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Thread: WK 12: Echelon (4-7) vs Lyrics (0-1) LYRICS WINS

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    WK 12: Echelon (4-7) vs Lyrics (0-1) LYRICS WINS

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    Re: WK 12: Echelon (4-7) vs Lyrics (0-1)

    I wreck drops..echelon of the nether dimension..text pops
    Echelon wreck stops..I'm putting 'lyrics in a box..text drop..
    I see the light..see the night..in the evening light..
    Sea a kite..if lyrics needs a miracle..he'll need Jesus Christ..
    I'm sickly drawn..echelon..sickly drawn..pedestal of a vagabond..
    Echelon with weapons drawn..I'm taking 'lyrics spirit' like the fat ghost of biggie smalls..
    I'm apathy..ladder dreams..ladder day saint..with tragedies..
    Amnesty..I'm putting a 'meteor down to earth'..like gravity..
    I post tighter..notes tiger..vote higher..notes higher..
    The potent ocean sire..I'm putting 'lyrics in a box'..ghost writer..

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    Re: WK 12: Echelon (4-7) vs Lyrics (0-1)

    Guess personals aint shit, but wordpay you need to force for a win..
    So I'll be standing on elon, like I'm mowing the bitch
    Short bars, bigger hits, your best is shit, Ill wreck your text
    I'll shake you up til you disappear, Ech a sketch
    Weak dude, your bars fake, I'll eat through your small plate
    Call Sarah connor, the tech will leave you with a dark fate..
    This fags a dumb a waste, I'll blast this bums face
    And Treat your neck like your text, That's a Tough brake..
    You'll never have a crown, Echelon cant level with me now
    I'm crazy dog, I'll Chase away this baby fox, better than a hound
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    Re: WK 12: Echelon (4-7) vs Lyrics (0-1)

    Vote lyrics for better disses
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    Re: WK 12: Echelon (4-7) vs Lyrics (0-1)

    Quote Originally Posted by Kill Spree View Post
    Vote lyrics for better disses
    U gotta try a little harder then that.. Can u explain lil.more

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    Re: WK 12: Echelon (4-7) vs Lyrics (0-1)

    Quote Originally Posted by miracle View Post
    U gotta try a little harder then that.. Can u explain lil.more
    Yes ... sins of sucks... his bars were terrible. He put lyrics in a vice 3 out of five bars... his set ups sucks. He's trolling
    Post tighter... notes tiger? Fucking trash

    Lyrics actually went at him ech a sketch was a reach but effort is there.

    Vote lyrics

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    Re: WK 12: Echelon (4-7) vs Lyrics (0-1)**OPEN FOR VOTES

    1-0

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    Re: WK 12: Echelon (4-7) vs Lyrics (0-1)**OPEN FOR VOTES

    not sure if my vote counts, but i'm just trying to contribute and be a positive dude

    echelon: i'm not sure if i understand why you use a double-period. that's not a recognized form of punctuation. there are so many real forms of punctuation that you can choose from. why not use one of those? overlooking the fact that i have no reference for reading what you wrote, the lines themselves, to echo Kill Spree, seem like they're trolling. it's like a bad impersonation where you think you're connecting with the punches but it's just crickets. try focusing on the lines and not the form they take. because, bar after bar, i couldn't identify a single one. keep at it dude.

    Lyrics: Wasted that elon line. Would've worked better as a Tesla flip. what's the e in e-lon for? little stretched. ech a sketch was solid. fox & hound line is corny.

    vote = lyrics

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    Re: WK 12: Echelon (4-7) vs Lyrics (0-1)**OPEN FOR VOTES

    echelon not sure if you're trolling but if not you got some work to do. you were very repetitive and you weren't really forming punches. trying reading other verses and see how they're attacknig their opponent.

    Lyrics had a couple decent bars. nothing crazy but he did what he had to do to win

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    Re: WK 12: Echelon (4-7) vs Lyrics (0-1)**OPEN FOR VOTES

    Echelon gives me the vibe of an audio formated verse. Multi usage was cool but the punches as a whole didn’t hit in a text battle state. The biggie smalls like was cool. You tried some nameplays but they didn’t really connect for me. I fill you need to display the bars more creativity stop focusing on the multi usage Is displayed. Lyrics better text verse this week ech a sketch and tough brake was cool you had a few decent light concepts also.

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    Re: WK 12: Echelon (4-7) vs Lyrics (0-1)**OPEN FOR VOTES

    4-0 lyric

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    Re: WK 12: Echelon (4-7) vs Lyrics (0-1)**OPEN FOR VOTES

    Wch had the first bar which was his best.. Wasnt much bur compared to the rest its not bad... Rest was just milties with no punches.. Lyric had. Hound and sketch.. Nothing really hittinf but plenty enough for the W ... VOTE LYRIC

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    Re: WK 12: Echelon (4-7) vs Lyrics (0-1)**OPEN FOR VOTES

    Short bars, bigger hits, your best is shit, Ill wreck your text
    I'll shake you up til you disappear, Ech a sketch

    Vs

    Nothing.

    I think critiques at this point are pointless for you Echelon. You have your specific style and you deliver it in the way that you choose to and you refuse to alter it.. so with that being said I can't see you getting much of a different result in the future. I wish you luck if you continue down this path. Lyrics you didn't have much a verse worth quoting but you had more direct hits and some attempted word play in there so you won this battle but I'm sure you know that it'll take a lot of improvement in order to continue to be successful. V/Lyrics easily.

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    Re: WK 12: Echelon (4-7) vs Lyrics (0-1)**OPEN FOR VOTES

    6-0

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