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    Week 7: Echelon (2-4) vs Exalted (0-0) Exalted wins

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    Re: Week 7: Echelon (2-4) vs Exalted (0-0)

    In here... 10

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    Re: Week 7: Echelon (2-4) vs Exalted (0-0)

    Exalted? Assault rifle uzi..mini uzi sprays on your face
    Your shot with grace..my onyx nape cuts your bonnet face..
    Niche' writer? biblical writer..with the tree of light..
    I sea the light..when you switch from dark to light..you'll see the light
    I'm horsing around with forces renown..
    You're horsing around with horse dicks in your mouth..
    I'm onyx stature..plummet you from space with a jackhammer
    I attack rappers..my sharp wit..attack rappers..
    Conquest rap..you're wacker than wack a mole..
    A mouse trap is the only way you attack a hole..you wack cat..

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    Re: Week 7: Echelon (2-4) vs Exalted (0-0)

    Aka Sinacog

    I've been gone a min from text but honestly u're shit & just weak
    I'm grabbin the stick & picking up where i left off on trash like Prison Trustees
    Listen you geek, the speed of improvement is worse than bad
    You don't Carapace is slow....at this rate you dragging on the floor like a hermit crab
    For real....dropping nonsense every verse for us ain't joyous or fun
    Cinnabar from you is so toxic to the mind we're hoping you get poisoned by some
    Sin brings down LLL quality. fuck it send the bitch to a mod
    Think Fat Loss gimmick....what he Adipose a threat we need to rid em from the spot
    The biggest troll going...ready to be exposed w/ awful reviews
    Ironic that poor Antic Waited long enough to match the concepts you've used
    Last edited by Exalted.; October 17th, 2019 at 04:49 AM

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    Re: Week 7: Echelon (2-4) vs Exalted (0-0) OPEN FOR VOTES

    nothin


    vs

    The biggest troll going...ready to be exposed w/ awful reviews
    Ironic that poor Antic Waited long enough to match the concepts you've used


    V- Ex....

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    Re: Week 7: Echelon (2-4) vs Exalted (0-0) OPEN FOR VOTES

    Echelon obv bodied this

    INF the homie but he never stood a chance here unfortunately

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    Re: Week 7: Echelon (2-4) vs Exalted (0-0) OPEN FOR VOTES

    echelon
    stop being repetitive in your bars, second bar you used writer twice, and light maybe 3 times, have you ever heard of a thesaurus, like srsly guy
    horse used 3 times in the next bar, and it was fucking corny


    exhalted

    I've been gone a min from text but honestly u're shit & just weak
    I'm grabbin the stick & picking up where i left off on trash like Prison Trustees


    I don't know if ech is trolling at this point, he gets worse every time I read a bar from him, V/exhalted he could win this based on ech's corny lines alone, but I like the prison trustees bar.

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    Re: Week 7: Echelon (2-4) vs Exalted (0-0) OPEN FOR VOTES

    Prision trustee bar is I'll definitely dope af
    Rest of the verse is direct and plays on his name. Nun to heavy but it connects bunch of 3 out of 5 lines there

    Ech I'm not feeling the double word usage when you not really flipping the word. The horse dick line is your best of the verse the wack a mole line has potential, I see you shortening bars tho. Not a bad read but not a great one.

    Vote exalted

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    Re: Week 7: Echelon (2-4) vs Exalted (0-0) OPEN FOR VOTES

    Nothing

    Vs

    An actual verse with punches


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    Re: Week 7: Echelon (2-4) vs Exalted (0-0) OPEN FOR VOTES

    Exalted? Assault rifle uzi..mini uzi sprays on your face
    Your shot with grace..my onyx nape cuts your bonnet face..


    vs


    I've been gone a min from text but honestly u're shit & just weak
    I'm grabbin the stick & picking up where i left off on trash like Prison Trustees
    For real....dropping nonsense every verse for us ain't joyous or fun
    Cinnabar from you is so toxic to the mind we're hoping you get poisoned by some
    The biggest troll going...ready to be exposed w/ awful reviews
    Ironic that poor Antic Waited long enough to match the concepts you've used


    So yea.. Echelon got outshined here in a bad way.. we have well constructed concepts with wordplay and direct sting in attack versus what seemed at times a repetitive mashup of attempted humor and un-garnered self glorification equal to some of the most delusional raps I've seen.. confidence is key, but Echelon needs to focus on direct shots that are more thought provoking or enjoyable to read.

    V/Exalted by a mile and some change.

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    Re: Week 7: Echelon (2-4) vs Exalted (0-0) OPEN FOR VOTES

    bump

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    Re: Week 7: Echelon (2-4) vs Exalted (0-0) OPEN FOR VOTES

    Vote exalt ..
    For having punches that connected
    And were heavier.. Ech has ro learn how to deliver a punchline

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    Re: Week 7: Echelon (2-4) vs Exalted (0-0) OPEN FOR VOTES

    Nothing

    Vs cinnabar. Some other wordplay that weren't hard hitting in my opinion but easily the winning verse

    V/ ex

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