Week 9: Joe Boston (4-4) vs Relijus (0-0) Joe Boston wins

[King]

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LLL Season 24
Regular Season Rules

10 lines
(unless agreed upon by both battlers)

No Bullshit Allowed

MUST CHECK IN BY WEDNESDAY!!

VERSES DUE FRIDAY 11:59 PST

24 hour EXT must be granted by opponent

BATTLES CLOSE SUNDAY

[Relijus]

Check..

[Relijus]

Drop..

I won't waste time bumpin the gums-/
Nope, instead let me grab a bazuka, blow Joe - BOOM! right out the slums-/
flip the script you be Trey Songz and I'll be Joe-/
How the fuck you gon' win when I took you out wit the intro-/
Lights out like you got no Power-/
You wouldn't have had a hot bar as a volunteer firefighter day they blew up the towers-/
Fuck a penny, I'll give you 50 cents for your thoughts-/
Voters pay attention anything he writes will prove why he lost-/
Just do the world a favor, kill yourself, make your mama proud-/
King got some explaining to do putting you in a battle claiming no bullshit allowed-/

[Joe Boston]

@Relijus can you give me until tonight to drop got busy with work?

[Joe Boston]

Here’s my 10 if accepted

Fuck the so called thug shit this is where that stops
Once you hear the Bang Bang Bang it’ll have you dead quicker than Pops
Pussy call the cops during an altercation he can’t handle being confronted
Fuck with me figure out the math this dumb fuck will say he bout to go zero to a hundred
Weapons are abundant in my home 4 fifs to nines customized in chrome
He’d think I’m Pauly Shore crazy with the gun cuz when bullets spray I’ll be waving Bye O Dome
Got your bitch all fours on the Memory Foam mattress she’ll swallow me better then any porn actress
I love that she Big, Sexy and when she wants to wrestle in that bedroom I got more maneuvers than Steve Nash’s
This fag probably takes self defense classes n still shook when it comes to throwing hands
If a straight right caught this bitch in the chest soy milk will probaby leak out his fucking Mammary glands

[SONOVDASUNZ]

Relijius,
I kinda dig the Power & 50 cent / pay attention scheme.. It looks like you were trying to make that a connection. I'm just uncertain if that was your intent or not bc they way it was set-up. Your LOTB, imo, is your intro..

Joe,
The intro was a good current events line. More maneuvers than Nash's was a good comedic line. The Pauly Shore / Bye yo dome was your LOTB

Overall - Structurally, Joe's verse has more, better set-ups and punches..

Vote - Joe

[Relijus]

I could take the win.. since you dropped late.. but I won't be that guy.

VOTE

Joe - 1
Relijus - 0

[Networth]

Nothing


Versus


This fag probably takes self defense classes n still shook when it comes to throwing hands
If a straight right caught this bitch in the chest soy milk will probaby leak out his fucking Mammary glands



So yea Relijus is gonna need a lot of improvement if this verse is any indicator. These bars lacked proper setup and when they landed the punches weren't hard hitting or entertaining mostly.
Joe that "Pops" line was tasteless and poorly set up to even waste being delivered. The rest of your verse was dramatically mediocre and had i not needed to i would've struggled quoting anything.

V/Joe

[King]

3-0

[miracle]

rel wasnt bad.. Basic but if you havent been on forums long its not a bad start.. You just have to be more creative and harsher with your punches... Your delivery is already there just work on being more direct n aggressive... Joe had pops line wss ok.. Rest was mild.. Srill.enoigh for the win tho.. No hate.. Vote BOSTON

[King]

4-0