A. Diction - first line you called him rude lol ooook... reading through the verse not really seeing anything hmm addict is cool.. coroner could’ve been dope but you whiffed it... liked the wp on Achilles.
You fell off so have some respect in regards to line length. 14 max now on from you.
Dia - nothing.
Dia you need to focus on being good at a particular thing whether it be humor, wordplay, wit etcetera.
Vote Robin