vote but swear your opinion counts!
.....lotb......
Spree of repetitive emotional stabs at Bar like a Ronin, ya actions only defended them
Props Scot,
U showed us how it looks to do the most..with failed leaders here who only do the minimum!
.....again good concept just not delivered very well....
Vs.
You're playing your self son, like nerds in critical care, acting like we won't see casualty.
How you going to kill me? because you can't grip the tech, when you aint got a grip on reality.
....this coulda been so good but u over worded it and straight butchered it. Fuck u....
They tried to upgrade my opponent, I asked for some damn change, and barely got a cent back.
so I'll have to air out this fools dirty laundry, because there's more worth, inside of a lent trap.
....this coulda been good but it's over worded and the set up is so fucking corny. Old ass quarterback joke u forced in there to set up a him being broke with a bad np and a poor play with laundry n lent trap. Basically u fucked it up mate, ur really good at fucking up concepts. Keep at it tho it might click........
That last bar I just csnt even, I did not enjoy reading it let's say that
Overall: dia was more consistent I guess but they were both equally bad I gotta go with lotb
V. Networth
Now I am become death; destroyer of worlds.
This beef wont be for taco shells, so talk foreign theyll be seein u wear those
I'll celebrate cos the Fifth May kill'em in 1 shot, theyll mistake u for Dia de Muertos!
But fr..
whew this is best bars i read on here in a minute
Sick of the antics, n idk why Depot his whole heart out in chat w/nothin to prove for
Lowes, idc if you wanna show ya home improvement, I just wish you'd Say less and Do more!
forced, i dont think you needed to start off with lowes that was useless but i like the de pour
Irregardless of yo position, you don't look right against hoes when arguin all w/ 'em
Makes no difference if you coder module still fail tryna change rules in a flawed sytstem!
4 out of 5 nice personal and flow is here
Ithink u're prolly mixedish wit this rapbattlin shit, cant tell if u'll be in or bounce
Still U n us colored folks a lot alike, n how U rarely vote but swear your opinion counts!
garbage water. n you could be smacked up in reality
Spree of repetitive emotional stabs at Bar like a Ronin, ya actions only defended them
Props Scot,
U showed us how it looks to do the most..with failed leaders here who only do the minimum!
decent closer here,
It's not even Halloween yet, and seeing you topping me would be a frightful venture.
Whats net really worth when he bout to receive more hatches to the face than micheals sister.
nice opener
I'm pulling ya card for bluffing, he coming in here with a poker face, what's this guy gone tell me?
We can try to access net's worth, we'll just see a hand, that's more slimy than a python's belly.
greasy but kinda all over the place here
You're playing your self son, like nerds in critical care, acting like we won't see casualty.
How you going to kill me? because you can't grip the tech, when you aint got a grip on reality.
best lines of verse
They tried to upgrade my opponent, I asked for some damn change, and barely got a cent back.
so I'll have to air out this fools dirty laundry, because there's more worth, inside of a lent trap.
scratch that this yo best lines back to back haymakers
They'll ask you where's ya heart at, like fat dudes after cardio ya displaying a slowed up growth rate.
You're trying to claim status, when you look more miniscule than brain cells in a coked up sole mate.
second line fell off i liked how you started
pretty nice battle here.. the dia taco line is epic on the contrary verse for verse i think dia verse is more solid and even throuought..
could go ethier way but gotta go dia for consistency
nice drops tho
2-1
The Last Level
This beef wont be for taco shells, so talk foreign theyll be seein u wear those
I'll celebrate cos the Fifth May kill'em in 1 shot, theyll mistake u for Dia de Muertos!
Irregardless of yo position, you don't look right against hoes when arguin all w/ 'em
Makes no difference if you coder module still fail tryna change rules in a flawed sytstem!
Ithink u're prolly mixedish wit this rapbattlin shit, cant tell if u'll be in or bounce
Still U n us colored folks a lot alike, n how U rarely vote but swear your opinion counts!
vs
You're playing your self son, like nerds in critical care, acting like we won't see casualty.
How you going to kill me? because you can't grip the tech, when you aint got a grip on reality.
They tried to upgrade my opponent, I asked for some damn change, and barely got a cent back.
so I'll have to air out this fools dirty laundry, because there's more worth, inside of a lent trap.
close battle... basically those 3 bars vs those 2 bars though......based on that, I got Net with the better verse overall
v- Net
I really like the idea behind Nets opener... Prob could've been delivered better but I really like the concept .. 4th bar was a cool meta as well
I dunno...I hated Dias verse if I'm honest....none of the bars were enjoyable to me and all seemed like throwaway filler
I have Networth winning this one
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