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    Week 11: Axe (0-0) vs Echelon (4-6) AXE WINS

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    Re: Week 11: Ace (0-0) vs Echelon (4-6)

    you're a lying bitch..fly as stitch?
    guy is rich?..I'm the bitch
    I'm the sonnet destroyer..sonnet deployer..
    Onyx with sawyer..blue bonnet destroyer..
    I'm the onyx rapper..blue bonnet capper
    I'm the sun of rap..you will suck..
    I'm the niche' writer..shit typer..
    I'm the sun of man..you're a son of a wretch..
    I'm the rapper of hero..rapper dinero..
    I'm the sonnet rapper..sonnet zapper..

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    Re: Week 11: Ace (0-0) vs Echelon (4-6)

    This supposed to be me? Cuz idk who Ace is I'll post tomorrow tho. So check

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    Re: Week 11: Axe (0-0) vs Echelon (4-6)

    Echelon?


    I'm low balling this winter, don't care if you think about broadening your profits
    If Axe call a shot, its to slide em an 8 ball on the low and then im going in your pockets
    Trust me son, i'll give em the Versace treatment death by design we know he's better off dead
    He think its all gucci, but for rockin that Louie? G, just accept im bout to etch L on ya head
    I been back what? less than a week? setting up 10 with me shows Kings already sick of you
    It don't take a binary expert to tell I'll be 1-0, either way you gonna see Axe split em in two
    Fuck ya name too, I'm pulling rank on this clown...even ya girl know you made a grave mistake
    And if i catch her going commando, the only thing for certain is seaman in her navel base
    Echelon getting Defcon'd, stomped out and stepped on its a crime to be typing that meh garbage
    I'll just treat u to a modelo and a last supper, strap a c4 to his keyboard...and then ima press charges
    CΛVEMEN
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    Re: Week 11: Axe (0-0) vs Echelon (4-6) *VOTE NOW*

    easy win for axe.. e didnt bring anything that is even close to being a punch
    axe had a few decent hits.. thought navl base was iight ..seamen played af tho.. but cool verse from axe.. nothing from e
    VOTE AXE

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    Re: Week 11: Axe (0-0) vs Echelon (4-6) *VOTE NOW*

    1-0 axe

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    Re: Week 11: Axe (0-0) vs Echelon (4-6) *VOTE NOW*

    Also going to vote for homie axe, was a straight verse nothing super stinging and a lot of wordy wordplays which I see is the trend here. Lines felt a little long especially considering the easy readability of echelons, but there was nothing the verse just kind of sucked. I was like what the fuuuuuck? Did a 12 year old write that shit pitiful. Axe need a lol more sharpening though def.
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    Re: Week 11: Axe (0-0) vs Echelon (4-6) *VOTE NOW*

    Not sure what Echelon did here maybe he thought his opponent wouldn’t show there was no punchlines in his verse. Axe at least had some punches nothing hard pretty original seaman wordplay lol. I like how he presented that bar overall though. He has the concept down just think he needs to correlate the creativity aspect a bit better.

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    Re: Week 11: Axe (0-0) vs Echelon (4-6) *VOTE NOW*

    you're a lying bitch..fly as stitch?
    guy is rich?..I'm the bitch
    Self-awareness… very important in a battle.

    I'm the sonnet destroyer..sonnet deployer..
    Onyx with sawyer..blue bonnet destroyer..
    I appreciate the sonnet and sonnet double rhyming…

    I'm the onyx rapper..blue bonnet capper
    And dropping blue bonnet twice.

    I'm the sun of rap..you will suck..
    He will suck.

    I'm the niche' writer..shit typer..
    GET EM ECH!

    I'm the sun of man..you're a son of a wretch..
    Now you’re the sun of man? deep.

    I'm the rapper of hero..rapper dinero..
    I'm the sonnet rapper..sonnet zapper..
    Sonnet again. Closer.



    I'm low balling this winter, don't care if you think about broadening your profits
    If Axe call a shot, its to slide em an 8 ball on the low and then im going in your pockets
    okay.

    Trust me son, i'll give em the Versace treatment death by design we know he's better off dead
    He think its all gucci, but for rockin that Louie? G, just accept im bout to etch L on ya head
    okay.

    I been back what? less than a week? setting up 10 with me shows Kings already sick of you
    It don't take a binary expert to tell I'll be 1-0, either way you gonna see Axe split em in two
    okay.

    Fuck ya name too, I'm pulling rank on this clown...even ya girl know you made a grave mistake
    And if i catch her going commando, the only thing for certain is seaman in her navel base
    okay.

    Echelon getting Defcon'd, stomped out and stepped on its a crime to be typing that meh garbage
    I'll just treat u to a modelo and a last supper, strap a c4 to his keyboard...and then ima press charges
    eh.


    v/Axe… get more concise and harsher.

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    Re: Week 11: Axe (0-0) vs Echelon (4-6) *VOTE NOW*

    Axe wins

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