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LLL Season 24
Regular Season Rules
10 lines
(unless agreed upon by both battlers)
No Bullshit Allowed
MUST CHECK IN BY WEDNESDAY!!
VERSES DUE FRIDAY 11:59 PST
24 hour EXT must be granted by opponent
BATTLES CLOSE SUNDAY
The Last Level
I'm 'RED AS HELL: BUGGING WAGON; I have a WAR SICKLE killing this TUBBY FAGGOT
Suck a Scrotum full of semon; I'm a 'demon snake' and your a 'UGLY DRAGON'
I'm evil; crushing you to 'BUG JUICE'; I have a ugly scimitar blade to 'CUT YOU'
When you ordered lunch; I was LIKE 'FUCK YOU'; You call yourself a 'TEXT GOD' so you should probably 'PHONE IN YOUR LINES' when this 'DEMON' TOUCH YOU
My glamour is wicked; eat the sands of time; asthma is wicked
Your sad as a misfit; I'll show you what's sharp and SOLID; with a 'HAMMER AND SICKLE'
I wear the best ATTIRE; on a quest for black magic with hexes and choirs
I'm the best as rhymer; I'll ''POUR/POOR GASOLINE'' on You; BECAUSE YOUR LESS THAN FIRE
Is that 8 lines? Smh
Vs Echelon aka Synocog
He got no Will...his fam get nothing when the guy is dead...
Guess that makes u a piece of shit in life and death.
Boss status, find u asap- social media got me running the game...
pop up on u like I 'sent a message', chainsaw got ur body parts doing the same.
He jump when thunder sounds, now imagine a hundred rounds...
Synonym rod, take a hammer n pound ur soft head under ground.
U scary af, wary to buck. He always gonna be a nothing...
Ech-a-sketch dude, getting shook up everytime someone touch him.
I'm nice man, a fucking viking titan that'll take ur life fam...
I wanted a warm up match but nobody knows ur name like the capital of Iceland.
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Oh yeah jutebox n mofo cant vote cause they dont know how to battle tbh
Now I am become death; destroyer of worlds.
Echelon
your wordplay doesnt work well and your punches are not hard hitting. long bar has never fared well here either.. you got some work to do that's for sure. pour gasoline / less than fire is just weak man and it was possibly your best bar.
Ronin
sent a message was decent
ech a sketch was ok maybe coulda been worded to be more harsh
ronin didnt really try but he got this eaasy imo..
v/ ronin
I'm 'RED AS HELL: BUGGING WAGON; I have a WAR SICKLE killing this TUBBY FAGGOT
Suck a Scrotum full of semon; I'm a 'demon snake' and your a 'UGLY DRAGON'
Not bad rhyme scheme. But a bit of a stretch bugging a wagon. And not the hardest punch w/ ugly dragon.
I'm evil; crushing you to 'BUG JUICE'; I have a ugly scimitar blade to 'CUT YOU'
When you ordered lunch; I was LIKE 'FUCK YOU'; You call yourself a 'TEXT GOD' so you should probably 'PHONE IN YOUR LINES' when this 'DEMON' TOUCH YOU
Mediocre punch/wordplay.
My glamour is wicked; eat the sands of time; asthma is wicked
Your sad as a misfit; I'll show you what's sharp and SOLID; with a 'HAMMER AND SICKLE'
Decent rhyme scheme needs a little work. A bit of filler.
I wear the best ATTIRE; on a quest for black magic with hexes and choirs
I'm the best as rhymer; I'll ''POUR/POOR GASOLINE'' on You; BECAUSE YOUR LESS THAN FIRE
Mediocre wordplay/punch/ender.
He got no Will...his fam get nothing when the guy is dead...
Guess that makes u a piece of shit in life and death.
Little wordplay I kind of liked but doesnt even rhyme. Rhyme is the keystone.
Boss status, find u asap- social media got me running the game...
pop up on u like I 'sent a message', chainsaw got ur body parts doing the same.
I just used the line 'pop up on you like a messanger box' a few days ago, I guess you liked it. Basic rhyme, basic punch.
He jump when thunder sounds, now imagine a hundred rounds...
Synonym rod, take a hammer n pound ur soft head under ground.
A little syllable compounding here, decent filler punch.
U scary af, wary to buck. He always gonna be a nothing...
Ech-a-sketch dude, getting shook up everytime someone touch him.
Medicore wordplay, decent bar.
I'm nice man, a fucking viking titan that'll take ur life fam...
I wanted a warm up match but nobody knows ur name like the capital of Iceland.
I like the set up. Decent rhymes cheme, ok metaphore/finish.
Vote: Ronin, even though one of your best metaphors was a recycled version of one a spit the other day. And I believe you voted against me and said I didn't spit anything worth noting.
Vote for Ronin for the sent you a message bar...have seen him come way better but he obviously just keyed and mailed it in here
Can't blame him.....Sinacog is beyond trash
Why I can’t even see Robins?
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CLA919
Name change I'm ronin aka useless aka remy aka art. OfficialOriginally Posted by A Disciple
Now I am become death; destroyer of worlds.
Ok... they both are fire and being a beginner it’s too hard for me to call. I don’t think my vote would even count in this one - I don’t wanna sway it - I rather read who’s was better
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CLA919
I'm going with Ronin here, ech had serious flow and multiples but I didnt like his content and it came off generic. Ronin got him on punches and punches wins battles.. the ugly dragon bar was worded bas n I feel like a dragon > then snake n who wants to be a snake?? Verse had flow but just missed it here, I see lot of talent but not enough to get the w. Ronin wins thisnone
Not a whole lot going on here from either. Obv sinacog is
trolling. Just a bunch of rhyming going nowhere. I’d like to
see ronnin actually try as he is rusty & half assing every
opponent won’t get u back into the swing of things. But, he
had the better attempts between the two.
V/Ronnin
Vote ronin.. Better attempts... First guy had a ok flow but the punches werent there.. N the bars were a little to long for my taste.. So vote ronin for better connections
Ronin: Echelon seems to be rhyming from the perspective of an anime character but honestly it doesn't translate well. Ronin had better flow and a bit harder punches. It could have easily gone either way but Ronin took it.
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