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LLL Season 24
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The Last Level
When I think of jutebox seeing that dog eat Everything I Need
I think of mine and remember I need to make them virtually bleed
I ain’t ever getting justice for what they did to me
But they ain’t ever getting just with, with only what they think everyone don’t see
So are you shy boy or the one I kicked on the switch
Cause that split second of fire saved me from a ditch
And nah you’ll never know or understand bitch
Found out they giving out bank cards to the suckers who snitch
They even tell them no retaliation they’re life valued like a fed
But what would that matter if you’re already dead
Dead? Dead... walking round still living but only in my head
On a split second of giving only cause I heard what they said
You really want me to talk instead?
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CLA919
Re: Week 6: A Disciple (2-3) vs Jutebox (0-1)
Mad man you can't reason wit' me, squeeze the mic like I squeeze a titty.
Lyrically you can't even hit me! I'll bring the heat down on you like the Summer season missy!
So put on a sun dress. Your flow is a dumb mess. My flow heavy like a ton of stress,
You don't deliver, give up rap, become a gold digger, and run west!
Look, you kinda cute. But can't rhyme like Jute. My worst line is better than anything you could produce.
So keep my fucking name out your mouth - and put it to good use.
I don't wanna talk, you ain't worthy in a chat room,
Certainly can't hurt me in a rap tune, you suck you little Kirby vacuum!
Word he that rude. I had to clap back sister, and leave that ass bewildered.
Black gat or nut sack, I'll put it on your face like a Snap Chat filter! ...... and that rap kilt her!
Honestly I'll have to vote for box in this one. wasn't much of a direct competition another story like verse from disciple versus a few hits from her opponent. still I can see the progression and if you continue to battle and vent towards your opponent more n more directly that will give you a much better opportunity to be competitive in the future. here are the best lines from this battle
When I think of jutebox seeing that dog eat Everything I Need
I think of mine and remember I need to make them virtually bleed
And nah you’ll never know or understand bitch
Found out they giving out bank cards to the suckers who snitch
Vs
Mad man you can't reason wit' me, squeeze the mic like I squeeze a titty.
Lyrically you can't even hit me! I'll bring the heat down on you like the Summer season missy!
So keep my fucking name out your mouth - and put it to good use.
I don't wanna talk, you ain't worthy in a chat room,
Certainly can't hurt me in a rap tune, you suck you little Kirby vacuum!
Word he that rude. I had to clap back sister, and leave that ass bewildered.
Black gat or nut sack, I'll put it on your face like a Snap Chat filter! ...... and that rap kilt her!
V/Jute
Last edited by Networth; October 10th, 2019 at 01:16 AM
Bruh stop engaging and going after folks you got the vote. The snap chat line was hot lava for real, nice solid verse with good flow.. I see progression in disciples verse vs the last one i read, would like to see more of your lines directed to your opponent. It sounds like goodaudio lyrics but in text you gotta make everyword count
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Vote is jute
Nothing
Vs
Snap chat filter even tho its played that's bout all u had. Ur wording makes me not want to read ur verses
V. Jute
Now I am become death; destroyer of worlds.
No hate but i could pull nothing out of A.dis's verse.. Felt like i was reading a open mic rather then a battle Verse.. Jute had really lite jabs but atleast they was disses.. I guess the snapchat line was ur best n it wasnt nothing special.. But my vote goes to JUTE
Vote Jukebox: Disciple like previous comment would like verses directed toward opponent. Felt more like a vent which had nothing quite to do w/ this battle unless there is something specific you know about jukebox and were considering yourself sneak dissing. If so some direct punches to give us that understanding could have helped.
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