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LLL Season 24
Regular Season Rules
10 lines
(unless agreed upon by both battlers)
No Bullshit Allowed
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VERSES DUE FRIDAY 11:59 PST
24 hour EXT must be granted by opponent
BATTLES CLOSE SUNDAY
The Last Level
10, homie.
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Yup
Sent 10 @slecht
aka jab master/bash
you have a childish style & deep inside you're a buster
u don't carry sticks but you around other men even like a boyscout instructor
I'm a savage and I don't care if you say you're a beast, you can't fool me
I'm puting ryhno in a box, i don't give a fuck if you call that animal cruelty
I'm a true scholar and honestly - you're not in my level. I'm on top it
I'll challenge master to the next degree like I'm a doctorates.
u a lame faggot, I've beaten you 2 times now it's time for a hat trick.
come up with a powers bars again and i'll turn you ghost like james st.patrick
austin power flip was straight nursery.. I'll send u the hospital wiith a third degree
as soon I found out that the dr..evil...i paid him to kill u during surgery
Last edited by slecht; October 6th, 2019 at 06:27 AM
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Ayo,
This small fry gettin ate quick. Dawg ya resume is trash, mate
I’ve seen the Arby menu faced...& those cheap beefs were all in bad taste
So what u gonna say? I lost & signed out? Bruh these voters ain’t nothin
Everybody knows i had Dia beat, he’s just as wack as ur fkn lollipop punches
Don’t let our 1-2 match fool u. In the league vs Ry? I’m clappin u bro
Cuz if u try & go for Broke...u’ll wind up missing once the mag gets exposed
Flash the gats, it’s all pain & I’m shootin atcha dawgs, ur all lame
Push my buttons & that machine liftin ur animals...shotty like the claw game
Quit w/ the budgin. One false move I’ll swing the knife like it’s nothin
Manual need docs to stitch back u together...u should’ve followed instructions!
V/ ryno cause I almost felt fire
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CLA919
Tf. That ain't a vote nigga. @King mod me unmod broke who ghostedOriginally Posted by A Disciple
Now I am become death; destroyer of worlds.
aka jab master/bash
...never seen his jabmaster alias but I'll take ur word for it.....
you have a childish style & deep inside you're a buster
u don't carry sticks but you around other men even like a boyscout instructor
...boyscout instructors aren't around men, they're around kids. And everytime I seen a boy scout instructor on tv or whatever they always got a walking stick. U took this concept in the wrong direction bruv......
I'm a savage and I don't care if you say you're a beast, you can't fool me
I'm puting ryhno in a box, i don't give a fuck if you call that animal cruelty
...to simple bruv....
I'm a true scholar and honestly - you're not in my level. I'm on top it
I'll challenge master to the next degree like I'm a doctorates.
...ok but wording was rushed af. This needed a rewrite.....
u a lame faggot, I've beaten you 2 times now it's time for a hat trick.
come up with a powers bars again and i'll turn you ghost like james st.patrick
...cool. but u making a punch about him using a played punch repeatedly is kinda shooting urself in the foot...
austin power flip was straight nursery.. I'll send u the hospital wiith a third degree
as soon I found out that the dr..evil...i paid him to kill u during surgery
...nah bruv. Wording and delivery changes coulda made it hit.....
Vs
This small fry gettin ate quick. Dawg ya resume is trash, mate
I’ve seen the Arby menu faced...& those cheap beefs were all in bad taste
...arby rb is played but I like the menu part and the tie ins. These beans are cool bruv......
So what u gonna say? I lost & signed out? Bruh these voters ain’t nothin
Everybody knows i had Dia beat, he’s just as wack as ur fkn lollipop punches
...Miss only cuz idk wtf a lollipop punch is bruv.....
Don’t let our 1-2 match fool u. In the league vs Ry? I’m clappin u bro
Cuz if u try & go for Broke...u’ll wind up missing once the mag gets exposed
...meh....
Flash the gats, it’s all pain & I’m shootin atcha dawgs, ur all lame
Push my buttons & that machine liftin ur animals...shotty like the claw game
...lotb....
Quit w/ the budgin. One false move I’ll swing the knife like it’s nothin
Manual need docs to stitch back u together...u should’ve followed instructions!
....nice.....
Overall: slecht verse seemed rushed, if he woulda tweaked some of those lines he woulda had some good shit. Bash did what bash do, couple misses couple bangers.
V. Bashemup
Now I am become death; destroyer of worlds.
Vs
Vote-slet .. I thought he came alright with a better delivery on his hits.. I thought ryno could have won this for better concepts and stronger punches but his wording on them punches deaded the sting
doesn't count.
need some kind of break down.
1-1
The Last Level
I'm a true scholar and honestly - you're not in my level. I'm on top it
I'll challenge master to the next degree like I'm a doctorates.
vs
Don’t let our 1-2 match fool u. In the league vs Ry? I’m clappin u bro
Cuz if u try & go for Broke...u’ll wind up missing once the mag gets exposed
Flash the gats, it’s all pain & I’m shootin atcha dawgs, ur all lame
Push my buttons & that machine liftin ur animals...shotty like the claw game
v- ryno for more hits than misses over sletch..
not to mention disciple almost felt fire
I'm a savage and I don't care if you say you're a beast, you can't fool me
I'm puting ryhno in a box, i don't give a fuck if you call that animal cruelty
austin power flip was straight nursery.. I'll send u the hospital wiith a third degree
as soon I found out that the dr..evil...i paid him to kill u during surgery
^these were cool.some of the rest struggled in wording and fell a bit flat on delivery..
The drop was a 6 overall.
versus
This small fry gettin ate quick. Dawg ya resume is trash, mate
I’ve seen the Arby menu faced...& those cheap beefs were all in bad taste
Don’t let our 1-2 match fool u. In the league vs Ry? I’m clappin u bro
Cuz if u try & go for Broke...u’ll wind up missing once the mag gets exposed
Quit w/ the budgin. One false move I’ll swing the knife like it’s nothin
Manual need docs to stitch back u together...u should’ve followed instructions!
^These were nice, some of the others were lacking in sting but the LOTB was the wordplay and delivery in your closer,
The drop was a 7 overall.
V/Ryno
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